Khayali Cooker Ke Aadhe Kacche Pulao

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Waise socho, agar Dhruv Tara dono apne sadi ke politics aur drama se tang aa gaye aur kehte hume dono mein se kisi bhi sadi mein nahi rehna aur dono jaakar 19th century mein ya aur zyaada future mein ya aur zyaada past mein jaakar rehne lage, ki kaun rahega inn logon ke saath, hum toh doosri sadi mein hi theek hain. 

Aur phir, peechhe peechhe Dhruv ki maa aa jaayegi, 'mere lalla' ko dhundte dhundte aur phir yeh log sadi to sadi jump karte rahenge to get away from her and live peacefully.  Aur Mahavir bhi peechhe peechhe Anusuya ko lekar jump karta rahega aur Dhruv ki Maa 'ki pirchaayi ko bhi apni behen ke nikat' nahi bhatakne dega.

Raat hone ka clear asar dikhta hua mere upar.

Tara - Chikitsak Dr. Dhruv... ye hum 19 vi sadi mein kyun aa gaye hai? Hume to aapki sadi... 21 vi sadi mein jana tha na? Aapki Matashri chintit ho rahi hongi.  Aapne humare BhaaiJi ko thik karke humpar bohot bada upkaar kiya hai. Aapko aapke ghar pohochana humara kartavya hai. 

Dhruv - Nahi jana ghar. Ghar matlab shaadi. Shaadi matlab barbaadi. Wo tumhari bhasha mein samjhau to... meri antaratma ne mujhse kaha... shaadi ke mandap se ( apne ghar se ) tu khud ko bhaga... iske pehle ke tujhe bolna pad jaye... zor ka jhatka haaye zoro se laga. 

Tara - Ye aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hai, Chikitsak Dr. Dhruv? Ye galat hai. 

Ayesha - Sahi-galat ki baatein tum to mat hi karo, Tara. How dare you take Dhruv away from us?

Dhruv ( shocked and exasperated at the same time ) - Yaha bhi aa gayi tum? Arey kahi to jeene do? 

Ayesha - Isiliye to aayi hoon. Humara "dard ka rishta" hi to tumhare jeene ki wajah hai na? Wo wajah hi to dene aayi hoon yaha... kitni mushkilo ka samna karke. Sirf... tumhare liye. 

Dhruv - Mushkilo ka samna karke ya mushkilo ke mere samne lane? 

Ayesha ( heartbroken) - Tumhare liye main... mushkil hoon? 

Tara - Aap galat samajh rahi hai. Chikitsak Dr. Dhruv ka wo matlab nahi tha. 

Dhruv - Mera kya matlab tha wo Ayesha samajh chuki hai aur... wo sahi hai. 

Jay - Tu kabhi nahi sudhrega na? Har cheez tujhe pehle karni hai, Mr. Genius Neurosurgeon? Time travel... jo hum sab sochte the possible hi nahi hai wo bhi tune kar liya? Tujhse to mujhe yahi ummeed thi. Tujhe bas har baat mein mujhe neecha dikhana hai. 

Dhruv - AREY CHUP. CHUP HO JAO SAB KE SAB. ( Grabs Tara's arm. ) Chalo, Tara. Nayi sadi dhoondne ka time aa gaya hai. Ghuspethiye ghus aaye hai. Bhaaaagooooooo.

Hume jana hoga, Dr. Dhruv. Hume jitni humare apno ke paas wapas jane ki khushi hai utna hi… shayad uss se zada aapko humesha ke liye alvida kehne ka gham! Aapne humare liye bohot kuch kiya hai, Dr. Dhruv jiske liye hum taumra aapke shukraguzar rahenge aur 17 vi sadi mein hue to kya hua… mann se humesha aap humare qareeb rahenge. 'Fir milenge' likhna chaahte hai lekin jaante hai wo shayad mumkin nahi hoga. Humesha rango ke qareeb rahiyega, Dr. Dhruv aur… khushiyon ke bhi! 

His moistened eyes stared at her beautiful handwriting that had broken his heart with the emotions it left behind. Khud meri khushiyon ko mujhse dur le gayi aur bol rahi 'khushiyon ke qareeb rehna. Keeping her letter aside, he let himself fall back on the bed. Itna bhi nahi hua ke ek baar milke bye bol de. Aise letter likh ke kaun jata hai? Murmuring his frustration, he grabbed her letter again. 17 vi sadi ki Tara jaati hai. He sighed, reasoning to himself.  

Tara… sach mein chali gayi! His heart wasn't ready to make peace with it and why should it? How could it? How could it make peace with losing the one he loved more than he thought he was capable of loving? 

