DhruvTara:An eternal love story

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Posted: 11 months ago
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So finally , I am posting my FF . Well , it was written after the promo release in which Mahaveer stabs Dhruv , so it is written with that point of view and have completely different timeline .Forgive me , if I had made some grammatical aur spelling mistake .


Index:

Chapter 1: Page 1 

Chapter 2: Page 2

Chapter 3: Page 3

Chapter 4: Page 4

Chapter 5: Page 5

Chapter 6: Page 7


                    Chapter 1

The story forward from the time when the preist told Mahavir that the union of two different eras by Dhruv Tara will cause destruction. Dhruv has already created a new timeline by saving Mahavir who was destined to die and this change will demand Dhruv's life of he will try to change the future by marrying Tara.

 Maharaj has already announced Tara and Senapati 's marriage which has created a major havoc in DhaRa life . Tara is trying to make Dhruv understand that he can't change future,but Dhruv is determined to marry her . He tries to go to Mahaveer and convince him but He sternly refuses Dhruv to allow Tara to marry her . Dhruv gets shocked and demands reason but Mahavir said that he can't allow and reasons the epic vachan of chandravanshi Maharaj ( hiding the actual reason of his denial - the bhavishyavani ) . Dhruv is shocked but challenges Mahavir that " Tara mein mera sab kuchh h mein iss tarah ek vachan ke liye uski aur apni khushiyaan barbaad hone nahi de sakta, chahe mujhe iske liye apni sab kuchh hi daaon par kyun na lagana pade ."

 Mahavir is guilty but cannot tell the actual reason to Dhruv.



Imagine this scene after Tara and Anusuya scene in Dhruv and Tara 


After the meeting with Mahavir , Dhruv goes to meet Tara ,Tara who was crying sees Dhruv and hugs him . Dhruv tries to calm down her . 

Tara(sobbing)- "hum pagal the jo hume laga ki Pitashree humare vivah ke liye Maan Gaye h , bhul gaye the ki ek chandravanshi apne vachan se kabhi phir nahi sakta "

Dhruv-"Tara hum unhe manayenge , kuchh bhi ho jaaye main tumhara saath nahi chhodunga ".

Tara -"Koi laabh nahi h pitashree nahi manenge ". 

Dhruv -"Nahi ,Tara main tumhare liye , kuchh bhi kr skta hu , bhaiji , maharaj hum sabko mana lenge "

Tara-"Bhaiji ko mana lenge ,mtlb bhaiji ne bhi mana bhi kr diya ,mtlb unhe bhi lgta h, ki humara ek hona sambhav nahi h.

(Suddenly she pushes Dhruv)

Dhruv-"Kya hua"?

Tara-"Nahi ,Dr. Dhruv nahi ab hum tumhare paas rehne ka , saath ka adhikaar kho chuke h ". 

Dhruv-"Kya keh rahi ho tumne koi adhikaar nahi khoya h tumhara adhikaar h mujh par aur mera tum par , main keh raha hu na ki hum unhe mana lenge .

Tara -" Nahi ,ye galat h ,ab se tum (she stops for a sec) aap hume sparsh nahi karenge ,nahi milenge hum se .

Dhruv -"ldea bhi h tumhe , kya bol rahi hu tum , tum aise Bina try kare aise kaise haar maan sakti ho "?

Tara-" Haar nahi maan rahe , khud ko taiyyar kr rahe h ,jitni jaldi tum samajh 

jaoge utna hi accha hoga tumhare liye bhi aur humare liye bhi . Chale jaiye yaha se isse pehle koi apko senapati ki hone wali patni ke saath dekhe " 

That senapati ki patni hurts Dhruv  

Dhruv -" Tum ne paas aane se man kara h thik h , par main tumhari shadi uss se nahi hone dunga "

Heart broken Dhruv silently leaves the room . After his leave , Tara Sits down sobbing " Mat karo aisa tum , agar nakamayab hue to bohot dard hoga tumhe bhi aur hume bhi ."


