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Posted: 3 years ago
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She lit the diya in front of her world, her parents.

Every time she thought of them, there was both

smile in her mind and pain in her heart

Smile from the memories she made and

Pain from the one she couldn't.


But today there was no warmth,just the fear of losing a loved one once again gripping her


Asking the question again for the millionth time,

'Why'? , 'why did you leave me'?

was I not a good daughter?

they had not left her that day

they could have guide her today.


chaos in her mind ,

confusion in her thoughts,

anxious in her breathe,

as tears rolled down her eyes.

she was supposed to chose one of them,

between her sister and the love of her life.

Two people she loved with her everything

How was she supposed to chose?




Hello guys!šŸ˜†

Mahi here, šŸ™‹ I am new in this forum.First I thought let's remain a silent reader but then I thought I shouldn't miss the chance to make frds.😃 So here I am.

Let me know ur thoughts on this piece.😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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MAAAHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: scintillaxx

She lit the diya in front of her world, her parents.

Every time she thought of them, there was both

smile in her mind and pain in her heart

Smile from the memories she made and

Pain from the one she couldn't.


But today there was no warmth,just the fear of losing a loved one once again gripping her


Asking the question again for the millionth time,

'Why'? , 'why did you leave me'?

was I not a good daughter?

they had not left her that day

they could have guide her today.


chaos in her mind ,

confusion in her thoughts,

anxious in her breathe,

as tears rolled down her eyes.

she was supposed to chose one of them,

between her sister and the love of her life.

Two people she loved with her everything

How was she supposed to chose?




Hello guys!šŸ˜†

Mahi here, šŸ™‹ I am new in this forum.First I thought let's remain a silent reader but then I thought I shouldn't miss the chance to make frds.😃 So here I am.

Let me know ur thoughts on this piece.😳


This is so so beautiful.... I hope you are gonna continue this ... Nd if your answer is gonna be no then I insist you to write .... Pretty please


And yes, you made the right choice of not staying bas a silent memeber...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hiii!!

I was looking for a story to read, so THANK YOU for posting something xD

Cannot wait to read what happens with AbhiRa

Please continue soon šŸ’œ

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey MahišŸ¤—

Welcome to the forum

This is Lovely... Keep treating us with you ffs

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi Mahi welcome to the forum. I’m Sam. So glad you decided to not be silent anymore and share this beautiful story with us. Please continue, I would love to read more.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmaanixx

MAAAHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!

FINALLLYYYY!! šŸ¤©šŸ¤©šŸ¤©šŸ¤©šŸ¤©šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Gurrr yaarrr I missed u so muccchhh!!!

Ek toh mobile se emoji bhi nahi ja rahešŸ˜‚ and yeah finally mujhe mobile bhi mil gayašŸ˜‚

Damn I am so so sooo happy ki kuch likha hi nahi jarahašŸ˜†

Kaisi ho? Aap kaisa yaha? Jaha tak mujhe pata hai aaisi story hume jaisi pasand hai usse aalag haišŸ˜†lemma guess chemisty btw the leads Or HC.

Mera toh maat buchna aapke piche piche aai hušŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚tinu sa karan HC bhi hai but mainly aap hi hoošŸ˜‚aapko ghost kar rahi hušŸ˜‚

Pata nahi kab chali jaušŸ˜‚

Aaj insta pe chati hu (aviothicca ya aphoiticxx jo account khulešŸ˜‚password merko yaad nahi)ke through request bhejugi accept kar liošŸ˜†

Yaarrr I am so happpppyyyyyy!!! Meri toh smile hi nahi ja rahišŸ˜…

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9


This is so so beautiful.... I hope you are gonna continue this ... Nd if your answer is gonna be no then I insist you to write .... Pretty please


And yes, you made the right choice of not staying bas a silent memeber...

Thankn u so much sweetie ā¤ā¤ā¤

Waise toh yeh os thašŸ˜‚ but I can't turn down ur sweet request toh I will definitely try to write a next part😳

šŸ¤—

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheet_leher

Hiii!!

I was looking for a story to read, so THANK YOU for posting something xD

Cannot wait to read what happens with AbhiRa

Please continue soon šŸ’œ

HelloošŸ˜†

The pleasure is all mine😊

Waise it's supposed to be an os but I will try to make a secong part too..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Hey MahišŸ¤—

Welcome to the forum

This is Lovely... Keep treating us with you ffs

Hello šŸ¤—

Thank u so much ā¤I'll definitely try 😳

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