From Yellow Pages of An Old Classic! OS Completed!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: luks28

Crisp & brilliant 👏
Just loved it

Originally posted by: aarohi26

its really good to c u here. it is a such a lovely os priya. so how r u nd ur health?? get well soonagain nd take care.

Originally posted by: swathin

Superb update dear
The story d emotions it carry
Was awesome
Tk care

Originally posted by: pri12

awsome...how r u feeling now?

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Hey priya.. I hope u r doing well after the surgery. Since u mentioned that u cant see the screen.. I m guessing it has something to do with ur eyes. Plz take ample rest..we all miss u here n ur stories too...n this was brilliant as well..so subtle n sombre.

Plz plz take rest n then come back with more awesome stories. But first is health. Take care of urself.

Shalini

Originally posted by: arnavkidevani

Hi Priya

I hope you are feeling better and pray you get well soon!😊

What a superb story You have written! Simply amazing!

The emotions, anguish and longing were so palpable! WELL DONE👏

Simply fantastic! If you can please please please continue this story.

Take care

Originally posted by: btalwar

Hey Priya

To begin with, I get to know from reviews that you underwent a surgery. So, please take care and get well soon.

Now on to the story. Wonderful is the word. Loved the fact that you did not make it a happy ending, cliche, fairy tale for some stories are best left incomplete.

We may not be life partners but we are soulmates ☺️. For me this line beats the most mature OS in this forum. This is a turn on in itself cause it simply beautiful beyond words.
Any person's dream is to find his/her soulmate and they found it in each other.

Loved the conflicting emotions and I could actually visualize the scene in front of me.

Loved your work.

Cheers

Bhanu.