 All flashbacks of Dhruv Tara in their minds 

 (Background mein Humari Adhuri Kahani chal raha h ) Just imagineπŸ₯²πŸ₯²


Are Haan ek hafte yaani 7 days baad Tara ki Shaadi h with Senapati 😭😭😭

Ab pehle 4 din ka haal 

Dhruv is not personally meeting Tara .But he is not loosing a single chance to talk to her infront of every one .He was doing arrangements of wedding , asking her preferences , selecting dresses for Tara , giving his opinion how she is looking ,making her miserable .First he had thought that he will go to Maharaj directly and would tell about the love affair but after Tara's back off he decided he would not tell ,he just can't tell anyone as it is 17th century and love affair is a great deal in this era until Tara gives in as it is also a matter of the princess respect. During mehendi , he cleverly ruined samrat's name and made a D in Tara's mehendi , In haldi he mixed khujli wala powder in samrat's haldi and sent his haldi to Tara . But it was not his real motive . He was trying to find some proof against Samrat so that he can stop the marriage , he didn't wanted to tara ruin her life by marrying Samrat .In the meanwhile Tara has got to know that the patient is actually Dhruv 's long lost father(in real chapa) 

from maharani .


On the 5th day , when she sees Dhruv and his father together , she tells him about the reality what has happened to him in the past . Dhruv is left shattered , he is just blank , like this is the silence before the storm . He without saying anything goes to his room and tell guards to not allow to come anyone or request them to leave him alone.

Tara seeing his condition goes behind her when the soldiers tell her about Dhruv 's request ,Tara nods her head and returns .

In Dhruv's room , Dhruv is in a state a which can't be explained he is guilty,angry , sad , crying all emotions are just bursted out from his hurt ,His room is messed as he has just thrown everything that caught his sight , he then sits down crying , shouting, her mother's tears ,his hatred (not genuine but his anger on father for leaving alone her mother ) ,and now guilt ,and sadness that he was not wrong , it was just the situation . He suddenly thought that If maharani would not have come he might had a happy childhood , suddenly he felt anger and stand to talk about this to maharani but found Tara (who has come back through a secret way as it was almost night and she cannot be seen going to some man's room ) standing next to her with tears in her eyes . Seeing her in tears , his anger melted he suddenly loose his balance and was about to fell when Tara holds her .

The eye lock status for some seconds .But Dhruv starts crying , Tara tries to console him , Dhruv tells her that he was angry on her for lefting family . But he was not at fault , her mother hates the women for whom her husband left , but he knows that she was not also at fault ,he wants to be angry , but on whom , kisse hou naaraz apne pita se ,tumhari maa se ,maharaj se, ya kismat se , kismat jisne anjane se mere pita ka mujhse meri maa se alag kr diya ,par usne to mujhe tum se milaya , tumhare jariye dobara apne papa se milaya , lekin tumhe bhi phir mujhse dur leke Jaa Rahi h, kya vo mujhe mere pyaar krne walo ke paas rehne nahi dena chahti .Tara could not say anything only listening to his talks with tears in her eyes . While talking like this Dhruv shifts from her shoulder to her lap , while Tara keep caressing his hair with her hand , trying to make him sleep .In this way the whole night went , the day broke as the sun light falls on DhaRa ,Tara wakes up and upon finding herself with Dhruv, she first gets scared of what if anyone has found that she was in Dhruv's room , then she sees Dhruv in her lap , how cute he looks while sleeping, last night it was a emotional roller coaster for Dhruv . But how her presence made him calm , brought a little smile on her beautiful face. She has witnessed how she matters someone more than his years of pain . Suddenly Dhruv start moving she see that they are on the floor and some light is falling on Dhruv's face .She slowly put his head down and goes towards the window blocking the sunrays . She then pulls the curtain ( ab woh kaha se aaye mt puchna) and leaves the room as she hears ,"Tara ,kya kismat tumhe bhi mujhse dur kr degi " from Dhruv in his sleep. Tara look towards him and with a determined look says "nahi , Tara Dhruv se duur nahi jayegi , Dhruv Tara ek honge sada-sada ke liye ". She then hurries towards her room , from the front gate as the soldiers were also asleep. But a pair of eyes was watching her with rage in his eyes .Who is he? You will know later ,tch ,tch soon .

