New Maaneet FF Rishtey updt Part 3

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The story starts when Geet comes to know about Maan's past....basically continued from the
current track when Geet shows Maan few girl's picture and when he doesn't show interest in
anyone she gets bugged.....then accidentally Geet gets a picture of Sameera and thinks she is the one....she shows it to Maan and he becomes furious....he wonders from where she got the
picture.....he starts to shout at her very badly....Geet will be shocked that he behaved this badly for such a small thing and thats when Dadi will enter....she will get to see Sameera's photo and will then understand everything....dadi will tell Maan's past to Geet....

Maan's past....
Yes!! She is the one.

"Who is the one Maan" asked Dadi.

Maan being caught by his Dadi when he saw a girl does not understand how to get rid of her never ending questions. He quietly leaves the place saying aapki choti bahurani aa rahi aapse milne.

     It is the engagement ceremony of her younger grandson. He loved a girl and decided to marry her. Everyone waited for Maan to choose one girl for himself for a long time but he failed to. He never found anyone good enough. So after a long wait, Maan convinced Daadi to get his younger brother married and promised her that he will marry once he finds a girl of his taste. And due to pressure from choti bahurani's parents her younger grandson, Dadi agrees to get them married first.

"arrey beta, woh kaun hai?"

"Daadima, woh, woh Sameera hai meri cousin". replied choti bahurani.

"Lagtha hai kisiko woh bahut pasand aa gayi" said Dadi smiling mischeviously pointing towards Maan.

"Daadi maa, aap bhi na, bro aur ladki, ho hi nahi sakta".

"hum bachpan se jaante hain usko aur uski choice bhi pata hai humein" said Dadi.

"Yeh toh bahut khushi ki baat hai, agar aap kahe toh kya hum unki baat karein Sameera ke ghar
waaln se?" asked choti bahurani who was too happy for her cousin.

Maan was busy in seeing Sameera and was trying to catch the conversation between her and her
friends. He was impressed by her simplicity. Unlike others who were trying to display and exhibit their status, this girl seemed to have worn something that she liked he thought and smiled.

"Hey woh dekho MSK the most eligible bachelor of Delhi" said one girl.

"Kya diktha hai yaar, kitna handsome hai aur hot bhi" said another girl.

"Kahin bhi jao, ladkiyaan uspe fida hoti hai, kaun hogi woh khush naseeb ladki jis par woh fida hoga" said the first girl.

"stop it you both. Tum dono guys ko check out karne ke alava aur bhi kuch karte ho? Lets discuss something else. Thodi to sharam karo". said Sameera. She didn't even care to look at him inspite of what she heard from these girls.

Maan was startled by her response. "Ek baar bhi mudke nahi dekha mujhe, I am impressed. Daadima ab toh aap khush ho jaayegi" said Maan to himself.

He was trying to spot her again, but couldn't.

"Kitni der laga di, ek toh tumne mujhe yahaan bula diya aur upar se itni der laga di".

"Laksh, hum hamare ghar waalon ko kab bataye ki hamaari shaadi ho chuki hai".

"Samee woh toh tum hi bata sakthi ho. Tumhare ghar waale mujhe pasand hi nahi karte aur tum
darti ho ki woh humein juda kar denge. Ab bhala main kya kar sakta hoon. Maine toh tumse keh diya tha ki hum sab kuch chodke kahin door chale jaayenge, par tum toh isi baat pe ade ho ki tum unko bina bataaye chodke nahi aa sakthi. Mushkil se maine tumhe shaadi ke liye raazi karva di, warna tum toh".

"Shut up Laksh, I am not for eloping from house. I will have to let my parents know since they are
the reason for my existence. I strongly believe that we owe atleast this t our parents. Woh toh
mujhe dar hon lag gaya ki kahi woh humari shaadi kisi aur se na karva de, isilye tumse chupke se shaadi kar li".

choti bahurani took the proposal of Maan to Sameera's parents.

Sameera comes to know that Laksh was hit by an accident and was stopped by her parents to visit him because MSK was coming to see her at their house. She was shattered. She tried to protest, but failed.

Sameera's head was spinning, she couldn't think anything properly. She already lost her love and
now was her time to owe her dad something. The prospect of her Dad's business made her decide against her heart.

Maan and his family members arrived and they were happy with Sameera. She spoke very little. When Maan and Sameera were left alone, she just answered to the questions he asked. He thought that it is because of her shy type. He went ahead and spoke to his Dadi that if Sameera is happy with this marriage, they can start the wedding preparations.

