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Posted: 6 years ago
#61

Benevolence – Big Heart – a mini bonus

(a mini bonus- why….. I did not realize but a little tweetheart told me Di you always end your stories with Ragkor blissfullness,completing with happy family moments but why not this time… Well I did message her saying, I waited but fell asleep, as they had their own minds, but hmm a happy family together yes I too love them so thought to pen a little one. I was overwhelmed when she said Di with happy family we also happily relish and wait till you write next. Well about writing next I don’t know but thought a mini one)

Here we go

Daaba ka Jilebi with Hawt milk smiley2 (a mini tantantaan)

After the loooong love making of sipping and enjoying the whiskey the stirrer and the whiskey ooppppsssss RagKor slept in each others embrace…. It was a long night with lust taking over and making over their longingness….

She got up to wash herself when she looked around but could not find her robe, she smiled thinking of the blissful night and remembered she was in the lehenga which was strewn somewhere in the corner of the room. She was lazy to take the robe from the cupboard that she wore his sheer shirt which was thrown on the side table. She loves his shirt and wearing it after he wearing was making her blush as his fragrance was there. She looked at him,eyes closed legs straight turned to her side.. He looked so contended as it was a blissful night well from night into the wee hours of the day!!! She carelessy buttoned the sheer shirt and washed herself and came back to get into the quilt as his hands were searching for her with his eyes closed. She smiled.

Just the shirt and she went into him under the quilt, he hugged her close saying I Love You my Queen, don’t leave me and go with his eyes closed in to her ears and slept.

It was around the dawn that he got up and not to disturb her went to refresh, searched for his shirt but could not find it, just wrapped his towel refreshed and came into the quilt to continue his sleep.

He lifted the quilt to go in only to get mezmerised at the painting there on the bed with her hair splayed across her face, lips swollen terribly but parted with his sheer shirt just with one button up, only up to her thighs, her right leg was straight while her left was bent…little wide...her right hand above her head, her assets were revealing under the sheer with partly opened. He had seen her plain but seeing her in the sheer which was covered but still not was just igniting his natural instinct…. She was breathing beautifully…. He was lost in that painting beside which was just bare below his shirt….

He did not want to trouble as he had indeed turned her according to his wants through the night…… he just lost himself in the beauty which was extremely seductive… just drinking her beauty his naughty had his own mind and was throbbing, his towel slid down and he very slowly went in beside her, slowly laid beside her and was just looking at her, slowly kissed her lips not to disturb as he felt he would hurt her….

A very soft butterfly kiss but his breath on her made her wake up with a smile to see the handsome face just a mm away from her….his eyes was just loving her, just admiring her. He just said I love you…. She smiled and bringing her right hand around his neck, said whaatttt??? He said you look too sexy baby in my sheer shirt…blushing, she said I love your shirt… a light peck on his lips.

He just cupped her face and placed soft kisses just saying non stop I love you dear, I just love you, love you… continuously… kissed her all over her face just softly saying I love you. She was surprised and at the same time he was beside her but she felt he had aroused and hardened and grown fully which was throbbing side of her thighs. He was very carefully kissing her rose bud….. was scared to even turn and hug her tight as felt he would hurt her.

She held his head… Raaghav I love you… why are you holding yourself…. He said sorry I just cannot hurt….. when she just went over him kissing him hard on his lips….. I am yours anytime and you are not hurting me she said. She just caressed his length and pushed herself beautifully on him, her wetness and moist made him slid through throbbing her walls and he moaned terribly which she was proud of … it was pure bliss and pleasure… Chaakooorrr, you must be tired he said but was going into the pleasure she brought about….She was slowly going on him with the rhythm which was making him go eclectic and she was too going into bliss into the unknown world of pleasure… he held her waist and slowly got up thus adjusting and making her sit on him hugging her and kissing her lips….. She kissed him while her hair was fully playing the seductive vibes on him. He did not touch any of her but was just kissing her lips and her neck as he saw his love bites on her assets and did not want to do more…..