Hope you all like it. πŸ˜Š

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Posted: 11 months ago
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I really like it dear πŸ€—

Specially Ravi baba ka sach samne aane ke bad wala scene Dhruv ki emotional state bohot achhe se describe ki hai tumne πŸ‘πŸΌ

Machhar ki Haldi me khujli powder mast idea hai 🀣🀣

( ab woh curtain kaha se aaye mt puchna) sawal se pehle jawab hajir  πŸ€£

Muze janna hai Tara kya karne wali hai waiting for next part... 

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Girl! Cliffhanger!!!! Why!!!! I need to know who it was! But my guess is senapati who else! 

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Loved LOved and loved it Tia , β€οΈβ€οΈ

Fably wrote , πŸ‘
That father son waala part and tara ka ending wala part wass great ....


waiting for part 2 , plz jldi likhna

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Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

I really like it dear πŸ€—

Thank you πŸ˜Š

Specially Ravi baba ka sach samne aane ke bad wala scene Dhruv ki emotional state bohot achhe se describe ki hai tumne πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tumhe achcha laga πŸ˜ƒ

Machhar ki Haldi me khujli powder mast idea hai 🀣🀣

Ye Mai chahti thi ki dhruv show mein kare lekin haldi mein khoon bhi thik h🀣

( ab woh curtain kaha se aaye mt puchna) sawal se pehle jawab hajir  πŸ€£

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Jawab mujhe bhi nahi pata isliye pehle bata diya 

Muze janna hai Tara kya karne wali hai waiting for next part... 

Next , part mein Tara se jyada koi aur kuchh krne wala par jald hi pata chal jayega.

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Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

Girl! Cliffhanger!!!! Why!!!! I need to know who it was! But my guess is senapati who else! 

Cliffhanger to interest badhane ke liye daala tha , lekin itni jaldi guess kr Lia , par thik h ab pata chal hi Gaya h to ye socho ki senapati ab kya karega .

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Originally posted by: BUSH146

Loved LOved and loved it Tia , β€οΈβ€οΈ

Fably wrote , πŸ‘
That father son waala part and tara ka ending wala part wass great ....


waiting for part 2 , plz jldi likhna

Aapka dhanyawaad πŸ˜ƒ Absolutely , cliff hanger isliye daala ki jldi se suspense disclose kar du . Vrna likhne Mai aalas aa jata h .πŸ˜†

Next part will come tomorrow.😊

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Originally posted by: Tia-life

Cliffhanger to interest badhane ke liye daala tha , lekin itni jaldi guess kr Lia , par thik h ab pata chal hi Gaya h to ye socho ki senapati ab kya karega .

Sochna kya hai 🀣. Pata hi hai. Maharaj ko Jake bahd kaye ga yeh πŸ€£πŸ€£ya phir koi aur kand karega πŸ˜†

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                           Chapter 2

Dhruv wakes up after sometime and recalls what happened last night and how Tara has comforted him . He knew she still loves him but is stopping herself from accepting ,he wanted to talk to her, but stopped himself as there was something more important now.


Tara got ready and went to meet bhaiji , she tells bhaiji about how heartbroken and unpredictable Dhruv was and after seeing her how his all anger vanished , that she was necessary for him more than anything, that he can forget all his pain for a new beginning with her.


