Hope is the thing with feathers...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I stand on the beach staring at the setting sun

My feet dipped in wet sand, squishing water out.

The skies turn ocher and sun turns gold

I wait to see her parting through the crowd

Dhoondtha hoon tujhe har raah mein har mehfil mein
Thakk gaye hain, mere majboor-e-tamanna ke kadam.

My heart thinks she is searching in the clouds

For drops of rain which the sea once bated her


Maybe she will come tomorrow.

--o00o--

I stand by a plant and pluck an orange flower

She loves the color, the fruit and the flavor.

The skies turn ocher and sun turns gold

I wait to see her footprints pressing grass mound

Aur phir raha mein bikhre the hazaron naghme
Meri woh naghme teri awaaz ko de aaya tha


My heart thinks she is taking a dip in the lake

That once carried the scent of this orange flower.


Maybe she will come tomorrow.

--o00o--

I switch off the lights and burn some oil lamps

Their warmth and brightness reflect my heart.

The skies turn ocher and sun turns gold

I wait to see her shadow dancing on threshold.

Tere saaye ko samajh kar mein haseen Taj Mahal
Chandni raat mein nazaronse tujhe pyar karoon
 

My heart thinks she is conversing with the moon

That has forgotten to tell me a hello tonight.


Maybe she will come tomorrow.

 --o00o--

I run across the park, across the streets

To catch a fleeting glimpse of her sepia veil

The skies turn ocher and sun turns gold

The fleeting glimpse remains just a dream

Saamne aa ke zara parda utha de rukh se
Ik yahi mera ilaaj-e-ghum-e-tanhai hai

My heart thinks she is standing by a window

Looking down the streets and talking to the skies.


Maybe she will come tomorrow.

 --o00o--

When I watched the sunset by the seashore,

She watched it by the lake.

 

When I picked an orange flower,

She picked a perfume for me.

 

When I was lighting oil lamps,

She was waiting in moonlight.

 

When I ran down the streets,

She was looking from a window.

 

She had always been there

Waiting for me

Every day when

the skies turned ocher and sun turned gold


Dil ko bhooli hui yaadon ka sahara dede

Waiting for me always..

Listen to Rafi-saab's rendition here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=agxjCItG7EM

Listen to Lata ji's rendition here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=deiG3GMhP0Q

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bDgT thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely! Absolutely stunning!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fantastic...its really touching
melancholic
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was awesome sookie..goes with ManEet greatly..
And that also reminds me that u haven't updated "Under the rainbow, in between black and white"
Hope u update it soon..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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reserved.. 
 
Welcome Back :D
 
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Sookie! Welcome back! What a comeback, :P It was really touching. The words, the theme, the whole portryayel.. everything was awesome. Great. I could not imagine anybody on this one... it was too perfect for any imagination... it has its own, different flavour. No one could be imagined in it. It's unique...
 
*should have been posted in 'Writer's Corner'. Maan-Geet, don't really fit in. Just a thought. 😳* 
 
Splendid Job.
Love you for this one.. :D
 
 
Edited by Angel-Pebby - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bDgT

Lovely! Absolutely stunning!



Thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

fantastic...its really touching
melancholic



Thank you Sur :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sri_4

That was awesome sookie..goes with ManEet greatly..
And that also reminds me that u haven't updated "Under the rainbow, in between black and white"
Hope u update it soon..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)



Thanks Sri...

Looks like with every post here, people remember one of my unfinished FF :D

S

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited it up there... Loved it. <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Spine tingling beautiful

the couplets of HIndi/Urdu shayari/song is like balm to the soul
that was bruised yet strong
 was thirsty for long