Everything was planned hurriedly due to Sameera's parents insistence.
Maan and Sameera got married.

Sameera did not speak much to Maan and was very nervous on her wedding night. When Maan entered his room and noticed that she was nervous, he asked her not to worry. He told her that they will have to first understand each other well, so everything else can wait. He wanted her to become comfortable with him.

Days passed by quickly. Sameera got to know about Maan's routine and she performed all her duties as a wife (picking out his dresses, setting his breakfast, lunch, dinner etc.,). She got along with Daadi too well and respected her a lot. Maan was happy that she is atleast feeling comfortable with Daadi. Sameera never really spoke much with anyone.
Maan was also very busy. They had got a new project and he got very little time to spend at home. He was also not happy about it, but he couldn't help it. It was his Dadaji's dream project.

After nearly a month she was feeling giddy, but she just ignored it thinking it could be due to lack of sleep. Dadi had gone to Canada. Once when she fainted, Maan became worried and called the doctor. She informed him that she was pregnant. Maan was shocked and couldn't believe what he heard.

He couldn't take this anymore. When Sameera woke up, she was able to see fury in Maan's eyes. She was informed that Doctor checked her and asked her whose child was she carrying. This came in as a shock to her as she didn't expect this at all. She was trying to pacify him, but he didn't seem to be in any condition to listen to her too. He was accusing her and asked how did she even dare to carry someone Else's child and marry him. It was now clear to him as why she was quiet always, why she was nervous whenever he tried to go near her. He wouldn't spare her for this. He agreed to marry someone after these many years and was cheated. Is this where he got himself into? Whose child was this? Sameera couldn't handle him at all. She had no answers to any of his questions.

She told him her story. She pleaded him and told her about her majboori.

"Us waqt toh mujhe kuch samajh main nahi aa raha tha. Papa bhi beemar the kyunki unki business loss mein chal rahi thi. Main aapko dhokha nahi dena chahthi thi. Aapse yeh baat chupaake maine bahut badi galti kar di hai. Please mujhe maaf kar dijiye." said Sameera

"Accha, tumhe laga hoga ki tumhari bf aur tumhaari shaadi ki chapter khatam ho gayi. Tumne kabhi soch bhi nahi hoga na ki tum aise museebat mein pad jaogi. Sach hamesha baahar aa hi jaata hai." said Maan

"Nahi aisa nahi, main us waqt bahut hi majboor thi. Mujhe tho ghar walon ka sunna pada. Dekhiye aap chahe toh mujhe chod sakthe hain." she was crying bitterly.

"isi aason se mujhe nafrat hai. Tumhe lagta hai ki main tumhare is aasoon ko dekhke pigal jaoonga? Tumhaari jhooti kahaani kisi aur ko jaake sunao. Tumhaare paas dimag nahi tha kya? Parivaar waalon ke saaye mein jee liya apni poori zindagi, uske baad tumhe laga ki koi pati bhi mil jaye jo tumhe zindagi bhar tumhara saaya bankar rahega. Tum jaise dikthi ho waise ho nahi. Mere aankhen hi dhokha kha gayi." said Maan controlling himself not to raise his hands against her.

He was very hurt that the one whom he loved had betrayed him. He couldn't believe that girls were so weak and always wanted someone to take care of them. They are very dependent and
cunning he thought. He already started to hate women. He somehow felt choti bahurani would have known all this and she hid the fact.

She tried a lot to pursuade him, but of no use.

He called me at once. Once she came he narrated the whole incident and I was shocked. I gave Maan all rights to decide whatever he wanted as it was his life which got destroyed. I felt very bad for him as my grandson who was so loyal and kind hearted was deceived by someone else like this. He didnt deserve this she thought.

He filed divorce. But to his utter dismay Sameera's lawyer started to claim money from Khuranas as compensation. Maan could have easily refused and would have won the case, but he just gave them the money that they asked for thinking that he has paid her for the service she did to him and his Dadi.  

He never trusts anyone after that.

Tears started to roll from Geet's eyes. She couldn't believe that Maan Sir had gone through all this and that is what made him what he is today.