Tara: -"Bhaiji , hum jaante h ki bohot der ho chuki h , pitashree ka vachan ,samay kuchh bhi humare hak mein nahi h , par hum senapati Samrat Singh se vivah nahi kr skte . Hum nahi de skte Dr. Dhruv ko pida jo humare sapno ke liye apne praan dao pr laga dete , jo hum pr apna sab kuchh nyochhavar kr skte h .


Bhaiji : Hum jaante h Taru ,chikitsak Dhruv apse bohot Prem krte h , or unse behtar jeevan sathi apko nahi mil sakta , lekin aapko unse vivah krne ki anumati hum nahi de sakte .


Tara : Bhaiji , hum pitashree ke samaksh apne Prem ke liye anurodh karenge ,unhe samjhayenge ,yadi dand Mila to dand bhi swikaar kr lenge ,parantu hum ek vachan ke liye chikitsak Dhruv ka saath chhod kisi aur se vivah nahi kr skte .


Mahavir: Taru , aap chikitsak Dhruv se vivah nahi kr sakti , to bus nahi kr skti h .


Tara:Kyu bhaiji , aap humse kuchh chhupa rahe h , aap humari hr ichha mein humara saath dete the to aaj jab ye humare jeevan ka sbse mahatvapurna nirnay h , to aap isme humara saath kyu nahi de rahe h .


Bhaiji : (shouting) Taru ye vivah sambhav nahi h aur hum apko kaaran nahi bata skte ?


Tara :(shouting) Kyu bhaiji ,aisa kya kaaran h ki ye jaante hue bhi ki hum chikitsak Dhruv ki bina khush nahi reh skte aap ye keh rahe h ? Kya kaaran h bhaiji ?


Bhaiji : Taru bus chup ho jaiye, aur jaiye yaha se !


Tara : Nahi bhaiji, hum yeh jaane Bina nahi jayenge ki vastav mein karan kya h kyunki yadi hume Dr.Dhruv ka saath na mila to hum ,to hum apna jeevan tyag denge .

And it was then Rajkumari Tarapriya got a slap on her face .


Bhaiji : Kya keh rahi h aap , aap jaanna chahti h na ki kyu hum aapka vivah unse isliye kara sakte kyuki aapka saath unke liye mrityu laega , unki mrityu jinhone humara jeevan bachaya ,jinme aapke praan baste h .

Tara is shocked.


Tara : Kya , ye kya keh rahe h aap , Dr. Dhruv ki mrityu , humara saath unki mrityu , bhaiji , vistaar se batayiye , kya baat h?


Bhaiji tells Tara everything about rishi's warning , and what Dhruv Tara union would cause in the timeline .


Tara is standstill she is numb ,like someone has taken out her heart and she has became a statue . The thought of Dhruv's death has terrified her . She without saying anything to bhaiji runs out of the room . 


Tara :(in her mind) hume dhruv se baat karni hum unhe apne jeevan ke saath khilwaar krne nahi denge , unhe Satya bata denge aur kisi bhi tarah unhe yaha se vapas bhej denge . Hum us bhavishyavani ko satya nahi hone denge. 


She find that Dhruv is not in his room , then she asks the guards who told her that he has gone towards the vaidyashala ( Itni shudh Hindi sun li hai Ab English bhul gayi huπŸ™„πŸ™„ ) . But When she reached there , it was not ok , seems like there some fight has happened. Tara see some blood stains and follow it and reaches a place in middle of the forest through a secret way . Inside the hidingβ€Œv, one side dhruv's father is on the floor unconscious with some soldiers and Dhruv is captivated (imagine vo haath kaatne wala scene thoda vaise ) .This time they are brutally beating him . Then she saw senapati standing there .


*Flashback*

While Tara was returning from Dhruv's room ,senapati had seen her , 

Husband of the army : Rajkumari ji , aapko payal pehnate waqt humne kaha tha, ki apne kadmo ka dhyan rakhiyega Varna bohot rakt beh jayega lekin lgta h ,apko humari baat samajh nahi aayi shadi se 2 din pehle aap uss chikitsak ke saath puri raat ek kaksh me thi . Ab to apko apna dand bhugatna hi padega .(The evil smirk )

  Then , he kidnaps Dhruv and his father from the infirmary .

