FF: (new) part: INTRO on page99

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guyz im starting a new ff, and it will sumthin like this, dat maan and dev are best friends scince childhood, dev and pinky are going out, maan has a playboy image @his unversity, and geet is goin to cum 4om hosipur on the saying of pinky to futher her studyies at the universityy; so apprently this is will described at the unversity and hostel.... plz comments guyz... and i reali hope u would like it!

updating the first part veri soon so plz keep checking and if any1 want to be pm-ed plz letme nw!

TABLE OF CONTENTS;
intro- page 1
part 1 - page 1
part 2 - page 2
part 3 - page 2
part 4 - page 3
part 5 - page 5
part 6 - page 7
part 7 - page 10 
part 8 - page 13
part 9 - page 16
part 10 - page 20
part 11 - page 24
part 12 - page 27
part 13 - page 32
part 14 - page 38
part 15 - page 42
part 16 - page 47
part 17 - page 51
part 18 - page 55
part 19 - page 58
part 20 - page 60
part 21 - page 64
part 22 - page 71
part 23 - page 76
part 24 - page 81
part 25 - page 94
intro     - page 99
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PART 1
 
'GREAT NEW MAAN, i cant belive this' excitedly pinky said dat to maan

maan: wot is it?

pinky: u nw my bff like my bestest bestestt friend geet

maan: da gurl ur always talking about...

pinky: yea she is cumin here... to our university

wid excited toes she starts to jump aroundd

maan: woah hold upp pinky, im happy for u, bt im nt going to the to happy gurl jumpin dance thing

pinky stops jumping: fi9 be dat way... bt im soooo happy, geet starts uni 4om august 28... meaning in two days

just then dev cums in the the conversation of pinky and maan, maan and dev hve a hi-5 to greet one another

maan: thanks dude 4cuming and saving me 4om dis chatter box

pinky: heeyy

dev: its okay pinky, i like it wen u talk...

maan: oh plz dont start dis bf and gf, this lovely dovly stuf infornt of mee

dev: well if u hvent found ur true love rite nw... u dont hve to talk cheap about uss

maan: oh plz i find true love almost veri week, and sumtimes bi-weekly (maan blinks at pinky and dev) and omg look my recent love i mean ture love, which by the way happened 2morrow is here... sasha my love how u doing??

sasha: im fi9 maan darling, how'd u doing?

maan: nw dat ur here im fi9 as well

sasha: cum maanu i hve to show u sumthin

maan: letme guess is it the tattooo

sasha nods her head and takes maan 4om dere

pinky: how long do u think it will last nw?

dev: im thinking 3more days

pinky: i say 2more days...

dev: its bet den

pinky: 4om dat i just remebered our last bet... i won, where is my treat?

dev: today for sure

pinky: u nw i reali njoy betting on maan's break ups

dev: me2... its fun

both dev and pinky start to laugh, and pinky fone starts to ring

pinky: helo

geet: hey it me

pinky: OMG im so xcited to c u

dev in signs ask who it is?

pinky in a quite voice: its geet

geet: same here, and thanks to u i can cum to mumbai, like i neva thot dat

pinky: oh plz dont say dat, i just forwarded ur aplication and a brite student like u shouldnt waste her life at hosipur bt should put it to sum use in a place like MUMBAII

dev takes the fone 4om pinky 'heloo geet kasey ho'

geet: im fi9 is this dev

dev: yes it is

geet: i hve herd so many things about you, and i just cant wait to c u

dev: same here, pinky just cant stop talking about u,

geet: and wen she talks to me, she cant stop talking about u and her other friend maan

dev: oh yea, i hope she talks gud about us...

geet: yes she does... anyways dev g i have to go and pack, so i will c u in about 2days

dev: yea bye tc

pinky: god i just love geet sooo muchh

dev: more den me??

pinky: hmmmm equally!

both hug

maan: OMG guyz stop itt

dev: yaar maan

pinky: yea maan dont be meann

maan: i am nt mean im da most sweetest guy and earth ask sasha

pinky: oh there goes the bell i have to go to classes so ill meet u guyz latter

pinky again gives a tigth hug to dev and leaves, dev is also about to go to his own class wen maan stops him

maan: dude i hve got to give u sum hot newss

dev: wot is it?

