caught in the eye of a hurricane , short maneet OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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just a short os of the hug scene...sorry for the grammer n spelling not feeling well so i couldnt be bothered....๐Ÿ˜Š

 
 
It was as if they were caught in the eye of a hurricane, left alone in a storm, tossing and hurling. He clutched on to her like he needed her for air, to let go of her would mean to lose her, to stop breathing, to stop living.  He built a castle around her with his bare hands, each brick made of steel, though numerous cracks appeared. He thought let these cracks appear for each has a dastan written on it, a dastan of what you and I have overcome to reach here today. Each crack has my hidden tears which you failed to sight, your smile that made my heart beat, the pain I felt every time I watched you cry and your innocence that made me believe once again. He was a silent volcano, asleep for a 100 years and she was the claiming sea, drifting to where the waves would take her. An unexpected awaking brought them together. What happens when a volcano meets the sea, an eruption is made, an eruption of anger, passion, intensity, betrayal, misunderstandings and love. An uncontrollable storm of desire is formed suck in the middle of the eye, is this love strong enough to get by?
 
i didnt know if i should have Continued on or no so stopped here ^_^
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please continue.....a nice start to a tale of emotions.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow......why you stopped here......it is fabulous
loved this line "What happens when a volcano meets the sea"
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sssiham

Please continue.....a nice start to a tale of emotions.

 
hey ^_^ thanks dear...
btw, this just a one shot of the hug scene m not planing to write a ff๐Ÿ˜†
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: naddiya26

wow......why you stopped here......it is fabulous
loved this line "What happens when a volcano meets the sea"

 
hey naddiya dear...dont know actually...didnt know if i should have carried on with the other scene
...thanks dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Summer my love ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
What a shot yaar, u killed me ๐Ÿ˜†
Nah seriously it was tooo beautiful๐Ÿ‘
Loved ur writing style a lot, and the pic made the text glowing yaar๐Ÿ‘
Yaar this is near to poetry, what a style yaar๐Ÿ˜ณ
Loved all your metaphors๐Ÿ‘ and this one described them so much : "He was a silent volcano, asleep for a 100 years and she was the claiming sea, drifting to where the waves would take her"
 
 
Brilliant, do write the rest yaar ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
Love,
 
Humera ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Summer my love ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

What a shot yaar, u killed me ๐Ÿ˜†
Nah seriously it was tooo beautiful๐Ÿ‘
Loved ur writing style a lot, and the pic made the text glowing yaar๐Ÿ‘
Yaar this is near to poetry, what a style yaar๐Ÿ˜ณ
Loved all your metaphors๐Ÿ‘ and this one described them so much : "He was a silent volcano, asleep for a 100 years and she was the claiming sea, drifting to where the waves would take her"
 
 
Brilliant, do write the rest yaar ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
Love,
 
Humera ๐Ÿค—

 
hey humera
didnt expect to see you comment here ^_^
 poetry...u know...i actually dont like poetry...๐Ÿ˜†
but thanks for liking my writing style
thats actually my favorite line from the os
dont think i'll continue writing not feeling well
 
thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: _SuMmEr_LoVe_

 
hey humera
didnt expect to see you comment here ^_^
 poetry...u know...i actually dont like poetry...๐Ÿ˜†
but thanks for liking my writing style
thats actually my favorite line from the os
dont think i'll continue writing not feeling well
 
thanks dear

Well i had to comment since it was purely awesome ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Dont worry hun take rest, and continue whenever u get time and yeah do let me if u update it ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i luved da title....

it was good...plz continue!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anufa

i luved da title....

it was good...plz continue!!!!!

 
thanks dear ^_^
naaa wont continue
sorry