She realized, felt proud of her man who was fully aroused,lusting but still was going soft on her, she asked him cupping his face, without slowing or breaking the rhythm… how do I look holding his head… he said, sexxxyy, seductive….too hawt anddddd and whattt …. Too horny baby in the sheer shirt…. Smiling at her… I love you he said… she said no you are not,he shrunk his brows you are not loving me as you always do she said… he smiled… sexxxyyyyy birdie…. He just unbuttoned her and took the toned assets fully into his mouth and caressed and kissed softly.. and very softly held the other… she moaned….. hmmmmm yessss now you do she moaned.. he brought her down preciously, not breaking the rhythm and reached for his packet as he knew he was way too powerful and did not want to risk nor make her go through more pain.

He throbbed with force, rammed into her with slow pace and very smoothingly as she was way too wet and moist…. She was going into reviere…. They both sublimed in the bliss made love in the most beautiful way and entered into the peak of pleasure calling each others name… that was bliss….

He came down on her side, turned and just cuddled her with him still within her.. I love you, both voiced together… sweetheart, sexybirdie thank you he said… she chupped him in her way…. He smiled softly sucking her…

Garlanding him she went near his ears and asked Rustic Rowdy what’s this….. He said wee hours daaba ka jilebi with hawt milk, kissing her lips and her assets and thank you cupping her face with so much adoration and love. Ohhh buts that squuusshy jilabi my hawt Rustic Rowdy aahaaan my Sexy birdie… She just went into him while he squeezed into her till his naughty calmed down… They were in each other’s arms, sleep taking over…….

It does not require always an elaborate foreplay to infuse in each other as all it need is love pure love for they did not have s** but they made love in the most passionate way.… his love is unadulterated and her love for him is just un-explainable… she vowed within her heart not to deny herself to him any time.

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It was bright…. Crushing her eyes she woke looking up to the last night bar tender turned into a steward holding fresh juice and toast in a tray..smiling.. good afternoon wifey. Whaaaat ???? afternoon? The kids?, quickly covering herself….. have they come? Did they come here while I was sleeping… holding tight the quilt as she was cursing herself to sleep like a log that too with the sheer shirt??? God!!!

Why didn’t you wake me? Did the kids have anything…. Started off the Air…. Arey arey, you never stop till I ….he chupped her in his style…. Hmmmbuddaawhatareyoudoing. She pushed him uhhhh gasping… Raaghav,,,

Arey calm down… the kids will come only post noon after finishing their lunch. And mausi will come by evening.

She held her head, thank god, but how? Kaaka said he will bring them in the early morning…. He smiled winking…. Rowdy so you planned it…. Not realizing coming off the quilt and hitting him with the pillow. Pulling her close…pushing her strands…well I need my shirt now can you please…. or should I remove...Realizing her state she said…..pushing him… budda I will kill you if you come near me, covered herself with the quilt and ran to the wash…. Hey hey SB have your bfast. Smiling…. He received a message from Kaaka…. Please come to the Lodge with bitiya, kids are here he said.

Lodge?? Hmm ok… maybe Kaaka took them to the Lodge in the morning to his suite as it is very well refurbished and at its best with the open terrace view to the whole city being on the top most floor.

Chakooor,,,,, haaan coming….. Kaaka asked us to come to the Lodge. Kids are there… come… can’t wait to see them he said. Lodge???? ok

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Benevolance – Big Heart…

The Lodge, the abode of him when he missed and wanted his moments or when he had those drinks very rarely just to be with her memories…..But now the top floor has been very very modernized with private lift and open terrace view seeing the plantation along with the rows of the yellow bougainvillea.

Kaaka stayed in the plantation but goes to the Lodge during the weekends or sometimes with the kids after going around the city.

RagKor went to the top floor, daddyyyyyyy mummmaaaa ran the kids to the Lion…and eagle… hugging them my cubs, my princesses…. Muaaahhhhh they laughed giggling…getting on to his shoulders while the cubs were hugging him. They closed his eyes suddenly with a cloth…..dadddyyyyy…. Surprise they said… arey what….. both the cubs held his hands while Chakor was holding the roses….looking at her... Mumma shhhhh both cuties placing their tiny fingers on their lips, with eyes wide open… surprise…. Hehe he he

Where are you taking me he asked. Daddy wait…. They took him to the terrace….opened his eyes… tat ta taaaiiiin. Dadddyyyyyyy Surpriseeeee……

His eyes grew wide open in surprise….. tears rolling down incessantly…..he just fell on his knees hugging the cubs. The roses ran as the bros called them and hugged their Lion together all with their hands joined together. Chakor was in awe stood away allowing them to bind in their emotions.

