Dhruv and Mahaveer OS- Niyati ki sambhavnaye

Dhruv be like -  niyti ka gana mere samne mat gao according to your niyti aap ko bhi marna chahiye tha to phir aap zinda kyu hai abhi tak🤣

Logically tumne Dhruv ke dialogues bohot sahi likhe hai bhaiji ka dar sahi hai but unke niyti jaap ka koi sense banta hai kya 

BTW, Dhruv to Tara se bhi jyada shudh hindi bolne lag gaya hai ab😆

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Dhruv be like -  niyti ka gana mere samne mat gao according to your niyti aap ko bhi marna chahiye tha to phir aap zinda kyu hai abhi tak🤣

Logically tumne Dhruv ke dialogues bohot sahi likhe hai bhaiji ka dar sahi hai but unke niyti jaap ka koi sense banta hai kya 

BTW, Dhruv to Tara se bhi jyada shudh hindi bolne lag gaya hai ab😆

Tara ka asar h , ab itne samay se 17vi Sadi mein pada hua kuchh to Sikh hi gaya hoga . Ab shadi ke baad sasural walo se Tara ko kb tk  mediator banakar baat karega .🤪

Phir kabhi upkaran ka shastra jaisa kuchh bol gaya to shaadi se pehle hi kaam tamaam ho jayega , vaise hi sar par kafan baandh kr chal raha h. 😆

Your  scene was great, Dhruv ke emotional power packed dialogues bohot badiya bilkul uske character se match kr rahe the .👏

 Ab writer's bhi bhaiji ko ek aisa scene de de vrna Dhruv vs bhaiji dekhna pr jaega. 😭

Originally posted by: Tia-life

Tara ka asar h , ab itne samay se 17vi Sadi mein pada hua kuchh to Sikh hi gaya hoga . Ab shadi ke baad sasural walo se Tara ko kb tk  mediator banakar baat karega .🤪

Phir kabhi upkaran ka shastra jaisa kuchh bol gaya to shaadi se pehle hi kaam tamaam ho jayega , vaise hi sar par kafan baandh kr chal raha h. 😆

Shudh hindi se irritate hone wala Dhruv ab khud shudhh hindi bolkar hame surprised kar raha hai 😆

Sar par kafan to is ladke ne navrangvan search adventures journey ke time se hi bandh kar rakha hai kaha madhvi se darne wala cutu Dhruv 😳aur kaha machhar, king ko open challenge dene wala ziddi Dhruv... 

Wow it's so beautifully written I feel like this convo is playing in front of me.... Wish ki show ma bhi koi scene mila aisa....

Between abhi bhaiji or dhruv dono opposite ha ek dusra ka or bechara dhruv ko jail ma dala diya ha

It is really good and well written, keeping in mind the sensibilities and limitations of both characters 👏

I rally like that Dhruv is asking the right questions and not willing to accept anything @ face value, and even Bhaiji is reacting so maturely 👍🏼

Thank you for this beautiful piece, gives perspective to everything ❤️

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Dhruv be like -  niyti ka gana mere samne mat gao according to your niyti aap ko bhi marna chahiye tha to phir aap zinda kyu hai abhi tak🤣

Logically tumne Dhruv ke dialogues bohot sahi likhe hai bhaiji ka dar sahi hai but unke niyti jaap ka koi sense banta hai kya 

BTW, Dhruv to Tara se bhi jyada shudh hindi bolne lag gaya hai ab😆

Haan na... Kya sab log niyati ka rona rone lag gaye hai 😂

Yeah.. Somebody needs to knock some sense in Bhaiji 

Haan ab Pyaar ka kuch to asar hoga na... Hindi to sudhregi hi 🤣

Originally posted by: Tia-life

Tara ka asar h , ab itne samay se 17vi Sadi mein pada hua kuchh to Sikh hi gaya hoga . Ab shadi ke baad sasural walo se Tara ko kb tk  mediator banakar baat karega .🤪

Phir kabhi upkaran ka shastra jaisa kuchh bol gaya to shaadi se pehle hi kaam tamaam ho jayega , vaise hi sar par kafan baandh kr chal raha h. 😆

Ekdam sahi pakde hai 😆

Originally posted by: Tia-life

Your  scene was great, Dhruv ke emotional power packed dialogues bohot badiya bilkul uske character se match kr rahe the .👏

 Ab writer's bhi bhaiji ko ek aisa scene de de vrna Dhruv vs bhaiji dekhna pr jaega. 😭

Thank you so much dear 😊

I really want ki Bhaiji ko koi akal ki ghas khilaye😆