Ehsaas Track: Collection of 10 OSes

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

oh my Lucky this is sooo awesome 👏

loved it so much that i already read it thrice nd gonna read few more times for sure😳

awww Ishu trying him confess his feelings...

nd jhalla avoiding her 😆

they really do need more roller coaster rides 😆

superb ending, finally she done it..

and he too

nd Romi helped her... great...

hope to see devar-bhabhi bonding in show too...

once again Lucky superbbb work👍🏼👏

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#262

finally got anothr part from you..it ws mind blowing..plz upd8 sooner ")

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

As they say, jealousy is always the best plan to get someone to reveal their true feelings and this applied to Raman as well. Loved the kiss in the end and LOL on Ishita promising Romi a new bike just to be a part of her plan.

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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

I plan to give reviews on all 6 one shots, so haven't edited//

But had to comment, I love the OS collection, has a fab continuity, srsly, I lve the titles, quotes, song selection, you wrte just amazingly, every minute detail/

7th OS:

Ishra r perfect takkar, like the line Raman said to roller coaster, totally wow//, and the chance he took, banda humesha chakka marta hai, ya no runs//

I just loved the way Ishita too had feelings for him, shared it with her sisters, then unki advice//

I liked Mihika's plan actually, it helped too in some ways/ and poor ishita, totally gave up, ki he did it just like that.

Loved feelings Raman went thru, was a war for him/// to control his feeling, and to give in, very beautifully and minutely described.

Mihir also actaully helped in ishita's plan unknowingly, lol..cos if he didn't tell, raman wud b back to ceo mode, he was actually right/

Ishita ka masterplan was intresting, I would say, specially the phone, and she knows well he is posessive, and it worked, superb, and loved the desc of 2nd kiss, very beautifully written, of a belonging, that only he owned her, she was just his!!

Finally they both know and scores r equal, great one//

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Neha

@Neha07

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

I am not sure about others but it was quite cheesy for me😳. Thaaank God you are back. I was missing your OS sooo darn badly would check everyday to see whether you have updated this thread or not!!!

In love with your OS.Now that IshRa have disclosed their feelings what's next??

I am wondering and waiting eagerly 4 d next update.

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: shaayne
Aww this was too cute.. Ishita is learning from her Ravaan Kumar :)

Thank you Shaayne :)

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: jojo1986
Loved it

Thanks Jojo 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: PreciousPri
Beautiful Lucky!! Loved this OS !! And the kiss ... Ishita is surely a mastermind too 😉

Thanks Pri 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: yhmfever
At the end all i could say was awnnn
It was really good
Raman getting jealous !!
Loved it !!
Looking foward for the next part

Thanks for your comments 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: sai14
Lucky!! This is amazing!! Ishita surprised me.. I was not expecting that from her.. I love the jealous Raman and the way he kissed her in the end. very possessive 😳

am glad you liked it Sai 😊