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Posted: 9 years ago
Gy3 hug to nk...
Gy-chinna..m so hpy..tu dad banne wala hai..mai granny..ak..nd running near of room...
Bm-chinna ab ek chota sa mehman hamare aangan mai khelega...nd hug to nk..mere raja beta ka pyara sa bacha..
Nk-mom...aap bhi..
Bm-haa raja...nd nk took blessing from dj..
Dj-wer is ak..i waana say thanks to her..woh kitni badi kushi dene ja rahi hame..nd all went in nks room...
Gy3 was caressing aks hair...bm too hug to ak..
Gy-meri pyari si bahu..sach meri sari murad puri kar di..kissed on her forehead..ab se hum tere khane ka pine ka khayal rakhege. ..
Bm-haa aur ek ek gante mai khana..aur chinna now tu shivu ke pass sona hum yaha soyege..
Nk-no..i will take care of ak..in nyt also..
Gy-nhi..hum karege..
Ak-amma mom mai thhik hu aur promise karti hu ki mai apna pura dhayan rakhugi.aur baki jo bhi hai aap sab mera pura dhyan rakhege mujhe pata hai...
Ggy-ok...but tum kehti ho toh..koi bhi taklif ho toh mujhe batana..
Ak-ji amma...
Gy-are mai toh bhul gai chalo breakfast karo mai bhi na..yahi lati hu..
Ak-par sabke sath
Gy-nhi abhi four months nhi..usske bad swlly mai bataugi ki kaise aur kab aana hai..pls ise aasan mat samjho yeh time bhut care karne ka hai..
Nk-haa wahi toh mai bol rahi tha..ki mai puri care karuga..aur apki ak ko kuch nhi hogi. .
Gy-haa mujjhe pata hai kitna dhayan rakega..bas sota reh jayga chinna tu.
Nk-nhi amma..
Yaieee mom...shivu shout..but he was in shocked. .
Sh-kya hua mamma..ap weak ho gai health kharab hai ..sab apko kyo esse pyar de rahe..
Nk-shivu aao ..mai batau..dey went in corner...aap mere dost ho na..batao apko chotu sa baby chahiye kelne ke liye..
Sh-chotu baby...par kaha..
Nk-aaiyegi...mom..woh degi hame..phir hum sath kelegi aur khub masti karegi..aap karoge
Sh-haa..yaiee..mamma nd hug to her..
Nk-shivu gy3 bm dj everyone said..
Sh-kya hua .
Nk-dost..pls baby mom ki stomach mai hai..woh davb gai toh..see..mai bhi hug nhi kar rahi mom ko..ak blushed. .gy3 nd bm laughs..woh esse hi muh se nikal gai sry ak..
Ak-gave glare look...
Sh-oki..ab mai mamma ka khub khayal rakhuga..
Ak was getting sleep so everyone leave to her..
After sometimes. ..
Ak opened her eyes saw to dev in front of her eyes. .ak-maa aap...
Dev-dekh tere liye mai yeh aanchari pulaw lai hu khayegi...
Ak-haa...smeeling waaw...mai khau...nd sat on bed..yamiee...nd took one spoon...aap kitna aacha banati hai ...
Than someone knocked d door..it was gy3. .
Gy-are dev behen aap kaisi hai..ak beta kaisa lag raha ...dekh mai tere liye sira lai hu...mitha man kar raha..
Ak-par maa ye pulaw lai hai...aap mitha..smile..mai dono khati hu..dev nd gy3 got hpy..
Ak was having sira..than bm also came..
Bm-ak mai tere liye upma lai hu..le bhut healthy hota hai..chal kha le beta...
Ak-par..itna sara..
Gy-thoda sa toh hai..tino ka kha le thoda..waise bhi ab tu akli nhi ek aur bhi hai jisse bhuk lagi hogi..
She opend mouth..nd saw to dj..
Dj-woh mai yaha ak ke liye jalebi laya tha..le beta..nd forward to her..
Ak-smile ji..dad...mai again opened mouth..suddenly she saw to rashmi..
Ra-are mai late toh nhi hui..aap yaha hai apke aur baby ke liye fruits lai hu..lijiye..
Ak-thanku smile..saw to nk..
Nk-kya ho rahi sab esse kyo khadi hai..ak wer r u..
Ak-yaha..
Nk-are mai apki fav imli laya hu nd kkhub sari pickle bhi dekhiye...are itni food. .apko kuch man ho rahi lau...
Ak-nhi..mera pass itna la diya mai ninth month tak bhi kha lu toh bhi pura na ho..everyone laughs..kiska khau kiska nhi..sab gussa ho jayege itne pyar se laye hai..
Than shivu shout ..mamma.
Ak-are shivu aap...ab aap toh khali hath aaye ho na..
Sh-kyo mamma..mere pass..chocolate hai see...sab apke liye..
Ak-kya..mai itna nhi kha sakti..par aap sabke pyar se ek ek bite sab mujhe kilayege..
All said yes...
Ak-ek ek karke pls...
Dey gave one bite one by one...
Ak-hmm..bhut yum hai...kya banaya hai ekdom tasty..
