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GUYS I WAS NOT THERE IN FORUM DUE TO EXAMS SO I HAVE SEEN THAT THAT FAN FIC WAS DOUBLED 😕😕😕 DON'T KNOW WAT HAD HAPPENED SO I HAVE GIVEN THE PARTS FROM STARTING..... Edited by touchmenot - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1


A bright morning, a man is sleeping in his bed calmly. Watching the dreams of her princess suddenly someone nudges him. That's angad in the bed and his mom naina (not having a negative role) trying to awake him.

N: angad Utho na

A: kia mom sone do na

N: aaliyah ko dekhne ladke wale aye hain…… prithvi ki family………

A: to

N: tum neeche ao un se milo.

A: kia mom meri shaadi hai jo main aoonapni neend kharab kar ke.

N: theek hai mat aao phir Tumhari behen ka rishta nahi hoga na to tum bas sorry kehte rehna…

A: ok aaa raha hoon. Upset kyon ho rahein hain aap.
N: thank god. Ab jaldi aao aur haan kapre vo….

A: mom aap sab kar loon ga ab aap jaain ke main tyaar ho jaoon


Prithvi and his parents came to see aaliyah and fix their marriage. Prithvi was staring aaliyah and aaliyah was blushing.

Damini= D _________ prithvi's dad Harsh= H__________ AA

H: bahu to waissi hai jaissi humain chahiye thi…

D: Aakhir choice kis ki hai….. ( stares at Prithvi) mera hi beta hai na…….

N: Ji zaroor. waise engagement ki tareekh tay kar lete to achaa hota….

D: oh haan to abhi to free hai to hum engagement aur shaadi jaldikar dete hai…

H: haan sagai agle hafte aur shaadi……… 15 din baad mein.

AA: nahi……

Pat 2

AA: nahi

Everyone is shocked.

N: aaliyah yeh kia hai.

AA: jab tak bhai shaadi nahi kare ga main bhi nahi karoon gi……………….

Everyone laughs except angad

A: kia aaliyah …….. main shaadi us se hi karoon ga jis se main pyaar karoon ga. Samjhi

Da: aaliyah agar Tumhari yehi marzi hai to ait karte hai ke angad ko kisi se pyaar ho jaye

N: haan dono ki shaadiyaan ek hi din mein kardein ge.
A: (thinking) meri dream gal ka koi sign nahi aur yeh log meri shaadi ke din tak puhanch Gaye. AMAZING

Da: Prithvi beta tum aur aaliyah akele mein baat kar ke ao .

A: no need aunty…….

Di: why not.

A: rozana milte hain…………

P: Aaj to nahi mille hain na aur phir jab tujhe kissi se pyaar ho jaye ga to tu bhi apni Juliet ke saath waqt guzaarne ko tarse ga……

Well then aakiyah and Prithvi went 4 a talk……………..

AA: tum naaraaz to nahi ho na……

P: no not at all actually agar tum nahi kehti tomain keh Deta

AA: kia matlab……….

P: matlab meri ek cousin hai we r also gud friends so I want that she shud marry wid ……………

AA: angad??????

P: yup……

AA: gr8 idea but no use………….

P: y not?

AA: bhai ne kaha hai ke wo arrange marriage nah karega

P: to love marriages se to koi aitraaz nahi hai na………

AA: nahi par pyaar ho to sahi………….. college mein se bhi koi pasand nahi ayee.

P: humein pyar kaise hua.

AA: mujhe kia pata (BLUSHING)

P: saath waqt guzaarne se………… hai na

AA: haan to, we will make them together

P: yup sweety.

AA: ok so 1st meeting

P: on airport………


Part 3

A: hmmm

P: she is studying in London and will come back at my engagement. So i will ask angad to receive her then………. They both willl in love…………. Then married……………………then will live happily ever after.

AA: humari shaadi ke bare mein to itni lambi planning to Kabhi nahi ki…………………

P: kia baat ka rahee ho humari shaadi kia usse bhi aage ki planning kar li hai……… bataaon

AA: nahi pehle shaadi ho jaye is ke baad us ki planning…………. Par strange main ne tum se us ladki ka naam hi nahi pucha

P: she is lovely dashing KRIPA, daughter of Sharma uncle……. With a bro little addatiya aka Addi

AA: so kripa sharma ko kahiye ga ke apni flight thori der se rakhein hum humare angad sahib o jaldi uthne ki aadat nahi hai. Aissa na ho ke un ki story ki starting se pehle THE END ho jayee.

P: don't worry kripa bhi school hostel main 5 alarm bajne ke baad uthti hai………….

They both laughed……

AA: kripa ko khaana banana aata hai………

P: khaana bigaarne aata hai …. Jokes apart… ataa hai par banana ka shok nahi…………….

AA: to kia shok hain aap ki dost ke………

P: skating, painting, sketching, aur……….

AA: aur

P: aur maarna peetna, ghusa hona

AA: matlab??

P: she is high tempered, ghusa naak pe…… aur akhri aadat..

AA: wo kia??

P: propose karne wale larkon ko is tarah dhoti hai jaise dhobi kaapron ko dhota hai……. Ur bro have to be careful

AA: careful??? My foot mera bhai waise loving caring hai par ek tarah se mirror hai…….. jaise ko taisa…….. or tid 4 tide karna usse achi tarah Maloom hai. Agar Tumhari cousin sis ne us pe haath uthaya to wo haath dosre haath par rakh dega par……… shayad internal badla le………… Kyonki wo auraton ko externally hurt nahi karta par internally us ladki ko sabaq mil jaata hai ke bhai ke saath panga………….. na baba na.

P: chalo saamna ho jaye ga to dekhlenge kis mein kitna hai dum

they laugh. Soon they got inside Prithvi and his family left. And engagement was fixed next week.


Part 4


PRITHVI'S HOME

P: mom mein sochta hoon ke kripa ki shaadi bhi humare saath ho jaye to .

H: beta already angad ki shaadi bhi Tumhare saath ho rahi hai.

D: beta kitne mandap lagwane ka irada hai.(smile)

P: sirf do.

D,H: do? Matlab

P: I mean that if Angad and kripa wud marry then that's wud be gud. Wat do u say.

H: beta problem Na hi humein hai Na hi Tumhare uncle aunty ko ho gi par kripa aur angad ek doosre ko pasand kar lein is ki kia grantee hai.

P: dad pasand nahi kia to na sahi atleast we can try. Par plz apni official meeting start mat karana,

D: official meeting?

P: haan chaye pillao coffee pillao, hobby kia kia hai, all that stuff.

And they laughed. Soon Prithvi call angad when his parent got agreed.

P: hi dude.

A: Prithvi wat a pleasant surprise tum. Ek sec main aaliyah ki bulata hoon.

P: I wanna talk to u, actually a favor.

A: wat

P: I and alia has planned to go to a friend's home for a party and my cousin is coming back so will u receive her.

A: ya sure…….. I love to go to airport. Btw wats her name?

P: KRIPA SHARMA……….


Part 5


P: plan 2. Kripa ko manana hai. (Calls kripa)

K: hello, Kripa here.

P: I know. Main Prithvi.

K: bol

P: kripa main bohat bemaar hoon infact 104 bukhaar hai.

K: achaa. Jhoot mat bol

P: sach.

K: acha to ab mujhe receive karne ke liye koi nahi hai .

P: hai na. mera dost angad.

K: kia. Angad. Well whatever flight 11.00 baje puhanche gi aur apne dost se kehna ke mujhe receive kar le.

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Part 6


ANGAD"S HOME
11.00 am

N: angad utho. Beta Prithvi ki cousin ko lena jana hai and u r late.

A: oh shi*

Angad gets ready and after an hour he reaches airport.

A: miss UK kahan hain. Nazar bhi nahi aa rahi. Waise aati bhi to kia photo bhi nahi di budhu ne. pehchaanu ga kaise.

A girl taps angad's shoulder.

A: kia hai. Ek to late ho Gaya hoon upar se us Ms. UK ka pata bhi nahi. Kia naam tha us ka, KRIPA.

The girl answers: yes

She is kripa of course. Angad turns around. And sees a girl dressed in cheetah skinned jacket with a matching skirt. He was staring at her that she was the prettiest girl in the universe.

K: I m kripa..

A: hello I m angad.

K: angad ho vo to pata nahi par late comer zaroor ho. Main peechle ek ghante se wait kar rahi hoon aur tum. Ab aa rahe ho. Idiot, moron.

A: excuseme I thought u were about to thank me but……..

K: Thanks my foot. Ek to chori upar se seena zori. Ab chalo ge ya phir yahan se bhi late nikalne ka irada hai.

A: ok chalo, May I carry Ur bags plz.

K: no thanks I do my work by my own. .

A: (thinks) what an attitude? Well she is sweet and adorable.

They settled down in the car.

A: so u r kripa.

K: likh ke dun.

A: well no. to aap kia karti hain.

K: tum jaise ladkon ko seedha karti hoon.

A: tumhein seedhe jawab dena nahi aata.

K: ulte logon ko ulte jawab

A: oh my gosh. Tum gusa kyon ho.

K: Kyonki tum mere saath ho.

When they reached home

A: lo aa gaya tumhara ghar Tumhare un ulte jawabon mein. Ab thanx to milna chahiye.

K: thanx. Kia tumhein us se bhi badi cheez mil sakti hai.

A: woh kia

Kripa moves towards angad. Angad is confused and she took out some $ and handed to angad.

K: fees.

A: mujhe paise nahi chahiye.

K: mujhe tumhara ehsaan nahi chahiye. Bye.

A: bye.

She left while angad drive off. He was thinking about her. All her answers were roaming in his mind. He was feeling something different.


Part 7

KRIPA'S HOME

K: Hi mom, hi dad

Kripa's dad was very strict and did not love his daughter coz he wanted only son. not daugther
Kripa's mom was doing household work while his dad was working on his laptop and sitting near a window.

Gayatri= G           ; ; ;Suryabaan=S

G: kripa tu kaisi hai meri jaan.

K: theek hun. Bas aap ko bohat miss kar rahe thi…….


K: hi dad

S: ---

K: dad I m home. After 5 yrs.

S: so aana hi tha tujhe aa gayee. Badi baat kia hai.

K: I was only telling….

S: kio zaroorat nahi hai batane ki ke tum kisi ladke ke saath yahan aaye thi.

K: dad I really don't know who is he but he was prithvi's friend.

G: beta chalo tum thak gayee ho gi fresh ho jao aur khaana kha lo.

S: ruko mere sawaal ka jawab mujhe abhi chahiye now. Prithvi ke saath kyon nahi ayee. Kyon

K: papa us ne kaha ke wo bimaar hai and he can't receive me.

S: bas bas apni in jhuti baton mein kisi aur ko phasana mein jaanta hoon ke jab koi insaan kisi beti ka baap banta hai to vo zilat ke bohat kareeb hota hai.

In the meanwhile addi came he said hi to his sis and sat on his father's lap.

Addi= Ad

Ad: dad I wanna the same video game as my friend have and a bicycle because the last one's tire's are flatten by a classmate who is now my enemy. And I want a party on my birthday.

Kripa remember when she asked for the party on her 10th birthday as same as addi was going to be.

K: dad I want a little party for my friends.

S: no

K: but dad it's my birthday.

S: so wat insaan Kabhi na Kabhi to paida hota hai to kia birthday har saal manaya jaye ga….

She come out her bitter memories and ran upstairs to her room and threw herself on bed crying. Her mom was aso helpless.

K: wat is my fault if I m a girl. Why? Why? Why?

(That's why she is rude and having an attitude.)


Part 8


The phone rings. It's Prithvi.

K: hello

P: hi krips wat's up

K: nothing

P: wat do u mean. Ok leave that can u come to my place now.

K: for what

P: chi chat buddy.

Kripa remembers that Prithvi lie her about his sickness.

K: ok I m just coming.

P: gr8 buddy

K: now I will get that liar
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Prithvi calls angad

P: hi dude.

A: hi

P: kahan ho tum

A: Koi still jagah nahi hai par ghar jaaraha hoon

P: tu mere ghar aa ja

A: anything important.

P: no I m bored and wants some1's company.

A: ok I m coming.

P: bye. See u then.
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P: angad on kripa's one more chance to meet.

After some time Kripa enters.

K: hi

P: looks behind. Hi sweety how r u.

K: f9

Angad enters then. Prithvi is excited……

P: hi angad,

A: hi Prithvi.

Kripa looks behind. And angad sees her too. Kripa wasn't feeling difference while angad as happy to meet her.

A: hi u r………… kripa rite.

K: yes.

A: nice name.

K: maine nahi rakha

Prithvi giggles. Kripa stares Prithvi and asks.

K: tumhara bukhaar 104 se 105 hua.

Prithvi suddenly stops laughing and was scared.

A: bukhaar! tumhein bukhaar kab tha.

P: nahi vo main to……..

K: u lied…. To me… wat do u think of ur self

She picks up cushions and start throwing it to Prithvi.

Prithvi was trying to explain but kripa was not even ready to listen angad was enjoying all this…… she pick up the vase and was going to throw it when angad stopped her and hold her both hand and looked into her eyes full of conceit and she was trying to make herself free.

A: enough. He is elder than u and u have to respect him. At least listen to him.

K: wat shud to do and wat shud not, it is depended on me and it is my and Prithvi's problem don't u ever interfere. Aur Prithvi sorry if u have got hurt.

P: kripa is ki thodi si daant ne tumhein sudhar dia. Pehli baar tum ne mujhe se sorry kaha hai.

