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rhearuhi

@rhearuhi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Brilliant ...had been waiting for ur update

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#342

LoL it was awesome.bichara raman n n phele baar ravan kumar can't ans.I cud really imagine his reaction.

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.Username.

@.Username.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Such an amazing OS. I loved reading about a jealous Raman. I think KP will do a great job as a jealous man, if given a chance. Plus it would be a treat to watch 😃

Just love the way you write. Fantabolous <333333

--EDIT--

Just realized that I commented on OS#1. Will comment on the most recent one 😛

Edited by .Username. - 11 years ago

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.Username.

@.Username.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

🤣 🤣 🤣

You, my friend, made my day. Seriously 🤣 I am laughing my butt of. Bechara Raman being restricted form Ishu's love 🤣

I am so proud of Vandu and Mihi of being the BEST saalis 🤣 *wipes a proud tear*

Where did you come up with this idea?

I love the way you write. AMAZINGGG

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Very well written Lucky...

You expressed well what a woman expects and what a man expects...

Loved this stage of their relationship...looking fwd to next part...

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ZaaraBB

@ZaaraBB

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

great..that was such a good one..please update one..i will have some mental piece atleast..this update such cooled me down and took away 90% of my overworked feeling. .thanks a lot Lucky

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Unres:

You are worst than me Lucky ji. How cruel to make my Raman pining for his wife and upar se such acute embarrassment!!
I can visualize that Firebrand Mihika playing such a prank!😆
Awesome OS.

Edited by omshreejaanu - 11 years ago

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Ananya05

@Ananya05

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

🤣 🤣 Aww...poor poor Raman 🥺 kitna bada popat hogaya 😆

Very well written 👏

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modernfamily

@modernfamily

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#349

The first thing I read in the morning is your OS. I was so excited right from the beginning, thanks to you for stopping at the most inappropriate scene in the last one. My excitement didn't fizzle out throughout. In fact, it has doubled by the end. How do you manage to do this Lucky?? They didn't even touch each other the whole time yet I had goosebumps. I wanted to throttle Somya chitti for stopping Ishita😡. I want them to be exactly the way you've described, saying "I love you" or being lovey dovey is just not Ishra. Please send this to the Balaji office, this is so perfect. The best I've ever read.

I love it how you incorporate the family scenes in the story so wonderfully. Those little little details add flavour to the story.

Don't, please don't, take longer than a day for the next one. And it better not be a teaser.