Samrat-Tara Wedding OS if Dhruv had returned?

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Hello friends, So this is my OS on Samrat Tara wedding if Dhruv had returned to 21st century without taking Tara . In my plot Dhruv and Tara's love is still unknown to maharaj . And Tara does know about the maharishi shrap and she has somehow sent Dhruv but is not willing to marry Senapati.


Samrat Tara's wedding day.

Tara is getting ready for the wedding all the maids are getting her ready , but she is lost .*Main yahaan hu plays * Tara starts seeing Dhruv everywhere sometime he is complementing him , or asking him to style , he is adjusting her earrings or wiping her tears .

Tara is taken to mandap , all courtiers are happy .Mahaveer , maharani , anusuya, sukanya all are unhappy . Tara and Senapati sits on the mandap . Rituals start .

At wedding venue , 

Priest : Ab var aur vadhu phero ke liye khade ho jaaye .

Phera starts , but Tara is lost .

(she recalls Dhruv, the garland exchange in front of kanha ji , the bhavishyavani, senapati's attempt to kill dhruv, Dhruv leaving ,and the words she said to Dhruv "Apke aur apne pyaar ko nibhayenge damay-sadi se pare " .)

Priest : Phere samapt hogye h niche bethiye ab sindoor daan hoga .

Samrat sits down but Tara does not .

Samrat : Rajkumari ji, bethiye

Tara clutches her fist in which the Mangalsutra is kept .

Maharaj : Kya hua Taru? bethiye .

Tara (sternly ): Yeh vivah nahi ho sakta .

Everybody shocked.

Maharaj: Ye aap kya keh rahi h , aap aisa nahi kr skti .

Tara : Kshama kijiyega pitashree, parantu hum ye vivah nahi karsakte aur na hi karenge .

Senapati: Maharaj! Ye Rajkumari kya keh rahi h , ye apna aur humara sammaan dhumeel kr rahi h . (Towards Tara )Sab kya bolenge aap aisa nahi kr skti .

Maharaj: Humne senapati ko vachan diya h , aap humare vachan aur aagya ka anadar kr rahi h .

(Samrat pulls Tara's hand )

Hum aise apna apmaan sehen nahi karenge , hum abhi aapse vivah karenge.

Tara : (pushes Samrat and takes out her dagger ) Aisa krne ka dussahas mat kariyega parinaam aapke liye haanikaarak sidh hoga . Pitashree ! Hum aapke vachan ka anadar nahi krna chahte parantu hum iss dhurt vyakti se vivah nahi kr skte . 

Maharaj :Aap kya keh rahi h , aapke paas koi pramaan h .

Tara: Nahi pitashree, humare paas is samay koi pramaan nahi h.

Maharaj : Ye matra apka sandeh aur keval iss kaaran se hum apko humare vachan ki avhelna krne nahi de skte. Tara : Pitashree,agar humara sandeh Galt bhi hua jo nahi hoga , tab bhi hum ye vivaah nahi kar sakte .

Maharaj : Kya kaaran h , kyu nahi kr skti aap ye vivaah ?

Tara : Hum ye vivaah nahi kr skte kyunki humara mann pati ke roop mein kisi aur ka varan kar chuka h .

Whole Sabha shocked . Senapati thinking about Dhruv.

Senapati - Kya ? Maharaj ye Rajkumari Kumari kya keh rahi h .

Maharaj : Aap ko anumaan bhi h Rajkumari Tara Priya ki aap kya bol rahi h .

Tara : Hum satya keh rahe h , Hum .. Hum kisi se Prem krte h , unke alawa hum kisi ka vichar bhi apne Mann mein nahi laa skte .

Senapati : Kya aapne maharaj ko bina bataye kisi se vivaah kiya h ?

Tara: Nahi ! Humara vivah nahi hua parantu ve humare mann mein sthaan grahan kr chuke h .

Senapati : Agar vivaah nahi hua to , aisa kaise itna prem ho gaya aapko ki aap uske liye , maharaj ki aagya ulanghan kr rahi h , aur saare Raj darbaar ke samaksh ye keh rahi ki aap pure Mahal mein bina kisi ke jaankari ke prem Leela Racha rahi thi ? 

Maharaj : Senapati , aap apni seema paar kr rahe h !

Senapati : Kshama kijiye Maharaj ! Parantu Rajkumari ji jo keh rahi h usse yeh gyaan hota h ki ve apni maryada ki seema laangh chuki h , unke charitra ki pavitrata pr ab hume sandeh h , ki unka kisi ka saath avaidh s(and there is a sword on his neck holded by Tara)

Tara : Hamare pavitrata aur prem dono par ek bhi shabd bolne se pehle 100 baar chintan kariyega , aap ka ek shabd aapke praan le skta h .

Maharaj : Senapati ji apni jivha par kabu rakhiye aur Rajkumari talwar hataiye.

Senapati : Thik h ! To bas bataiye vo kaun h , jisne aisi abhadrata ki aur aapko apne jhoote prem mein faans liya , yeh jaante hue ki aap ka vivaah humare saath nischit ho chuka tha .