Thank you…. Thank you kissing them he said…. He heard clapssss, turned back to see Girija Mausi, Raamu kaaka, Shyaam there behind along with Mohit and Renu with their princess.

The terrace was beautifully decorated with lights and colourful ribbons with a big board saying

To the most benovelant and Big Hearted daddy, Happy Fathers’s Day. We Love you Daddy, You are our Hero and you are the Best….

A caricature of Raaghav being kissed by the cubs and roses beautifully drawn in a Canvass….by Aayansh...

There was cake in the table in centre of the terrace… kaaka smiled he was proud of the boys…

It was the Fathers’ Day and the kids wanted to celebrate it and throw a surprise party to Raaghav but in private as he always preferred it simple and with his family…Kaaka planned with Arjun for the same.

It took sometime for the emotions to settle. Kissing them, I love you…thank you… but..

Arjun just hugged him and crushed his daddy… Raaghav was about to say… when Arjun said

Daddy please don’t say you have not done anything…. You have done everything, given your life for us, lived through all our troubles when we were young, never ever raised your voice, never failed to encourage us and thank you for always speaking about mumma’s life which made us understand how to live the life, Chakor teared, holding his hands… he smiled... his eyes spoke……nodding sideways which said I did not do anything …..

Daddy we love you loads for always supporting us and protecting us and still allowing us to fly high…

The roses could not understand much but both looked at their bros and came to him kissed him and said daddy we Lub you…. He cried and smiled,,,, awwwhh how much you love me he asked. Both broadened their shoulders,widening their tiny hands soooooooo much…. Awwwhh he just hugged them…I Love you too my princesses my lifeline…thank you for coming into my life he said. They took him along with Chakor and made him cut the cake…they fed him and he fed them... Mausi….you too?? Haan beta…. kids wanted me to come here so I told you that I will come in the evening. Ohhh RagKor was surprised. All planned hmmm. He sought blessings from Kaaka and Mausi… He wished Shyaam saying happy fathers day to you kaaka for being the guardian angel for me… They shared a warm hug… Jug Jugjio beta Kaaka blessed him.

Mohit and Renu walked in and wished him Bhaai, you set an example how a father, a husband should be and I am not sure if I could be like you but sure will try to be atleast half of you. He hugged Raaghav….

AA said uncle you can be a good father but not like our daddy as he is the BEST Daddy in the world.

It was a surprise but emotional moment… Raaghav went to Chakor… while the kids ran inside to watch their favourite cartoon show was up leaving the couple in the terrace.

Happy Father’s day Raaghav…. She cupped his cheeks… Indeed you are the best father one can have… Though you are my husband still you turned yourself and stepped into the shoes of a father and sometimes as a mother too to treat me like a kid during my rants, never failed to lift me when I was down, never failed to be behind me always to rest my head.. Chakooor he said…. You tooo don’t make me humble…. Noo Raaghav… You are indeed the Best she said… YOU did not preach how to love and respect the fairer one but but you practiced it... Kissing him on his cheeks… I Love you… She just went into him, and he very placidly hugged her, kissing her forehead looking at the Bougainville trees which were blooming in the spring. Love you too, thank you for coming into my life and thank you for making my life more meaningful with the roses… Chakor the cubs are my life, roses are my lifeline but you are my everything, my strength, My Queen.... thank you bajrangbali, Jai Raamji he thanked his gods within his hearts..... Both went into reverie closing their eyes…

Daddyyyyy, mummyyyyyy shouted the foursome…. Lunccchhhhhhh….Both smiled went inside and all had the lunch together…

The happy Rover drove back with happy smiles and laughter to the Rishab Mansion.

