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Nehageet.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Beautiful Update Radha Dear 👍🏼

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NONIE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Awesome Chapter Radhikerani😃

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Sadhana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Awesome update Pro

I am feeling really bad for Veer

Why did his father abandon him

You made me so interested in this

Update soon please

Thank you for the PM

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subhadra14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Wow! This story will make me a compelled reader of itself!

Juz gonna say 1 thing...

UPDATE!!!

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Jayeeta Paul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...poor Veer......his father has been abandoned...😲...he is an adopted son of the king...🤔...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

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ThePirateKing

@ThePirateKing

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Nice one!!! You really write very well!!! Waiting for further updates

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: --GOLD--
Loved it Radhika 😊

Thank you!

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: .Enchantress.
Beautiful Update Pro. Love The Language and the Details! ❤️ Thanx fr pm! Update Soon..

Thank you so much Shanayadi!

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
nice one proteeti..u write very well!! the plight of the young man veer and the wolrd around little veer was written so well..r they same ??
so lovely update😳

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. But no, there are two boys who share the name.