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This is my first FF, can I please have your comments please.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its a great start dear👏👏👏
plssss continue soooooooon
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lovely plzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Nice strt
Liked the 1st part
Maan really had bad past
Update soon n add me to ur pm list
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Hey😃
this is so awesome👏👏
and it has a different story from other FF's😳
i really loved it😛
please continue soon⭐️ and make a pm list😃
and yeah add me to your PM list hehe😉
love😳
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Hey nice FF.. looks interesting.. poor maan is hurt really bad.... do continue soon n plzz do pm me...
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Part 2

First few bits are what Geet thinks and what she speaks to herself....

Geet starts to feel bad for Maan in the evening and then she thinks what he told her that he will not tolerate any outer person misbehaving with her. For a moment she gets carried away. Then she realises that she cannot think like this way about him anymore. She tries to think why did he tell like that....She then realises that she is also pregnant

"Maan sir ne aisa kyun kaha? Kya woh mujhe pasand?? Nahi nahi Geet shubh shubh bolo....bhool gayi ki dadimaa ne kya bola tha. Sameera pregnant thi. aur tum bhi pregnant ho...is jhanjhat se niklo geet...sabko takleef hogi...chahe Maan sir tumhaare baarein mein aisa soche ya na soche, tu unke baare mein aisa sochna band karo..yeh tumhari galti nahi hai aur nahi tumhe koi bhi aisa iraada ho unke baarein mein...par phir bhi...." Geet was battling with herself

"Chaay, mujhe uski sakt zaroorat hai, tabhi toh main kuch teek se soch nahi paa rahi hoon" Geet told herself and went to prepare tea for herself

While preparing tea she was reminded what happened in kitchen the other day as how she leaned towards Maan....she got scared of her own actions for a moment realizing what she had done....

"Geet tu bhi aisa nahi kar sakti hai...Maan sir kya sochenge....unko koi galat umeed mat dena" she thought to herself

"par woh meri galti thodi thi, ki meri shaadi huyi and Dev bhaag gaya and main uske bacche ki maa banne waali hoon....Dev ne bhi toh gunaah kiya tha...kisine mujhko bhi toh dhoka diya tha...kya mujhe kuch bhi ehsaas karne ka haq nahi hai jab ki jo kuch bhi mere saath hua woh meri galti nahi thi?? main kounsi chupaane waali hoon Maan sir yeh Baat jis tarah Sameera ne chupaya tha....unhone unse bina bataye shaadi karke bohat badi galti ki thi.....
kya Geet tu kya kya sochne lag gayi?? tera kya iraada hai....maana ki unhone mere dil mein jagah bana li, kya aisa sochna teek hai?? sochna bhi mat....Maan sir ne pehle hi bahut museebat jhel li hai, aur nahi.....nahi nahi....Geet tu jis tarah se unke saat behave kar raho woh galat hai....unko aise ghoor ghoor ke dekhna teek nahi hai....phir jab unhe yeh pata chalega ki tum pregnant ho, toh woh yehi sochenge ki tu kitni besharam ho....pregnant ho aur phir unke saat aise bartaav kar rahi ho.....woh yeh sochne lag jaayenge ki unki zindagi mein har baar pregnant ladki hi kyon aati hai?? is baat ko abhi khatam kar do....agli baar aisa kuch bhi mat karna ki woh tumhe galat samajh le....jis tarah se woh tumhaari maan rakh rahen hain, usko kharaab mat karna....tumhe aise baaton par dhyaan nahi dena chaahiye....balki apne is bacche ke baare mein sochna chaahiye....kitni badi zimmedari hai tumpar..isi ke liye toh tu apne maut se ladke aayi ho" she thought to herself

she looks through some more photos to see if she can find anyone suitable for him....she decides that he should get a very nice girl....he should get all the happiness in the world....

"Babaji kam se kam is baar, unke liye koi aisa ladki do jo unhe behad pyaar karegi and unhe har khushi degi" prayed Geet.

she decided to stay away from Maan, not the way she did now. She now understood that just by siting far away from him, she cannot avoid him, it should be done within....she was determined this time not to give any wrong signals to him....it is after all for his welfare, the person who has always saved her life...

Maan while coming to office thinks how Geet behaved the other way in office....by sitting far away from him and by giving the things that he asked for through someone else....he also recollects each and every word that she said to him in kitchen that she wants to stay away from him and all....he recalls his moments with her in Dargaah, the feelings that he saw in her eyes there and how she goes into trance whenever she sees him nowadays....he started to think what she will do today...he somehow had fun in seeing Geet like this....she seems to be affected by something for sure he thought....

