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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Swetha-Sai

Beautiful poems on SSR by you, @Guruvishva! πŸ‘


Thanks a lot dear 😊😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Stepping onto next


Guess what? Now

I am an year older

It's been already two years now

On to the earth - blessed earth


I've started calling everyone now

Ma, papa, di not perfectly

But they do understand me

They rejoice the moment I call them


I've also started being a mess now

I would be beaming happily

And then suddenly sullen

I wanted to have a control of all


I wanted to explore

I wanted to seek

Wanted to learn more

Adventure around my home


My siblings would always

encourage me

They started teaching me numbers

One-thee-two-tan


Later went on with alphabets

A-c-B-D-E

Little did I know - Yet

was never tired of repeating


I want to talk more

Little did I know though

But would never stop

Whole day chanting words

All from my world - Which only

my small world would understand


Whole day I would play with my

Small cars and toys

Roam around walking and running

Doing something and everything


Mornings were always by mother

Evenings filled with sister's pamperings

Nights spent with papa's small stories 😁😁


Smiling all day - messing

It all around - Only

For them to arrange

Everything back together



- RPSS -




" I'm noun in your life, verb in mine "

- SSR -


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Stepping onto next


Guess what? Now

I am an year older

It's been already two years now

On to the earth - blessed earth


I've started calling everyone now

Ma, papa, di not perfectly

But they do understand me

They rejoice the moment I call them


I've also started being a mess now

I would be beaming happily

And then suddenly sullen

I wanted to have a control of all


I wanted to explore

I wanted to seek

Wanted to learn more

Adventure around my home


My siblings would always

encourage me

They started teaching me numbers

One-thee-two-tan


Later went on with alphabets

A-c-B-D-E

Little did I know - Yet

was never tired of repeating


I want to talk more

Little did I know though

But would never stop

Whole day chanting words

All from my world - Which only

my small world would understand


Whole day I would play with my

Small cars and toys

Roam around walking and running

Doing something and everything


Mornings were always by mother

Evenings filled with sister's pamperings

Nights spent with papa's small stories 😁😁


Smiling all day - messing

It all around - Only

For them to arrange

Everything back together



- RPSS -




" I'm noun in your life, verb in mine "

- SSR -


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loved it


@bold-best part of the poem.


Thanks for the pm😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Lazybird_Silpa

loved it


@bold-best part of the poem.


Thanks for the pm😊

Thank you dear 😊

Pleasure is mine😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Beginnings 


It's been an year now

From my ma's womb

To her lap now

Always pampered


The very first moment I stepped out

A sudden fear did engulf me

Droplets of water ran

Down my cheeks


I was very soon wrapped

By a big..a big ..blanket

A white blanket

The coldness I felt subsidued

I felt warm


I was still missing my mother

Someone was holding me

But it was not my angel

I knew her , I knew her warmth


I was taken away

I felt lonely , missing the warmth

But very soon I was brought back

To my place ; where I belonged


There laid my angel

I was placed near her

I wanted to express my joy

I didn't know what do I do


She wanted to see me

She was waiting for me

But now she was there laying

Closing her eyes and not seeing me


I tried to turn and touch

But I could not really do that

Yet, My Angel knew it

She opened her eyes

She turned to look at me


Those eyes ; the look

The emotions they carried

I couldn't express myself

Nonetheless my eyes started wetting


My eyes brimmed with tears

Expressing all my joy I cried

She managed herself to wake up

And carried me in her arms

Trying to compose me


Her eyes averted away from me

I followed her eyes

Unknown feelings deluged me

I knew them, my world


The first man I saw

Was my king - He held me

In his arms protecting me

Very soon many other happy faces

Were excited on looking upon me


Then on my life started

Day and night my angel would

Check upon me - Feed me

Bath me and tell many stories


She feeds me showing the moon

The stars shining above us

The dark sky and the illuminating 

moon - fascinated me


From crawling to walking

They did enjoy every moment of me

They stood by me - held me

So I wouldn't fall down


Every minute they encouraged me

Walked along and ran behind

But never away from me

Making everything all about Love


Now I am here

Playing with my blanket

Playing with balloons and balls

Waiting for my angel to come 

and carry me out - As it was our

family time to play with mud


"Ma........", I started my cry

( There comes my fam 🀭 )



- RPSS -




"The moment you know the limit,

You are limitless "

- SSR -




PLEASE DO REFER TO THE NEXT POST -

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It's so beautiful. Thanks for writing. Loved it. β™₯

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful poem.❀️

I am sure he was always so curious about the world , universe even in his childhood. Keeping that childhood curiosity alive and that innocence after growing up makes a  person a real human being. β€οΈ

Thanks for the pm dear.😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wonder and waiting eagerly for next phase of this Life growing up in the form of  Series of poems. πŸ˜Ž


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wow 3rd one on Life journey already upπŸ‘


beautiful - the last two verses are fab about who gets to do what at what time πŸ˜†


pics that were added so far certainly enhance the beauty of creations.

On the creative side - you’re absolutely very observant  it’s great to meet someone who is so creative and sensitive to the situation as well being very focused on topic.

Weekend is here ah well - will try our best to smile πŸ€—

We appreciate this sincere effort - I’m sure there are silent readers too.

I have shared your link (w/o your permission :P) to other Social media In excitement the 1st day 1st poem you shared with us. But I think fans are too emotional to may be read about him.

I hope you will not let this slow response to this creative effort to stop your work πŸ€—

Love you for this ty kindly 


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Stepping onto next


Guess what? Now

I am an year older

It's been already two years now

On to the earth - blessed earth


I've started calling everyone now

Ma, papa, di not perfectly

But they do understand me

They rejoice the moment I call them


I've also started being a mess now

I would be beaming happily

And then suddenly sullen

I wanted to have a control of all


I wanted to explore

I wanted to seek

Wanted to learn more

Adventure around my home


My siblings would always

encourage me

They started teaching me numbers

One-thee-two-tan


Later went on with alphabets

A-c-B-D-E

Little did I know - Yet

was never tired of repeating


I want to talk more

Little did I know though

But would never stop

Whole day chanting words

All from my world - Which only

my small world would understand


Whole day I would play with my

Small cars and toys

Roam around walking and running

Doing something and everything


Mornings were always by mother

Evenings filled with sister's pamperings

Nights spent with papa's small stories 😁😁


Smiling all day - messing

It all around - Only

For them to arrange

Everything back together



- RPSS -




" I'm noun in your life, verb in mine "

- SSR -


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It broke my heart.πŸ’” It's beautiful. Keep writing πŸ€—

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Renee.Clare

It's so beautiful. Thanks for writing. Loved it. β™₯

Pleasure is all mine 😊

Thank you dear 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Disha2712

Beautiful poem.❀️

I am sure he was always so curious about the world , universe even in his childhood. Keeping that childhood curiosity alive and that innocence after growing up makes a  person a real human being. β€οΈ

Thanks for the pm dear.😊

Thanks a lot dear 😊

Yeah,that innocence have always been there 😊

He glories because he always kept that innocent kid in him alive forever 😊

If we all can be that earth will be more peaceful ❣

Pleasure is mine dear ☺