Samaina SS: My Dark Lover closing note p56 - Page 38

Wow Sims, the update was just wow...

You are entirely rewriting the memory of Delhi phase for me. The depth, the pain, the longings... everything is just felt as if i see it on screen...

When u started writing this SS , i had decided not to read it as it is about the Delhi phase, but you are giving an entirely different touch to it and its simply irresistible to skip this SS...

Cannot wait for the next update.pls update soon

Yay, it's finally here

It's heartbreakingly beautiful how both Sameer n Naina have to stay away from each other but they also give in to their hearts at times.

The lady who saw them is I think Vishakha? Let's see what she does next.

Directly a very big warm hug to u my dear sims , ur amazing, Fabulous etc , unable to find any proper words to describe the update from the very first line to the end ,everything was so hot , emotional n only true love . Loved it sooooo much that I crave for more n more stories from u. God bless u with everything my dear .

Srilatha

Originally posted by: Rph09

Your health is more important. 🤗

Originally posted by: Mayashika

She slipped because she had never stopped loving him. After all those harsh words and unanswered letters, she could never stop loving him. She can control her brain, recite again and again the 'move on' phrase but who will teach her that the heart has a mind of it's own which doesn't know any restraints. I just love romance filled with angst so I would just say bring it on, I am all ready to read. 😛

Shreya! After so long you are the first to comment! Naina can never stop loving him. This was very obvious in the break up track even when she was supposedly marrying Sharad she could only think of Sameer. He lives in her heart and as we know our Naina once someone enters her heart she will never let go of that person. I know how much you love angst and romance so the next update has even more of it..actually this story will have that to the brim!

It pained my heart immensely when Vishaka just left Sameer without caring for him properly. I just don't understand how a mother could be like this. My heart hurts.

And the saddest part is this scene was taken from the show. After Sameer comes back from bike crash Vishaka sees his wounded elbow and tries to tend to it but Somani comes and starts creating a ruckus over the bike and Vishaka forgets the injury. Its why despite everything I cant seem to warm up to her completely. Like its so obvious Sameer has never had the place he has the right to in her life.

He is not allowed to lock doors since which incident. Aren't you increasing the suspense? 😳 I am now curious about why Sameer decided to stay away from Naina when he was madly in love with her and now this, that incident.

Of course I am increasing the suspense. It was a pretty dark incident and its one of the reasons that has spoiled his relationships in the house and made him think he is not good enough for Naina.

The sneak-peak to the next chapter is very interesting and exciting. Update when you are completely fit and fine! 🤗

Thank you my dear! I am alot better now but just very busy with life in general. i have updated the next chapter as a special birthday treat to you. Hope you like it. 🤗

Thank you for your comment Shreya. My replies are in bold like the content of the future updates will be 😉 Dont worry I will octoproof them in red for your twinnie..

Bundles of love,

Sims

Hi Sims

Its an exquisite piece of writing. Aap profesional writer ho to ab hum kya hi bole. The metaphors you have used along with some lines of poem and your writing all in all a great combination

Sameer and Naina how intensely they feel for each other ,their pain wonderfully captured with the Delhi summer.

What I like is the unconditional love of Naina and how much she tried to make their relationship work. Even though he knows she loves him so intensely and he cannot forget her I am not understanding why is he drowning in the darkness.

I hope the lady watching them helps in bringing them close

Love

Sajida

Originally posted by: Labhya

Sims diii pehle to big Bholuram for responding so very late. I was busy with some things which is why neither I could I be active on the thread nor I unreserved at the earliest.

Meri Pyari Choti Labhya, bholuram toh mujhe kehna chahiye for responding so late to your comment and also updating this ff so late.

Let me say that Dialogue again which I used to say in HAHK updates

Mai fir agaya diii aapka laalchi late lateef reader apne review k saath…..

