ISHRA FF ~~TB ---- PART 8 on Page 40!!.... 15th January!! - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago


Yes...

Ishu is in pain... 😕

But she will get well soon.. . 😉
Edited by TamannaSethi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks dear Heemasomani 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
loved raman's concern and care for ishita 😳
hope ishita will be fine soon
thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10

nice update
loved raman's concern and care for ishita 😳
hope ishita will be fine soon
thanks for pm😊


Thanks dear Rufana 😳

Yup dear... She will get fine soon... 😊

You're welcome for the pm😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully written and excellent story please continue l cannot wait for the next update! Love the way Raman is taking care of Ishita
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nafnaf

Beautifully written and excellent story please continue l cannot wait for the next update! Love the way Raman is taking care of Ishita


Thanks a lot dear Nafnaf 😳(I guess... Don't know your name)

Will continue soon dear... But I can't promise you the dates of upates...

Will try to post it mostly by next week... Now a days I am busy with the Editing and Translation of SIABW...

Hope you will understand...

Will try to post soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello Friends!!!!

I am again back with the Part 5 of TB by AMBREEN...

As you all know I am posting on her behalf as she doesn't uses IF...

And about SIABW FF... It will mostly be updated by next week...

Now... Enough of blabbering...

Part 5 of TB will be updated on the same page 23 by tonight+ pm will be sent...

Do read it...

Like it...

and...

Give your valuable comments.

Thanks,

TamannaSethi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey Friends!!

Hope you all remember me... I am again here to post a part written by my dearest friend AMBREEN... I am posting it as she doesn't uses IF...

NOTE:----

I have tried to do some editing... As some the readers have asked me to translate the dialogues in English..

As she writes with mix language dialogues... So the translation and some editing is done me.. And rest actual story is written by AMBREEN...


PART 5------


After coming home Raman and Ishita had their dinner in their room...After dinner Ishita changes into her nightwear and goes back to her room she sees Raman by the window staring at the sky ...she goes and stands next to him...


Ishita- kya dekh rahe ho Raman?

[What are you looking at Raman?]


Raman- kuch nahi bas yeh kaali raat ko


[Nothing I am just looking at this dark night]

Ishita- hmmm...


Raman- woh dekho toot tha hua tara!!


[Look there, shooting star!!]


Ishita- haan toh ?


[Yes, so?]


Raman- chalo ek wish mangte hai!!


[Come lets make a wish!!]


Both of them close their eyes...


Raman's wish- mein hamesha meri jhansi ki rani ke saath rehna chahta hoon please usse door math karo...


[I always want to live my life with my Jhansi ki Rani,Please don't make her away from me...]


Ishita's wish- mein jitne bhi din jeeun mein har pal apne ravan kumar pati ke saath jeena chahti hoon..


[Whatever days I live, I just want to live every bit of it with my husband Ravan Kumar...]


They both open their eyes...


Raman asks Ishita to sleep on the bed.

Ishita- Raman meine kaha na ki mein patient ki tarah feel nahi karna chahti...


[Raman, I said na I don't want to feel as a patient...]


Raman- acha patient ki tarah nahi biwi ki tarah to so sakti ho na?


[Ok, not like patient but you can sleep like a wife na?]


Ishita- Matlab?


[Means?]


Raman-(he comes really close to her)...matlab yeh ki aaj mein apni biwi ke sath sona chahta hoon...


[Means I want to sleep with my wife...]


Ishita blushes and nods her head..


Ishita takes a story book and sits in the bed... Raman changes his clothes and comes to the room he starts keeping the files in the shelf,he takes all the clothes lying around and keeps it in the cupboard... Ishita notices all this this and her heart sinks...


Ishita- apne aap ko train kar rahe ho ki mere jaane ke baad kaise rhoge?


[Are you training yourself to live when I will go?]


Raman- kahan jaane ke baad?


[After going where?]

Ishita- jab mein mar...


[When I will die...]


She couldn't complete her sentence... But was cut off by Raman..

Raman- agar phir ek baar aise bakwas ki na toh mein amma ko sab kuch bata doonga...


[Once again you say these rubbish words na I will tell Amma everything...]


ishita-nahi nahi nahi...amma ko kuch nahi pata chalna chahiye...


[No, No, No... Don't tell Amma anything, she can't let know everything...]


Raman- then chup chaap book band kar kar so jao...doctor ne kaha ki no stress go to sleep..


[Then be quiet, close the book and sleep... Doctor has also said not to take stress... Go to sleep...]


Ishita- doctors kuch bhi kehte hai...sab jhoot hota hai..


[Doctors say anything... All are just lies..]

Raman-matlab tum bhi jhoot bolti ho?


[It means you also say lie?]


(he sits next to her)


Ishita- mein jhooth nahi bolti hoon ...mein dentist hoon doctor thodi na!!


[I don't say lie... I am a dentist not a doctor!!]


Both of them start laughing (Raman always joked and now Ishita has become Raman)

Raman kisses her forehead immediately they both stop laughing it was a lil serious kiss!!


Ishita- ahm...acha raman kal mujhe aap nahin roko ge ...kuch nahi kahoge...


[Listen Raman tomorrow you will not stop me for working... You will also not say anything...]


Raman- kyun kal kya hai?


[Why, what is tomorrow?]


Ishita- kal amma ka bday hai I want to make it special har saal ki tarah...


[Tomorrow is Amma's birthday and I want to make it special as always...]

Raman- tum kaam nahi karogi...bilkul nahin...I will do the work...kal tum commands dogi...


[No you will work... No, never... I will do the work... Tomorrow you will give commands...]


Ishita smirks- toh matlab aap mere ishaaron par chalo ge?


[So it means you will move on my instructions?]


Raman- jab se tumse shaadi ki hai ...tab se koi aur option hai?


[Since the day I have married you.. Do I have any other option?]


They both smile and Ishita goes to sleep...they face opposite side not looking at each other both of them smile...they are sooo in love ...but the TB is the only gap between them but Raman has full confidence in his love ...they both fall asleep...

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Sorry for the errors and mistakes... I have tried to edit as much as I could... Still there might be some errors...

Hope you all will read it...

Do like and give your valuable comments..

BUDDY ME FOR THE PMS.

Thanks,

TamannaSethi
(Ambreen's Story)
Edited by TamannaSethi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
first to like, first to comment😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
itna chhota update!
ambreen se bolo thodi aur mehnat kare😉😆

cute update! jyada kuch bolne ko hai hi nahi.. filler update lag raha hai 😛

abb ishita ke isharo pe naache hue raman ko dekhna... too much fun😆

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