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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: RomComFan
OMG! You added another part!🥳

Kiara... i looove you! Thanks for being the push and Aaminah, girl this is terrific!🤗

Love how beautifully normal their interaction is in the morning... and that you still got in the green towels. 😆

Love the inclusion of Subbu in a understandable, somewhat sympathetic, nostalgic natural way.

Love Raman's subtle RKB dig... the man is just perfect, non?

Love the 'back pain' jokes because... of course.. with them... of course!😆

What more can I say to you my dear...?

Looking forward to whenever you next post, I am so a member of your fan club- you know that!😉

PS: Three shot request above... YES PLEASE!😉

Thank you!

*curtsy*

Request accepted Anu, how can I refuse my lovelies?!

Aj bata he do what do you do? This obsession with colors

A fanclub of my own! (Mummy see I'm getting famous)

Haha the GIF. Awesome!

P. S I have been looking forward to your comments lately.

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: aaminah123

[YOUTUBE]www.youtube.com/watch?v=2xB9j3h1JKo[/YOUTUBE]

It sounds promising. Can't watch it though. JF. Yes. I agree. Love. The music.

Subbu. Out of ideas. Seriously. I planned a "Why him?" conversation with Ishita and Subbu for the Adi OS. Not gonna pulling up anytime scene. You can do that. But I love the way your words flow.

You don't need words to explain. Your writing does it for you. The flow and the way you paint it out. It's B E A U T I F U L!!!!! YOU SHOULD KNOW THAT BY NOW.

Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: aaminah123

And I give in because you guys are awesome :)

But I love you J.

I love you more.

ND EVERYONE WAITS FOR ANU'S COMMENTS. BAS.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
Ammu you're back with a bang

What a smashing hot and romantic TS. From your recent works this has to be the boldest piece (not complaining).

The first part took me by surprise when from an insecure Ishita and jealous Raman we got an IshRalicious moment. It was perfect se bhi better to clear whatever doubts they had.

The morning after couldn't have been better with another round of *ahem, ahem* (I know I'm shameless 😆).

I wouldn't mind if Subbu got to know what happened between IshRa.. That would burn him more. After this Shagun/Adi track I surely want Subbu back in the picture for him to know what Ishita gained when he left her.

TS stands for Three Shots, right?

As always your writing is way too ahead as the show

Never thought I would end up writing such a fiction but this show and its bsession make me do it.

TS= three shots in this one. You are all too sweet with your words of praise and there is something about my loyal readers that's I can't refuse.

Thank you!

@ Bold- Haha not a bad idea!

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: nrn1486
Aamna, you updated..Loved it.. 😊
and wow, such a romantic part😳

Especially loved the way Raman shooed off Subbu.. The guy so needs a taste of his own medicine😃

Please continue this, if possible, Aamna. Would love to read more😊

Thank you neethi!

Request for another shot means I haven't disappointed. Phew. Glad to know that :)

P. S next update shall be up soon. Insha Allah.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: rutu83

I'm Rutu ;)

Amna continue soon please. M not saying I loved it till then :p

Aye. Aye.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: remya1990
Aaminah, wonderful update.
The language of yours aminah...brilliant.
Loved it.
If possible, please continue. Will love to read the rest.
Please pm me when you write.

Thank you!

I don't send pm. I just don't. I know I should be nice and agree but I cant seem to remember to pm after I update.

I have just agreed to update this one with another shot so there you go.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Enough for the day. * wipes away happy tears*
You seriously do flatter me.

If you don't give me ideas I'll include shagun in the next one. Hah.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Thank you!

*curtsy*

Request accepted Anu, how can I refuse my lovelies?!

Aj bata he do what do you do? This obsession with colors

A fanclub of my own! (Mummy see I'm getting famous)

Haha the GIF. Awesome!

P. S I have been looking forward to your comments lately.

😊 Ofcourse you have a fan club... any doubt about that.

I'm a trainee lawyer- nothing to do with anything creative or colorful or romantic.. maybe that's why I look to get all my fill of that via YHM/ISHRA ... not quite working working with what I see on screen these days but my FFs and favorite posters keep that spirit alive!😃

... but hey my job certainly calls for an attention to details which might explain things a bit!😉

What do you do ? Are you in medicine too?

Anyway... do you know how had it is to stalk you and Kiara? You girls post and I have to go on some fact finding mission to find it... I don't mind only

Glad you appreciate my unfiltered talk!😃

So looking forward to your update!🥳
..sorry in a GIF.y mood this weekend... so you all will have to indulge me!😳

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Ooh. That would be good.

Picture this. Meherbaan stuff.

Raman with his arm around Ishita. And Ishita with hers around his waist. As they discuss something animatedly. And he pecks her on her cheek as they walk by. And she places a chaste peck on his lip.

Or this one.

It night, and Mihir and Mihika walk in on Raman and Ishita. And they're kissing. Like lip lock. Happy giggling kissing. The more of a fun make out and less cray I want to tear you apart one. And Mihika and Mihir try total to them. And Ishita gives the Shagun ke shaadi wala glare "of Mihir go na" whisper and Raman smirks. Ishita ais still in his arms. And Mihika gives this punny comment of something along the lines of I'm scared of a punny Sex innuendo. And Subbu is there.

Don't know if this will fit. It's more of the Meherbaan ka dynamics.

Or you can have a bed room scene with Raman still in sheets and Ishita comes out on the shower. And Subbu is sent to call them for dinner. Or vice versa.