"Pehle toh mujhse bolthi thi, ghoorna band kijiye, ab khud ghoorthi hai" Maan said smiling and enjoying himself
he started to think how she was fuming when he said that he doesn't like girls with long hair, wearing salwar kameez and all that.....
"dekthe hain ki aaj ladkiyon ki photos dikhaathi hai ki nahin"

then he thought how he bursted on her when she showed Sameera's photo......
"uski galti thodi thi, woh jaanthi thodi thi ki woh kaun hai...tum bhi na Maan Dusht Daanav hi ho, mujhe usse maafi maang leni chahiye" said Maan

He enters and sees Geet sitting next to his desk....he was very delighted....

"good Morning Sir" Geet said casually and then got back to her work....

Maan was a bit surprised....

"Geet woh Meerut ke accounts ke file do"

"ji lijiye" their hands touched and Maan started to look at her and she looked back....eyelock...Geet immediately came out of it and concentrated on the file that she was going through a minute back....

Maan asks coffee from Geet....she went to prepare coffee and this time too she took quite sometime....so Maan decided to check if she was talking to the cup today too....Geet was actually struggling to get the stove fixed as it wasn't burning...Maan who came there understood why it was taking her so log and he helped her with it....he fixed it for her....she thanked him and started to prepare coffee....Maan started to look at her lovingly when she was preparing coffee.....
then Maan thought that this is the right time to apologise to her....

"Geet"

"haan sir" pouring milk into the cup

"kal ke baat ke liye I am sorry, mein act"

Geet looked at him surprised when she heard the word sorry and immediately interrupted telling it is ok...."gusse mein aisa ho jaata hai" she said

he looked at her so lovingly....

"mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai" Geet said

Maan thought she is going to fight with him about how he didnt like girls with long hair and all and said "yes go ahead"

"I am sorry, mujhe us din aap par haath nahi uttana chahiye tha...maine kai baar iske baare mein baat karne ki koshish ki par nahi kar pai" she said with an apologetic look on her face

Maan was surprised as he didnt expect this....he was thinking how much more she is going to surprise him today....but he somehow felt her sudden change of behavior compared to the day before was kind of fishy....there is something more to it he thought....

"it is ok Geet....us waqt koi bhi hota toh shaayad aisa hi karta...maine kuch baat hi aise ki thi bina soche" said Maan....

she handed him his coffee and was about to leave and he smiled....

then she stopped and said "aapse aik aur baat karni thi"

he was now delighted that she is going to fight with him about that but then again

"ek hi din mein Maan Singh Khurana ne sorry bhi keh di and smile bhi kar di...." said Geet teasingly

Maan was fuming now...this girl is the limit....he thought of playing along, but then was again stopped

"kisi ne kaha tha ek baar keh diya, phir nahi kahoonga" teased Geet again and laughed and left the place immediately leaving a shocked Maan

"hadh kar di is ladki ne....pehle toh Dadi ne us din jo kaha, woh keh rahi thi aur phir maine jo kaha woh bhi keh di....meri hi mazaaq uda rahi hai" he gained his old expression back on his face....

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Thanks for the comments on the previous part
Edited by priza - 13 years ago
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Part 3

Pinky comes to Geet's desk and tells her "Geet jab tum delhi aayi, tumhe Candian embassy mein kuch kaam tha na aur woh pura nahi ho paaya?" asked Pinky

Geet became curious as why she brought this topic all of a sudden today and gestured her to coninue. Maan who was at his desk found Geet suddenly looking at Pinky seriously.

"Mera ek dost hai aur usko wahaan pe kaam mila hai....usne mujhe kal phone kiya tha ki woh Delhi mein hai aur baaton baaton mein yeh bataya tha..." said Pinky more excitedly

Geet got more curious now and became impatient too "Jaldi bataana Pinky"

"maine usse poochke rakha hai ki tumhe help chahiye aur woh maan gaya...woh aaj mujhse milne office aa raha hai, main tujhse introduce karwa doongi...what say??" Pinky asked eating her burger

since Maan found Geet becoming curious and impatient, he was trying to overhear them without his own knowledge....he heard something about introduce and he became more curious....

