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first things first YAY you updated! 😃🥳
I was this close to pming you for a new one 😆😆 and instead I see a pm from you about this 😛
Sorry for not editing earlier you saw my Ramayana it drained me 😆😆
Now coming to business, I think I might as well make it a standard signature line when it comes to these Ehsaas fics of yours - this was so beautiful and cute Lucky 😃, seriously I cant decide which to pick as the best one among the 7 so far and with the increase in count I am sure I'll be all the more conflicted but I have just one response for that- game on 😎
And this was a sequel to no 6 so double yay 🥳
Poor Ishu I could literally feel for her, but I enjoyed her Raavan' dilemma a hundred times over in this one 😆
this part made me choke on my water😆😆 talk about foolproof ideas - he was scared shitless of being slapped but worse rejected or rebuffed by her
He had been so scared to approach her earlier that her scared state seemed like the logical time to make his advances. At least she couldn't slap him when she was holding on to him on the roller coaster.
And after this I literally was laughing
For the first week or so, he just hid from her, because he was sure she would either slap him or lecture him. She would explain to him the morality of intimacy, and question his sense in behaving like a teenager in a public place. He did what he could to escape her wrath.
Somehow I can so see Raman doing this, its a very possible reaction from his character- hiding after putting himself out there. He wants to hold onto to the hope she may say things only because she felt the place was inappropriate but is scared of her reaction towards the action too.
And then Mihika, oh I love how you have maintained her in character too, I tell ya she is a spunky one, and this so goes well with her, asking Ishu to seduce he r hubby by going for a makeover 😆 (something which I wont mind seeing on screen as well -god I hope they have a makeover for her sometime soon, the saris are def getting less gaudy but still I want a better look for Divz/Ishu)
And when all else fails who better than the green-eyed monster to step in 😈 and boy did it ever, Poor Raman and his attempts to check her phone 😆 - he finally had to give in, poor CEO never got a chance at besting his wife - takkkar ki jo hai 😆😆
At last he had to step up and let his guard down and what better way than a kiss - I could think of this particular quote that when I read this
"The mouth is made for communication, and nothing is more articulate than a kiss."
Jarod Kintz, It Occurred to Me
And I could so imagine his surprised reaction by Romi' mention post the kiss, literally a bouncer for him over there. Keep em coming Lucky 😃
Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago
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