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Just saws the pics of Fathers day on insta thought to twine in the same for a happy family moments…..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#62

Cuddly Cuddly, Meddly Meddly – My cutie Ra4gKor - a mini OS

(Have a terrible week ahead, but I need my booster, pep up, a cuddle for me myself…)

Mmmm uuuunnnnn, Aditi feeling angry angry, pouting cute,folding her tiny hands across her chest, the little rowdy rose was in thecorner of their room,,, Ananya was also joining her saying me too angry… bothwere in a very cranky mood..

My sweetie pies ….hugged mumma hen, noooo mumma katti with you, katti with bhai bhai… no talking..

Just two days bhai will be back said Ar and Aa… we have to go for the NCC scouts my princesses, hugged the bros. Two days leaving Adi and Anan no, we will also go…no darlings, you cannot go now said the cubs.

Raamu kaka was there, he said bitiyaa as they are boys going you cannot go… Ar said no kaaka they can also go, girls also can go but they are too young so they cannot go now. Oh ok.

They were not in any mood to let off their bros to go to the NCC camp which is fixed for the weekend in Delhi.

After much coaxing by mumma and the cubs they gave in with along face. They left to join the team alongwith Raamu kaka as Raaghav had to go for an important sign up meeting of the new tea produce.

He spoke to the cubs on phone asking them to stay safe.

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It was Saturday afternoon, the roses were terribly irritated, cranky… mumma’s coaxing did not help.. they were crying, whining on her… she eventually too felt tired…

She tried playing with them but no use….she called him desperately…Raaghav please come naa I am tired your princesses are too ziddi….Coming my birdie, just completing my work

Walked in the Lion running up to his roses after two days ofhectic work.

Saw his birdie having a tough time with the roses who were very cranky, crying with long faces all the toys strewn around.

With a big smile…. Walked in the Lion….. extending his arms to cuddle the roses… noo daada… roses angry they pouted cute.

Oh!!! I am scared, my princesses are angry?… Why? Who scolded my princesses?, I will go do dhoosoom dhoosoom he said…

Aditi said no.. no dhushoom, bhai left tata, we want bhai…we want to play.

He said daada will play with roses he said… no you don’t know to play like bhai. We will go riding on bhai, and bhai will fly like superman…we don’t want toys they were nodding their heads no no.

Oh aisaaa, ok, he was in his sleeveless T and pyjama. He quickly crawled and made the roses sit on him and went around imitating like an elephant going near the birdie and tickling her with his hands saying that was the elephant’s trunk.. they started to laugh and giggle. Dadaaa, he tickled them while the other was on his back… haha ha feeling ticklish, they were sprawling on him and he was holding them throwing and catching and placing them on his feet lifting them up in air lying on his back…awww see-saw awwwww… they were excited...

Chakor was enjoying the way he was cuddling making the roses smile and forget about the missing… he just turned into a kid with them.. he saw her and crawled to her kissing her forehead, what’s mumma hen doing…. She said enjoying the kiddoosss. Kissing the three on their foreheads….

Daadaaa!!! We want superman… he took chakor’s duppata and tied around his neck and jumped from a stool and going to their balcony with hands on his waist saying I am superman… they laughed laughed and just slept on his shoulders…. He placed them on their mini beds…

She was just admiring him with palms under her chin…. With tears in eyes…

He turned around saw her… kissing her temples… what happened why is my queen in tears. Cupping his face she saidthe girls are so lucky to have you as their father and you as their mother he said kissing her.

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He got a call and had to go..

It was quite gloomy afternoon and Chakor just changed to asimple short tops and skirt and was in the balcony just staring above…

He came in and scooped what happened to my birdie… seems lost ….. you too need a cuddle like the roses he asked.

Hmmm. I am also feeling so dull she said.. oohhh!!! shall we play game he saidNo…. well like the kids??? Brightened her eyes…Hmm then ok but just cuddle cuddle..nothing more

He got a call again and left to attend to it…

She just went into the quilt as it was cold, circling herself and pouting..

He came back… went beside her cuddling her, kissing her in the neck…hmmmm you always do this. Raaghav… poutingok lets play, cuddling her… he kept a paper and pen beside her.. whats this?…

Lets play tic tac toeoh she got excited, they played, she was laughing,clapping excited whenever he lost… ha ha I won….He was enjoying her innocence…they played catch and chase game within their room when suddenly she asked him to freeze as a statue..