Kya mujhe use bata dena chahiye tha ke main usse pyaa- He halted, shaking his head as he refused to let himself complete that confession even in his mind. Bata bhi deta to wo kaunsa ruk jaati! 

He quickly loosened his grip on the letter that he had clutched without his conscious realization as if it wasn't her letter but her hand that he was afraid of hurting. Kya pata shayad… ruk jaati. Carefully folding the letter, he kept it under his pillow after hopelessly staring at the empty side of his bed for several long moments. Her side of the bed. 

Bevakoof mat ban. Wo kya teri patient hai jise tu bolta 'aapko 2 din aur hospital mein rukna hoga' aur wo ruk jaati? Aur agar ruk bhi jaati to 2 din baad kya bolta use ke 'sorry, Tara, lekin main tumhe discharge nahi de sakta. Tumhe humesha ke liye yahi rehna hoga… iss DhruvTara clinic mein matlab mere room mein matlab… mere dil mein.' Talwar nikalkar tera sar dhad se alag kar deti wo. Bevakoof, Chikitsak Dr. Dhruv! 

Shaking the feeling of emptiness seemed beyond him. His own room felt foreign to him now that it didn't have her presence. He would be eternally grateful to her for letting him have her odhni though. Her odhni was going to help him keep his sanity intact in her absence which had already started to drive him insane. 

Kaash ruk jaati, Tara… kaash ruk jaati!

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Aise hi thoda bohot likhne ki koshish...  This is about what Neha had said the other day. Dhruv going to 17 vi sadi and witnessing Dushta Senpati acting like Tara's fiance.  I am not sure if I and when I am writing more though because.... abhi bhi ye dushta senapati kaun hai dekha nahi hai maine. 

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

OMG.....this was written beautifully

Need my tissue box 🥺

You'll laugh in the second half if at all I end up completing this.  

Chikitsak Dr. Dhruv to Dushta Senapati - Tum isi sadi mein rehte ho, matlab Tara ko jaante ho fir bhi uska haath pakadne ka dussahas karne ki cheshta ki tumne? Arey bhai, jaldi chhod de warna tumhara sarr dhad se alag karne me ise ek kshan nahi lagega. 

Tara - Ek kshan, Dr. Dhruv. Ye humare hone wale pati hai.

Dhruv - Main tumhara ho chuka pati hoon. Ise haath chhodne bolo warna ise kisi aur sadi mein uthakar phekne mein mujhe ek kshan nahi lagega.

Thank you for reading! 

Originally posted by: dhun.laagi

T to S: Senapatiji, ILY 

D: 

Mujhe toh nahi bola.

Dhruv - You can't say ILU to this UKP. 

Tara - Ji kya? Aur U... K... kya bola aapne?

Dhruv ( mutters ) - Ullu ka pattha. 

Tara - Aaloo ka paratha?

Senapati - Ab ye Aaloo ke parathe ke baare mein kyun baat kar rahe hai hum abhi? Rajkumari Ji hume I love you matlab Namaste keh rahi thi. Aap beech mein kyun rok rahe hai unhe. Pura karne dijiye 

Dhruv interrupts Senapati - Ek second. Tara aapko ILU nahi bolegi. 

Tara - Kyun?

Dhruv - Kyunki... kyunki 

Senapati - Kyunki?

Dhruv takes Senapati aside - Kyunki wo aapko - I hate you because you suck, you nobody bolegi jo uss insaan se kaha jata hai jiski aap bohot izzat karte hai, jo aapko bohot priya hota hai.

Senapati ( gets excited ) - Sach mein? ( Joins his palms in front of Dhruv and screams to Dhruv ) - I HATE YOU BECAUSE YOU SUCK, YOU NOBODY. Sahi kaha na humne sab, Chikitsak Mahoday? Aap Rajkumari Ji ko humare qareeb lane ki koshish kar rahe hai isliye hum aapki bohot izzat karte hai. Ab aap hume priya ho gaye hai. YOU SUCK, YOU NOBODY.

ME TO DHRUV - LE BETE, AUR SEEKHA ANGREZI.

🤣 ye pulaav bahut mast hai ise khakar mere pet mein dard hone laga 🤣

Bhook lagi hai, krupya aur pulao khilao 😆❤️

Waiting on more amazing pieces 🤗

"Tum sach mein chaahti ho main chala jaau, Tara?"

"Kitni baar puchoge?"

"Pata nahi."

"Haan, hum... yahi chaahte hai, Chikitsak Dhruv. Binati karte hai tumse... iske pehle ke cheeze aur bigde...  jaao yaha se. Aur... fir mat puchna."