"naam toh batao paagal" Geet asked very excitedly winking

"Aman naam hai uska....dikhne mein kaafi handsome hai....DD2 bol sakthe hain...college mai toh ladkiyaan uspe marti thi....kaafi accha dost hai mera, mujhe toh khoob khilatha tha 😃.....tum usse baahar jaake baat kar sakti ho, office mein u know y log bhi hain.....yaa phir to use wahee jaake mil le....teri marzi.....toh tum kya kehthi ho date fix kar doon??" asked Pinky excitingly

"yeh bhi koi poochni waali baat hai....aaj baahar chalke baat kar leti hoon aur phir date....teek hai na??" said Geet with a lot of happiness

"tum bhi us par fida mat hona....DD na toh sahi DD2 se hi mai khush ho jaoongi" said Pinky with a hung face

Geet wanted to play along so she said "DD toh tumhare liye Dhak Dhak hain, mere liye woh Dusht Dhaanav hi rahenge....DD2 ko dekhne ke baad hi pata chalega ki woh DD2 hai ya DD (I mean Dak Dhak) 😳" winked Geet

"haan haan tum pe kaun fida nahi hoga...aaj toh tum aur bhi jhalak rahi ho....usko toh traditional ladkiyaan hi pasand hai" said Pinky keeping a puppy like face

Geet hugged her and said "tum toh mujhse bhi badi nautanki nikli re"

Maan who heard all these got annoyed....he started to look at Geet if she was looking more good today and was mumbling Date? Aman? DD2? nahi uske DD? then he realises what he was doing and then says "paagal kar diya is ladki ne mujhe"

Aman was supposed to come around 12:30 PM, so Geet thought of using the lunch time to meet him and so decided to complete more work before she meets him....she got some hope now....she couldn't stop herself from checking the time on the wall clock every now and then.....Maan could see her getting restless and checking the time very often.....he was getting even more annoyed....he used to ask her something or the other and she used to give him everything promptly....that reminded him of Tasha and how Geet always managed everything so perfectly.....but he couldn't stop from cursing her seeing her like this and calling him Dusht Dhaanav and that guy as Dhak Dhak.....
he did give her some dictations too and she noted down everything without asking him any doubts....she became more confident now that something started to show up.....

Geet kept calling Pinky and asked her why he wasn't here yet as it was 12:40 PM and Pinky wasn't sure about it.....Geet became very impatient when the clock striked 1 PM....Pinky called her for lunch, but she refused.....the whole staff were going for lunch except for her....Maan was wondering if this was more important that she is even skipping her lunch....he anyway does not have lunch at the correct time like the staffs....he always used to be busy with work and was used to skipping lunch....At around 1:30 PM, Geet went to kitchen to have water....she had a mild headache so she decided to have tea too...Maan followed her to kitchen after sometime so that no one gets doubts....

"tum lunch nahi kha rahi ho?" asked Maan

"nahi sir, mein baad mein kha loongi" replied a tired Geet

he could sense tiredness in her voice and her getting a bit stressed....he wanted to know what was bothering....
without hesitating any further he asked "are you waiting for anything or anyone?? you seem to be looking towards door and the clock very often" asked Maan

Geet was surprised that she made things so obvious that even her busy boss had noticed her restlessness....she didn't want to tell him about the Canadian Embassy as she was not willing to answer the questions that might follow...she could not suppress her feelings for him which she thought is possible because it was only last night she decided to do this....she found it difficult to act very normal infront of him as if she had no feelings for him....Thanks to Aman she thought...if it was not for him, today I would have ended up strangling myself to have taken such a decision....this Aman thing helped her in diverting her attention from Maan....

"Geet, I asked you something"

"no Sir, koi nahi aa rahe hain, woh toh main bas aise hi dekh rahi thi" replied Geet which irritated Maan

he knew Aman was coming and didn't expect her to lie to him....he thought she will tell him everything like how she always blurts out things....."wait a minute, do you expect her to tell you everything, is she your wife??" asked Maan's brain

"nothing wrong in expecting, she need not be my wife for her to tell it, she always tells me almost everything" he fought with himself

Geet just left with her tea as if he didn't exist at all and that annoyed him even further...

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that is all for today....
Edited by priza - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww,., Priza😳
what a wonderful story dear👏👏
i must tell you one thing😃, this story has something unique in it😛
like Geet now knows that Sameera was pregnant😲,. so is she
and that kinda makes me think about MaaNeet's relationship😳😉
we dont know yet whts going to happen between MaaNeet 😕once Maan comes to know about geet's pregnancy😲
but the thought of sameera being pregnant makes me a lil worried
what if Maan does the same with Geet😲
but it wasnt Geet's fault that she was cheated by Dev😭
anwyz,. its going very nice👏
please continue on with it😳
with love and wishes😛
Kituu😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that's awesome!! loved it and looking forward to the next update!!!