K: haan Kyonki Ab hum Phir se nahi milein aur is loafer ki daant to kia maar se bhi faraq padne wala nahi hai. I m use to suffer from this situations.

When she left she was not having any expression of regretting or sadness but her heart was crying. She sat in her car and drove back to home.

Part 8


P: angad tumhein usse dantna nahi chahiye tha

A: ek to tumhein us se bachaya aur tum mujhe par baras rahe ho.

P: tum kiya samjh rahe thay wo mujhe sach much marne wali thi. It's not like that. She is just showing that she is angry. The cushions surely haven't hurt me at all.

A: to ab tum usse sorry bol ke aao main chala

P: mar wayga kia bachane ke liye Koi to chahiye
And they giggle. Finally angad became ready to go to kripa's home to apologize.

P: hi aunty hi uncle.

S&G: hi beta.

S: Prithvi yeh kaun hai.

P: vo yeh aaliyah ka bhai hai.

G: oh, kaise ho beta.

A: first class, par bas aap ki beti ne tang kar rakha hai.

G: kripa ne…………

S: kia kiya us ne…………. waise agar din main kisi ko takleef nahi de to din pura nahi hota na us ka.

A: nahi main to mazak kar raha tha. She is very sweet. Waise vo hai kahan?

G: beta. Stair se 3rd room us ka hai. Wahin hai.

A: chal Prithvi.

P: tu ja main abhi aata hoon.
A: apologize tujhe karna tha (whispers)

P: haan par uncle aur aunty se baat karne baad aata hoon pehle tu usse pyaar se samjha bujha kar rakh

A: jaldi aana

Angad was eager to meet her again and see that mixed feeling in her eyes. He got near her room and as about to knock but the door was opened. He opened that slowly and saw that kripa is heading towards her window with a violin and playing it very nicely (kyph tune). He remained stood there and after some time he entered her room. Kripa was drown into her feelings and didn't know that angad is already there. He made steps forward and he was near study table and accidentally a pen was dropped. Kripa paid attention and looked behind.

K: tum yahan kia kar rahe ho.

A: sorry kehne aaya tha………

K: no use I will not accept

A: excuse me main nahi Prithvi kehne aaya tha

And they started arguing while Prithvi was telling kripa's parent about A-K's marriage and family background.

S: Yeh to bohat achaa hai. Hum angad ke maante hi shaadi ki baat shru kardein Ge.

P: angad to lagta hai jald hi maan jaye ga magar kripa …………..

S: fikr mat karo kripa wahiin shaadi kare gi jahan main kahun ga………….

Prithvi was speechless that why suryabaan was reacting like this. He ignores

KRIPA'S ROOM

K: Tum mein zara bhi tameez hai ke ladki ke kamre main aane se pehle knock karte hain.

A: ya but. Tum mein zara sharam nahi hai keh door lock karna chahiye.

K: mera door hai, mari marzi…

A: mera haath hai. Aur mera dil………. Samjhi. Well mein tumhein yahan samjhne aaya tha keh tum Prithvi ke behen ho aur mein Prithvi ka hone wala brother in law so agar tumhare aur mere beech mein in choti chotii baton par ladayee jhagre hon ge to……… Prithvi ko bura lage ga.

K: tum se dosti karoon. Par agar Prithvi se ladayee kar sakti hoon to tum se dosti kaise kar sakti hoon.

A: u r impossible…………. Tum se

He steps on the roller skates and falls on kripa's bed with kripa.

Angad stares her and hold her tightly and kripa was asking to leave her and trying to free her self. Al the words were silent and angad was drowned on the dept of kripa's eyes.    


Part 9


Kripa was trying to make herself free but angad was holding her wasn't knowing that why he is doing so. Prithvi enters see the scene and……..

P (to himself): main ne socha tha ke angad ko manane mein der ho jaye gi par ab lagta hai story sirf A-K ki reh gayee hai…. Chalo disturb kar hi deta hoon bhai sahib ki behen ko bhi to khush khabri sunani hai.

P: get up buddy……. (Lift him up from kripa). To kia ho raha tha kripa…..

K: mujhe kia pata tumis loafer se hi pucho……….

A: are main ne kia kiya…………….. Main to bas ………….

K: tum to bas kia………

A: Tumhari eyes colors guess kar raha tha.

K: what

A: haan but can't get it……… is it dark brown or black……

K: kia

A: I think its brown…..

P: what ever…. Angad……… main apna kaam to karlun

A: oh haan y not

K: pehle main apna kaam karun gi

P: tum

K: haan tum dono ko bahar nikalun gi.

P: sorry yaar………maaf kar do na…. vo kia hai ke mein apni hone wali mangeter ke saath bahar gaya tha…….

K: mujhe pata hai main bohat buri hoon isi liye tum sach nahi bol sake……. That y I m sorry……. (Crying)

Angad was feeling sorry 4 her. He was willing to know that the sadness behind her arrogant behavior. Y she is like this and he was knowing that she is the one who has inspired her in FIRST SIGHT.

A: well I m sorry too……… I know I was very harsh……..

K: I know u were right on ur place…

A: so friends….

K: main itni jaldi Kisi se friendship nahi Karti… it's only the third time we have met.

Angad was sad. And was driving back home wid Prithvi….. Prithvi can easily understand his internal feelings.

P: wat's up dude….. itne upset kyon ho…..

A: main nahi to…………….

P: jhoota

A: wat r u trying to say.

P: ke tum kripa se pyaar karte ho………

A: kia baat kar rahe ho Prithvi……………….


Part 10


A: kia baat kar rahe ho yaar main aur vo pressure cooker….

P: haan

A: I only offer her my friendship because I love making friends nothing else…….

P: aur vo udaasi…..

A: (smiles widely) see I m happy…

P: (sings) tum itna kyon muskura rahe ho kia gham hai jisko chupa rahe ho….

A: shut Prithvi .

P: kia main bas gana gaa raha tha if u don't like me to sing so play any song
l offer her my friendship because I love making friends nothing else…….

Prithvi calls some one. Hi kripa… angad pays attention….

P: kal tum 2.00 baje water edge hotel pe aa jana tumhein aaliyah se milwaoon ga. Bye.

A: kia ko phone kar raha tha….

P: kripa ko ….. us ne kaha tha ke usse aaliyah se milna hai… so main ne kal ka time de dia…… tu aaliyah ko le aana

A: f9 dude (angad was very happy)

NEXT DAY…

AA: angad Prithvi aur kripa aaye hi nahi….

A: pata nahi… kripa is really very punctual…..

AA: well what time did they have said….

A: 2.00 pm

AA: stupid its only 1.00 now….. Wasted my hour……

A: sorry galti ho gayee.

AA: kia ho gaya hai mere bhai ko….. jo kabhoi time pe nahi puhanchta tha aaj pehle puhanche gaya…. Amazing..

A: (made a wacky face) aaliyah shut up tat was only a mistake…..
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Part 11


AA: hi Prithvi….

A: Prithvi kripa nahi aayi.

P: na hi na hello bas kripa….. dost ghadaar.

A: Ab in fizool ki formalities ki kia zaroorat hai…. Bata kripa kahan hai…..

P: nahi aayee

A: nahi aayee?? Kyon

AA: Koi baat nahi kisi aur din mil lungi

A: to main ja raha hoon…..

AA: arre itni der wait kia aur jab Prithvi aa gaya to tata bye bye…

A: ek to tumhare fiade ki baat kar raha hoon aur tum….

P: haan pata hai kis ka faida hai…. Kyon

In the mean while KRIPA enters. Angad is surprised and happy…

A: kripa tum

K: haan main kyon….

A: tum to nahi aane wali thi…..

K: kis ne kaha….

A: Prithvi ne….

K: Prithvi ki baat Kabhi mat manana, ek number ka jhoota hai…..

P: ok leave that kripa she is aaliyah…

K: hi

AA: so ur r kripa…

K: ya

AA: nice name…

A: is ne nahi rakha…..

And they all laughed,
(murmuring)
A: kripa

K: hmmm

A: kia hum inhain akela chod dain

K: kyon

A: love birds hain ………. Kuch to samjho….

K: oh wo baat hai… theek hai.
Normal

K: guys we r leaving. bye

A: bye……

They left leaving love birds alone…… they went to another restaurant and had a chat…..

A: so kripa tum ne bataya nahi ki tum U.K main kia karti thi….

K: parhayee. C.A kar rahi thi…

A: oh aur kuch. I mean ur career planning

K: I wanna be a _______________. ( can't imagine her in other jobs)

A: aur shaadi ke bare main.

Kripa stops eating and was anxious

K: shaadi?

A: mera matlab hai ke aaliyah ki shaadi main kia pehno gi.

K: angad. Tum ne to dara hi dia… main to samjhi ke

A: kia samjhi…..

K: ke main shaadi kisse karon gi… and all this

A: shaadi karne main kia problem hai.

K: shaadi main problem to nahi par all depends on my conditions…..

A: CONDITIONS

K: haan 1st: us larke se main pyaar karti hoon….
2nd: he shud be honest and not a lair like Prithvi. (Angad giggles)
3rd: he must love me in same quantity I love him.

A: bas khatam….

K: abhi kahan shaadi ki baad ki bhi to conditions hain…..

A: ab chodo jis se shaadi karo gi ussi ko batana yeh batao ke Koi boy friend hai…..

K: no way…. Bf, ab to Koi ladka friend nahi banta bf to dur ki baat.

A: kyon tum khubsoorat bhi ho….. Aur rich bhi….

K: yehi hai ladkon ki prob. Inner beauty ko dekhne ke bajae bahari khubsurati pe jaan lutate hain.

A: main to aisa nahi hoon. Phir tum meri dost kyon nahi banti….

K: theek hai friends

She stretched out her hand and shook it with angad


Part 12


Kripa and angad became friends and continued conversation…..

K: main ne to tumhein apni poori biography bata di ab tum batao tum kisi se pyaar karte ho, tum kaisi ladki prefere karo ge… tell me?

A: the girl wud be mine wud be like an angel. When she is happy I will became happy and when she is upset I will also feel sad. That's all.

K: do u think u will get her….

A: for sure………….

K: to theek hai tum aur aaliyah ek saath shaadi kar lena

A: haan issi baat ke liye to aaliyah ne apni shaadi ki date unconfirmed kar di hai.

K: well, Kyonki who tumhein pyar karti hai….(murmur) mere liye to Koi aisa kare ga hi nahi.

A: kia

K: nothing ab yahan se chalo mujhe ghar jana hai……..

A: kripa to hum mil rahein hain na kal………

K: kal kyon

A: Prithvi aur aaliyah ki engagement main.

K: haan, main shayad aaoon

A: kia

K: (giggles) just kiddin'

A: thank god warna mujhe love birds ko disturb karna padta naa.

KRIPA'S HOME.

S: waise angad ki taraf se haan hai ke nahi.
G: pata nahi. Naina aur bhai sehab to razi hain……… aur Prithvi keh raha tha ke angad usse pasand karne laga hai….

S: achaa hai…..

G: par mujhe nahi lagta kripa usse pyaar karti hai.

S: gaytri main ne pehle bhi kaha hai ke kripa ki shaadi us ke saath hogi jisko main pasand karta hoon na ke vo aur agar baat hai us ke pyaar karne ki to vo ladki pyaar karna nahi janti………

G: par

S: bas angad ki taraf se jawaab aajaye to tareeq jaldi te kar dena . main nahi chahta ke vo bojh humare paas aur dino tak rahe…………

Saying this suryabaan left while gaytri was sorry 4 kripa…………….

G: kaisi maan hoon main apni bachi ko anaat ki Zindagi de ke ji rahi hoon. Mujhe maaf kardena


Part 13


ENGAGEMENT DAY…….

All were at a banquet hall for aaliyah and prithvi's engagement. Angad was already there while prithvi's family wasn't there yet. When prithvi's family reached there Naina and dilip welcomed them and put the tilak on prithvi's forehead…….. Angad was not paying attention to all that rasam and was looking 4 kripa one by one every guest came inside but not kripa….. even not after her parents and bro…

A(to gayatri) : namaste aunty

G: namaste beta…. Kaise ho

A: theek hoon. Kripa nahi ayee

Gayatri was happy too see angad concern 4 kripa 2 much. Just then kripa enters. She was not wearing lehenga or sari she was wearing a moonlight maxi with beads on it and having matching jewelry and sandals of course. Angad was totally captivated by her beauty her every step forward makes his heart beats go faster and more faster…. Her angelic expression was making him fall in love with her….

Kripa gives the gift to aaliyah and Prithvi… and wished them, without noticing that angad is staring her. Her every act was inspiring angad. As kripa was done wid the gifts and wishes she just walked to her mom and brother without even realizing angad standing…..

Angad then call her 4 chit chat they were talking when naina came up and asked them to dance. Angad asked her to dance with him. Kripa agreed and angad and kripa walked over dance floor and started dancing. Kripa was smiling and talking to him. Angad was not listened her but was feeling her voice, the magic in her eyes and then party ended and A-K were separated.

At home angad was on bed having flashbacks of kripa's scenes and the conversation of Prithvi (that u love kripa, Prithvi said). These all things were not letting him sleep and he got to know that he loves kripa……. But what shud he do 4 the nite she was in every thing… towel, TV, cupboard and etc… he got up and knocked the door of aaliyah's room.

Aa: bhai aap itni raat ko….

A: aaliyah mujhe neend nahi aa rahi….

AA: to mom ke paas jao na she will sing song to make u asleep

A: aaliyah stop it….. i

AA: u

A: I …….

AA: aagay bolo… kia hai

Angad closes his eyes and speak off

A: I LOVE KRIPA.