He stood… she came to him…cupping his face, she spoke.......

Raaghav you have always ensured that I am happy, allowing me to fly, adjusting to my tantrums and not questioning me when I immerse myself in other works that sometimes I don’t even give time to you, don’t perform my duties as a doted wife. He jerked when she said, please allow me to talk…

You never allow me to talk low about myself but I too have flaws I know. I donot know how to sweet talk, how to romance too properly… but, you are too pure Raaghav she said. You never failed to describe me, appreciate me in the best way…but… hes tarted to tear…

She kissed his eyes saying.. I love them, I get lost in them when they shower the utmost pure love and pride them when it rages in fire when anyone tries to harm me.

Kissing his nose, thank you for calming me down with your nuzzle which I go weak about.

Kissing his cheeks, thank you for always staying in contact during my sleep and I don’t even reciprocate properly due to my tiredness too.

Lightly pecking his lips, should I say I get lost in those warm kisses and my world just stops to spin around in that charismatic smile.

Slowly caressing his biceps she kissed his hands…. Thank your for these strong arms which protect me always and I go fearlessly into any deep water as I know these arms are always guarding me from behind.

Going into his chest, she just closed her eyes, and he too,was wanting to hug her but he stood frozen respecting her words. She caressed his chest, kissed him and said your heart started beating for me after waiting with all hope and faith for those ten long years… in which way should I express you that I am indeed so blessed and forget my world when I just rest my head on that heart which beats for me.

Moving a bit back, she folded her hands and said with my heart, body and soul I thank you so much Raagav for coming into my life,thanking those gods for sending you in my life. I love you so so much that I am unable to describe how much I love you…she cried folding her hands going down on her knees…lowering her head in respect.... He quickly bent and held her No no no he raised her, hugged her tight to him, crushing her, kissing her forehead what are you doing?? You are my queen, my life, my strength, my everything….Tearing terribly, I don’t have a heart as it is with you and only have you within me… Please never go down on your knees, never bend your head, I just cant bear it .. I just cant handle that Chakor please he cried….. I love you Raaghav she cried her heart out emotionally.. he quickly kissed her all over her face,lifting her to the balcony, placing her on his lap in the rocking chair.

They were just embracing, subliming in their love…remained like that…. she slowly lifted her head cupping his face, kissing his lips with love, he took her lips into his giving in to a passionate kissing… she looked into his eyes which was full of love… I love you she said with so much love. I love you too he said… carrying her preciously to their bed… not breaking the kiss.. it was a long kisss… just assuring their love to each other… both were just holding and was fervently kissing.

I love you Chakor and please please never ever do this again he said… my queen, my life, my everything, not again please promise me he was on and on when she jerked, raised up, pushed her tops pulling his face closer to her stopping him in her style…kissing his forehead…caressing his neck behind… Chup Budda… cuddle me…. Ummm sucking her… only cuddle??? Cuddle to meddle please??? … tickling her… giggling, smiling…

No Rowdy

Yes Birdie

Noooo nooo Rowdy

Yess yess Birdie.

Hmmmm yessss Rowdiethatsssss my birdie………………..

With sweet kisses they were going into the bliss of happiness… a simple cuddle…… to meddle... was about to have the masala chai when …………………. Daaadaaaaa the elephant is not lifting meeee cried Anan in her sleep…

OOopsssss…. Birdie giggled…..aagaya mera chota villain ka partner…. Pecking her lips…

Anan… my princess…. Your elephant is coming… darling don’t cry…. Ran the Lion to his princess!!

He kissed and cradled the rose to sleep placing her on his chest on the right side, while hugging his birdie who rose and laid her head to rest on his left.

He smiled kissing their foreheads, closing his eyes…. Cuddling his queen and his Princess…..

A sweet cuddle indeed it was…….

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Posted: 6 years ago
#63

Bitterry …. Jitterrry….ooops…. my Ra4gKor…

It was very calm gloomy and dull….

