Nushy, firstly it's great to see the updates so fast. Would have loved to read it fast, but if you haven't guessed, I am highly invested in Cricket.
Coming to the update, it's really written well. The way Piya discussed and clearly told about the decision of separation was great, would have liked if We was used at some places.
Everything and her struggles and taking a stand was awesome.
Ansh supporting her decision was great!
Surprise element was Ansh staying with the family, and much needed that RiAd and Piya move out.
However at points, I felt Piya painted as white, which certainly wasn't the case, like if I see it from my perspective Ansh always had a great bonding with the kids too, so just separating them from him, was way too harsh. But then again, it's always good to see other's perspectives, like your angle and how you want to potray a plot is seen, quite well.
Quite a lot of Piya's points and their conversation was covered beautifully, and Piya telling him to live the life as he wanted.
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