just a short os of the hug scene...sorry for the grammer n spelling not feeling well so i couldnt be bothered....๐
just a short os of the hug scene...sorry for the grammer n spelling not feeling well so i couldnt be bothered....๐
Please continue.....a nice start to a tale of emotions.
Originally posted by: naddiya26
wow......why you stopped here......it is fabulous
loved this line "What happens when a volcano meets the sea"
Originally posted by: sonu4ever
Summer my love ๐ฒ๐ฒ
What a shot yaar, u killed me ๐Nah seriously it was tooo beautiful๐Loved ur writing style a lot, and the pic made the text glowing yaar๐Yaar this is near to poetry, what a style yaar๐ณLoved all your metaphors๐ and this one described them so much : "He was a silent volcano, asleep for a 100 years and she was the claiming sea, drifting to where the waves would take her"Brilliant, do write the rest yaar ๐Love,Humera ๐ค
Well i had to comment since it was purely awesome ๐ณ๐Originally posted by: _SuMmEr_LoVe_
hey humeradidnt expect to see you comment here ^_^poetry...u know...i actually dont like poetry...๐but thanks for liking my writing stylethats actually my favorite line from the osdont think i'll continue writing not feeling wellthanks dear
i luved da title....
it was good...plz continue!!!!!
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