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Posted: 10 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
aree nahi ruchi tum pls aisa mat karna next part pata nahi mai kab likhu
par tum monday ya phir kal tak update karna

tum na jaldi update nahi karne waali i knew dat dont wry i dont compel u dear... 😊

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: --pranu--

tum na jaldi update nahi karne waali i knew dat dont wry i dont compel u dear... 😊

Tqq dear for give me support

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#243

wow its awesome ruchi . naitik learn music only for akshi.. its so sweet.. loved his surprise on akshi bdy.. so beautiful part .. waiting for next part eagerly

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
wow its awesome ruchi . naitik learn music only for akshi.. its so sweet.. loved his surprise on akshi bdy.. so beautiful part .. waiting for next part eagerly

Tqq pragati dear for ur vry sweet comments😃yaa I will update next part soon..

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avisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#245

sorry sorry sorry
itta late comment karne k liye sorry...
anyways good as always part... nd the song moment was awww as well as rofl. all over.. was fun to read.. 😊

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: avinaksh
sorry sorry sorry
itta late comment karne k liye sorry...
anyways good as always part... nd the song moment was awww as well as rofl. all over.. was fun to read.. 😊

Thanku avi for ur sweet comments ...I was waiting for ur reply dear...but koi nahi der se aaye durust aaye ...

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: avinaksh
update na 😭

Yaa avi I am updating now..likhne ja rahi hu thoda wait karo oki..😃

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Part-12

Than mohit says that agar ye emotional drama end ho gya ho to Party enjoy kare nd cake cutting..

Na-haa both break their hug akshi bluss..

Than varsa bring cake nd doing set on table

Ak-thanku gyss maine khabhi nhi socha tha ki mera bdy esse b celebrate ho sakta hai this is my best bdy ever I m so lucky that I got frds jo heart se itne aache hai tqq to all of u ..nd tears came in her eyes.

Rituraj-ye girls hamesha roti kyo hai iske alawa koi kam nhi inhe

Na-ye girls ki felling s hoti hai jisse sayad hum boys khabhi samaj nhi sakte ..akshi pls dont cry bhuk lagi hai pls cut d cake..

Every one laughs nd akshi also said haa

Than she cut cake nd saw natik nd goes where natik stand nd feed cake to natik

Na-hppy bdy akshi

Ak-thanku nd said in low voice I know mujhe kush karne k liye tumne gana sikha na thanku for everything. .

Na-smile

Akshi feed cake to all her frds every one gave gifts to akshi ...

Than after some times rituraj said -bhut bor ho rha hai gyss I think hame dance karna chahiye

Every one said oki than sava narisma mohit with one girl but akshi natik stands on cornor than rituraj come nd said akshra u waana dance with me ..

Ak-no mera man nhi h than rituraj make face nd leave

Than after some time natik to akshi

Na-tum mera matlab dance kyo nhi kar rahi ho ..

Ak-wo mujhe nhi aata hai natik

Na-ye lo aur mai samjha pata nhi kitni badi bat hai kya tum mere sath dance karogi..

Ak-she confused but when saw natiks hand she says yess oki chalo par mujhe bhut aacha dance nhi aata..

Na-to mujhe kon sa aata hai aur yha to comptision b nhi hai its ok akshi..pls try

Than both goes in middle nd dance dont talk to each other but they showed everyone dancing to hold their hand than natik gave hand to akshi ...she take hand on her hand than natik took one hand on akshis hand ...second hand swly swly take on akshi s waist ..akshi just feel nd close her eyes nd swly swly she took another hand on natiks shoulder. .than both starts dance ...natik saw continually on her eyes she does same...after some akshi turn nd jhatkofy oopss her blouses is open from back..there is vry dark nd every one lost in their dance ..than naksh r dancing..akshi felt somthing. ..

She said -natik mujhe itna halka kyo lag rha hai suddun back mai

Na-hmm ruko m dekha hu ..

Than natik swly swly came near on akshi ...akshi is moan dont say anything in hugging positions natik saw blouses open from back nd got embraced. .how he said ..

Akshi said what happened. .

Na-break hug woo woo

Ak-kya hua

Na-urs blouses open

Akshi got embraced she Looks down

Ak-ab mai kya karu yha itna dark hai kaise jau lights open ho gai to sab dekh lenge ..m kya karu ..

Na-agar tumhe bura na lage to m ..I mean agar tum bolo to mai band kar deta hu

Akshi dont say ..nodded yes..

Natik swly swly come near akshi he did hug to akshi than natiks cheeks touches on akshi she falt this she hold tightly to natik her hand cupped on natiks hand ..than swly natik come on akshis nack his breath touches to akshi akshi just feel this natik said on her ears

Na-swly agar m tumhe turn karke y close karta to sayad sab dekh k hamara majak utate to maine essa kiya I m sry ..

Than he close d huk with he saw akshi skin nd capofy he also close his eyes his hand on akshi back nd moves ..akshi also close her eyes dont say anything hold vry tightly to natik ...both felt that this is our own world ..dont say bas pyar ka ehsas swly swly both dont know that they swly swly like to each other...than lights on ..