Saying this he kissed on aaliyah's cheek and ran to his room... Aaliyah was shocked and happy too


Part 14

Angad ran to his room jumped in his bed and after sharing his feelings with aaliyah he was able to sleep and a slight smile was there on his face while sleeping….

In the morning aaliyah told the matter and can say gud news to naina and dilip, who were so happy that they can't even resist.

They went to the room of angad and saw that he is sleeping peacefully and a slight smile is on his face. Naina sat down on the bed and ruffle his hair which made him wake up….

A: morning mom

N: good morning beta

A: mom, dad, aaliyah aap itni subha ko

N: Beta hum yeh kehne aye hain ke aaj 3.00 baje hum kripa ke ghar jaane wale hain…. Kripa kahoon ya mere bete ke princess…..

A: Mommmm (they all laughed)

N: ab naha dho kar neechay aao naashta kar lo aur phir

AA: aur phir tyaar hone mein bhi to time lage ga……….

A: aaliyah

D: aur nahi to kia……. In laws se milne jaa raha hai….

A: dad u 2. khich lo khich lo jitni chahe uthi baar taang khinch lo….. aaj hi din hai…

They all left and angad went to take bath and was very happy

KRIPA'S HOME

K: mom sirf ek hafte ki hi to baat hai. Mujhe apni friends ke saath goa jaane do na…..

G: mere haath mein hota to…. Tujhe rokti hi nahi…… par tere papa

Suryabaan was listening to all this but not interrupting suddenly phone rang he picked it up.

S: hello, suryabaan here…

D: namaste samdhi ji. Main dilip

S: ji

D: bhai mera beta aur aap ki beti shaadi kar lein ge to humare beech yehi rista ho ga na.

S: matlab angad ne rishte ke liye haan kar di…. (softly that kripa won't listen)

D: haan? Khushi ke mare jhoom raha hai…. Ab bas kripa ki haan ki deri hai…..

S: kripa to pehle se tyaar thi par ladki hai na kehne se sharma rahi thi ab baat paki ho gayee hai to pandit ji ko bula kar tarikh te kar den ge.

D: theek hai main yeh khush khabri sab ko sunaata hoon aur aaj teen baje hum aaa rahe hai….

S: theek hai

Calls ends and suryabaan walked to his wife and daughter where kripa was appealing to go…

S: let her go… kripa tum jao…. Flight kitne baje ki hai…..

K: 2.00 baje ki

S: it's 11.00, get ready….

Kripa was kinda surprised and rushed to her room…

G: aaj aap maan kaise Gaye. ( smiling)

S: Kyonki angad ki family kripa ka haath mangne aa rahe hain….

G: to.

S: to main nahi chahta ke vo Koi scene create kare. Baad main tum usse raazi kar lena…. Aur ………

G: aur usse dhoka doon…. Us ka dil tor doon….. baap hain aap us ke

S: mat yaad dilao mujhe yeh kadwa sach…….. aur main itna janta hoon ke vo is ghar se jald hi jaa rahi… hai..

He leaves while kripa goes to goa before angad reached there…..


PART 15


At 3.00 angad wid his family reached there pandit was also there.

D: namaste samdhan aur samdhi ji….. ab rishta jurne ja raha hai….

S: haan pata hi nahi chalta bache kitni jaldi bare ho jaate hain aur betiyon ko doosre ghar jaana hota hai.(to himself: mujhe hi pata hai us bojh ko main ne kaise paala hai)

N: nahi nahi ap ki beti ko to hum apni beti bana kar rakhien ge. Aur achii baat ladkiyon ke liye yeh hoti hai ke un ke do ghar hote hain. Dono ghar ke darwaaze us ke liye hamesha khule hote hain. Kyon behen ji.

G: ji bilkul ( to herself: aap ko kia Maloom ke is ghar ke darwaaze us ke jaane ke baad us ke liye hamesha ke liye band ho jaain ge.)

D: pandit ji, shaadi ki kaun si tareekh achi hai.

PJ: shaadi 2 hafte baad hi honi chahiye is ke baad muhoorat 10 mahiney baad ka hai.

N: bhai hum itna Intezaar nahi kar sakte, khaas karke angad, kyon angad.

A: (shy,) mom…….

AA: mom kyon aang kar rahi ho dulhe ko. Waise dulhan kahan hai.

G: vo beta…….. (saryabaan interrupts)


PART 16


S: vo goa gayee hai, apne friends ke saath.

Angad and his family was kinda upset.

N: (serious) to bhai, shaadi ko to der ho jaye gi.

S: nahi, nahi, jab aap logon ka phone aaya to us ne kaha ke vo shadi ke liye raazi hai. Aur aa kar shaadi kare gi, ek hafte mein aa rahi. Jaise ho vo aye gi hum usse yh khush khabri de den ge.

Gayatri stares suryabaan. He just ignores.

N: To bhai sahib jab kripa aye gi to hum usse kangan pehna kar rishta paka kar lein ge .

D: aur jaise hi vo aaye gi agle din hum us ki aur angad ki mangni kar den ge aur aaliyah aur Prithvi ke saath saath in ke bhi shaadi ussi mandap mein kara den ge.

N: aap ki beti waisi hi hai. Jaisi humein bahu aur beti ke roop mein chahiye thi.

G: aap ka bhi beta waisa hi hai jaisa daamaad humein chaye tha. Chaliye mun meetha kar lee jiye.

They all ate sweet and aaliyah was passing joking on angad.

Aa: pata hai, aaj bhai ke muun par tape laga hua hai. Kitne silent hai na….

A: aaliyah shut up. Ghar chalo phir batata hoon.

AA: chalo, chalo ghar ja kar kripa ke khayaalaat mein phir se kho jao ge….

And they all giggled while angad was shying and upset becoz kripa wasn't there.

There in Goa kripa was happy, but her happiness was just for a week after that it will be a time to make a decisions. And it wud be a hard job for her

PART 17


After 1 week.

Kripa enter the house.

K: mom, mom, mom

G: are kia hua. Itni khush kyon hai.

K: mom wahan itna mazaa ayaa we visited seaside, amusement park, best hotels. Discos and many more places.

S: kripa jao aur apne kamre mein jaa kar so jao kal mangni ke liye kapre aur samaan khareedna hai.    

K: kis ki mangni.

S: tumhari angad ke saath mangni te ho gaye hai. Aur 5 din baad haldi phir mehndi hai aur is ke baad phere…… ab mil gayein tum saari details.

K: dad but I don't love him. He is only a friend.

S: pyaar ho jaye ga……. And u r getting married wid him and that's my final decision

K: if its ur final decision that I will marry him so its my decision that I'll tell him the fact………….

S: no, if u will so u will not live in this home and as well as ur mom, gayatri tum samjh rahi ho na.

Kripa was doomed she sat down and suryabaan left.

G: kripa tu angad se shaadi kar le, vo bohat achaa hai.

K: mom how can I when I don't love him.

G: plz beta

K: no mom

G: agar mere haath jorne se tu raazi ho jati hai to……..

Gayatri begs by foldings her hands. Kripa was ashamed and put her mom's hand down by her both hands.

K: is shaadi se bhi badi saaza mere liye yeh ho gi ke meri maa mere samne apne haath joray. I'll marry him.
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PART 18


ENGAGEMENT

Kripa's family welcome khana's family and other guest. Soon the engagement ceremony was started angad slipped the ring in her hand by looking at kripa and kripa did the same but didn't looked a angad as she was having tears in her eyes. everyone gave them gifts while addi handed angad a packet and……..

AD: angad jiju yeh bhale hi chota sa gift ho par aap ke liyeyeh bohat bara hai. Isse abhi mat kholna ghar jana phir

A: aissa kia hai is gift mein jo itna kimti hai…….

AD: bas hai kuch. Aur who aap ko gahr jaa kar pata chale ga…….. par yeh gift muje shaadi wale din wapas chahiye. Theek hai.

A: ok

Angad was staring kripa. By this kripa was feeling uncomfortable. Naina asked angad:

N: angad usse stare mat karo and ask her 4 dance.

A: may I have the pleasure to dance wid a beautiful lady.

K: (forces a smile on her face) sure.

She gives her hand to angad and both gets to the dance floor. Song was played……..

Chupake-Chupake Chhup-Chhup Ke Dil Kisi Ka Hota Hai
Baadalon Ki Baanhon Men Chaand Jaise Khota Hai
Ishq Ke Nashe Men Deewaana Samaan Ho Jaata Hai
Chupake-Chupake Chhup-Chhup Ke Dil Kisi Ka Hota Hai
Baadalon Ki Baanhon Men Chaand Jaise Khota Hai
Ishq Ke Nashe Men Deewaana Samaan Ho Jaata Hai

Angad places his hand on kripa's waist, kripa was feeling ver uncomfortable. She looked down so that angad wud not see the tears in her eyes. Kripa places her hand on angad's shoulder.

O
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai

Chupake-Chupake Chhup-Chhup Ke Dil Kisi Ka Hota Hai
Baadalon Ki Baanhon Men Chaand Jaise Khota Hai
Ishq Ke Nashe Men Deewaana Samaan Ho Jaata Hai

O
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai

Dil Ki In Baaton Men Ham To A Jaate Hain
Lekin Hamaari Baat Men Dil Aata Naheen
Dhadakanen Kahati Hain Dil Ki Ye Aadat Hai
A Jaaye Dil Ye Kisi Pe To Phir Jaata Naheen
Ishq Ka Ye Jaadoo Hai
Ishq Ka Ye Jaadoo Hai

Ye Jaadoo Kaun Chalaata Hai
O
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai

Kisi Ke Vaadon Pe Kisi Ki Qasamon Pe
Khud Se Bhi Zyaada Ham Karate Hain Kyon Yaqeen
Yahi To Chaahat Hai Yahi Ibaadat Hai
Inake Bharose Pe Hi Saans Leti Hai Aashiqi
Ab Pata Hamako Chala
Ab Pata Hamako Chala

Ye Ishq Hi Dil Dhadakaata Hai
O
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai

Chupake - Chupake Chhup - Chhup Ke
Dil Kisi Ka Hota Hai
Baadalon Ki Baanhon Men
Chaand Jaise Khota Hai
Ishq Ke Nashe Men Deewaana Samaan Ho Jaata Hai

Ai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai

Song was ended and everyone clapped. Angad was pleased and hugged kripa. She was sad and most of her tears were flowing out of her heart. Naina advised angad to have a talk with kripa. Suryabaan and gayatri were afraid that kripa won't tell anything to angad.

A: kripa tum is shaadi se khush ho….

K to herself: agar bata doon gi to yehi shaadi se mana kar de ga aur mujhe is se shaadi nahi karni pare gi.

She was about to say but, she remembered her mother folding her hands in front of her.

K: haan. Bohat.

A: to pehle kyon nahi bataya. Well, mujhe to jaise hi realize hua maine to mom ko jald hi bata dia.

K: acha

A: well. Aaj tum kuch upset dikh rahi ho. Koi baat hai kia.

K: nahi aissi Koi baat nahi hai. Just abhi abhi UK se ayee hoon aur wapar mom, dad se dur chali jaoon gi.

A: vo to hai. Main bhi soch raha tha ke ek mahiney baad shaadi karoon par mahoorat phir to bohat late ho jaye ga na. and I can wait till that.

K: me too (to herself) Kyonki shaadi ke baad main tumhein saari sachai bata dun gi.


PART 19


most of the part is covered by songs so enjoy them.

After engagement kripa came back to her room and start putting off her bangles her mother was upset but not wanting to express it and make kripa also upset. Gayatri came and sat beside her daughter.

G: meri pyaari si beti thak gayee hai…..

Kripa puts her head on her mother and speaks: haan thak gayee hoon. Har cheez meri marzi ke khilaaf hai. Mom, yeh sach ko sehte sehte thak gayee hoon.

G: (changes the topic) beta main janti hoon tujhe waqt chahiye itni jaldi shaadi karna ushkil hai. Par pandit ji ne yehi mahoorat nikala. Phir bohat der ho jaati.

K: nahi mom. Agar mahoorat der ka nikalta to bhi dad yeh shaadi jaldi karva detay Kyonki wo jante hain ke main ziada dinon tak chup nahi rehne wali hoon. Aur haan main bhi angad aur meri shaadi hone ka Intezaar kar rahi hoon. Kyonki pehli raat hi main usse sachaee bata dun gi.

G: KRIPA! Tu khush nahi to kia kissi aur ko bhi khush hone ka haq nahi.

K: hai, har kissi ko khush rehne ka haq hai….. par meri khushiyaan cheen kar nahi mom. Usne meri khushiyaan cheen leen hain. Aur mein usse sachai bata kar usse khushiyaan cheenun gi nahi balke ek aissa sach bataoon gi jo ke aaj nahi to kal usse pata chal jaye ga.

Gayatri was speechless and left from there. In kripa's home the fog of sadness had coated the happiness while in angad's house wind of happiness was blowing every where... Angad was sitting in his room and was thinking as usual about kripa. Suddenly he remembers the gift of Addi. He put that gift out from the table where other gifts were kept and opened it. He saw that gift and smiled. It was the pictures of kripa from childhood till her trip to Goa with her friends.

A: addi yeh chota sa gift nahi bohat bara hai. Par shaadi ke baad mujhe kripa ka pyaar bhi millay ga. Main kitna khush naseeb hoon, jisko ko Chaha main ne usse pa lia.

KRIPA'S HOME

Kripa was looking at big sky and crying.