More parts coming soon
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
After seven month. .
Ak-bas bas nk...kitna kilayege mujhe. .
Nk-jitni mere baby ko need hogi..u stooped my baby wants food..
Ak-baby ho gai na..apki stomach full na..aahh..
Nk-kuch hui worried...phir kick mari. .
Ak-woh kick marke bata raha hai ki mera stomach full ab papa khayege..nd gave one bite to nk..
Nk-ak..aapki ye aadat aachi nhi..aacha ab aapko soni chaaiye..
Ak-kya nk..kitna sou ..pls mai walk kar lu thoda..waise bhi doctors ne bola hai mera 8th month start ho gya hai ab mujhe thoda sa walk karna jaruri hai..
Nk-but unhone apko care ke liye bhi toh boli hai na...
Ak-pls nk..sab god bhagai ki rasam mai lage hue hai..pls..aaj...
Nk-ok..aaiye ..samal ke..ak stood with d help of nk...nk was holding vry tightly aks hand..
Ak-aap toh esse dar rahe nk jaise mujhe kuch ho jayega.
Nk-ak..shout..apko saram nhi aati..essi bolti hai koi...
Ak-mai nd apka baby dono thik hai ..aur thik rahege..wada hai mera..smile nd hug to nk..
Nk-ak..pls baby dab..
Ak-sshh..put finger on his lips...aap baby ko hug chahiye..see..itni badi ho gai ho meri stomach..apkosaram aati hai na..with sadly face.
Nk-nhi ak..took her hand under of his hands..essi nhi hai..mujhe apki nd baby ki bhut chinta hoti hai .thabhi..pata nhi meri man thodi bechen si hui hai yeh two month nikal jaye bas..
Ak-sab thik hoga..than nk got call in cell..
Nk-hloo..no..i dont come..no ways..mujhe nhi aani..boli na..huh..nd cut d phone in anger..
Ak-kya hua..
Nk-nothing..chaliye room mai..
Ak-bataiye ..pls..
Nk-woh company se call thi..unhone boli kal nyt mujhe jani hogi..goa waha meeting hai two days ki..
Ak-smile bas..maine socha pata nhi kya ho gya..apko mujhe chod nhi jana na...par nk abhi baby ko aane mai time hai do din mai reh lungi..aur phir kal nyt mai means god bharai ki rasam toh ho hi jayegi. .
Nk-pls..
Ak-haa nk..mai apko chahti hu..but abhi toh koi problems nhi hai..aap apne pure work nipta lijiye thaki baki ke din aap mere sath rahe..
Nk-par..
Ak-pls nk..mai tutne lag jau esse pehle jake aa jaiye jaldi se..aaiye..
Both went in room...
Ak-aaj toh mere pass baithe rahiye..
Nk-are maine apke liye lehnga li kal aap pehnegi na..
Ak-haa...meri first baby shower...kitna alg sa lag raha hai.
Nk-meri bhi..first experience. ..smile nd kissed on aks hand..
Now next day..ak got ready for function. ..nk was helping of her..
Nk-bas yeh gajra bhi lag gai..aap bhut pyari si lag rahi ekdom new bride jaisi..
Ak-moti dulhan..hena..
Gy3 said in between..
Gy-sshh.essa nhi bolte beta..tu toh ekdom pyari si lag rahi aur yeh subh sagun hai ..chalo rasam suru karne ka time ho gya..
Nk-haa..chaliye..
Gy-chinna..u will not come..ye sirf ladies ki hai..
Nk-but wife nd baby meri hai na..i will come..
Gy-but chiina ..hamare yaha ye subh nhi hota hai ki husband aaye isme..tum yahi baitho ..mai chali ak ko leke..
Nk-but amma..but gy3 shout d door nd took toh ak..she laughs..
Gy3 sats to her in chair...ak was just admiring d all arrangements..dev was also here...ladies were dancing in telgue songs..ak didnt understand but was so hpy to listen this...
Here nk was so tensed want to go in hull...nd he saw window was open..
Nk-waaw mai ja sakta hu..yaiee..what is happening in hull but how ..amm haa i can wear saree..nd go in hull..he took one new saree of ak..nd jaise taise he wore saree...he was in gungat..swlly he saw every ladies was busy in dancing. .nk went near of ak ..nd sat next of her..
Gy3 wore chunri to ak...
Ak passes smile..nk hold her hand..ak felt some warm touch of nk..
Ak-nk..ye kon hai ..aap kon hai..behen ji..aap gungat kyo pehen..
Nk-nooded no..
Ak-kya mujhe kuch samaj nhi aa raha ..in low voice. .ye kon hai ajib si..
Nk-ye ak ko saram hi nhi aati..mujhe pitwayegi yeh..pls yeh qu band ..in low voice. .ak mai nk..
Ak-kya badbad kar rahi aap..kon hai..kahi chor toh ..kon hai..holdes his hand..kin hai..