Haaye un dinon ki yaad aa gayi 😉

Naina ne move on krne ka declaration to de diya lekin sameer k saamne aate hi she got carried away. Saara ka saara determination ki mai usse dur rahungi , mai aage badhungi wagera wagera furrrrr hogaya!!!!! Hawa ka jhonka aaya aur naina ne jo walls banai use hila ke chala gaya….. lekin mai is baat se khush nahi hu. Infact mai to ye soch rahi hu ki kitni takleef hui hogi naina ko sameer ko delhi me dekh kr aur vo bhi jaise hi vo is city me enter hote se hi…. Oh gosh sims diii bohot takleef hui hogi na nain ko..

Indeed our poor Naina suffered so much pain and in the future updates I will try and zoom in on some of her past moments which have shaped her.Show from her perspective what life was like for her after Sameer betrayed her for a second time. Because one of the things I love about Naina's character is her emotional strength. She commands respect for that.

But all i would is all the best of luck to naina , you've come here to make your career , be the Naina Agarwal you've always wanna be! Stay strong!

Dont worry Labhya dear our Naina is very strong, she stumbles and falls but also picks herself up and walks on.

And yes those lines how perfectly they've defined Naina's situation! Sims diii i like it soooooooooooo very much when you add lines in your updates and special mention when the lines are written by you. They are always mood lifters for me .

Aww kop kop Labhya..I am very new to poetry but I feel it expresses pain and anguish like nothing else in this world. And you know how much poetry has influenced our show so I decided to bring in lines here and there when needed.

This is the best quality of naina she cannot see anyone in pain , her gesture towards that little girl was very nice. Maybe she'll play the cupid in samaina's love story in Delhi!

I love this about our Naina. She is so very beautifully human and warm. Of course these qualities really piss off Sameer Jaleshwari when she is showing her care towards another man. Uhu uhu...Raghav's hand burning and Naina feeling bad for it. Sameer being a prissy kid throwing a fit over it followed by that ice romance ☺️ One of my fav scenes

Tum kis kahani ki pari ho naina ? This line is soooooooooooo clear and soooo deep!!!! Mad boy she's the fairy of your life ab dekhna kaise akal thiqaane lagati hai tumhari vo bhi bina kuch kiye… oh i am soooooooooooo very excited what's gonna happen next!!!!

haha Nainadevi ek baar form mein aa gayi na sari manhoosiyat nikal jani hai iske dimaag se..woh iska nasha bhi chut wayegi aur sudharegi bhi..Just wait and watch Sammy boy

Like i said earlier the girl is Deepika and Naina is in Sameer's house on her first day at this very new city!!!! Naina jiii be ready your day is gonna be very very exciting and you'll get lots of shocking suprises!!!! Ab samaina meet to hona hi hai.. mai meri thaanedaar madam ji ko jaanti ho is update me jitna tadpaya hai next update me usse jyada tadpaayengiii!!!

ohoho labhya abhi aapne mera jadoo theek se dekha kahan hai..wait for mid july 😉

Meri badi behena ab please jaldi se update de do ab to naina ne bhi shirtless sameer dekh liya i am eager to know what will happen next!

updated yesterday labhya..cant wait to read your review on it!

Keep smiling

Labhya

Meri Pyari choti behen,

your review brought a wide smile on my face like it always does. Whatsapp par come more often I miss you.

Bundles of love,

Sims Di

First of all don't you worry at all your readers truly loves your work and will surely continue to support you no matter what 😊

" could you die of heartbreak" I'm still stuck at thus one small line of yours .. This small line speaks volume of a lovers pain and helplessness and no need to say it's obvious that you did a perfect job in making all us feel their pain .. Its really commendable how you made the entire update only having a single moment and still making your readers hooked to it with each passing line 👏 the moment clearly depicts the amount of longing they have for each other that they both for once forget the world and just were feeling the moment of being close to the love of their life .. My heart really broke seeing sameer pleading to naina to be for real only if he realises that she was always their .. The boy was in tears the pain of six years was flowing in the arms of his Naina but the situation is such that she thought it to be water dripping .. I so wanted to go to them and scream " your sameer loves you to death " but I know you must have better plans than a random girl spoiling the Love's thunder 😆 iconic dialogues from pvkm days made the update even more passionate and sameer again and again remembering his mother's words made it intense and sad .. That's what I love about this ff so many emotions at a single place both are in immense pain but my heart goes to out to sameer how much he must be holding in that he got solace in dream and was happy with the idea of dying .. And now must be in more pain learning how she took his touch to be ..