Every body break their hug naksh r same position. .when hala starts both comes persent ..broke their hug..dont say anything. ..

Mo-bhut maja aaya party bhut aachi thi he na natik

More parts coming soon.

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Naksh dont say anything. .than

Na-mai aata hu abhi he went in corner

Ye mujhe kya ho gya tha akshi ko bura lag gya to kyo usko dekh k mujhse control nhi hua pata nhi itni becheni kyo ho rahi hai ..

Here akshi -ye mujhe kya ho rha hai pehli bar itna dil bechen kyo ho rha hai mera pata nhi natik mere bare mai kya soch raha hoga ..ye ladki kitni buri hai . ...mai usse najar kaise milaugi than she heard some voice this was natik nd run ..

Here natiks cut his finger nd said aauch nd blood came ...

Every one said ye kya hua

Na-wo mera dhayan kahi aur tha ye cut gaya kun aa rahe hai ..

Akshi start crying to saw natik is in pain she fatafat took natiks finger on her mouth nd shaking ...nd crying ater some time

Ak-with cry tumhe dikhta nhi h itna kun nikal raha hai meri koi fikar nhi hai na tumhe pain mai dekh k kitna pain ho raha h mujhe u r my best frd kuch ho jata to ..

Na-hua to nhi dekho mai thik hu dont cry pls be hpy today is ur bdy na ..pls dont cry ...

Ak-mujhe kuch nhi sunna nd cry mai ja rahi hu . ..m tumhe u tadpate hue nhi dekh sakti dekho blood abhi b aa raha hai nd cry ..

Na-par akshi pls listen to me than his frds apply medicine nd said aauch

Ak-dhere se tumhe dikha nhi use kitna dard ho raha hai ..

Na-nhi mujhe kuch dard nhi ho rha h bas tum has dogi to dard b bhag jayga ..pls smile

Ak-gave smile

Na-kitni kanjos wali

Ak-smile again

Na-nhi ye to bilkul b nhi pls ekdom kul k hasi

Than akshi smile nd laugh

Na-haa thats my akshi ...

Than leave party end ..next day natik woke up in his room..

Na-are yr ye alarm nd thought about previous night dance nd akshi ka rona nd told ye akshi b bilkul pagal hai

Than he saw akshi

Ak-kya kya tumne mujhe pagal bola abhi batati hu nd she doing gudgudi on her stomach. .natik laugh pls akshi ruko tum yha kaise aai ..he laugh nd turn ..after some time he turn back na-akshi no one here are tum kaha gai

Than in door he heard voice

Ak-mujhe koj rahe ho kyo natik

Na-haa aur kisse koi dekh lega

Than he goes close to her nd she gayab natik got shocked nd said y kya ho rha hai kyo mujhe akshi dikh rahi h her jagah ..m pagal ho jauga mai naha leta hu ...he take bath nd said are yr mai towel bhul gya naman hoga to bolta hu ...naman pls give me towel naman said yes...

Than natik still thought about akshi nd knock knock he open d door nd saw akshi

Ak-laugh natik tum apna towel b sath mai leke nhi aate nd laugh tum esse dekh raho tumhe saram nhi aa rahi h

Na-tumhe nhi aati u room mai kaise aa gai imagination naman confused

Ak-smile nhi aati thabhi to yha kadi hu tum lo apna towel

Than natik take towel nd kichofy akshi uff naman on bathroom. ..

Ak-mai yha b aa gai dekha ..natik looking only akshis eyes dont remembered that he take bath nd naman said abe chod chod😆😆

Natik is his own world dont listen

Na-tum kitni aachi ho pata hai tumhare sath mai din bhar bat kar sakta hu hold her hand

Naman shouted pls koi mujhe bacho chod mera hat nd chilyofy aaa😆

Natik came in persent nd chodofy he saw naman nd shouted tuu kya kar raha hai yaha tujhe saram nhi aati ja yaha se

Na-mujhe koi sok nhi hai yaha aane ka tu hi pata nhi kya badbad kar rha tha pagal mai ja raha hu😆

Than natik having breakfast also here

Na-mai kyu bar bar akshi ko imagine kar raha hu pls koi mujhe bachao

Ak-kon bachayega tumhe tum pagal nhi hue nd smile lo nashta kar lo nd sit on chair nd gave bread to natik

Na-lost tum mere liye lai ho mai khau

Ak-sirf tumhare liye apne hatho se bana k

Than he thought he ate bread but there is no bread ..than he ate his fingers 😆nd said aauchhh

Na-akshi nd saw akshi is not there. ..got confused. ..ye mujhe kya ho raha hai mai aaj apni car m nhi jauga warna mera accident ho jayada aur mai god ko pyara ...ye mere sath kyo ho raha hai pata nhi kya akshi k sath bhi ye sab ho rha hoga..

What happened to akshi????????

So gyss kaisa hai pls agar pasand aaye to like kare nd gave comments pls pls I m waiting for ur comments ...pls comment soon...

Precap-akshi ka aur b hal behal she take lunch for natik in clg...

Edited by ruchigarg - 10 years ago