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ok this is my one shot FF on MaanEet first on
Maaneet here it goes:
Scene 1:
The dance ended with Maan holding geet in his arms
and on her top and is lost totally in her eyes
and geet in his and both are unaware that the dance
is over than geet lower her eyes(only geet's eyes are in focus
and maan still staring at her but than Geet gets shy and feels
a bot awkward because maan is holding her by her waist
geet than tries to release herself from his grip and than
Maan also notices that the dance is over geet looks
here and there and maan recollects himself too.
Maan and Geet sees clients coming to them
and Maan thinks now that they will all
burst into anger and Geet feels nervous too
and she whispers
Geet:I did'nt do anything i have done
everything the way you told me Sir.
Maan:Maan glares angrily at Geet and before he
said anything to her the clients come to them
and says too both.
One Client:The dance was really good Mr.Khurana
and your secretary is an excellent dancer and
a very well party organizer too.
2nd Client:That's why she has arranged this type of food.
Maan feels embarrassed and looks angrily
at Geet again who is still looking down.
1st Client:Ms Geet really everything was great
we actually love the food.
Maan gets shocked and Geet is still confused
and did'nt know whether they are criticizing her
or giving her a compliment.
2nd Client:It was great and different
well done Ms.Geet and Geet is still ocnfused.
Maan thinks why geet is not saying anything
than he says :
Maan:I am glad that you like it now the clients
left , Maan gets satisfied and Geet is still in thoughts.
Maan:Looks at geet and than again
gets lost in her beauty because he notices
that the light is coming directly on her face
and she is blushing and nervous
and murmuring i did'nt order alo ka paratha
and samosa i order Italian and Continental food
how come? how come?
Maan:Yells slowly:Geet!!!!
Geet:Sir i did'nt order anything like that.
Maan:Looks in the other direction and grins.
Than he says: Geet..
Geet:Sir...
Cuts her off:
Maan:Not bad
Geet:Looks at maan shockingly
than says welcome.
Maan:Thanks(Grins again)
Geet thinks she must have said thanks
to Maan for praising her efforts she says
Geet:Thanks
Maan:Welcome
Geet:Sir now can i go?
Maan:Geet party has'nt ended yet you have'nt eat anything
and you must be tired.
Geet:Sir you have'nt eaten anything either.
Now again Geet realizes what has she said
now they both stare at each other.
Geet again lower her eyes and thinks
what the hell she is saying.
Maan:Lets go and eat something.
Geet follows maan in the hall.
Scene 2:
Now Geet is thinking
that it's too late how will she go
home and like that she touches her hand and feels
awkward she comes out and see people leaving
she is looking here and there
some boys whistles and hoots geet
Geet looks at them and does'nt know what to do
she is about to leaves when someone pulls her back
and its Maan now he glares at the boys
who are still laughing.
Maan:Let's go.
But Geet stands still and looks down nervously
touching her hand now maan walks slowly to geet
and geet does'nt have a courage to look at him in the eyes
maan takes out his coat and wrap around her shoulders
now they both stare into each others eyes.
Now both recollects themselves and Maan tells Geet
Maan:Come.
Geet comes out of hall and follows maan
again now on reaching the door of car Geet
slips because of her heels and maan holds her
and she again blushes and looks down
and maan notices her turning red and
looks deeply into her eyes again but than he
makes her sit in the car shuts the door.
Maan thinks:What is happening to me
why my sight always stopped at Geet.
Geet thinks:Whenever i am in trouble
why he is always around me?Sometimes
it looks so strange.
Now Maan comes and sits int he car
the boys hoot:What a girl she is
a boy come near to the car where
geet is sitting and he looks at Geet
and maan starts the car and gets aggressive
and glares at the boy
Another boy come:Dont worry Mr. We are
just here to ask that from where you have brought
this girl and how much price so we can also now maan
gets furious and is about to leave the car but
Geet requests:Please sir there is no use
of arguing with these people i am already
late please she looks at Maan.
The boys started to laugh and
Maan just drives the car and he is
still angry and furious.
