Sameer-Naina FF: Kati Patang (Part-30 Updated)PG-134 Note on Pg.143

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#181

The innocence of the kids is their hallmark...that takes away all the pains and suffering from our hearts... same here with Nisha ... Sameer totally forgets himself when he is with her and Rishav... forgetting all his dark memories 😊

But Vishakha I tell you... she would never change.. . Even after so many years she is only after materialistic things... not caring for once about her son... hate her really😡

Their likings are very much similar... and I enjoy reading these cute moments between them 😃👏

Hope Naina is fine soon and the kite wish gets fulfilled very very soon... waiting to read about the flashbacks 😃

Thanks for the pm 😊

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#182

Was eagerly waiting for your update And now the suspense is even more!

Loved reading the kite and Aloo Paratha scene conversations between Sameer and Nisha. And happy to see that Naina is recovering.

Thanks for the PM.

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Mansi

@Vampire2468

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Posted: 7 years ago

#183

Super Duper update😳Loving how Nisha n Sameer are bonding❤️Can't wait for the next part

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#184

What a lovely piece you've written here Minu...👏 I felt so relieved seeing Naina is well now. You've connected the past n the present beautifully...n uhh Vishakha...she is the same as usual...how can parents be so uninvolved!!! The only disappointment was to hear the name of the other girl, Varsha. I don't know your storyline as yet, but looking forward to seeing all things paving the path for Sameer n Naina's reunion.

PS: Nisha n Sameer eating aloo paranthas was really cute n touched my heart. N I hope Sameer's I Love You kite reaches Naina soon.

Waiting for the next part already...keep me posted n keep writing!! 😊

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Sweetylina

@girlontrail

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Posted: 7 years ago

#185

I don't have words for this beautiful part.👏👏

Utterly beautiful...👏

Loved each and every line...

The Janus and fleeting emotions of Sameer.Well written.👏

As usual Sameer-Nisha part is my favourite.

And I was literally ROFL ON THIS LINE--''Nisha laughed.She never thought her Uncle would be a buddhu..''😆

Anyone can have a child and call themselves ''a parent''.A real parent is someone who puts their child above their own selfish needs and wants.

Vishakha don't deserved to be called a guardian let alone called a mother...

I can understand how Sameer must be feeling about this...🥺

Its the worst feeeling when your Mom doesn't talk to you and whenever talks ends up spilling the venom...😭😭😭

Leave that..

I don't have enough words to express... your one update makes my day.

Makes my otherwise chaotic mind,situations and day a better one.

Do keep writing like this.Please.

Eagerly waiting for your next update.

Do PM me.I don't have to say it though😉

Lots of hugs and kisses.❤️🤗

Love always and forever.😳😳

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 7 years ago

#186

I feel like putting punches here from WhatsApp

U know why

For stopping here...

Loved the part..

Beautifully written..

Please continue soon..

And a longer one the next time please...

Pata nahi iss forum pe sab itne chhote updates Kyun dete hai..

It is like u have just set in the mood and pace of the chapter and boom it gets over

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

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Posted: 7 years ago

#187

😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕

VARSHA!???? abbbe ye kaun hai!???

SAMEER I SWEAR TO GOD!!! Grrr

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surbharati

@surbharati

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Posted: 7 years ago

#188

You cant do this to us always...you stop on very crucial moment...
please update soon...eagerly waiting for the next part

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Shinynew

@Shinynew

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Posted: 7 years ago

#189

Whoosh !! I don't like cliffhanger😕. Another great chapter Minu Di ! I read the last two together that's why didn't felt the suspense of the second last one 😆 Nisha and Sameer are really compatible. If he his helping her, she is trying to make him close to his mother. Naina regained her concious. Yayy!! Aloo parantha is a parallel lead of the story😆. So Sameer was part of Naina's humiliation 😕 Confusion Alert! And who is this new girl ? Suspense se parda uthega agle update me, jo jaldi ayega 😆 Right Minu Di ?😛 Thanks for the update and pm.

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