He was in the hospital bed… eyes closed…. Nose terribly red…..Hands and legs straight….

The roses were crying…. Aayansh was in tears.

Chakor was palpitating and talking with the family doctor.

Doctor please cant we avoid this? Is there any other alternative…

No Chakorji, there is no other alternative… it has to be done else there is no cure….

He has to get this done or have the other one. It cannot be cured without it… Doctor shook his head saying why why should he get it and went away….

Oh god why cant you punish me? Give all the trouble to me….Why to Raaghav…

The kids were around him, daddy daddy please open your eyes….He opened, his eyes were red he could not open much….

Girija came in, bitiyaaa can we take him home and treat there with some ayurved medicine.

No, kaaki that will not work…. She was getting impatient..

She went to the room… Arjun came to her, he was calm. Mumma why should daddy do this and get this..

The roses along with Aa were holding his hands….

Arjun went close to him… Daddy please please open your eyes….

Chakor went closer… Please Raaghav open your mouth…. He was not responding.

Raaghav, the hen was getting agigated, there is no other remedy for this…

Nooo, I can tolerate anything but not this pleaded he…

Raaghav why on earth did you go get wet in the rain, the kids ran back home but you stayed behind in the ground just for the challenge you had with them and now you caught severe cold.

You refuse to have the injection nor the medicine saying its bittery and the injection saying its cause you jitters and painful.

The doctor smiled, wished the kids got sick rather him…. it’s always an ordeal with him and he refuses to get out of the hospital bed. Ugghh….Being the family doctor and also the plantation hospital, Raaghav had his own ways there to avoid the cough syrup and injections and the kaada that Chakor forces him to have whenever he falls sick.

The roses were holding his hands while Aayansh and Arjun were trying to force the medicine….Na na he would not budge his mouth open saying its very bittery and causes him jittery….

Due to severe cold his nose was red and eyes were watery….He was not ready for the hot water inhalation either saying it tickles his nostrils.

The rowdy rosey came to him with her cutie angry face and hands in her waist. Daddaa are you baby,have the medicine… like adi and anan…. He cried noooo adi its very uwaaah bringing his tongue out very kadvi… she lost her patience and went away with Ananya, mumma daddy is a Lion but when he is sick he is like a kitten…

Aayansh tried to coax him but of no use. Arjun and Aditi were trying too when suddenly …..

Arjun suggested…. Mumma you always used to give something sugary like a dessert after we have our bittery syrup, why can’t you give daddy tooo the same some dessert... I know Daddy is an adult not a kid but still he is like a kid when he falls sick. Please mumma.. We have lot of homework to be done too, please lets go home…

Twwwainnn brightened the eyes of the Rowdy…. Nooo Arjun shouted Chakor… no… god what are you suggesting.

Rowdy quickly got up hugged Arjun,,,, kissing him my boy I love you… yes yes…winking at Chakor. I don’t mind having any bittery syrup if a dessert is served…. The eagle was giving him a piercing look while the Rowdy very innocently was holding Arjun and Aditi’s hands.

The doctor not realizing the underlined meaning, wanting the bed to be vacated, quickly accepted Arjun’s idea though it was so childish..Yes Chakorji please take him home, give him the syrup and whatever dessert you want to … Please I need the bed for other critical patients. Just thrice a day he will be perfectly fine. Whaaatttt!!! Thrice nonoo she shivered!!! Why? asked Arjun…. Rowdy smirked inspite of his illness..

I will kill you glared the birdie going near him…. achooooo,he sneezed…..winking at her going near her ears…. I don’t mind having the bittery syrup any number of times if the dessert is going to be served after it.

Gaawwwddd!!! Rowdy you are……come home I will give you poison she said!!! Don’t mind if its given by you along with dessert he said.

Insatiable Rowdy she smiled…. hitting her head…

The kids ran to the Rover, while the birdie and the rowdy came behind holding their hands together… Raaghav you are hot she said… Indeed I am he said winking. God.... idiot you are having fever she said… fever for you!!! And you know Birdie sometimes a good amount of shower along with spouse brings down the fever he said.