Geet thinks what the goons have said about
her and she gets tears in her eyes
but noticing maan she tries to hide them
and looks out of the window and wipes her
tears and but feels extremely bad
Maan notices geet's teary eyes in the mirror
he looks geet angrily and than turn the
car back to the hall and Geet gets confused
and says:
Geet:Why are you...???
Maan looks at her aggressively
and Geet does'nt say anything
now maan drives back to hall
and see the boys still laughing
and commenting on geet
he comes out of the car and walks towards
them with fire in his eyes and the boys
are still saying that the girl was hot
and other bad stuff.
Now Maan grabs the shoulder of a boys
and punches him Geet watches him beating
the boys aggressively.
Now he grabs the collar of one of them
who actually hoots geet
and tells him:
Maan to the boys:Now if i will see your
face again than remember that you will
never be able to speak or to stand up
on your feet and now goto hell.
Geet notices maan who is still furious
and geet thinks he fights for me with
them.
Now Maan turns around and looks at
Geet who is still sitting in the car and watching
him like if she is saying thankyou but than she lowers
her eyes.
Maan recollects himself and thinks
why i cant see her in pain why when
someone looks at her i get mad and
why that someone said anything about her
good or bad i get aggressive.
Now he comes back to the car and drops geet
home, before leaving geet gives maan his coat
and says
Geet:Thanks but you should'nt have fought with those
Goons.
Maan:Gets angry but controls himself
and says:You have reached your house.
Geet leaves.
Now Maan comes to his house
and goes directly to his room
and closes his eyes
and remembers geet
walking in the party and
everyone mesmerizing her
he remembers his dance with
her and how geet was blushing all
the time and when she cries when
those boys passed comments
on her.
Maan:Whenever someone looks
at her why i get mad and whenever
she is hurt why i am hurt too.
Geet is sleeping and thinks
about the party scenes and whatever
happened after it she says
Sir you are a very good human being
than she touches her tummy
and tears rolls down from her eyes.
She thinks she has no place
for anyone in her life and
she will never be able to think
about love because it's not for her
and she will never let anyone come
closer to her.
And she says to the baby:Goodnight.
Maan is looking at the Taveez and thinks
this Taveez is taking me closer to Geet.
He closes his eyes and turnoff the lights.
Mallu
Maaneet here it goes:
Scene 1:
The dance ended with Maan holding geet in his arms
and on her top and is lost totally in her eyes
and geet in his and both are unaware that the dance
is over than geet lower her eyes(only geet's eyes are in focus
and maan still staring at her but than Geet gets shy and feels
a bot awkward because maan is holding her by her waist
geet than tries to release herself from his grip and than
Maan also notices that the dance is over geet looks
here and there and maan recollects himself too.
Maan and Geet sees clients coming to them
and Maan thinks now that they will all
burst into anger and Geet feels nervous too
and she whispers
Geet:I did'nt do anything i have done
everything the way you told me Sir.
Maan:Maan glares angrily at Geet and before he
said anything to her the clients come to them
and says too both.
One Client:The dance was really good Mr.Khurana
and your secretary is an excellent dancer and
a very well party organizer too.
2nd Client:That's why she has arranged this type of food.
Maan feels embarrassed and looks angrily
at Geet again who is still looking down.
1st Client:Ms Geet really everything was great
we actually love the food.
Maan gets shocked and Geet is still confused
and did'nt know whether they are criticizing her
or giving her a compliment.
2nd Client:It was great and different
well done Ms.Geet and Geet is still ocnfused.
Maan thinks why geet is not saying anything
than he says :
Maan:I am glad that you like it now the clients
left , Maan gets satisfied and Geet is still in thoughts.
Maan:Looks at geet and than again
gets lost in her beauty because he notices
that the light is coming directly on her face
and she is blushing and nervous
and murmuring i did'nt order alo ka paratha
and samosa i order Italian and Continental food
how come? how come?
Maan:Yells slowly:Geet!!!!
Geet:Sir i did'nt order anything like that.
Maan:Looks in the other direction and grins.
Than he says: Geet..
Geet:Sir...
Cuts her off:
Maan:Not bad
Geet:Looks at maan shockingly
than says welcome.
Maan:Thanks(Grins again)
Geet thinks she must have said thanks
to Maan for praising her efforts she says
Geet:Thanks
Maan:Welcome
Geet:Sir now can i go?