K: hamesha mere saat aissa kyon hota hai. Main hi kyon suffer karti hoon. Kitni bad naseeb hoon aur apni bad naseebi ka saya angad ki Zindagi main bhi phaila dun gi. Mera Koi bhi achaa dost nahi tha, aur jab Koi achaa dost milla to usse bhi nafrat ka rishta jur jay ga.

SANGEET

The days passed and the day of sangeet had came. Everyone was happy but in kripa was very sad.

Naina welcomed all guests and the competition was started LADKE WALE vs. LADKI WALE.

First song was thrown by angad's team.

Soniya dil se mila de
Soniya dil se mila de dil
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill

Bairiyaan dil se mila de
Bairiyaan dil se mila de dil
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill

Hum bhi tere aashiq hain
Kabhi tu humse bhi aa ke mil
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill

Jab shaam dhale (shaam dhale)
Armaan jage (armaan jage)
Jab shaam dhale, armaan jage
Tera hi jadoo chale dilruba

Oh tere bina dil na lage
Tera hi chehra dikhe har jagah

Jaaniya teri ada hai
Jaaniya teri ada hai kaatil
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill

Mujhe choom le (choom le)
Zara jhoom le (jhoom le)
Mujhe choom le, zara jhoom le
In mastiyon mein bhi hai ek maza

Jisne kiya usko pata
Hai ishq hai jaan-e-man ek nasha

Maahiya dil ki lagi hai
Maahiya dil ki lagi hai mushkil
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill

Hum bhi tere aashiq hain
Kabhi tu humse bhi aa ke mil
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill
Just chill, chill, just chill

Just chill
Next from kripa's side

Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Soch Thi Hai Zyada
Kham Woh Samajh Thi Hai
Soch Thi Hai Zyada
Kham Woh Samajh Thi Hai
Dil Kuch Kehta Hai
Kuch Aur Hi Karti Hai
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Soch Thi Hai Zyada
Kham Woh Samajh Thi Hai
Dil Kuch Kehta Hai
Kuch Aur Hi Karti Hai
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Pyaar Usse Bhi Hai Magar Shuruaat Tumhi Se Chahe
Khudh Mein Ulji Ulji Hai Par Bhaalo Ko Suljaayein

I Mean You're All The Same Yaar
Hum Achche Dost Hai Par Uss Nazar Se Tumko Dekha Nahin
Woh Sab To Teek Hai Par Uss Barein Mein Maine Socha Nahin

Sab Se Alag Hai Tum Yeh Keh Ke Paas Tumhaare Aaye
Aur Kuch Din Mein Tum Mein Alag Sa Kuch Bhi Na Usko Paiye

Uff Yeh Kaisi Shirt Pehnthe Ho
Yeh Kaise Bhaal Khatathe Ho
Ghaadi Tehz Chalathe Ho
Tum Jaldi Mein Kyo Khaathe Ho
Gimme A Break

Tumhe Badalne Ko Paas Woh Aati Hai
Tumhe Mitaane Ko Chaal Bichati Hai
Baaton Baaton Mein Tumhe Pasathi Hai
Pehle Hasathi Hai… Phir Bada Rulaati Hai
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Eh Itna Hi Khudh Se Khush Ho To Peeche Kyon Aate Ho
Phool Kabhi To Hazar Thofein Akhir Kyon Laaten Ho

Apna Naam Nahin Bataya Aapne
Coffee Peene Chalenge
Main Aapko Ghar Chod Doon
Phir Kab Milenge

Bikhra Bikhra Be Matlab Sa Toota Phoota Jeena
Aur Kehte Ho Alag Se Hai Hum Taan Ke Apna Seena

Bheega Tolya Kahin Farsh Pe
Toothpaste Ka Dakhan Kahin
Kal Ke Mauze Ulat Ke Pehne
Waqt Ka Khuch Bhi Hosh Nahin

Jeena Ka Tumko Dang Sikhlati Hai
Tumhe Jaanwar Se Insaan Banaati Hai
Uske Bina Ek Pal Rehna Sakhoge Tum
Usko Pata Hai Yeh Keh Na Sakhoge Tum
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Jaane Kaun Kaun Se Din Woh TumkoYaad Dilaayein
Pyaar Ko Chahe Bhool Bhi Jaayein
Taareeqein Na Bhoolayein
First March Ko Nazar Milaayee
Chaar April Ko Main Milne Aayee
Ikees May Ko Tumne Chuwa Tha
Che June Mujhe Kuch Hua Tha

Ladko Ka Kya Hai Kissi Bhi Mor Pe Woh Mur Jaayein
Abhi Kissi Ke Hai Abhi Kissi Aur Se Woh Jud Jaayein

Tumhaare Mummy Daddy Ghar Par Nahin Hai
Great… Main Aaa Jaon?
Tumhaari Friend Akeli Ghar Jaa Rahi Hai
Bechari… Main Chod Aaon
Uff

Ek Haan Kehne Ko Kitna Dehlati Hai
Thak Jaate Hai Hum Woh Jee Behlati Hai

Woh Sharmati Hai Kabhi Chupati Hai
Ladki Jo Haan Kehde Usse Nibhati Hai
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Angad was insisted to sing a song. He sings:

Main seedhe saadhe dhang se, kehta hoon aapni baat
Ek ghar basaane chahata hoon, main tumhare saath
( Kya doogi mere haathon mein bolo tum aapna haath ) - 2

Main seedhe saadhe dhang se, kehta hoon aapni baat
Ek ghar basaane chahata hoon, main tumhare saath
( Kya doogi mere haathon mein bolo tum aapna haath ) - 2

Khushiyon se ghar ko sajaoonga hamesha
Dastar se bhi main waqt pe aaonga hamesha
Laoonga main thode taaza phool bhi
Karoonga main puri har khushi
Maanoonga main manoonga, manoonga har ek baat
Kya doogi mere haathon mein bolo tum aapna haath
Main seedhe saadhe dhang se, kehta hoon aapni baat

Chanda aur sitare laoonga teri khatir
Tum joh kaho main woh gaoonga teri khatir
Chalo yeh bhi tumse vaada hai mera chahoonga main tumhe toot ke
Jitna satao ya rulao jaaonga na kahin rooth ke
Aaonga main aaonga, aaonga tere pass
Kya doogi mere haathon mein bolo tum aapna haath

Main seedhe saadhe dhang se, kehta hoon aapni baat
Ek ghar basaane chahata hoon, main tumhare saath
( Kya doogi mere haathon mein bolo tum aapna haath ) – 3


it was kripa's turn

Haan a ha ha ha ha, haan a ha ha ha ha
Haan aa ha, haan aa ha, aa aa aa aa
(Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Dil ko hazaar baar toka toka toka
Dil hai hawaaon ka jhonka jhonka jhonka
Dil ko bachaana, dhoka na khaana
Dhoka hai pyaar yaar pyaar hai dhoka) - 2
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Haan a ha ha ha ha, haan a ha ha ha ha
Haan aa ha, haan aa ha, aa aa aa aa
Dhoondega koi bahaana, dhoondega koi nishaana
Haan dhoondega koi bahaana, dhoondega koi nishaana
Dil ka baazaar hai yahan to dil ko dilon se bachaana
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Dil ko hazaar baar toka toka toka
Dil hai hawaaon ka jhonka jhonka jhonka
Dil ko bachaana, dhoka na khaana
Dhoka hai pyaar yaar pyaar hai dhoka
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Bachna is aashiq se bachna, kaanton ki dosti se bachna
Haan bachna is aashiq se bachna, kaanton ki dosti se bachna
Aankhon mein bhar le andhera, tum aisi roshni se bachna
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Dil ko hazaar baar toka toka toka
Dil hai hawaaon ka jhonka jhonka jhonka
Dil ko bachaana, dhoka na khaana
Dhoka hai pyaar yaar pyaar hai dhoka
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka
Dil ko hazaar baar toka toka toka
Haan a ha ha ha ha, haan a ha ha ha ha
Haan aa ha, haan aa ha, aa aa aa aa
Dil ko hazaar baar roka roka roka

Angad sings a song again to answer that song

o o...
(aashiq banaya - 3 aapne ) - 2
(tere bin suni suni hain baahein
teri bin pyaasi pyaasi nigaahein
tere bin bin asar meri aahein) - 2
tere bin

(tere bin lamha lamha sataye
tere bin bekarari jalaaye
tere bin chain mujhko naa aaye) - 2
tere bin

(meri nigaaho mein tera chehra rawaa hain
gehre hain armaan jaane ja paagal samaa hain ) - 2
(apni daayre se toh main chutne lagi hu
tere baajuo mein aake tootne lagi hu ) -2
tere bin jeena nahi hain gawara
tere bin dil ka nahi hain gujara
tere bin kaun apna sahaara
(aashiq banaya - 3 aapne ) - 2

(bechainiyo ka faaslo ka silsila hain
dardejigar ka yeh sabab hamko mila hain ) - 2
(betaabiyo ne hamko chur kar diya hain
pass aane pe majboor kar diya hain ) - 2
tere bin raat kat ti nahi hain
tere bin pyas mit ti nahi hain
tere bin duri ghat ti nahi hain
(aashiq banaya - 3 aapne ) - 2

kripa remain silent and other from her team also. SO ANGAD'S TEAM WINS……………………

PREVIEW: kripa tells the truth

PART 20


The day of pheras was there after the lovely couple of aaliyah and Prithvi got married. Kripa was brought to mandap and was settled down. She was looking very gorgeous and she was wearing a light violet lehenga with embroidery on it. And angad was looking as hot as usual. Angad sat down besides her (going to be wife- wait for last rasam) and smiled kripa also smiled back. But her smile was wicked and she thinks.

K: aaj ke raat tumhari khushiyon ki aakiri raat hai. I m sorry

They took pheras and looking to fire angad thought.

A: yeh aag meri Zindagi roshan karde gi.

Kripa thinks: issi aag ne hi meri khushiyaan jala deen ab yeh tumhari khushiyaan jalae gi angad.

SUHAAGRAAT or SACHAI KI RAAT.

Angad comes into the room and saw that kripa was standing. He locks the door. And moves forward he puts off her dupatta and hugs her. Kripa puts her hand on angad's back and…………………………… pushes him. She was having anger in her eyes.

K: dur raho mujhe se samjhte kia ho apne aap ko….. aur mujhe….. ke main tumse pyaar karti hoon. Nahi main tum se pyaar nahi karti…….. nahi karti main tumse pyaar……..

A: kripa yeh kia behudda mazak hai.

K: mazak…. Mazak to Zindagi ne mere saath kia hai…………..

A: agar tum Mujh se pyaar nahi karti thi to shaadi ke liye haan kyon ki Mujh se (screams) agar tum mujh se kehti to main khud shaadi ke liye mana…..

K: angad farz karo agar tumhari shaadi aise kissi insaan ke saath nahi hoti jis se tum pyaar karte ho balke tumhare parivaar ki pasand Koi aur hai to tum kia karte.

A: main ussi se shaadi karta jis se main pyaar karta hoon aur agar usse nahi to kissi se nahi.

K: aur agar tumhari maa tumhare samne apne haath jore to…. Mana kar pao Ge….. Same was happened to me….. galti tumhai bhi hai…. If u have asked me and I have refused so the matter will b ended… but now u have to suffer and stay away from me.

A: theek hai…. Meri galti thi tumhein nahi batana ke main tumse pyaar karta hoon. Par it's a request mere aur tumhare ilawa yeh baat kisi ko maaloom na ho….. plz…..

Kripa was sad and sorry but was angry on him too….. Angad took the pillow and went to sleep on the couch…..

K: yeh ghar tumhara hai aur bed pe tum jao main couch pe so jaoon gi…..

Angad was in anger and let her sleep on couch.

Next morning angad got up wid the knock on the door she was afraid and ran to kripa and tried to wake her up. She was still sleeping he picked her up and put her on the bed and put some stain of lipstick. And the knocking was non-stop. He finally opened the door. Her mother was outside.

N: angad…….. darvaasa kholne main itni der, thoda sudhar jao shaadi ho gayee hai tumhari……… waise kripa kahan hai…….

A: mom, so rahi hai…..

N: (comes inside) wow…. Ab to tumhare bigarne ke chance ziada lag rahe hain…. Naha dho kar nashte ke liye aa jao.

Naina leaves, angad takes a sigh of relief.

A: baap re…. baal baal bacha…. Aur yeh maha rani chain ki neend le rahi hai….

He gets to her and was about to awake her when he saw her innocent face. He kisses her head…..

A: itna sab kuch kia tumne mere saath phir bhi main tum se pyaar karta hoon.

He then makes kripa awake.

A: kripa utho. Utho………

K: mom… sone do na……..

A: mom nahi hai…. Aur agar bhool gayee ho to yaad dila dun ke tumhari shaadi ho chuki hai……

Hearing this kripa awakes and sees herself on bed….. and then notices lipstick on angad's shirt……….

K: angad main bed pe kaise… yeh lipstick ka daagh…. Kia hua tha kal…..

A: kripa kuch nahi hua tha…..

K: (becomes mad and gets down from bed...) angad sach bolo main sach bardaast kar sakti hoon par jhoot nahi….

Angad holds her from shoulder

A: kal kuch nahi hua infact main tumhein 15 min pehle hi yahan bed pe laya hoon aur lipstick ke nishaan main ne mom ke saamne yeh zaahir karne ke liye lagaye ke hum dono ke beech sab normal hai….. aur main itna bura nahi hoon…

He goes to bathroom to take bath and kripa takes a sigh of relief after that……………….

K to herself: angad tum bilkul bure nahi ho, buri to meri kismet hai. Jis ke jaal main tum bhi phas gaye ho….

