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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

mainnn! 😃

I'LL BRB SOONER THAN YOU EXPECT! PROMISE! 😛

HOLAAA! 😃

Im back, so i had to catch up from Ek meetha marz and BOY! Was it a treat or what last night! ❤️

firstly, i know i havent had the time to comment, really sorry, but trust me, the first part aaah SUBBUU! ❤️ i think i did comment on that? lol and then the "Aaj Rapat Jaye" OH GODDD! <3 <3 It was soo goood! Gosh! but Ek meetha Marz was so so so cute man! Gosh! Ive always wanted to see aisa helpless vulnerable Raman... for ishita, LOL hes such a mess without her! 😆 and then both of their inner thoughts... their perspectives... TOO GOOD! 👏

Awww they hugged, Raman is such a cutie. LOL i wish you'd have continued from there :( but ALAS! the latest part... im so so glad, thank youu so much for dedicating such a wonderful part to me! 😳 ILOVEYOU! 🤗 this was such a fun-filled part. ISHITA KNEW SID... A JEALOUS RAMAN. AAAHHH! THE FEEELS! LOLOLOL too good... i dont really know what Tamil/Mallu song that is, but Zehnaseeb! ❤️ AAH! <3 This was a really beautiful part! <3 & Raman Ishita's nok-jhoks and everything... LOL they were IN-CHARACTER yaar! theyre so the real IshRa from the show!

hehehe Raman is defo Dhakkan but Chaalu, makes her sleep on the bed 😳 and the ending was PERFFF! ❤️ Pillows can go to hell! :D

Continue ASAP! 🤗

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Updated my post on pg 21 re: the last OS😳

And now i have to say my timing is impeccable tonight😆 because I can comment on what you have just posted too!

This was so fun to read! weird analogy I know but I felt i was literally on a school trip reading this- so fun and jovial. At the same time you still had those little nuances which run throughout your work- I love the continuity of it and attention to detail. Particularly in relation to Raman. You write him so incredibly well, I wish you were writing the screenplay for yhm!! I can totally imagine KP bringing to life your words, because there is such 'jaan' in your dialogue for him.

Loved how you used the pillow as a metaphor and the progression that it conveys too😊

Big hug for you Lucky🤗

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

omg omggg this ws EPIC..loved loved it...u knw the way Ishu reacted for Rajni sir movie is hw i do for SRK,Sid film in theatres..!!

n omg u made Sid-Ishu knw each other before?BRILLIANT..!! LOVED jealousy ki aag mein jala hua RKB..!!

endin ws cute..!

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

oh mi GOD! Rajni's movie opening!!

I need to calm my nerves down... will be back in a few :D

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Great update Laxmi Di!Thanks for pm!Loved RKB's one liners so much!Aww!RKB was watching His JKR instead of the movie!Raman told Ishita to sleep on the bed wid Him & a pillow between dem!Ishra slept hugging the pillow!Ishita wore Anarkali to look different fr Raman!Raman jealous of Sid!Did Ishra sleep hugging each other that ni8?Waiting for next!Pls continue soon!

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

loved it..plz upd8 soonr :)

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sunny303

@sunny303

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

loooved it!!! love these two.

P.S...Sid

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@Ribelle

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

That was fantastic! I didn't know you'd updated already. Just read the previous one yesterday. Not that I'm complaining. You know what I love about your writing? It is descriptive of even the smallest of details and is rooted in each day as it comes.

The movie drama was fun! The gutter minded-me still desires more IshRa(you know what I mean; just letting you know😆)

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

LUCKYYY THIS WAS YOUR BEST STORY YET! <333 LOVED this OS! :D And the fact that you incorporated the Rajnikant element AND Siddharth Malhotra! aaah brilliant! :D :D <333 I'm going to say this again but you write beautiful realistic situations I can imagine ALL the scenes! :) Lovely update.. can't wait to read the next one! :)