This update was nothing but indeed a solace for us readers also and I know this is just the beginning .. Honestly u never expected that in just 3 updates down I'll get sameer wrapped in nothing but a towel having his Naina in his arms and now my hopes are breaking all the barriers 😆 can't blame the kids too ek jawan and ek jawan ladka kmre mein akele kuch toh hona ho tha 🤣 the slight peak into the next part is making me go mad but I'll be a good girl and will patiently wait for the update as I know it will be worth the wait

Now eagerly waiting for hahk update

Love

Laalchi reader

Beautiful gripping story. Wonderful update. Loved it

Originally posted by: chaaru26

Ressss

Unres....

Naina is so lost and thats true... she evidently recalls wach and every feeling and sensation that passed through her yet whats to make sure he doesnt make a difference to her. His presence makes all the difference in this world..

Indeed its true..if Sameer is lost without Naina she too is lost without him. The only difference is that Naina has learned to pick herself up and move on.This is something which Sameer hasn't. They both need each other to live.

Destiny plays its own games, she met him exactly when she didnt want to, and the hanky which was his since 5 years finally slipped into the hands that it was made for....

Her wait was painful, with every passing day she was holding onto the diminishing hope till one fine day she lost it..and again the line memory of his voice and handwriting were fading to residues was amazing... it shows that she wasn't only holding on to the hope but the memory of him..

Thank you my dear. I believe destiny does make fools of us but eventually somehow always gets work done. And that usually happens when we least expect it. Naina gave Sameer the hanky when he most needed it, wounded as he was. But didnt realise that this hanky also went a long way in drying his unshed tears. Hold onto the line about memory of him because I will draw from it in future updates.

I knew it when reading about the girl that ots gonna be Deepika and my guess was right...

Kya baat hai meri pyari bijli..sahi pakda tumne 👏

But the most painful part of the update for me was when Vishaka left tending his wound and went to Somani's side. My Sameer has no one for his support, everybody has their own priorities and he is not anyone's priority. The one whose priority he was and always would be, he wants to stay away from her, yet want her will his soul and heart...

He had described Deepika as demon's daughter 😆

The saddest part about this is that Vishaka actually did this in the Delhi track of the show. Its all because of Naina that Sameer was able to move on and be patient with her but honestly it was very heartbreaking that Vishaka didn't even ask about his injury..my poor boy 😭

Naina being Naina understood the place of him in that house without even interacting with him or any of the members of Somani house. Her concern for his photo showed that she cared about the love that he received from the house and somewhere she knew that he would not receive any love from that house..

Naina has never needed words when it comes to Sameer. Not only is she smart but also connected with him by heart. She knew what was happening to Sameer in those few minutes which Vishaka didn't all these years.

Oh the part where she touched the things in Somani house, trying to absorb his feel.... how deeply she is attached to him, even the place he was, things he touched is somthing of value to her... the lifeless house would also carry a life if it is touched by him for her...

Everything of Sameer's matters for Naina because of the way she loves him and always will. I told you right that walls and boundaries would play a role in the updates. Well here she touched walls to feel him and in the next update..well why dont you try to pick that one out yourself. 😉

Oh yess.. Sameer just out of a bath and Naina there... how lovely.. waiting for some amazing chemistry in the next update...

And i have a small guess to make... Is Naina going to stay in Somani's house and and and... would Rohan fall for her???????

Patience chaaru dear everything will be revealed to you in time

Too many question plus a lott of excitement....

Please update soon di...

But TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF....🤗

Kop Kop my dear 🤗

Kop Kop for your detailed feedback my love. I can't wait to read what you have to say about the next update.

P.S- Will review tomorrow because I am doing work from home