Maan:Geet party has'nt ended yet you have'nt eat anything
and you must be tired.
Geet:Sir you have'nt eaten anything either.
Now again Geet realizes what has she said
now they both stare at each other.
Geet again lower her eyes and thinks
what the hell she is saying.
Maan:Lets go and eat something.
Geet follows maan in the hall.
Scene 2:
Now Geet is thinking
that it's too late how will she go
home and like that she touches her hand and feels
awkward she comes out and see people leaving
she is looking here and there
some boys whistles and hoots geet
Geet looks at them and does'nt know what to do
she is about to leaves when someone pulls her back
and its Maan now he glares at the boys
who are still laughing.
Maan:Let's go.
But Geet stands still and looks down nervously
touching her hand now maan walks slowly to geet
and geet does'nt have a courage to look at him in the eyes
maan takes out his coat and wrap around her shoulders
now they both stare into each others eyes.
Now both recollects themselves and Maan tells Geet
Maan:Come.
Geet comes out of hall and follows maan
again now on reaching the door of car Geet
slips because of her heels and maan holds her
and she again blushes and looks down
and maan notices her turning red and
looks deeply into her eyes again but than he
makes her sit in the car shuts the door.
Maan thinks:What is happening to me
why my sight always stopped at Geet.
Geet thinks:Whenever i am in trouble
why he is always around me?Sometimes
it looks so strange.
Now Maan comes and sits int he car
the boys hoot:What a girl she is
a boy come near to the car where
geet is sitting and he looks at Geet
and maan starts the car and gets aggressive
and glares at the boy
Another boy come:Dont worry Mr. We are
just here to ask that from where you have brought
this girl and how much price so we can also now maan
gets furious and is about to leave the car but
Geet requests:Please sir there is no use
of arguing with these people i am already
late please she looks at Maan.
The boys started to laugh and
Maan just drives the car and he is
still angry and furious.
Geet thinks what the goons have said about
her and she gets tears in her eyes
but noticing maan she tries to hide them
and looks out of the window and wipes her
tears and but feels extremely bad
Maan notices geet's teary eyes in the mirror
he looks geet angrily and than turn the
car back to the hall and Geet gets confused
and says:
Geet:Why are you...???
Maan looks at her aggressively
and Geet does'nt say anything
now maan drives back to hall
and see the boys still laughing
and commenting on geet
he comes out of the car and walks towards
them with fire in his eyes and the boys
are still saying that the girl was hot
and other bad stuff.
Now Maan grabs the shoulder of a boys
and punches him Geet watches him beating
the boys aggressively.
Now he grabs the collar of one of them
who actually hoots geet
and tells him:
Maan to the boys:Now if i will see your
face again than remember that you will
never be able to speak or to stand up
on your feet and now goto hell.
Geet notices maan who is still furious
and geet thinks he fights for me with
them.
Now Maan turns around and looks at
Geet who is still sitting in the car and watching
him like if she is saying thankyou but than she lowers
her eyes.
Maan recollects himself and thinks
why i cant see her in pain why when
someone looks at her i get mad and
why that someone said anything about her
good or bad i get aggressive.
Now he comes back to the car and drops geet
home, before leaving geet gives maan his coat
and says
Geet:Thanks but you should'nt have fought with those
Goons.
Maan:Gets angry but controls himself
and says:You have reached your house.
Geet leaves.
Now Maan comes to his house
and goes directly to his room
and closes his eyes
and remembers geet
walking in the party and
everyone mesmerizing her
he remembers his dance with
her and how geet was blushing all
the time and when she cries when
those boys passed comments
on her.
Maan:Whenever someone looks
at her why i get mad and whenever
she is hurt why i am hurt too.
Geet is sleeping and thinks
about the party scenes and whatever
happened after it she says
Sir you are a very good human being
than she touches her tummy
and tears rolls down from her eyes.
She thinks she has no place
for anyone in her life and
she will never be able to think
about love because it's not for her
and she will never let anyone come
closer to her.
And she says to the baby:Goodnight.
Maan is looking at the Taveez and thinks
this Taveez is taking me closer to Geet.
He closes his eyes and turnoff the lights.
Mallu
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