FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Love it Vee. I love the way you expressed their thoughts- really reflective of their initial conversation about love. And I am really glad about her- she acknowledges her vulnerability but at the same time she still has her limits and will not settle. Can't wait to see all the fun to be had before they finally come together...as always, I can't wait for the next part. A great piece of ISHRA fiction,as always. 👏

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#372

I loved how Ishita maintained her dignity with Raman. She knows she loves him and he loves her but till he admits his feelings, she has to keep her self-respect in check. And in actual reality, maybe her indifference is the thing that will bring Raman closer to her.

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sireesha76

@sireesha76

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#373

awesome update

thanks for the pm

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

Such an amazing update can be given only by u...

Awesome and fabulous..

It was really brilliant..

The way u showed the emotions of both Ishra was truly amazing...👏👏

Eagerly waiting for next update...😊😊

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

oh god! this is too beautiful dear
loved every single bit
brilliantly description of their emotions
perhaps ishita's cool attitude will make raman realise his mistake, give him and her a chance n bring himself closer to her...

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#376

Thanks again for all the comments guys. Not sure if I can update today, but will try. Need to give Doc and Krishy reading for their study break 😆 😆

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#377

Great update...I love Ishita's grace and dignity...and her not groveling for his attention or his realization. And Puttar...what to say...he lost it when she mentioned marriage to someone else...he felt the need to mark her as his again!!! Hoping Putter gets it together soon...😛

Thanks for a quick update!!

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#378

*sighs in resignation*

It's not that I was expecting things to get more hot and heavy so soon, but still...

One step forward and 10 steps back.

But they communicated in the best way they should, by sharing their painful past, especially Raman. Therefore, it is quite expected that he would build-up his walls again because he feels so vulnerable. You actually showed how well Ishita knows him since she left him to realize his own feelings rather than try to gain his attention forcefully!

Wonderful! 👏

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: Veeann
Hi guys. Thanks again for the wonderful comments. Sorry for leaving it at the juncture I did, but while I find it fun to write about sexual tension and build up, I'm afraid writing about the actual physical deed isn't quite as easy, since I have a very satvik soul and I can't write "mature" very well. Ends up sounding very mechanical. 😆 😆
But will update soon, today or tomorrow, promise.

Thanks again

Vee, many a times, it's not the actual deed, but the build-up that is more exotic and sensual! While I wouldn't necessarily say I'm tamasik, but I've read my share and let me tell you, your writing is beautiful and I truly enjoyed the beautiful description you gave. It's more than enough for me to imagine it myself. Thank you! 😊

Besides, my annoyance was with the length and the point at with you stopped! ^___^;; ECoD as it were, but that annoyance comes with being a reader that's been pulled into a story and doesn't want it to end! 😳

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Great update...I love Ishita's grace and dignity...and her not groveling for his attention or his realization. And Puttar...what to say...he lost it when she mentioned marriage to someone else...he felt the need to mark her as his again!!! Hoping Putter gets it together soon...😛

Thanks for a quick update!!

Nargis, I totally agree with you! It was a pleasure to read Ishita's actions! She maintained her grace, dignity and self-respect while also understanding Raman's dilemma and respecting his actions and feelings!

The ball's in his court now, so whatever action he takes, it's his own and he can't hold anyone else responsible for it but himself and neither can he blame anyone else for it if it doesn't workout but himself!