FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190

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After reading so many FF...i thought of trying one...
guys please let me know if u even like this FF..should i continue

Part 1 - page 1        Part 15 - page 32       Part 29 - page 90     Part 43 - page 160
Part 2 - page 2        Part 16 - page 36       Part 30 - page 93     Part 44 - page 169
Part 3 - page 3        Part 17 - page 39       Part 31 - page 98     Part 45 - page 173
Part 4 - page 4        Part 18 - page 41       Part 32 - page 102   Part 46 - page 178
Part 5 - page 7        Part 19 - page 47       Part 33 - page 107   Part 47 - page 185
Part 6 - page 8        Part 20 - page 50       Part 34 - page 112   Part 48 - page 190
Part 7 - page 10      Part 21 - page 54       Part 35 - page 117
Part 8 - page 12      Part 22 - page 57       Part 36 - page 123
Part 9 - page 13      Part 23 - page 62       Part 37 - page 128
Part 10 - page 16    Part 24 - page 67       Part 38 - page 134
Part 11 - page 21    Part 25 - page 71       Part 39 - page 137
Part 12 - page 24    Part 26 - page 74       Part 40 - page 144
Part 13 - page 26    Part 27 - page 80       Part 41 - page 151
Part 14 - page 28    Part 28 - page 84       Part 42 - page 155
 
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Part 1
I have changed my script... little bit...
Background...
Daadi ma and Geets family are freinds..no past of geet...

Daadi maa comes to visit hosiyarpur...to meet geets family..
daadi maa has a very private talk with Darji..saying how she is very upset about maan
and his not coming out of his past..she is looking for girl for him again.. who can really
take care of him and family...darji and daadi maa talk for quite a while ...

Brij over hears their talk and tells darji that we could get Geet married to Maan..
but darji says..u don't know...and stops!!!!
the whole family is excited about the wedding.. Geet is not at all intrested..
she goes and speaks to dadi ma.. and says I am just 18..I have not even completed my studies..
dadi ma.. wonders..thinks for a while.. this girl will be able to face maan and his temperment..
if she can stand up against the whole family and tells me wat she wants...

Daadi..promises that she will let her complte her studies after marriage..geet is still not very sure about all this geet has just entered college..she was very intested in making a simple carrier ...she had not even thought about guys..as such..
she did fascinate..but all girly friends talks only..


daadi maa..tells darji..that when maan comes to know about it...he will surely not agree..
i am trying to get him here first...one of the sweet little pranks of daadi maa... I am not feeling well
maan rushes to geets havali...
every body tells geet see..maan is here... she is least intrested..
daadi ma in the bedroom..Maan walks in with concern.. seeing her on the bed..really gets worried
looking at her he knew wat she was upto...
geet is forced to interupt them with lassi...maan says no thanks.. does'nt even look at her..

Daadi maa - maan this is geet..
Maan - continues excuse me.. i have to take this call..now..
daadi maa - maan maan..

geet stands there wondering wat to do.. she is feeling odd about the situation b/w maan and daadi..
this is was the first time..maan and geet where undersame roof.. but they have'nt even seen each other..geet gives the lassi to daadi maa..and leaves the room..

latter in the evening..daadi..walks to maan and says..u have to agree to this..
hum aap ki man marzi nahi chalne denge!!! maan gets very angry and yells at daadi ma..don't u know I hate girls.. geet was just entering the room with a glass of milk for daadi ma.. she really gets scared and drops it down..Maan turns..and snaps!!
they are good for nothing but breaking things!!
this was the first time..maan actually saw a glims of Geet..scared..litterly ..sahme sahme se .with her hand cluctching her dupatta
and looking down..maan could not see her face...does't even care to..😑
geet runs away!!!

Daadi - Maan why is it always about u?? off late u don't seem to think about any one else..
Maan - wat do u mean
Daadi - wat about us, wat about krishna??
Maan - is spechless..does't say word more

next day they have the wedding cermony..
Geet crying about the fact she has to leave her family and studies..she was just not prepared for all this
Maan totally not intrsted.. just very furious...

maan and geet walk towards each other..

jay mala..
Maan just bows his head.. does'nt even resist.. the whole gathering starts saying..geet..maan abhi se aap ka gulaam bangaya..
geet is suprised..shies a bit..this is the first time she felt some thing..somthing she never knew ..ther was stange tickle in her stomach
she wanted to see his face...while putting the mala..his face got covred with mala in his hand which was approaching her neck..
she had to bow..down..she cried to have a glims of him..

 
they both are taken to the mundap..all the while maan was burning with anger.. she could feel his restlessness..but was not sure ..wat was that whole thing about!!!
immediatly after the cermony..maan says he needs to leave..
brij tries to stop him.. tum ase kaise ja sakte hoo
maans face fuming ..darji holds brij back..
Maan - aap log doosri gaadi mein ajana.. i have to visit a site on my way..
Daadi - maan ur insulting us!!
Maan - i have had enough of all this..and just rushes away..
Daadi - left alone to face the gathering
geet holds the dupatta along with the knot of his part of dupatta..which slipped away as maan walked away..she picks up the dupataa..and holds it close to her
daadi ma..was impressed..with geets gesture..
geet and daadi drive to delhi in a car!!!

bidaai song and crying!! geet is very upset and alone..

Precap

Maan and Geet unusal SR

please let me know if to continue!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting beginning!! hmmm..... will be fun to watch how they fall in
love with each other eventually πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜›
Continue soon!!! 😊
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Originally posted by: shaz94

Interesting beginning!! hmmm..... will be fun to watch how they fall in
love with each other eventually πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜›
Continue soon!!! 😊

thanxs for motivating!!! really feels good
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This was interesting! It's too good! Hope Krishna is not Maan's son or something........lolz......anyways.......do continue soon and please add me to your PM list.
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Originally posted by: Starry_night

This was interesting! It's too good! Hope Krishna is not Maan's son or something........lolz......anyways.......do continue soon and please add me to your PM list.

thanxs..
feeling nice..shall add u to PM
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very interesting
cant wait..... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue😊
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interesting....do continue
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Originally posted by: sweet_chilly

interesting....do continue

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i really lyk it.. 😊 i think u'r doin a good job & u shud write more... update soon & can u add me to ur PM list πŸ˜• once again update soon... πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: rockin_gal

i really lyk it.. 😊 i think u'r doin a good job & u shud write more... update soon & can u add me to ur PM list πŸ˜• once again update soon... πŸ˜ƒ

thanxs a lot!!!