"Kyun, darr hai kahi sach bolne se khudko rok na paao? Kahi mujhe rokne se khudko rok na paao?"

"Jo chaaho wo samajh lo!"

"Ek baat to bataao... apne iss Rajmahal se to mujhe nikaal dogi. Shaayad iss Vallabhgarh se bhi. Dono tumhare jo hai lekin... lekin apne dil se kaise nikaalogi jo kabka mera ho chuka hai. Chaaho to koshish karke dekh lo. Use aazma ke dekh lo. Tumse kya puri 17vi sadi se lad jayega wo agar kisine ziqr tak kiya mujhe uss se dur karne ka! Chaaho to aazma lo, Tara. Chaaho to aazma lo!"

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Originally posted by: Tia-life

Plot idea - I was thinking , ki Dhruv abhi to memory loss kr Tara ko bhulne se raha , pr may be jab vo log 21st century mein jae aur dhruv ka partial memory loss ho jaye , aur fir vo Tara ko bhul jaaye . Phir Tara , Dhruv ko apna pyaar realize karwane ka try kare with full family support . They have actually very  different mindset par achchai dekhkar ,  ek dusre ko achche se jaanne se pehle hi pyaar ho gaya , they could have shown their friendship . They had respect, trust for each other , Tara ka love realization genuine laga she made a friend who helped her in every step , she gradually get closer to Dhruv and fell in love with him but jab Dhruv ko love realisation hua tha tab vo out of the blue lag raha tha ki aise kaise pyaar ho gaya . So they can show this time Tara in full prem rog mode and a more genuine love track on Dhruv's side . Vaise bhi pehle unhe samay Sadi paar krvaani thi isliye pyaar jldi karwana jaruri tha lekin tab to koi boundation bhi nahi hogi to kuchh cute , funny fights , romantic scenes bhi de skte h . Instead of saas- bahu drama because of Ravi baba .

Navrangvan? Ye naam shayad maine pehle kahi suna hai. Ye kaunsi jagah hai? Aur maine ye kab rather kyun search ki thi?

"Ye woh jagah hai jiski wajah se aap hume mile, Chikitsak Dr. Dhruv," she murmured in a barely audible voice, standing near the door of his room as she caught him scratching his head while staring at his laptop screen. 

"Tara? Tum yaha?" He shut his laptop screen and kept it aside after he realized her presence. He reached her in three long strides. Snapping his fingers in front of her, he made another attempt to break her trance. 

"J-ji... ji." Startled by seeing him right in front of her, she pulled herself a step backward, wondering when he made it to there from his bed. Was she really that lost?

"Where are you lost?" 

"Ji?"

"Ah, sorry! Mera matlab hai kaha khoyi ho? Tum thik ho? Mom ne fir kuch kaha? Kisi aur ne kuch kaha?"

Despite how hard she tried, resisting her smile was beyond her. He might not remember her but forgetting to protect her seemed beyond him. 

"Hum bas aapko ye dene aaye the. Aaj ka din humare liye khaas hai to humne ye… ca-ke banaya tha. Bilkul waise hi jaise aapne apne uss yantra ki sahayta se hume sikhaya tha." She pulled the plate that she was hiding behind her back to the front as she held it in front of him. "Hum aapke liye laaye the. Aap… khaayenge?" 

"Kyun nahi khaaunga? Bilkul khaaunga!" Cutting a small piece of the cake, he put the spoon in his mouth. "Aaj khaas kya hai waise? Tumhara birthday hai?" 

"Ji kya hai?"

"Birth- janmdin. Aaj tumhara janmdin hai?"

"Ji nahi. Ek mahine pahle isi din humne kisi ko… I love you kaha tha." 

"What? Tumhara boyfriend hai? Tumne kabhi... bataya nahi "

The tinge of sadness that she heard in his voice by the time he reached his last word made her look into his eyes that held the question that she knew wouldn't be able to find his voice. She didn't need it to hear that either. 

She stayed quiet even after knowing what his unsettled self was Impatient to know. 

His visibly disappointed figure didn't move an inch, still waiting for the answer that she seemed to be taking forever to give. 

"Kaun hai wo? Accha hai? Tumhe khush to rakhta hai na?"

"Unse zada khush hume pehle kabhi kisine nahi rakha!"

"Kaha rehta hai?" 

"Humare bohot qareeb hokar bhi bohot dur."

"Tumse kabhi milne nahi aaya wo yaha. Use tumhari yaad nahi aati?"

"Bas usi kshan ki pratiksha kar rahe hai… jab unhe hum yaad aa jaye." 

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Originally posted by: Niyatikalikha

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