I shall drive she said… Noooo he ran to the steering, I shall drive inspite of my fever rather than hearing your AIR while driving on others.

Budda!!!! She stared.

I love you he mimed… she blushed as the kids were behind…Dadddy please lets go, its time to have your syrup…. Yessss!!!! My syrup…. Bittery, jittery but it will finally be sugary too…. Looking at her beside….

The Rover raged to the Mansion


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Posted: 6 years ago
#64

Well !! thanks Girls, I never had the idea of the love treatment but penned it after heavy recommendations for the Rowdy to get well soon. And how can I not do it when my bossy has ordered me to......smiley2 So here it is enjoy !! but no tomatoes on me,,,,

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The Dessert and shower – A love treatment!smiley2smiley2smiley43

She made the cubs sleep and put the roses to their mini beds.

She went beside him… his temperature was soaring high.

He was feeling terribly hot due to fever…

Raaghav, hmmm… she was bit teary, why do you do thisplease have the medicines.She went into his chest, birdie just a cold and fever…I will be alright… he hugged her head. A bit shivering.. but you are shivering, if anything happens to you, I can’t handle it Raaghav… he kissed her forehead and the kiss was indeed hot due to his fever.

She gave him the tablet Chakoor but its too yucky…bitteryyy.. pleaaaseee…. She smiled at him, kissed his lips which were red due to his fever.. she made him drink the syrup…looking into her eyes he just swallowed the syrup… she kissed him…. I will be back in a minute she said, covering him with the quilt.

She came back with a bowl of ice water and a Turkish towel.Closed all the doors. Removed the quilt,removed his T and pyjama.

She immersed the towel in the ice water and padded his forehead,face, his lips, his torso and his back.

She turned him towards her, made him glide down… cupping his cheeks, gave him soft kisses….Giving ice water massage..

Removed her tops… No Chakor you stay away you may catch fever because of mehe said ..

She turned to him, held his cheeks and gave him her dessert…he slowly held them preciously and he suckled, his tongue was hot, he slowly was sucking, and kissing them. .I am sorry, I shall be more careful, but they are indeed sweet more than a dessert he said mouthing them, she closed her eyes in sensation, hugging her he said I love youPlease sleep, get well soon she said. She hugged his head, caressed him while he was trying to sleep but due to temperature he could not. She kept the ice water dipped towel on his forehead for a long time till the medicine started to show its effect and he went into deep sleep with his mouth on her asset with a smile on his face hugging her waist. She was just caressing his head, dipping the towel with the ice water placing on his forehead and drifted into sleep.

He woke the wee hours to find her cuddling him, with the towel still on his forehead and wet.. she had been awake giving him the cold water treatment, her asset still in his mouth, she had not moved so not to disturb his sleep. He felt better, slowly moved aside… going up, lifted her slowly on to his chest hugging her to sleep. He kissed her forehead and slept drawing the quilt over them….

The birds chirped and she woke up to find his man cuddling her and sleeping… his temperature had come down a bit…. she was about to get up when she realized she was still bare on top.. she smiled reaching for her tops when the Rowdy tightened his grip… three times a day!!! Without opening his eyes…

Haan right!!! getting you the poison now for the second dose she said. Ooops he quickly turned her to him to have his second dose of dessert even before the syrup!!!. Rustic Rowdy……. … he kissed her assets softly…. Leave me Raaghav I have to get the kids ready for school. Pushing him down she wore her tops….He got up but felt a bit tired so fell on the bed.

Budda get to work if you are feeling better she said!!! Dr has adviced me bed rest crushing her into him!!! so work only on bed…. Rowdy …. She got up refreshed to get the children to school.

Dadddyyyyyyyy came the kids to him, how are you…. Much better just another two doses of syrup I should be fine he said winking at her. Ok daddy take care, they kissed and waved him to go along with the Mansion driver to the school. She saw them off and was going up to their room.

He went to refresh when he shouted loud, aaahhhh, she ran into the bath, jittering not to find him there. Raaghav have you fallen down… where are you? He was behind the door and quickly latched and pulled her to him… he was just in his towel

Raaghav, I got scared… what are you doing, you are still running temperature, nuzzling her and taking her to the shower, turning the cold shower on he said yes am still running temperature and a cold shower helps a lot to bring down the temperature , his voice was turning terribly erotic and hoarse. Raaghav you are tired…just lets shower and go please she said knowing her man is getting aroused.