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Posted: 18 years ago
#6
guys the new part will be at 13 dec
actually my exams delayed so thats why u have to wait 4 a long while. but i will complete sending the parts and make it a new ff
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7

PART 21


IN THE BEDROOM

Kripa took bath and changed into a red sari with glitters and beadwork on it. She wears jhumkas 4 inches long. And a necklace of white gold… some matching bangles wid it. She was about to leave the room when angad stopped her. He moved forward and applied sindoor in her maang. And tied mangalsutar.

A: main jaanta hoon ke tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti…. Par main nahi chahta ke mere parents ko is baat ki zara si bhi kabr ho……. So plz apni bhaawnaoon ke saath saath kissi ki armaanon ki bhi qadar kar lena……

Kripa was speechless. And that she didn't utter a word.    

Kripa and angad got ready and went down to have breakfast…… they touches feet of naina & dilip

N: aa gaye tum log ab chalo nashta kar lo.

D: beta! Aaj hum New York ja rahe hain. 4 a year

A: dad aaj hi aur pooray saal ke liye……… why…………

D: beta- new york main humare niya project hai aur ek saal to lag hi jaye ga……..

N: aur waise bhi hum ne yeh soch ke delay kia ke tu akela ho jaye ga……… par ab kripa hai na tere saath…… ab chal gaari nikal aur humein airport par chor.

Angad was upset that his mom dad are leaving him with kripa. But it was gud 2 coz the won't got to now that wat relation kripa and angad are sharing…..

Angad went to the airport wid kripa and his parents of course and his parents left sadly………….. angad went back to home and ask kripa that she shud go home and he have to go coz of some work…… he left and kripa was alone at home.

Angad went to the beach that his cud share his sadness wid the waves the wind….. the shore the pebbles the silence there the loneliness there….
a song was played:
(Sach keh raha hai deewana dil
Dil na kisi se lagaana) - 2
Jhoothe hai yaar ke vaade saare
Jhoothi hai pyaar ki kasmein
Maine har lamha jisse chaaha, jisse pooja
Ussi ne yaaron mera dil
Toda toda, tanha tanha chhoda
Sach keh raha hai deewana dil
Dil na kisi se lagaana
Jhoothe hai yaar ke vaade saare
Jhoothi hai pyaar ki kasmein
Maine har lamha jisse chaaha, jisse pooja
Ussi ne yaaron mera dil
Toda toda, tanha tanha chhoda
Mausam mausam tha suhaana bada
Mausam mausam maine dekha usse
Hua main paagal bas pal bhar mein, aah
Mausam mausam tha suhaana bada
Mausam mausam maine dekha usse
Hua main paagal bas pal bhar mein
Aake basi hai voh mere mann mein
Uski kami hai ab jeevan mein
Voh door hai meri nazron se
Kyoon usse main chaahoon
Oh, sach keh raha hai deewana dil
Dil na kisi se lagaana
Jhoothe hai yaar ke vaade saare
Jhoothi hai pyaar ki kasmein
Maine har lamha jisse chaaha, jisse pooja
Ussi ne yaaron mera dil
Toda toda, tanha tanha chhoda
Sundar sundar voh haseena badi
Sundar sundar main to khone laga
Uske nashe mein bin piye baheka, aah
Sundar sundar voh haseena badi
Sundar sundar main to khone laga
Uske nashe mein bin piye baheka
Ek din usse bhoola doonga main
Uske nishaan mita doonga main
Chaahoonga na main us patthar ko
Jaa usse bata de
(La lai lai lai lai la le
La lai lai lai lai la) - 2
Maine har lamha jisse chaaha, jisse pooja
Ussi ne yaaron mera dil
Toda toda, tanha tanha chhoda
Suddenly a hand was kept on his shoulders…………….
PART 22
Angad looks behind and it is…………….. Mishti… he hugs her. And was having a slight smile on his face, but sorrow has covered most of the part of his face and HEART.

Mishti is angad's best friend from college times and both shares everything. Angad and mishti even share those secrets from which their parents are unaware. But they haven't met since mishti left for Malaysia and now they r meeting…….. both are surprise to see ach other….

M: angad tum yahan…. I mean ab bhi yahan aate ho…..

A: kiya Karun aadat se majboor hoon.

M: aadat ya kuch aur…..

A: mishti tum bhi apni aadat se majboor ho.

M: main… kaun si….

A: pehliyaan bujhaane ki…..

And they both giggle

M: jokes apart….. If I m not mistaken tum yahan tab hi aate ho jab udaas hote ho…. Kia tum udaas ho….

A: (controlled his feeling) waise aisi Koi baat nahi…. Aaj mom aur dad New York gaye hain to apne aa to thoda sa akela mehsoos kar raha…. Tha…

M: akela kyon…. Oh mujhe bewakoof bana rahe thay …….. tum shaadi ki baat nahi batao ge to mujhe pata nahi chale ga…. Waise suna hai ke tum ne apni pasand ki ladki se shaadi ki hai…… jis se tum bohat pyaar karte ho… u r so lucky jante ho jis se pyaar karo us ka pyaar pana phir us ka saath pana bohat kam logon ki kismet main hota hai…

Angad was hurt by Mishti's word and tears were rolling down his eyes mishti was not looking at him and was looking at the waves of sea. But when she looked at him she got anxious.

M: angad…… tum ro rahe ho ……. It means I was right tum kissi baat se bohat upset ho…….. won't u tell me… hum ne har cheez share ki hai na…..

Angad hugs mishti and told her everything that was being done between him and kripa.

A: tum kehti thi na ke kissi ka saath pana kismet ki baat hai. Par I m not lucky…… I'm the unluckiest man on this earth. She doesn't love me, but after she had done such things to me but I still love her……… I love her like crazy….. what shud I do???

M: make her love u…….

A: what?

M: yes……. U will act like u don't love her anymore and u love someone else and this will make her jealous and ur absence will make her love u….

A: how is this possible…?

M: it is possible……. Dekho hum Aksar us cheez ki qadar nahi karte Jo cheez humare sab se paas hoti hai ….. Par hum us cheez ke nahi hone par us ka Ehsaas karte hain……

A: Do u think it will work?

M: of course man.

A: par ladki kehna se aye gi….

A: ( clicking his finger) got it….

M: who….

A: u

M: main nahi, nahi….. bhai main aisa kaise kar sakti hoon……

A: oh c'mon yaar tum hi to ho jisse vo janti nahi……. Aur haan yeh natak, natak hi rahe ga pyaar nahi ban jaye ga…. Warna Koi aur sach much peeche pad gayee to…….

M: haan to main bharosemand hoon……..

A: 4 sure………

PREVIEW: mishti meets kripa……..

PART 23

Mishti and angad ended their talk and they drive to angad's house. Angad enters the house and called kripa…. Kripa reached after few minutes. Angad got angry to keep him waiting….

A: kripa, itni der kyun lagi ane mein, main tumhein bula raha tha na……..

K: main tumhari nokar nahi hoon, ke tum bullao gi aur main dori chali aoon gi…

Angad noticed that the sindoor is not in her maang and she isn't wearing mangalsutar and was dressed in a white saari… (Symbol of sadness)

A: angad fine… meet my SPECIAL FRIEND mishti….

M: hi kripa……. How r u?

K: upset…. And regretting….

Angad was hurt by her words… while mishti remain silent.

A: (gave a revolting look to kripa) main fresh ho kar aata hoon….

Mishti and kripa were alone…. And though they start chatting…

M: angad ne bataya ke tum aur wo…….

K: mishti plz……. I don't wanna share my personal life's matters with u….

M: well it's ok…….. ok tell me something about u……….

K: mere baare main jaan kar kia karo gi……..

M: times pass ho jaye ga aur we cud be friends…..

K: friends??? Friends ke maamle main meri kismet bohat buri hai. Angad ko bhi Kabhi friend banaya tha…….. Dekho rishta hi badal gaya….

Angad was listening this and was his hearts gets wound after kripa's each word.

A: mishti… main bahar ja raha hoon…. Tum bhi chalo… coffee piyein Ge…


Kripa was kinda jealous when angad hugged mishti.

Angad and mishti went to a coffee shop and was upset…..

M: ab kia hua, itne upset kyon ho…..

A: mishti mujhe nahi lagta kripa ko Koi pare ga…..

M: wat rubbish…… jab tum ne mujhe hug kia tha to kripa ki ankhon main jealousness saaf, saaf dekh rahi thi…. And u know wat I think that she loves u…….

A: jhooti taslee mat do….

M: leave that topic and aaj tum kissi bhi tarah kripa ko meri party mein zaroor le aana …..

A: party???

M: actually mere anne ki khushi main humare college ke group neek party rakhi hai aur jo ke Xings clib main hai….

A: I will try to convince her to come….

M: u have to……. By hook or by crook.
Angad leaves mishti her home and drives back to his home….. And start convincing kripa to go…..
A: kripa plz …..

K: no main nahi jaana chahti. And that's final……

A:mere parivaar ki beizzati karne ka ek moka jo mil gaya hai tumhein………

K: beizzati ?????????

A: agar main tumhare saath nahi gaya to mere friends and un mein se kuch papa ke kareebi friends aur humare relatives ko ajeeb lage ga aur papa ko ye baat pata chal gayee to….

Angad knows that his reason was stupid but had a gr8 effect

K: theek hai theek hai…. Main chaloon gi…

Kripa start leaving when angad called her

A: aur haan…. Dress like a married woman. 4 god sake………….


PREVIEW: kripa is jealous and angad is happy to get his plan successful.

PART 24

IN THE PARTY

Kripa and angad entered the party, and kripa was feeling very uncomfortable coz she don't know anyone there. Angad was happy coz this was the first step towards his victory. As angad and kripa entered the party, mishti welcomed angad and….
M: hi, angad
A: hi mishti…
They both hugged. What made kripa very upset and jealous. But she makes herself remain silent and showed her anger through her eyes. Angad cud easily understand her feeling and so does mishti.
M: angad tum chalo mere saath I wanna meet u some special guests…. Chalein….
A: y not…
K: angad main bore ho rahi hoon mujhe jana hai….
A: (whispers) tumhein jana hai to jao…. Par yaad rakhna, tum apna promise todo gi.
K: angad par……. (angad leaves, ignoring her)
In the meanwhile a new lady came to her. She was an entertainment package. She was none other than ANITAAH.
AN: Tum angad ki wife hona.
K: haan to.
AN: Vo tumse pyaar nahiin karta na…..
K: how…..
AN: tum yeh kehna chah rahi ho na ke mujhe kaise pata chala. Well AniTah the super minded ko sab pata hai.
K: Excuse me, that's none of ur business miss Anitah
AN: darling it's AniTah ("T" is very important)
K: ok Miss Anitah leave.
AN: it AniTah. (Screams)
K: tum apne naam mein se 'T' hata kyon nahi deti. Irritating (shouts)
Anitah leaves with gr8 anger on her face making ppl laugh on her.
AN: tumhein to main chodoon gi nahi.
K: Ani….A pakra kahan hai……
Mishti came to kripa.
M: achaa hua us Anittah ki bachi ko sabaq seekha diya.
K: I dun like the ppl irritates me.
Just angad came up.
A: mishti bore ho raha hoon. Wanna dance.
M: sure.
Angad takes hand of mishti and went on the dance floor. Kripa was jealous wid this scene and soon a man came to her and asked 4 a dance.
K: (kia kahun. Angad ko sabaq sikhati hoon aur haan karti hoon. Par us ke liye main apni boundaries ko kyon cross karun.) No, I m not interested.
Angad sees that and was very happy.
A: mishti tum ne Dekha kripa ne kaise us ko manna kar diya. Yeh bhi nahi socha ke agar main usse hurt kar raha hoon to she shud do the same.
M: its coz se luvs u.
A: and its coz of u.
Angad ends the dance and drives back to home wid a jealous and upset kripa.

PART 25

Kripa and angad reaches home. Kripa sat in the front of the mirror and starts putting off the jewelry and bangles and angad changes into his night suit and sat on the bed looking kripa through the mirror and starts singing.

Pal Pal Dil Ke Paas Tum Rehti Ho
Jeevan Meethi Pyaas Yeh Kehti Ho
Pal Pal Dil Ke Paas Tum Rehti Ho

Dewaanon Ki Yeh Baatein
Deewane Jaante Hain
Jalne Mei Kya Mazaa Hai
Parwanr Jaante Hain
Tum Yunhi Jalate Rehna
Aa Aakar Khwabon Mein
Pa L Pal ...

Kripa gets irritated and speaks out.

K: gana kyon ga rahe ho.

A: kyon mana hai kia…

K: raat raat ko gana gaana achi baat hoti hai kia.

A: vo kia hai na jab bhi mein kissi party se aata hoon to mera gaana gane ka bohat mood hota hai.

K: to gaao

She gets up at and picks up the pillow and her clothes (night dress) and goes to another room.

K: U and Ur songs are alone in this room. Sleep wid Ur songs. Gud nite

Angad giggles

A: sorry songs I wanna sleep wid my sweet but jealous wife's thoughts. Man I m crazy about her.

MORNING

Kripa came to angad's room to give him tea and breakfast. Her hairs were wet.

K: utho angad.

A: kripa kitni subha utha rahi ho.

