Originally posted by: Swetha-Sai
Beautiful poems on SSR by you, @Guruvishva! π
Thanks a lot dear ππ
Originally posted by: Swetha-Sai
Beautiful poems on SSR by you, @Guruvishva! π
Thanks a lot dear ππ
Stepping onto next
Guess what? Now
I am an year older
It's been already two years now
On to the earth - blessed earth
I've started calling everyone now
Ma, papa, di not perfectly
But they do understand me
They rejoice the moment I call them
I've also started being a mess now
I would be beaming happily
And then suddenly sullen
I wanted to have a control of all
I wanted to explore
I wanted to seek
Wanted to learn more
Adventure around my home
My siblings would always
encourage me
They started teaching me numbers
One-thee-two-tan
Later went on with alphabets
A-c-B-D-E
Little did I know - Yet
was never tired of repeating
I want to talk more
Little did I know though
But would never stop
Whole day chanting words
All from my world - Which only
my small world would understand
Whole day I would play with my
Small cars and toys
Roam around walking and running
Doing something and everything
Mornings were always by mother
Evenings filled with sister's pamperings
Nights spent with papa's small stories ππ
Smiling all day - messing
It all around - Only
For them to arrange
Everything back together
- RPSS -
" I'm noun in your life, verb in mine "
- SSR -
loved itOriginally posted by: Guruvishva
Stepping onto next
Guess what? Now
I am an year older
It's been already two years now
On to the earth - blessed earth
I've started calling everyone now
Ma, papa, di not perfectly
But they do understand me
They rejoice the moment I call them
I've also started being a mess now
I would be beaming happily
And then suddenly sullen
I wanted to have a control of all
I wanted to explore
I wanted to seek
Wanted to learn more
Adventure around my home
My siblings would always
encourage me
They started teaching me numbers
One-thee-two-tan
Later went on with alphabets
A-c-B-D-E
Little did I know - Yet
was never tired of repeating
I want to talk more
Little did I know though
But would never stop
Whole day chanting words
All from my world - Which only
my small world would understand
Whole day I would play with my
Small cars and toys
Roam around walking and running
Doing something and everything
Mornings were always by mother
Evenings filled with sister's pamperings
Nights spent with papa's small stories ππ
Smiling all day - messing
It all around - Only
For them to arrange
Everything back together
- RPSS -
" I'm noun in your life, verb in mine "
- SSR -
@bold-best part of the poem.
Thanks for the pmπ
Thank you dear π
Pleasure is mineπ
Originally posted by: Guruvishva
Beginnings
It's been an year now
From my ma's womb
To her lap now
Always pampered
The very first moment I stepped out
A sudden fear did engulf me
Droplets of water ran
Down my cheeks
I was very soon wrapped
By a big..a big ..blanket
A white blanket
The coldness I felt subsidued
I felt warm
I was still missing my mother
Someone was holding me
But it was not my angel
I knew her , I knew her warmth
I was taken away
I felt lonely , missing the warmth
But very soon I was brought back
To my place ; where I belonged
There laid my angel
I was placed near her
I wanted to express my joy
I didn't know what do I do
She wanted to see me
She was waiting for me
But now she was there laying
Closing her eyes and not seeing me
I tried to turn and touch
But I could not really do that
Yet, My Angel knew it
She opened her eyes
She turned to look at me
Those eyes ; the look
The emotions they carried
I couldn't express myself
Nonetheless my eyes started wetting
My eyes brimmed with tears
Expressing all my joy I cried
She managed herself to wake up
And carried me in her arms
Trying to compose me
Her eyes averted away from me
I followed her eyes
Unknown feelings deluged me
I knew them, my world
The first man I saw
Was my king - He held me
In his arms protecting me
Very soon many other happy faces
Were excited on looking upon me
Then on my life started
Day and night my angel would
Check upon me - Feed me
Bath me and tell many stories
She feeds me showing the moon
The stars shining above us
The dark sky and the illuminating
moon - fascinated me
From crawling to walking
They did enjoy every moment of me
They stood by me - held me
So I wouldn't fall down
Every minute they encouraged me
Walked along and ran behind
But never away from me
Making everything all about Love
Now I am here
Playing with my blanket
Playing with balloons and balls
Waiting for my angel to come
and carry me out - As it was our
family time to play with mud
"Ma........", I started my cry
( There comes my fam π€ )
- RPSS -
"The moment you know the limit,
You are limitless "
- SSR -
PLEASE DO REFER TO THE NEXT POST -
It's so beautiful. Thanks for writing. Loved it. β₯
Beautiful poem.β€οΈ
I am sure he was always so curious about the world , universe even in his childhood. Keeping that childhood curiosity alive and that innocence after growing up makes a person a real human being. β€οΈ
Thanks for the pm dear.π
Wonder and waiting eagerly for next phase of this Life growing up in the form of Series of poems. π
edit add:
wow 3rd one on Life journey already upπ
beautiful - the last two verses are fab about who gets to do what at what time π
pics that were added so far certainly enhance the beauty of creations.
On the creative side - youβre absolutely very observant itβs great to meet someone who is so creative and sensitive to the situation as well being very focused on topic.
Weekend is here ah well - will try our best to smile π€
We appreciate this sincere effort - Iβm sure there are silent readers too.
I have shared your link (w/o your permission :P) to other Social media In excitement the 1st day 1st poem you shared with us. But I think fans are too emotional to may be read about him.
I hope you will not let this slow response to this creative effort to stop your work π€
Love you for this ty kindly
Originally posted by: Guruvishva
Stepping onto next
Guess what? Now
I am an year older
It's been already two years now
On to the earth - blessed earth
I've started calling everyone now
Ma, papa, di not perfectly
But they do understand me
They rejoice the moment I call them
I've also started being a mess now
I would be beaming happily
And then suddenly sullen
I wanted to have a control of all
I wanted to explore
I wanted to seek
Wanted to learn more
Adventure around my home
My siblings would always
encourage me
They started teaching me numbers
One-thee-two-tan
Later went on with alphabets
A-c-B-D-E
Little did I know - Yet
was never tired of repeating
I want to talk more
Little did I know though
But would never stop
Whole day chanting words
All from my world - Which only
my small world would understand
Whole day I would play with my
Small cars and toys
Roam around walking and running
Doing something and everything
Mornings were always by mother
Evenings filled with sister's pamperings
Nights spent with papa's small stories ππ
Smiling all day - messing
It all around - Only
For them to arrange
Everything back together
- RPSS -
" I'm noun in your life, verb in mine "
- SSR -
It broke my heart.π It's beautiful. Keep writing π€
Originally posted by: Renee.Clare
It's so beautiful. Thanks for writing. Loved it. β₯
Pleasure is all mine π
Thank you dear π
Originally posted by: Disha2712
Beautiful poem.β€οΈ
I am sure he was always so curious about the world , universe even in his childhood. Keeping that childhood curiosity alive and that innocence after growing up makes a person a real human being. β€οΈ
Thanks for the pm dear.π
Thanks a lot dear π
Yeah,that innocence have always been there π
He glories because he always kept that innocent kid in him alive forever π
If we all can be that earth will be more peaceful β£
Pleasure is mine dear βΊ
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