Tara : Unke vishay mein ek bhi apmanjanak vakya hume swikarya nahi h . Prem samay , stithi , sthaan dekh kar nahi hota ye vo bhav h jo dheere dheere apke hriday mein sthaan grahan krta h aur vyakti ko pata bhi nahi chalta . Aur yahi baat unke naam ki to vo hum aapko nahi batayenge .

Senapati: To vo aapko tyaag kr chale gaye , ya unme itni Sahas nahi ki sabke samaksh apne Prem ko swikaar kr sake .Parantu hume apna aur aapka sammaan priy he . Hum aapse ab bhi vivaah krne ko taiyaar h , yadi aap hume vishwas dilaye ki aapko kabhi us purush ne sparsh nahi kiya h , aap pavitra h ?

Tara :Hum to pavitra h .Patantu Aapko sparsh jaanna h to suniye unhone hume sparsh kiya h , aur ye adhikaar unhe humne diya h. Humari charitra par koi daag nahi h , kyunki humara prem vivaah ke inn saat vachno jitna pavitra h , aur hum par yadi kisi ka adhikaar h to bas unka 

Maharaj : Rajkumari Tarapriya, bus chup ho jaiye , humne aapko itni swatantrata di parantu aapne humare vishwas ka aisa anuchit prayog kiya , aapne hume kahi mukh dikhane yogya nahi rakha .

Tara:Nahi pitashree aisa mat kahiye , humara aapko andhkaar mein rakhne ka koi prayojan bas stithi hi kuchh aisi ho gayi thi ki , hum aapko nahi bata paaye .

Maharaj: Naam bataiye uska hum abhi isi Kshan uske sar dhad se alag kr denge 

Tara : Pitashree! Aisa kuchh mat kariye. Unka naam batakar koi laabh nahi h Hum aapko naam nahi batayenge humara prem poora hona vaise bhi sambhav nahi h . 

Maharaj : Agar aap nahi batayenge To aapko dand diya jaega .

Tara : Hume swikaar h pitashree .

And she down takes out her payal and throws it(Vo senapati wali) . Then walk offs from the mandap. 

Tara in her mind : Hum aapse bhale hi durr ho pr humesha aapke dil se jude rahenge ,Dhruv .

           

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Posted: 11 months ago
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This is a part of my FF currently which is on hold .Please give review if I should continue to write it .

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Ye hui na warrior princess Tarapriya wali bat πŸ‘

Tia tumhari hindi to sach me bohot achhi hai πŸ‘πŸΌ(actually DT forum par jitne bhi writers hai un sabki hindi kuch jyada hi shudhh hai πŸ˜†)

Tara ke savage replies and anklets machhar ke muh par fek kar mandap se nikal jana πŸ”₯ 

Mai dil se chahti hu ki Tara Dhruv se shadi na kare chalega no problem bas us machhar se shadi na kare kisi bhi halat me πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ last moment par Dhruv ki entry hogi woh machhar ko expose karega aur marriage break hogi ye typical itv twist hai 😏

Isse better tumhari story hai Tara khud hi apne liye stand le aur marriage break kar deπŸ€—

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Originally posted by: Tia-life

This is a part of my FF currently which is on hold .Please give review if I should continue to write it .

Plz continue πŸ‘πŸΌ

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Ye hui na warrior princess Tarapriya wali bat πŸ‘

Bilkul pata nahi kyu makers Tara ko devdas bana rahe h ( lekin chalega )

Tia tumhari hindi to sach me bohot achhi hai πŸ‘πŸΌ(actually DT forum par jitne bhi writers hai un sabki hindi kuch jyada hi shudhh hai πŸ˜†)Ye to Dhruv Tara ka asar h . Actually I love historical and mythological shows to isliye shuddh Hindi mein likh leti hu.

Tara ke savage replies and anklets machhar ke muh par fek kar mandap se nikal jana πŸ”₯ 

Vo to fikni hi thi .Pata nahi makers payal ko kaha bhul gaye kisi ko yaad hi nahi aa raha.

Mai dil se chahti hu ki Tara Dhruv se shadi na kare chalega no problem bas us machhar se shadi na kare kisi bhi halat me πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ last moment par Dhruv ki entry hogi woh machhar ko expose karega aur marriage break hogi ye typical itv twist hai 😏

Isse better tumhari story hai Tara khud hi apne liye stand le aur marriage break kar deπŸ€—

Humara Dhruv to h hi karodo mein ek , ab bas Tara ko bhi lakho se karodo mein shift krna h , humesha Dhruv hi pyar ke liye stand leta h thoda to Tara ko bhi Lena padega .

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Amazing se bhi zyaada amazing tha ye Tia , plz continue ,
will love to readπŸ‘πŸ‘

Agr aesa kuch hua naa to mzza hi aa jaayega , kuch nayaa hoga dekhne k lie....πŸ₯³

Ye devdaas Tara mujhse handle ni ho rhi hai , pata ni kyu iska character bigaad k rkha hai makers ne πŸ’”

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Love the OS and how she stood up for herself πŸ‘πŸΌ

Please do keep writing, looking forward to more chapters πŸ‘