K: pati dev apni nazrein zara ghadi ki taraf daaliyeh

A: Pati dev…???? Thank god pati to maana. (gets up)

Kripa places the tray of breakfast on the table (in the room) and was drying her wet hair. Angad got mesmerized by her beauty. Sings again.
Neend Nahin Aati Hai Chain Nahin Aataa Hai
Dil Ko Qaraar Nahin
Kaisi Khumaari Hai Haal Meraa Kaisaa Hai
Samjhegaa Yaar Nahin

Haay Pal Pal Meri Jaan Jaati Rahi
Haay Pal Pal Meri Jaan Jaati Rahi
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi
Haay Kitnaa Mujhe Tadpaati Rahi
Haay Kitnaa Mujhe Tadpaati Rahi
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi

Baadal Garjaa Bijli Chamki Baarish Bhi Thi Tez Toofaani
Chhed Rahi Thi Sard Havaaen Dil Mein Aati Thi Shetaani
Haay Rah Rah Ke Kaali Ghataa Chaati Rahi
Haay Rah Rah Ke Kaali Ghataa Chaati Rahi
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi

Har Aahat Pe Aisaa Lagaa Ke Meraa Sonaa Dilbar Aayaa
Kaise Kahaan Kab Tumse Miloon Main Sochaa Par Main Mil Nahin Paayaa
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi
Haay Pal Pal Meri Jaan Jaati Rahi
Haay Kitnaa Mujhe Tadpaati Rahi
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi
Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mujhe Aati Rahi

K: subha subha shru hogaye. Oh god yeh song fever kab khatam ho ga.


PREVIEW: Kripa's jealousy and kripa slaps ........ MISHTI

Part 26

A: Kripa, Mishti sweet hai na….

K: (gets jealous and cuts him) naha dho kar office ke liye ready ho jao.

Angad knew that kripa is jealous. He didn't argue.

A: kripa kapre nikal do na.

K: achaa

Kripa chooses a suit for angad and places on couch.

A: kripa chai bana do na.

K: achaa

She adds sugar and tea leaves and pours milk and stirs tea. Angad looks at her passionately.

A: kripa………

K: kia.

A: kiss do na.

K: achaa….. kia????

A: just kidding….

K: (smiles) angad tum bhi na

Kripa leaves and angad was happy.

A: kripa tum kaho na kaho but I know that u love me. Chalo acting shru karni pade gi.

Angad takes shower then wears his cloths then calls kripa for tie the tie. Kripa was tying it just then mishti calls (as a plan) angad talks to her and kripa's heart was burning she controlled herself.

A: kripa! Mishti ka phone tha.

K: to.

A: us ke bhai ki bachelor party hai. Humein invite kiya hai, shaam ko tyaar rehna.

K: par

A: plz kripa mera mood aaj bohat achaa hai so don't spoil it. U r coming and this is final.

Angad leaves and kripa was sad when he leaves.

K: (to herself) kyon angad ke kareeb hone pe khushi hoti hai. Aur us ke na hone ka Ehsaas mujhe tanha kar deta hai. Main kissi se pyaar nahi kar sakti to phir angad ke liye feel karti hoon vo kia hai. Shayad Yehi pyaar hai. Main aaj tumhein bataoon gi ke I LOVE U.

At the evening every one was enjoying the party. Angad and kripa enters and Mishti comes up and hugs angad. Kripa was jealous but ignored it.

M: angad achaa hua tum aa gaye. Ab hum truth and dare ki game shru karte hain.

The bottle was spun and it was angad's turn. Angad chooses dare and mishti asks him to kiss kripa. Angad was afraid that if kripa will not accept. But kripa agrees and angad kisses her on her cheek. The bottle was spun again and it was Mishti's turn, she also preferred Dare and anitah dared her to kiss……………………. ANGAD.

Kripa was angry and as Mishti moved closer to angad to kiss him, kripa kripa turned her and gave her a TIGHTEST SLAP ever.

PREVIEW: Angad slaps kripa.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#8
Part 27
A: kripa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa gets frown and leaves the party angad was about to follow her, but follows Mishti instead who just get out of the scene.

A: mishti meri baat to suno.

M: angad sab ko to saaf ho gaya. Kya reh gaya hai baat karne ko.

A: mishti main janta hoon kripa ne bohat bura kia par, us ki taraf se main tumhein sorry bolta hoon.

M: it's ok angad, shayad yeh plan bohat extreme ho gaya tha. Kripa ki jagah main hoti to shayad main bhi.

A: nahi aisa tum nahi kar sakti, yeh sirf kripa ki harkatein hain. Main ghar ja kar us se baat karta hoon.

M: plz angad zyaada naraaz mat hona.

Angad leaves and just than anitah came up.

AN: sweety! Kripa ne tumhare saath bohat bura kia.

M: tumne dare di thi.

AN: f9 par keh deti na ke usse yeh sab pasand nahi hai. Par sab ke samne thapar…….. baap re baap….. u shud take revenge. Sikha do usse ke tum bhi kissi se kam nahi.

M: anitah apni bakwaas band karo. And leave.

Kripa reaches her home in great anger. She enters her room. Throws her purse. Then her mangalsutar. And her jewelry on bed. And changes in the nite dress. Just then angad enters and sees all the mess in the room.

A: kripa.

K: Mr. khanna ap aa gaye. Mishti ko saath nahi laey

A: shut up kripa

K: damn I will not….

A: aakhir tum karna kia chahti ho. How dare u slapped her. Wat an insult.

K: insult???? Kissi aur ki nazron mein girna pni Nazar main girne se behtar hota hai. Aur main apni nazron main gir Jaati.

A: kyon

K: Kyonki main tumse pyaar karti hoon!!!!

A: pyaar kripa??? Aisa hain tumhara pyaar to achaa hai ke tumhari nafrat bardasht Karun. Wats a big deal if she was kissing me. Aur agar tumhein yeh haq chahiye to theek hai….

He pulls kripa from her arms and brings her closer.

A: kiss me, c'mon

K: kiss Kabhi nahi.

A: (frees her) see.

K: tum se to achi hoon tum se rishta nahi rakhti to kissi aur ke saath bhi nahi rakti. Tumhare jaise nahi hoon biwi ke hote hue gher aurat ke saath aiyaaaashiiiii kar…….

Angad gets angry and slaps her. the moment for kripa was still. Her face was having cold expression.

A: aiyaashi aur main. Kitni gandi zabaan hai tumhari. Pyaar kia hai pyaar tunm nahi janti. Duniya main sirf tumne un ka dil dukhana jaana hai jo tum se pyaar karte hai. Mujhe nahi pasand hai ke main tum jaisi ladki ke saath ek pal bhi guzaarun. par ab bas. Mom Dad ko yeh batana hoga ke main tumhare saath Koi rishta nahi rakhta tha aur na hoon.

He leaves the room leaving kripa shocked and goes in his room.


PART 28

A: kripa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa gets frown and leaves the party angad was about to follow her, but follows Mishti instead who just get out of the scene.

A: mishti meri baat to suno.

M: angad sab ko to saaf ho gaya. Kya reh gaya hai baat karne ko.

A: mishti main janta hoon kripa ne bohat bura kia par, us ki taraf se main tumhein sorry bolta hoon.

M: it's ok angad, shayad yeh plan bohat extreme ho gaya tha. Kripa ki jagah main hoti to shayad main bhi.

A: nahi aisa tum nahi kar sakti, yeh sirf kripa ki harkatein hain. Main ghar ja kar us se baat karta hoon.

M: plz angad zyaada naraaz mat hona.

Angad leaves and just than anitah came up.

AN: sweety! Kripa ne tumhare saath bohat bura kia.

M: tumne dare di thi.

AN: f9 par keh deti na ke usse yeh sab pasand nahi hai. Par sab ke samne thapar…….. baap re baap….. u shud take revenge. Sikha do usse ke tum bhi kissi se kam nahi.

M: anitah apni bakwaas band karo. And leave.

Kripa reaches her home in great anger. She enters her room. Throws her purse. Then her mangalsutar. And her jewelry on bed. And changes in the nite dress. Just then angad enters and sees all the mess in the room.

A: kripa.

K: Mr. khanna ap aa gaye. Mishti ko saath nahi laey

A: shut up kripa

K: damn I will not….

A: aakhir tum karna kia chahti ho. How dare u slapped her. Wat an insult.

K: insult???? Kissi aur ki nazron mein girna pni Nazar main girne se behtar hota hai. Aur main apni nazron main gir Jaati.

A: kyon

K: Kyonki main tumse pyaar karti hoon!!!!

A: pyaar kripa??? Aisa hain tumhara pyaar to achaa hai ke tumhari nafrat bardasht Karun. Wats a big deal if she was kissing me. Aur agar tumhein yeh haq chahiye to theek hai….

He pulls kripa from her arms and brings her closer.

A: kiss me, c'mon

K: kiss Kabhi nahi.

A: (frees her) see.

K: tum se to achi hoon tum se rishta nahi rakhti to kissi aur ke saath bhi nahi rakti. Tumhare jaise nahi hoon biwi ke hote hue gher aurat ke saath aiyaaaashiiiii kar…….

Angad gets angry and slaps her. the moment for kripa was still. Her face was having cold expression.

A: aiyaashi aur main. Kitni gandi zabaan hai tumhari. Pyaar kia hai pyaar tum nahi janti. Duniya main sirf tumne un ka dil dukhana jaana hai jo tum se pyaar karte hai. Mujhe nahi pasand hai ke main tum jaisi ladki ke saath ek pal bhi guzaarun. par ab bas. Mom Dad ko yeh batana hoga ke main tumhare saath Koi rishta nahi rakhta tha aur na hoon.

He leaves the room leaving kripa shocked and goes in his room.

Part 29

Angad was leaving but suddenly take his steps back faces kripa and then picks up the mangalsutar from the bed. And shows it to kripa.

A: Is ko shayad tum ek necklace samjhti ho. Match hua to to pehen lia aur nahi to phenk diya. YOU DON'T HAVE THE RIGHT TO WEAR IT. Yeh izza ki nishaani hai, aur pyaar ki jo dono mere dil main aaj se tumhare liye nahi hain.

Finaly angad went in his room. Puts the mangalsutar on the table and sleeps. Kripa was dumb she locks the door and cries. She was ashamed.

K: angad tum theek kete ho. Pyaar kia hai main nahi janti. Achaa hai ke tumhari Zindagi mein mishti aa gayee hai, tum us ke saath kam as kam meri di hua problems bhool jate ho……….. I M SORRY.

MORNING

At 7.00 angad wakes up and hold his head. He remembers last night's incident and was guilty.

A: mujhe kripa ke saath aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. I shud apologize.

He heads towards kripa's room and knocks it. But no answer and the door was locked. He yells but there wasn't any reply. He finally leaves for office and thinks that he will talk to kripa after returning. He receives a call from mishti mom and she said that mishti is not talking to anyone and is in bad mood. Angad visits her house and meets her.

A: mishti yeh kia hai.

M: angad plz.

A: wat plz.

M: leave me alone.

A: kis kisko chod doon.

M: matlab…..

A: kal raat…….. (the incident of the night)

M: omg angad. Its just not done. Tum ne us ko thapar mara, damn it she is ur wife.

A: us ne tumhein bhi to maara.

M: angad tum kia samjh rahe thay main usse naraaz hoon. C'mon I m angry on myself I did such a stupid thing and such a stupid plan.

A: phir bhi mishti main usse tab hi maaf karun ga jab wo tumse maafi mange gi. That's it.

M: angad………

He leaves ignoring mishti.

3 hrs later at Mishti's home the bell was rung. She opens the door and was shocked to see KRIPA there. In a black kurta shalwaar.

M: kripa tum???

K: mishti mujhe tum se baat karni hai.

M: andar aao.

K: I m ok here.

M: baat beth ke karo gi to samjhe main aye gi na. so get inside.

M: kia logi.

K: kuch nahi…. Main tum se maafi mangna chahti hoon. Main bohat buri hoon. I mean how cud I ……… (Crys)

M: ab bas rona band karo. I have forgiven u. happy now smile.

K: sorry but I can't

She runs out of the house and mishti was also upset to see her cry.

Angad gets to home and was shocked that kripa had gone just after he left for office and is not back up till now. He asked one of the servants he answered that she has left a letter 4 angad.

"I will return 2morrow"

A short and brief letter, angad wants to talk to her. But waits till morning but she hasn't returned. He leaves for office when he didn't find any sign of her. in the office he gets a call from mishti.

M: hello.

A: (dull) hi.

M: ka hua itne dull. Kal raat kia kripa ke saath romance karne main time nikal dia aur soy nahi.

A: maine kaha na unless she will not pardon I wont forgive her.

M: kia. Us ne nahi bataya ke us ne mujhe se maafi maang li hai. Ab kitni baar maafi mange gi. Now I want the good news tomorrow and don't torture her so much.

The calls end and angad calls home but kripa isn't there yet he is afraid that she hasn't left the home. Angad calls her by his mobile but she cuts the call. Angad takes the cell of his colleague and calls her. she gets the fone and angad asks her that when will she be back. kripa tells that at night because her friend's flight is 4 tonight.

Angad gets at home and was sleepy but he knows that kripa will again lock herself if he wont stop her. he sat on the couch in kripa's room and waits 4 her. kripa comes and locks the door but when she turns she finds angad waiting 4 her.

Part 30

Kripa finds angad in his room and remained shocked. Angad was shocked to see kripa dressed like a widow.

A: yeh kia haalat bana rakhi hai tumne. Aur kale kapre. U don't use to wear them. Kia ho gaya hai tumhein.

K: angad main thaki hui hoon. We will talk in morning.

A: do din se main ne tumse baat nhi ki hai aur ab bhi tum yeh keh rahi ho ke kal baat karen ge. I wanna talk to u now.

K: par…..

A: ssshhh sirf mere sawalon ka jawab do phir kehna jo tumhein kehna hai.