Nk-ak mai nk..in lill shout voice..
Ak-aaahhh..in loud voice. .aap..everyone saw to ak..
Gy-kya hua beta..dard ho raha hai kya..
Ak-woh kuch nhi..woh baby ne kick ki toh thoda gudgudi hui...is liye..
Everyone laughed. .
Ak-nk..aap yaha kya kar rahe bhagiye warna amma apko pit degi..
Nk-nhi mujhe nhi janni..pls..koi nhi samjhegi pls..aap chup rahiye...
Gy3 was seeing to both. .
Gy-ye kon hai..gungat in ours..who is she..went near nd skkiped gungat of nk..nk shout aahhh..
Gy3 shout aahhh..
Nk wore gungat again...
Gy-ooh..toh chinnta u dont want listen to me na..kya jarurat thi yaha aane ki..koi hai kya yaha...
Ak-amma woh nk.
Gy-ak ..pls..ye chinna ki side mat lo..ye badmash..grabbed nks ears...sunna nhi esse..
Nk-aauuu...amna...pls..skkiped my ears ..i waana see pls...meri pyari si amma dulari si amma..everyone smiles..
Gy-chinna..ye shubh nhi hai pls go..
Nk-pls yeh sab ki batiee chodiye..meri baby bhi toh hai na..pls ..
Bm-choti bahu..pls..skkiped to chinna..ab chinna aa gaya hai toh rehne do..
Gy-par didi. .
All lad-ho gya..chinna ruk jao..
Nk-thanku..unwore saree...everyone laughs..ak too made face..nk sat near of ak..
Now every ladies gave sagun rice nd sagun nd gifts in aks chunnri ...nd said somthing in ears...ak passes smile..
Nk-ye kya bol rahi sab..than gy3 comes near of nk..
She gave dimand nackless to ak nd said to ak in ears.
Than comes near of nk..
In nks ears..
Gy-chinna tu ek aacha papa ban aur yeh pagalpanti band kar de... 😆 ..
Nk-kya..amma..ye kya boli apne..
Gy-..haa..aaj teri badmasi dekh ke lag raha do ke sayh tin bache samalne honge...everyone laughs..
Ak-she was feeling tired..
Gy-ho gya ..ab chalte hai..ak beta tum bhi change karkr aaram kar lo..
AkAk-amma...woh ek bat bolni thi..woh nk ko aaj rat ko goa jana hai..
Gy-kya..chinna...but y..
Nk-amma apko do din ak ki care karni hogi. .pls..i will come in two days..
Gy-thik hai chinna but esse time pe ak wants to u only ..pls turant aana ..
Nk-ji amma..
In nyt ak was sat on bed...nd nk hug to ak ..ak was holding to nk..
Ak-nk..jaldi aaiyega..nd had tears on eyes..mai kaise rahugi..
Nk-dont worry...maine shivu ko noli hai woh yahi apki care karegi nd amma will sleep with u..
Ak-par apki kami woh kon puri kar sakta hai nk.
Nk-pls..mai nhi jau..apki man nhi hogi toh mai nhi jata..
Ak-aap jaiye..aur turant aaiye...nd wipe her tears..mai wait karugi..
Nk-hmm.aap nd meri baby..came near of aks stomach..baby i love u nd kissed ...aapko darni nhi hai aur haa mamma ki care karni hai ..ok..love u..
Ak-haa..aa..kick haa papa..baby bol raha..
Than shivu comes near of nk..
Sh-dosttt...nk saw to shivu nd hug to him.
Nk-aapko yad hai na kya karni hai..
Sh-haa dost..aap aachese jao..mai meri mamma aur chotu baby ka pura dhayan rakhuga..
Nk-haa..now u r big boy..give me kiss. ..nd aap apni bhi care karoge oki..
Sh-haa..kissed on nks cheeks..mai sabki care karuga aur khub hasauga..
Nk-hmm..bye..sab ke liye gifts lani hai..
Ak said bye to nk..nd nk also said bye..
Nk-mere baby ki care karna..
Ak-haa nk..hum dono thik rahege..
Nk-bye????
Ak-bye??
So guys this is nextpart. .hope u will like this part..pls press like button if u like this part nd give sweet comments. .i will wait for comments...
Thanku for reading..forgive my mistakes..
Precap-twist... 😲
Edited by ruchinaksh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part ruchi . G3, bm wish a grandchild pr nk ne ak ka popat hi kr diya ... Its a strange feeling for AK too a new experience of life . Ab nk abhi bhi guess nhi kr pya imli mangi lemon manga ak ne still ... Ab lets see nk reaction . update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Nice part ruchi . G3, bm wish a grandchild pr nk ne ak ka popat hi kr diya ... Its a strange feeling for AK too a new experience of life . Ab nk abhi bhi guess nhi kr pya imli mangi lemon manga ak ne still ... Ab lets see nk reaction . update soon


