TS:Murder In Somani House(PART-2 UPDATED)PG-12 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Bahut Badiya...looks like someone is trying to frame Sameer..Kahin..Yeh Somani toh nahin...Ya Sameer sapna dekh raha hai...sapne mein usne Keshav ka katl kar diya😆, suppressed desires have materialized in his dreams? Waiting for the next update!
Loved the Ashutosh..Namoskar..touch!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Wow..good update..
Was laughing out loud..
Now can't wait for next update..
Please do it soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

First of all.. Main Keshav ke murder ke liye bohot khush hoon.. 😆

Thank you at least story mein hi sahi uska murder karne ke liye

Hilarious and too funny.. I was enjoying while reading 😃

Investigation thi yaa comedy.. officer is so funny..

Officer ke fountain pen ki story.. Loved it and my favourite part too 🤣

Your writing is so good.. Beautifully written 👏

Please update soon.. Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: moumita04

First of all let me laugh again at Keshav's murder... It just gives me sadistic pleasure...!! 😈

Minu - Namoskar!! 😃

What a tale...!! I am liking the investigating officer... mamaji ka katl kar diya...!! 🤣
And daadi saying "Keshav to mera apna tha" - haaye raam!! itna kitna apna tha... 😉

Loved how you added the sensitive touches in between... Sameer getting to know about his mother's care, that talk with pole star... Dil le lo... ❤️

Somani ghar me sach me sab mental problem ke shikar hai... mazaa aa gaya padhke... Thank you so much Minu... 🤗

Awesome fantastical mystery with a heavy dose of required comedy and gentle touches of sensitivity... 👏👏👏

Love,
Mou

Dhanyobad Mou! 😃 I am so happy that I am finally able to write a comedy-investigative story.And killing Keshav has been the fulfiling sadistic pleasure.Dadi aur Keshav ke relation aur zyada explore hoga next updates mein..Tab pata chal jayega ..kitna pyara aur apna tha Keshav.😉
And I enjoyed writing the sensitive parts.😃 Glad you loved it and thanks for appreciation.

With love-
Minu.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Wow really loved the concept please write in english badly want to read this..but I can't understand hindi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Investigation ho raha tha ki comedy 🤣

Bapre itna hass rahi thi na main 🤣
Jhoot pe jhoot kitna jhoot dadi 🤣
Ashutosh Babu toh aate hi cha gaye..
Sabka Dil pighal jata hai Sammy Ko dekh ke but ye dadi or somani hi dimag kharab karte hai 😵
Motherly love phoot phoot ke bahar aa raha hai
Sameer ne bas keshav Ko pita or marna tha use nhi toh fandom Ko dedeta 😆
Mr. Timetable Ko pole star ke bare me bolne ka kya zaroorat tha ye toh time table me nhi tha.🤣
Mujhe toh Sameer pe hi Shaq ho raha hai... Nhi toh fandom ne maara hai use 🤣
Please please please update soon. 😳
I can't wait to know who is real culprit... Please update soon.

Thank you Anmol for the appreciation.😃 Glad you had a good laugh.😃 To tumhe lagta hai Sameer hi apradhi hai.😉 Nahin to Ashu babu fandom mein interrogation kar lenge.😆 Would update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Are wah...Keshav ka murder ho Gaya ...
Fandom dil kush aur sameer bhi.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: angelic567

So hilarious 😆

Inspector showering love on sameer😆
All r in their characters... Rohan talking about timetable... Sameer proud of Nanu's upbringing.
Dadi and her imported talks😆
Inspector ne dadi ko sahi pehchana😆
Somani busy belittling sameer even in such a situation
What a scene... Too good yaar😆

Thank you so much Simi for the appreciation 😃 Glad you loved all of it.Inspector bada kaamal hai nahin? 😃 Somani ka kuch nahin ho sakta.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: smiley_lizi

Haha, Minu I can't stop laughing 🤣

Inspector Ashutosh's entry is the mast one.👏 In the entry scene he showed Somani his right place.
No friendship will work here. 👎🏼

Vishakha seems fishy here. Is she hiding something!

And evil dadi is still now showing swag, when her favorite naukaur is dead. 😲🤣
She should cry na!😭😆

And Sameer's answer, to what he is doing here! "Mein yahan interrogation ke liye baitha hun.''🤣

It was so nice to see Ashutosh getting emotional for Sameer. Inspector won our heart for that. 😛

How Ashutosh connected BP problem with Dadi. 🤣

Bholu Sameer cut his hand on the wrong time. Just right before servant's death. Now he is in danger. 😲

Somani did not miss to taunt Sameer even during inspection, "Dekha Inspector! Kabhi kisi chiz mein bhi iss ladke ka concentration nahin hai.Har jagah sirf apni man mani karta rehta hai.Bilkul bigad diya hai iske Nanaji ne ise. '' 🥱

And in the previous morning before death Sameer beat the servant well. Wow. He got his due from Sameer. 👏

And Ashutosh killed his Mamaji, reading this I laughed loud. 🤣
But then next line he did it in his mind only. We fans also killed the servant in mind 1000 times. 😃

Sameer didn't kill him only thinking about Nanaji. Aww, my boy respects Nanaji so much.⭐️

Fake Dadi was caught for her vas from Cannaught. 🤣

And Sameer got to know about his mother's secret lovely gesture for him now. 😛

Rohan the time-table boy could find time to listen to Sameer talking with stars. 😆
It felt nice to hear him talk at least in this story. Never heard him saying 'Sameer Bhaiya', it gave a good feeling. 😃

But he brought out Sameer's secret affair. 😲
But good that inspector didn't believe.

Why Somani wants to leave for office so soon!😲

Everyone is acting suspicious.

My doubt goes to Vishakha most. Did she kill or is she trying to save someone!🤪

Amazing first part. ⭐️

Waiting for next part.

OMG! Such a long comment 😃 Meri dil aur dimaag bilkul khush ho gaya.So according to you Visakha is under suspicion hmmm good guess 👏👏 Glad that you loved the update so much and enjoyed reading it.Thank you so much for the appreciation.😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: rose1000



Minu


had so much fun reading it yaar. Loved it.
Waise tell me what inspired you to think about the name Aashutosh Mitra? Was it Feluda character????

Update soon. 😊

Thank you Rose 😃 Ashutosh Mitra is one of characters in Byomkesh Bakshi. Have read Feluda since long time ago so don't remember much if Ashutosh Mitra was character in Feluda also or not.Would update soon.😃

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