A: kal tum mishti ke ghar gayee thi.

K: nahi

A: don't lie damn it. Khao meri kasam,

He places kripa's hand on his head.

K: gayee thi.

A: us raat se tum mujhe avoid kar rahi thi.

K: (nods yes)

Angad lets her hand go.

A: (hitting his hand on the wall) kyon kripa kyon. Kyon mujhe tum hurt karti ho. Shaadi ki pehli raat se le kar aaj tak main sochta raha ke shayad tum mujhse pyaar nahi to kam as kam humare purani dosti nibhao gi par umeed jis rafter and badhti hai us se jaldi toot Jaati hai. Y do u always hurts.

K: (cry) main nahi chahta thi ke main kisi ko hurt karun par phir bhi meri adatein, mere kaam mere shoq, meri pasand se doosare hurt hote hain.

A: yeh tum kia keh rahi ho.

K: (cries) paida hui to papa nafrat ki wajah se un par bojh ban gayi, mama ka sahara lete lete un par bojh ban gayee. Shaadi ke baad tum pe bo……

Keeps his hand o her mouth and keeps his arms around her.

A: tum mujh par bojh nahi ho…….

K: (screams) hoon main sirf tum par hi nahi is dharti par bojh hoon, jis ki zindagi main ayee dukh ke siva maine usse kuch nahi dia. (cries) I m Sorry

A: why u r sorry…. Tumhari Koi galti nahi hai.

K: Meri galti hai ke main ne tumhein dukh dia, aur sab se bari galti ke main ek LADKI hoon.

A: (confused) so wat tum ladki ho is mein tumari kia galti hai.

He hugs kripa and kripa hugs and angad makes her sit on the bed and hugs her again.

K: meri galti nahi to kyon dad mujh se pyaar nahi karte kyon sirf addi ko pyaar karte hain. Kyon Kabhi unho ne mujhe beti nahi kaha, kyon????

A: main tumse pyaar karta hoon.

K: par main kaise tumse pyaar Karun jab main nahi janti ke pyaar kia hota hai, mujhe aaj tak kissi ne pyaar nahi kia I m alone…..

A: kripa main….

Kripa lets him go and stands from the bed.

K: main janti hoon ke tum ab mishti se pyaar karte ho.

A: nahi

He also stands form the bed

A: kis ne kaha ke main usse pyaar karta hoon. I love u. aur pyaar ek baar hota hai.

Hearing this kripa hugs him he hugs her back and angad was going to kiss on her lips and kripa closes her eyes and they were a half cm away but just angad pulls away.

A: nahi!!! Abhi nahi kripa….

And he leaves, leaving a tearful kripa she falls down on her knees and her head on the bed and she cries.

Part 31

But then she feels that her neck is heavy and as she wasn't wearing any jewelry she could easily feel the difference   she touches her neck and her mangalsutar was there. She stood up. And headed back an angad was there.

He came closer to her and opens the dibi of sindoor and puts sindoor in kripa's maang and opens his arms 4 kripa. Kripa run to him and hugs him. Angad was happy to get his marriage life successful.

Angad and kripa gets apart and angad takes her dupatta off. And kisses her neck and they were completing the kiss they left incomplete. Kripa also kisses him on his cheeks and angad carries her in his arms and took her to his (or we can say their) bedroom and locks the door.

He walks to her taking is shirt off and locks he in his arms.

A: kripa I love u.

K: I love u too.

Angad and kripa shares a romantic nite together

MORNING

Kripa gets up and watches angad sleeping peacefully and a smile spread on his face. She smiles and goes to take bath. When she is back in bathrobe and sees angad still asleep so she gets mad.

K: (angrily) angad utho.

A: itne gusse se bolo gi to main nahi uthun ga.

K: ok. Angad darling, jaan, my sweet hubby, get up.

A: oh how sweet. itna sweetly aur romantically bolo gi to main resist kaise karun ga.

He pulls her on his top. And gets over her.

K: angad yeh kia hai..

A: humare bedroom. Aur gusse se mat bolo.

K: (sweetly) angad darling plz let me go…….. I m in bathrobe.

A: oops. Sorry. I caught u by mistake. And (leaves her)

K: and????

A: and that's the sweetest mistake I have done…..

Hugs her again.

K: angad office jana hai.

A: kripa, tumne bataya nahi tum office bhi Jaati ho.

K: angad main nahi tum.

A: main office, nahi aaj nahi.

K: kyon kis khushi main.

A: bas, ghar par hi bohat kaam hai.

K: kaam??? Kaun sa.

A: tum se bohat saari baatein karni hai.

K: phr shru hogaye. ab jao naha lo….

A: company do na.

K: shut up. Warna office bhej Doon gi….

A: blackmail…..

K: jo bhi samjho.

A: theek hai… theek hai.

K: main nasta lagati hoon.

Kripa changes in a red saari with beadwork on it. And get down for the breakfast.

Angad gets a call.

K: tum niche kitni der main aa rahe ho.

A: arre main abhi tak nahaane bhi nahi gaya, aur tum aane ki baat karahi ho.

Cuts the phone. Again it's a call

A: hello

K: naashte main kia khao ge.

A: tumhara sir.

K: wo roz khaate ho. Sumthing new.

A: tum kilao, to zeher bhi kha loon ga.

K: sorry not available.

A: (laughs and cuts the phone) I love her.

Again a call

A: darling kripa main do minute main neeche aa raha hoon phir jo bolna ho bolna.

M: angad not kripa mishti here.

A: mishti tum. Main samjhaa kripa hai…… well kia hua.

M: angad aaj new film release hui hai, we will watch that in cinema, yaad hai hum hamesha saath cinema jaya karte thay…….

A: mishti, main aa jaata par kripa aur main hang out karne jaa rahe hain…. We want to spend some time together. Hope u wud understand…..

M: its ok main kissi aur ke saath chali jaoon gi.

Mishti cuts the phone and heads back der anitah was standing.

AN: kia hua mishti darling mood kharab kyon hai…. Oh haan angad tumhein kripa ke aate hai bhool gaya na…

M: shut up……

AN: sorry mishti par sachaai ko jhutla nahi sakti. He just used and threw u. get him. He cud be urs. Tum ne to apne hi pairon pe khulhari maardi hai. Jaldi marham lagaao warna zakham mite ga nahi. Bye.

M to herself: yeh sacha hai keh main angad se pyaar karne lai hoon par kripa bhi to us se pyaar karne lagi hai. Kia main us ki khushiyaan cheen loon.
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Part 32

Angad comes down and hugs kripa from the back

K: kia hua???

A: nothing

K: waise phone kis ka tha.

A: mishti ka.

K: kyon Koi khaas baat.

A: nahi wo chahti thi ke main us ke saath film dekhne jaoon

K: to tum ja rahay ho na.

A: nahiii

K: kyon?? us ne humare kitna kuch kia and in return u can't give her some hours. That's really bad…. Time kia tha…

A: raat ke chay baje.

K: to final hai tum jaarahe ho.

A: main nahi. I wanna spend some time with u and u r saying to leave u 4 so many hrs.

K: angad plz. Mere liye

A: on 2 conditions

K: wat??

A: u will come wid me…… see we will be going for hanging out then at 6.00 pm we will watch the movie and then……….

K: then???

A: a romantic candle light dinner.

Kripa blushes and agrees to come.

K: ab to jao ge na.

A: no

K: kyon

A: 2nd condition…….. is u will kiss me.

Angad leans forward to kiss kripa. But kripa stops him.

K: abhi nahi. Betho aur nashta karo.aur haan mishti ko call karo.

A: (angry) main nahi karun ga

K: fine

She walks ahead and softly kisses angad lips and then angad started kissing her on her neck and finishes. Angad calls mishti and tells her that he and kripa will be there. Mishti is irritated.

K: angad.

A: (eating food) hmmmm…

K: khana kaisa hai

A: jaisa roz hota hai.

K: Koi difference nahi hai.

A: (nods no)

Kripa gets annoyed and was about to leave kripa angad holds her hands and kisses it.

A: Is khaane mein aur roz ke khaane main bohat fark hai roz jo khaana banta hai, is ke saamne to us ka swaad pheeka hai...is khane main tumhara pyaar mila hua hai aur yeh batane ki bhi zaroorat nahi hai ke eh khaana tumne banaya hai. Khaas mere liye. Main yeh janta hoon.

Kripa was touched by his words and hugs him desperately. And cries.

A: kia hua, y r u crying

K: Pehli baar itni tareef ki hai kissi ne. plz mujh se Kabhi bhi dur nahi jana I can't bear a moment without u……

A: ok ab bas karo rona. Now hum amusement park chalien ge.

K: nahi

A: kyon.

K: (lying) Koi baat nahi hai.

A: kuch to hai….tell me or I will tickle u. oops shayad tumhein gugudi nahi hoti... hai Na. ok lets try.

Angad moves forward and kripa moves backward and angad finally catches her and tickles her. She laughs and finally agrees to tell the truth,

K: who kia hai na…

A: kia hai????

K: I am afraid of heights.

Angad burst out laughing.

A: (making fun of kripa) oh my baby is afraid of heights.

K: stop making my fun.

A: fun??? I will experience fun in amusement park.

K: u mean that we will go there.

A: 110%

K: angad I won't go there.

He picks her.

A: I will pick u in my arms and then…….

K: then???

A: my u sit on the highest swing.

K: angad I will kill u…

A: but ur luv will save me…….

They both hugged and got ready.

PREVIEW: a-k hangs out. Mishti is jealous.

Part 33

They got ready and left to have fun. They reached amusement park. Angad was making fun of kripa in entire drive to that and kripa was afraid to sit on any ride. She made many excuses.

A: chalo huge wheel main bethte hain.

K: tum jao…

A: kyon darr gayee kya.

K: nahi. Wo… actually mera mood nahi hai. Ok main darti nahi hoon….

A: achaa. Achaa. Jhoot bolne se pehle soch lo tumhare samne angad hai…. And I hate lies.

K: f9 bohat darr lagta hai…. Itna darr keh apne aap ko maut se kuch hi kadam dur mahsoos karti hoon.

A: abhi ek thapar aur rakh ke doon ga agar marne ki baat ki to. Ab chalo warna utha kar le jaoon ga.

Kripa has to go and she was very scared and praying.

A: kia kar rahi ho kripa. Kuch nahi Hoga.

K: agar hua to….

A: wow!! Kripa khana jo Kabhi bhi kissi pe haath utha le vo heights so darti hai.

Kripa was hurt and she was about to get off but the ride started. Angad was saying sorry but kripa was not even looking at him and tears were falling down her eyes.

But when ride was on height kripa shuts her eyes and was scared angad held her and she kept her head on his chest. And when the ride was over she notice that she is close to angad she quickly back offs.

A: kia hua abhi tak naaraz ho.

K: mujhe tumse Koi baat nahi karni.

A: plz…. Ok sorry. (Holding his ears) see kaan bhi pakar liye.

K: tum kyon mujhe us baat ki baar yaad dilate ho.

A: I m sorry…. I didn't mean to hurt u.

K (dull): it's ok

A: itna rooka sukha.

K: to kya

A: kiss and hug me.

K: Kabhi bhi shuru ho jate ho.

And they hugged and kripa kissed him on his cheeks.

A: chalo kuch khaate hain.

K: kiya.

A: gol gapay

K: chee.

A: chalo na….

K: ok

Angad feeds her gol gapay and she liked that she feeds angad but it was to hot that angad could not bear and asked for water kripa makes him drink 2 glass of water. And the 3 one she throws on his face. Angad runs after her and catches her and swings her.

Part 34

They were enjoying there selves and then kripa remembered that they have to meet mishti in the theater

A: kripa main usse phone kar ke keh deta hoon ki hum aaj nahi aa rahe.

K: no, v have promised her.

A (sadly): par yahan kitna maza aa raha hai. aur phir kal to office ki chuti bhi nahi kar sakoon ga.

K: hum wahan maza kar lenge.

A: ok promise me, ke tum yeh nahi bolo gi

K: kia nahi bolun gi

A: behave Ur self, sab dekh rahe hai, mujhe embarrassment ho rahi hai. and all that stuff

K: theek hai nahi bolun gi par thoda limit mein rehna.

A: ok then chalo, film starting se nahi dekhein ge to maza nahi aye ga.

The reached the cinema and angad sat b/w kripa and mishti. Kripa was on the right while mishti was alone at left. Angad and kripa were enjoying the film as well as there company. On the other hand mishti was damn irritated and her mind was agreeing our so called ANITAH.

Angad was kissing kripa was feeding him popcorns and drinks. The romance in the film ended after interval. Angad and kripa's romance also ended because kripa was crying in emotional scenes. Angad was making fun of her and making her laugh but in last a happy ending was there kripa's face was also lightened by this.

Kripa, angad and the buffalo Mishti got out of the hall and were discussing the film.

M: ok to main chalti hoon.

K: coffee peene chalte hain na.

Angad was irritated when kripa was convincing mishti to stop.

M: nahi phir Kabhi.

A: ok bye mishti.

Angad and kripa waved at her

A: kia zaroorat thi usse rokne ki. Ruk Jaati to.

K: to, achaa hota.

A: achaa KHAAAKH…..

K: jaan samjha karo aisa bolna padta hai.

A: (surprisingly) it means u don't really meant it.

K: yep…. Ab Chalein. Warna main usse wapas bulati hoon.

A: kyon mere romantic mood ko zaaya karne mein lagi ho.

They both drove to home…

K: film achi thi naa…

A: bilkul nahi….