maan: dere is going to be a hot party, it will be all boys wid 5stirppers, it on 28 august

dev: maan plz u nw im a total commited bf, and 28 is wen pinky bff 's is cuming geet

maan: bt dude, just cum and give me company...

dev: i think those 5stirppers can give u alot of company so u wont need me

maan: dont be such a party pooper

dev: luk even if i want to cum, i cant as geet is cuming, and i hve to go wid pinky to ger her 4om the station

maan: wot time is this so called bff of pinks cuming??

dev: it about 9 in the afternoon

maan: great dat give us many times to reach the party, the party starts at 10 o clock

dev: just one hour....

maan: fi9 den i will go alone and take adi

dev: adi... the geek adii

maan starts to laugh: im jking

dev: luk 4 pinky u will have to cum to the station to pick her up, so just ditch dis party

maan: dats the thing i cant ditch it, as this party is for me

dev: for u??

maan: yea i passed wid flying number... so ever1 wants a strip party

dev: okay one thing is forsure, u didnt pass

maan laughs: i nw, bt we just needed a reason to party, soo

dev: wen dadi cums to nw, she will be mad @u

maan: hey dont bring dadi into all this... and plus who will tell her

dev: pinky

maan: and who will tell pinky?

dev: dev

maan: den i will tell pinky

dev: wot

maan: stuff

dev: as in..

maan: stop u nw i have deep secrets of u, like da time wen u stole dat keychain...

dev: i was 7 at that time, i didnt nw, and plus i got that for you..

maan: dats y i still got it

maan takes out his car keys and has a cute lil teddy bear to it

dev smiles

maan: so ur in

dev: maan if oinky will find out she will kill me

maan: no one will tell her

dev: bt

maan: just shut up

dev doent say anything

maan: great

dev: fine...

maan smiles: arent u gettin late for ur classes... goo dude!

hope u guyz liked it... plz comment!

Edited by Mina H - 13 years ago
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hey loved wow strippers haan ! plzzzzz add me to ur pm list and update it soon
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HEY ADD ME TO UR PM LIST N CONTINUE SOON..........
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PART 2
 
Pinky was makin aragrments in her hostel room for geet; just wen dev and maan came in

maan: wow, dev dekho zara pinky na khabhi bhi humari liya inta nhai kia

dev: forget u, im da bf she neva did dat much for mee

pinky: okay stop wid ur melodramas!

dev: fi9 so is the time confirmed?

pnky: yes it is 10:00 pm and we still have about 3more hours to go

maan whispers in dev's ears: and four more hours to go for the party

dev smiled: party (and said it loud enough to make pinky hear)

pinky: party?

dev jumped up: wot party... dere is no party... i dont kw abou any party... party i have stoped partying... party... infact i hve forgot wot does party mean... maan wana tel me wot dat means??

pinky luks at dev and maan wid suspisous eyes: is dere anything i wana nw

dev was about to answer wen maan butt in: no pinks u nw dere is nuthing i-- i mean we would wana hide 4om u... dev is just being weriod....

pinky: maan...??

maan: god u gurls wori alot... im tellin u naa

dev: yea pinky dear

pinky: fi9 w/e im goin for a shower... and how about u too bathe for a change... and den bt dat time, we wil go and get geet

geet in the train: hoo baba g dere is another 3hours to go, kasiey kata ga yeh time... how will i fit into the citys unviersity?? geet closed her eyes "i just hope evrything will go fi9, and i just hope my brother wont get to angry dat i felt the house widout any1 knwing, wonder wot dey will think of me, bt i tried of being dere like dere is so much of restrictions, thank god for pinky who has made my life much easer... da futher i get the more i feel free like i bird in the sky... ufff pinky i love you for all this..."

just then geet luks at the time "another two more hours and im freee"

HOPE YOU GUYZ LIKED, SORI FOR UPDATING LATE... WILL COUNT SOON AND PLZ LEAVE COMMENTS!
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WOW!! REALLY GR8 AND ADD ME TO PM LIST!
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wow thats lovely
pls pls pls continue soon
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heyy..wow love ur idea,..its soo new!!!update soon and add me to ur om list!!i love it!