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LoveMyself_sri

@LoveMyself_sri

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

PART FIVE

[LAST PART]
PM UPDATE

Awesome End :)

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lalibhaskar

@lalibhaskar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#272

Awesome update dear

Ishita is feeling guilty for not believing raman

Raman comforted her saying it was not her fault

So shagun has played her game to make ishra separate

As soon as raman spoke about their son ishita forgot everything

She was so happy, her dreams r going to be fulfilled

U have written the feeling of mother beautifully, a mother who thought her son is no more, cried for not able to hold him is now able to do that after a year fantastic

Finally raman did not let his love go away from him

Superb ending

Pls update love is beautiful

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#273

Awesome update
Loved it
The way ishita broke down
It was awesome Ishra ka baby ha
Definitely cute hoga 😳
She named him ansh
Flashback was also nice 👏
Thanks dear for sending me pm

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suhi.mahi

@suhi.mahi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#274

amazing story with beautiful ending ...

loved it ..

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#275

Last Part

An amazing part - I really loved it!!!

A beautiful ending!!!

Finally he told her everything and she was feeling so guilty for doubting him but he made her feel so good and both shared a beautiful hug!!!!

Their baby is still alive - Ashok and Shagun!!😡

They go to the hospital and Ishita just hugs the baby to her heart and Raman comes and all three have a family hug and they finally become a complete family!!!🤗

Such a sweet flashback - Ishita's reason for wanting a boy and naming him Ansh!!!

Raman is just so touched with the love Ishita has for him!!!❤️❤️

Harshada that was a fabulous story thank you so much and also thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!

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divz9769

@divz9769

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#276

last part was really nice raman is such a loving husband please come back soon will be waiting for u take care of urself

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: anisha960
res
unres
yipppeee me first

lovely update
finally everything got sorted
ishita was in guilt of not believing raman
but how nicely he makes her feel better
and thy met their son their ansh
fb was lovely
trio r adorable
shaggy is a bitch
thnx fr pm

ps - oh my what an idea
u pm the story in pm box only for those who comment
u r idea will be viral now
😆

Hey Anisha dear,
Thank you so much for reserving the first spot even before me sending out PMS.
Really feel so touched and humbled...
Glad you liked the update dear...
You are most welcome for PMS...

PS: 😆...I never wanted to do that but had had left with no other option... right from my first story...whenever I update, I get more than 400 views in 5 minutes of updating and no likes and comments...that's disappointing as a writer for me...
Ohh will it? 😆

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Mad4Divz

@Mad4Divz

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#278

superb update ishra scene was nice loved it finally dey got der son back ..lovely ending thanks4pm

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nizaha

@nizaha

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#279

a beautiful story :)

Edited by nizaha - 9 years ago

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lonelyyyy

@lonelyyyy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#280

LAST PART diii😭
HAPPY ENDING 😊
raman hug ishu to calm her how cute
ishu was in guilt she cant face rMan awww
ye bat toh clear h diii shaggy mata kbhi ni sudheregi
most luved part wen ishu was blabbering bout baby she was so happy bout baby lovely part
awww ishu hugged his baby assurimg herself
mihir is so nice guy
raman was so elated seeing his ishu n baby
n raman's promise aaye haye bnfa apne lafzon se hi mar dalega hme 😆
n ya WILL NEVER LET U GO mission is completed
n ya we also promise u di we will WILL NEVER LET U GO from IF 😆

it was beautuful story diii superb
Keep writing diii
come back soon wid one more beautiful story
Will wait for u

n i m sorry for late reply

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