K: kyon

A: meri sweet, charming aur lovely wife ko rula dia.

K: tumhein pata chal gaya na ke main kitni emotional hoon ab bas mujhe tang nahi karna.

A: tumhein tang nahi karun ga to kisse karun ga. Sorry. U have to bear me.

K: leave that ab batao hum kahan jaa rahe hain.

A: ghar…

K: itni jaldi kyon

A: thak gaya hoon.

They reached home and headed to their room. Kripa was surprised to see that the room was decorated by flowers and candles.

K: yeh sab.

A: sshhhh. sab tumhare liye hai

To be continued…….

Preview: kripa's accident

Part 35

They reached home and headed to there room. Kripa was surprised to see that the room was decorated by flowers and candles.

K: yeh sab.

A: sshhhh. Sab tumhare liye hai and no more questions….

Kripa blushes and angad asks her for a dance, she gives her hand in his hand and angad holds her from waist and looked deep in each others eyes.

While dancing angad brings kripa close and kisses her lips. Kripa blushes and runs from there but angad grabs her hand and pulls her towards him. She hits his body and hugs him.


Angad pulls her off and kisses her neck and back like crazy and picks her in his arms. Lies her on the bed and lies over her kisses her forehead, then eyes, then cheeks and then kissed her lips, kripa closes her eyes and angad pulls the blanket and sleeps hugging kripa.

In morning kripa was sleeping and angad was making her awake.

A: kripa utho. Suna tha patni pati ko uthati hai, main pehla pati hoon do apni patni ko uthne ke liye mintein kar raha hoon.

K(eyes closed but murmuring): kal main ne tumhein uthaya tha, aaj tum mujhe uthaao

A: uthaaoon

K: hmmm

A: paka.

K: haan

Angad picks her in his arms.

A: kripa utho warna gira doon ga.

K: (opens her eyes) kia angad sapna bhi nahi dekne dete.

A: (sweetly) mera sapna dekh rahi thi.

K: haan, us mein tum aur mamma thi. (starts crying)

A: arre suddenly rone kyon lagi. Kal wali film yaad aa gayee kia.

K: nahi mama ki yaad aa rahi hai.

A: kia, itni si baat to ml kar aao

K: dad mujhe dekh kar ghusa ho jayein ge.

A: aunty kahein Jaati hain.

K: (nods no, but suddenly lights up wid an idea) haan mandir Jaati hain 8.30 pe.

A: achaa to tum tyaar ho jao phir main tumhein drop kar ke aunty se tumhari shikaayat kar ke office chala jaoon ga.    

K: kis baat ki shikaayat.

A: yehi ke tum ne mera dil chura lia.

Kripa blushes and hits on his arms. They got ready and reached mandir kripa sees her mom and ran to her and hugged her and talked and when they were leaving.

K: angad tum jao main ghar chali jaoon gi.

A: kaise jao gi. Don't worry I'll drop u.

K: ghar aur office ka raasta bilkul opposite direction par hai. tumhein late ho jaye ga.

In the mean while mishti paas through and stops her car.

M: arre tum log yahan.

K: tum hi samjao main bol rahi hoon ke main chali jaoon gi ghar par ye hai ke manta hi nahi.

M: angad main chod doon gi na kripa ko.

A: u sure

M: of course yaar.

A: fine to ab main chalta hoon. (kisses kripa's forehead)

K: bye.

Kripa and mishti sat in her car kripa was telling the love life of her and angad.

K: yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua mishti warna angad mujhe Kabhi nahi milta.

Mishti get annoyed and loose the control of car and meets and accident.

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Part 36

A truck was coming and kripa yells to mishti.

K: mishti……

Mishti turns the car but it hit a tree. And the door of the car of kripa's side was opened and kripa falls down in a gap. Mishti gets fainted in the car and no body has even passed through that road.

Mishti wakes up holding her bleeding head. And looks another side but kripa wasn't there. She yells 4 several times but there was no reply. She finally called police station and told them that where was she.

There kripa was still fainted and was having 16 missed calls of angad. He was continually calling her. when the police reached they heard the mobile ringing and got down and finally found kripa.

She was highly injured. Police inspector recalled angad.

A: (sees the number of kripa) jaan kahan ho tum. Phone kyon nahi uthaya. Theek to ho na. kahiin bahar gayee thi kya.

Police Inspector= PI

PI: Hello I m inspector Rajesh.

A: (stunned to hear his voice) aap….

PI: yahan kissi ka accident ho Gaya hai ID cards main se pata Chala hai ke yeh hain kripa khana aap

A: (angad was taken back.) what???

PI: plz calm down….

A: aap plz mujhe bataya khan hua hai accident.

PI: hum unhein city hospital le jaa rahe hain. Aur haan humein ek mishti Naam ki ladki ne phone kia tha. Kia aap usse jante hain.

A: (scornfully) bohat achi tarah se.

Angad reached the city hospital and kripa was in O.T. angad was roaming here and there finally sees mishti and walks to her.

M: angad wo main….

Angad slaps her.

A: kia mishti….. kia kehna chahti ho. Yehi ke tum nejaan booj kar nahi kia. To tumhein kyon kam hurt hua. Jab ke driver ko zyaada khatra hota hai.

M: u mean mein ne yeh sab plan kia tha.

A: mujhe kuch nahi pata agar kripa ko kuch bhi hua to I swear. I will not leave u fine……

Will kripa be alright????

Part 37

Angad was roaming out the O.T. and asking doctors after a minute that wat's the position. After 24 hours wait. Finally the doctor came.

Doctor= Do

Do: Mr. Khana

A: (stood up…) yes doc wat happened.

Do: ur wife is out of danger now.

A: can I meet her?

Do: yes u can but don't talk her too much or stress her.

A: I won't.

Angad got inside to meet kripa. Kripa's eyes were close and she was having 3 fractures.

A: kripa

She opens her eyes and gives a slight smile to angad. Angad hugs her desperately.

A: yeh sab kaise hua. Yeh chobees ghante mere liye sadiyon ke barabar ho gaye thay.

K: main theek hoon….

A: kia theek hoon….. ab to tumhein biwi ki jagah mummy bulana pade ga….

K: kyon.

A: puri bandaged ho. Dar lagta hai. Egyptians tumhein sach much ki mummy samjh kar na le jayein.

K: (whining) Angad.

Angad starts laughing.

K: uthao uthao….fayda meri majboori ka. Ab tum se naaraaz ho kar dur ja bhi nahi sakti.

A: Koi baat nahi I will pick u in my arms.

K: phir budhu tum se dur kaise jaoon gi.

A: dur to mein tumhein tab bhi ahi jane deta agar tum chal bhi sakti.

K: I Love u…. plz mujhe Kabhi hod kar mat jaana.

She hugged and angad was kissing kripa. Mishti came that time and was kinda jealous. Kripa noticed that mishti is here so she let go off angad.

K: arre mishti aao na.

M: thnx kripa.(comes inside)

A: kripa main doc se baat kar ke aata hoon.

Angad leaves and that make kripa think that something is fishy. When mishti left angad entered.

K: tum aise chale kyon gaye thay.

A: jaan kaam tha….

K: jhoot mat bolo.

A: f9. kal baat karien ge.

K: nahi abhi.

A: kripa doctor ne zyaada baat aur stress lene se mana kiya hai. kal baat karein ge…..

K: ok. Tum jaa rahe ho.

A: nahi…. Main yahein hoon.

K: mein so jaoon mujhe neend aa rahi hai….

A: kia 24 ghante ki neend kafi nahi thi. Itna betaab kia.

K: god ne tumhein punish kia. Subha ko jaldi uthaya aur upar se dhamki de kar.

A: ok abhi seedha kar ke bataoon ga.

K: angad I will…..

A: u will….

K: k----ii

A: kill me… I know….

K: wrong. I will kiss u.

they kissed and then kripa slept and angad slept on the sofa near her bed.

Part 38

AT MORNING

Angad and kripa were asleep and mishti came with a bouquet of roses and a card of get well soon. She gave that to kripa (making her awake)

A: kripa main ghar jaa kar fresh ho jaata hoon. Phir saath main breakfast karein ge.

K: thodi der betho baatain karo. Dekho mishti bhi company dene ke liye ayee hai. friend to tumhari hai par mere se zyaada ghul mil gayee hai.

A: I m sorry but gotta go.

He kissed her on the cheek and left.

K: mishti sach sach batao tum dono mein Koi jhagara hua hai kia.

M: nahi kripa (looking down)

K: have a eye contact and tell me the truth. Plzzzz

M: (told her all the situation and the misunderstanding)

K: omg. I must say he is very bad tempered. Let him come, I will talk to him.

M: I don't want him to be sorry. I want my friend back.

K: don't worry it's my promise.

Mishti left but angad came ignoring her. she was dishearten but was also relieved that kripa wud talk to him. Mishti goes to her room.

AN: 1 plan successful.

M: result will be here soon Sweety.

AN: I told u that makes kripa talk to angad. When u will be his friend then move the plan forward.

M: ya I u were right and I am lil relieved now.

A-K

A: food is delicious na.

K: ---

A: Kripa.

K (rudely): kia hai

A: tumhein kiya ho gaya.

K: ghusa.

A: (amusingly) omg…. That means I have to rum 4 my life.

K: be serious.

A: ok tell me kis baat par ghusa ho.

K: tum ne mishti se ladayee kyon ki.

A: us ne tumhari yeh haalat ki.

K: galti se ho gaya. Galti meri thi main hi baatein kar rahi thi.

A: tum Mujh se bhi to baatein karti ho. Kabhi mujhse accident hua.

K: tumhari to baat hi alag hai. tum to romance bhi karte ho.

They giggles and angad hugs her and kisses her.

A: fine I will talk to mishti.


Part 39
Then mishti and angad sort out here problems and became best friends again. But mishti was somehow not going to leave him. Her love, jealousy, hatred and of course craziness 4 having angad was increasing day by day. But guess wat one day she left for Malaysia. 4 some work. Angad and kripa left for their honeymoon.

AIRPORT

K: angad kitni der se wait kar rahe hain.

A: sabr a phal meetha hota hai.

K: shoot…. Sabr ke phaloan ka kia mein fruit chaat banao gi. I don't like waiting.

A: so….

K: to kia….. kahiin chalte hain na.

A: oh to yeh sab tum ne mere saath waqt guzaarne ke liye kia. How romantic.

K: of course……. Not…… I m bored.

(Announcement of their flight)

A: chalo

K: flight aa gayee.(disappointed)

A: hmmmm (giggles)

K: angad ek baat bataoon.

A: yehi na flight mein aane mein dar lagta hai….

K: nahi

A: to.

K: Tum haste huay bohat bure lagte ho…..

A: achaa.

K: no reaction.

A: sab ke samne reaction nahi mille ga. Wait and prepare for Switzerland.

K: ok…..

PLANE

K: naraaz ho….

A: ---

K: kia hua.

A: jab main tumse baat karta hoon to mujhe haasi aati hai. aur main haste huay achaa nahi lagta. Main naraaz bhi hoon

K: angad wo dekho

A: kia

Kripa kisses him on his cheek. Angad was surprised and got closer to kiss her.

A: main hamesha naraaz rahun ga to tum mujhe hamesha kiss karo gi.

K: naraaz hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. Kabhi bhi kar loon gi.

A: abhi karo na.

K: ek shart.

A: kia maharani saheba

K: tum Kabhi naraaz nahi ho ge.

A: can't promise.

K: kyon

A: promise todna buri baat hoti hai.

K: phir main kiss nahi karun gi.

A: to main kar deta hoon.

He kissed on her lips and hugged her tightly. They both slept in each others arms.

Part 40

HOTEL OF SWITZERLAND

A: nice hotel na

K: ya nice and big room 2. par us lambi flight ne mera demaag ghumaa dia. I wanna some rest.

A (coming forward): abhi kahan sweety.

K (moving backward): matlab…..

A: airport par kia keh rahi thi tum keh main……..

K: yehi ke tum haste hue bohat bure…. Lagte ho.

A: and u wanna reaction….

K: par sab clear ho Gaya tha plane mein….

A: I dun remember at all…

K (scared): angad tum KIA karne wale ho.

A: kuch zyaada nahi …….. (holds her hand from her back.) sorry kehlwaoon ga….

K: matlab main itni si baat ke liye sorry kaho gi….. In your dreams

Angad attaches her to the wall and presses his body against her.

A: say sorry

K: main sorry………

A: hmmmm

Kripa pushes him.

K: nahi kahun gi.

Kripa runs and angad was behind her finally when she stood on the bed. Angad caught her and make her lie down on the bed. He came over her.

A: ok sorry nahi kaho.

K: f9…. If u insist…..

A: kaho na that u love me…..

K: I love u

A: I love u 2

K: angad wo kia hai.

A: kia

She kisses her on his lips and hides herself in a blanket.

A: sharma rahi ho.

K: nahi……

A: to bahar niklo na. kia blanket ke undar ghus gayee ho. Tumhari kiss ka reply bhi to dena hai na.

K: sorry. But I m tired….. and I m sleeping. Don't disturb.

Angad tries to pull off the blanket but kripa hold it tight.

A: ok tang nahi karun ga….par itni thand main blanket to share karo

K: paka kuch nahi karo ge.

A: nahi baba

Kripa leaves the blanket and shares it with angad. Angad covers himself in the blanket and switches off the lights, and hugs kripa tightly and kisses her on her lips.

K: that not fair tumne kaha tha….. ke tum kuch nahi karo ge

A: sweety, every thing is fair in love and war.

K: so jao warna love to kar lia hai war bhi ho jaye gi.