Thanku nidhi for liking my work nd ur sweet comments 😳 ..
I m hpy that u liked all scene ..u will read nk expression in next part..i will do update next part soon ..:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanku simi.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BrinaS10

Really liked it! :)


Thanku so much from pritus side... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very cute &awesome part ruchi👏..Hmmm...Nk is so happy listening AK preg news😃..The way NK said to AK that Shivu will B their first son was so sweet of him😊..Nk telling AK preg news to gay3 was hilarious &cute😆..Everyone in d family were so happy &gay3 BMA happiness has no bounds...Loved Nk possessiveness towards baby &AK..Loved his care &loved for Ak😳..Everyone bringing something or d other for AK to eat was so sweet..AK is so lucky to have such a caring family &lovable hubby😳..Liked AK baby shower function😊&Nk coming in saree for function was 😆..Nk have to go for work to goa for two days..Hope Nk returns back at time bcz AK need him so much at this time...
For a sec it looked as if I'm watching old Yrkkh &I can visualise all dese scenes in front of my eyes😉
U have written so beautifully 👍🏼..Do update next part soon..eagerly waiting...😛
Edited by munna111 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww Ruchi such a sweet part ...
Feels like watching my old yrkkh again . Nk ne toh khud hi sab ko hassa dala news dene k time . Ak baby dab jyega ... Was too cute scene nk is worrying like rj . Ruchu abhi bhi shivu nk ko dost bulata hai ab usse nk ko papa bolna chahiye naa its more than one year they are dost . nk got some work... Bye k agge questions mark ? Is doubtful. Update sooner soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was just lovely part...
loved each nd every line..
mainly khaane wali scene...
kitna kilaadi sabme ek saath lol
nd nk ka care taking omggg nd sab ko kaise bola ki ak is pregnant...
its simply supereb...
finally naksh ki godhbharai bhi hui...
baby dab jaayegi hehhhehe
it was funny emotional nd lovely update...
do update soon nd hmmm twisyttt 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: munna111

Very cute &awesome part ruchi👏..Hmmm...Nk is so happy listening AK preg news😃..The way NK said to AK that Shivu will B their first son was so sweet of him😊..Nk telling AK preg news to gay3 was hilarious &cute😆..Everyone in d family were so happy &gay3 BMA happiness has no bounds...Loved Nk possessiveness towards baby &AK..Loved his care &loved for Ak😳..Everyone bringing something or d other for AK to eat was so sweet..AK is so lucky to have such a caring family &lovable hubby😳..Liked AK baby shower function😊&Nk coming in saree for function was😆..Nk have to go for work to goa for two days..Hope Nk returns back at time bcz AK need him so much at this time...

For a sec it looked as if I'm watching old Yrkkh &I can visualise all dese scenes in front of my eyes😉
U have written so beautifully 👍🏼..Do update next part soon..eagerly waiting...😛


Omg...fouzi firstly i m admiring ur big comments again nd again..just feblussfebluss 👏 ..
My thanku is less...thanku so much for liking my work nd gave sweet sa commentscomments 😛 ..totally loved it..
Aww u liked each nd every scene hpy to see ur comments.. 😃..
Nk nd all family did care because ak did care of alls..
So everyone loves from her.. 😳 ..dont worry i m not like cvs.. 😆 jo drama dikhayege..
Aww u remebered old days big complainant for me.. 😊 ..
I will do update next part sooner soon.. 😊

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