                   *Flashback khatm *

( Kidnapping part mera original idea tha show walo ne pata nahi kaise chura liya )


Senapati : Chikitsak mahoday! Aapko kaha tha jab tak Rajkumari ji humare saath unke pankh salamat h , or aap to unhe humara saath chhuda maryada ki seema se paar le jaa rahe ,humari hone wali patni ke saath Prem Kiya aur unke saath raat bhi bita li . Unki pavitrata bhang ki . Chhii ! Aur Rajkumari ji bhi aapke saath unhe apne charitra ka jara bhi dhyan nahi rakha .


Dhruv : Apni bakwaas band kr Rajkumari ke baare mein kuchh bhi bola to dekh lena , tujh jaise ghatiya aadmi ki soch iss se upar Jaa hi nahi sakti h .(He screams) Ahh! 


Senapati: Bohot vishwaas h aapko khud par , apne praano ka pata nahi aur humare dhamki de rahe h. Filhaal agar apne bhagne ka prayas bhi kiya to jo apke pita ke praan vo nahi Bach payenge .


Dhruv: Teri dushmani mujhe se h ,to mujhse ladh na beech mein mere pita ko kyu la Raha h .


Senapati: Ab putra ka dand pita ko mil raha h to kya hi galat h . Haa!Haa !( πŸͺ°πŸͺ°kahi ka)


Tara entry maar chuki h aur usne baate bhi sun li hai .

Tara plans something and sends a letter through pigeon to Mahaveer telling about the location. And she procures some leaves and roots and makes some ball sort of thing from them . As the hiding is in the middle of jungle. Mahavir with 2 of his trusted soldiers reaches there. Tara explains the situation. 

Inside the hiding .

Senapati: Mann to h aapko abhi maar de pr nahi 2 din baad jab humara vivah hoga uske baad aap bhi is sansaar se prasthaan kr jaenge . 

Tara and Mahaveer slyly enters the hiding , Tara puts the balls in the mashal which creates some kind of smoke , everyone starts coughing . In the meantime,Tara and Bhaiji frees Dhruv and Ravi , Then suddenly Samrat notices them and holds Ravi but bhaiji saves him. A massive fight starts between them , the soldiers & DhaRa also fight . Mahaveer injured Samrat during fight and was about to harm him , when Samrat puts some dust in Mahavir which makes him lose his control .

Senapati : Yuvraj! Aap jeevit nahi rahenge to inn dono ko kaun bachayega phir ye bhi aapke paas aa jaenge , aapki mrityu ka aarop lagega is chikitsak par ki aapne inn dono ke prem ko swikarya nahi kiya , inhone aapke praan liye , humne inke aur Rajkumari ji ye sab bardaasht nahi kr paayi aur unhone aatmhatya kr li .

He was about to harm him when Dhruv comes in between and gets stabbed in the stomach . 

Dhhrruuvvv....


Next day , in the Raj Mahal . Dhruv is in pain , there are bandages around his stomach , The whole royal family knows about the wound but the actual reason is still unknown for them it is a accident in which Dhruv has unknowingly got hurt while venturing Vallabhgarh with Yuvraj as told by senapati. Dhruv has told everyone of Ravi being his father and seeked permission from Maharaj for returning his country ( era ) . 

But why is he leaving , you will know in the next part .


 Thanks for reading.😊😊

Edited by Tia-life - 11 months ago
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Posted: 11 months ago
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Amazing part dear & thanku for tagging me.....

Mera man to kar raha tha ki iss machchhar ko masal doo 😑😑 but why dhruv want to leave yr without taraπŸ˜” I am curious to know how story gonna unfold update next part soon