Rowdy, leave me she said but was hugging him more tight as the chillness was being driven off by his body heat which was due to fever or lust she could not understand… Pleaseeee Sexy Birdie, my chota villain and his able deputy(thanks Mai with your permission I am using this, just fell in love with this word,hope you don’t mind) are not there, should I give away this opportunity he asked.. kissing her…

He disrobed her and pushed her to the wall under the shower,kissing her, she was gasping for breath with the water on her… but his kissing was making her go crazy..

You are hot Raaghav she said,subliming in him, he kissed her lips and kissed her all over…. Yes please cool me down he said.. I love you, taking her assets with fervor…nibbling her peaks, kissing her neck, her eyes, her cheeks, her ears..he was loving her beautifully...

He was looking so hawt and handsome with the water splayed hair and the water running down his sharp nose and lips and his wet torso and his torso on her was making her crazy. The water on her and the water drops glistening on her toned silhouette was making him also frenzy and her trembling lips was more inviting. I love you he said taking her lips.

She felt him hard and grown, how is that your naughty is active even when you are not well she asked. Well that’s because of this sweety my beauty he said … She blushed….He lifted her against the wall and throbbed in to her with force…. Raaghav she moaned terribly wrapping her legs around his waist, she whispered into his ears, your naughty is hot but still this is blissss .. I love youuuuu Raaghav she hugged him tight…just that word and her seductive voice from her ignited him and made him feel proud..he moved into a rhythm within her slowly balancing, the water was making him gasp…. Not leaving her contact, he took her into the tub which he had prepared and continued his ministrations there.. I told you a cold shower will work better for fever my sexyyyy birdie he said looking into her eyes which was dark with desire….going into reviere. Though the bathtub had cold water his body heat was taking care of it… he rammed into her giving her all the pleasure as she is precious at any point of time in his life. He reached for his packet which he had kept on the brim of the tub..…hmm well prepared Rowdy…He throbbed again, devouring her with his force…. I love you Chakor, nothing will happen to me as I stand by my promise I will live with you and die with you….he took her into the bliss, she closed her eyes when both went into ecstasy calling each others name… they hugged each other, blending into each other tight. Lust, passion and love overtook her that she kissed his lips passionately. He gave in to her, his life, his love, he felt proud that he could give her that happiness. I love you he said. I love you too, too much Raaghav she said

She felt the chillness after their ecstasy, he quickly wrapped her in the robe, cover yourself and don’t fall sick again she warned as he lifted her to the room.

I don’t mind falling sick if I am going to be taken care with such a dessert and a shower he winked.

I will kill you she said but at the same time hugging him…. I love you Rustic Rowdy,I love you sexy birdie he said.

They quickly grabbed their clothes and wore.

Achooooooo!!!! He sneezed again…… She glared at him…. Raaghav I told you see now again you are sneezing, you think I don’t have any other work other than to take care of you, drying his head with her towel….you are so ……..was on and on AIR….. Arrreeey he closed her mouth in his way….kissing her which turned into a passionate one by her… She smiled looking at him… you think only you can fool, I too can, I wanted your warm kiss Rowdyyyyy… she winked…. You need not fool Birdie as I am always at your service he said…yesss but nothing like the rustic kiss she said.... Oh you like it rough... going to kiss her again, when she yelled, AAAyansh. He quickly distanced from her only to realise kids are not yet back from school

Birdie you are not easy….. catch me if you can she ran around……he ran behind her laughing and finally both fell on the bed together…. Smiling… I love you voiced together and went into a quick cuddly nap to catch up on the tiredness after their showery workout…..

They woke up as Girija called on the intercom stating its time for lunch and the kids will be coming from school.

Lets go down the kids will be coming she said, let’s have lunch together…. hmmmm yes and after lunch need to have the second dose, he said Whaat???? no dose bose, you are perfectly fine…. I will kill you she said. Well we should complete the course as per Doc’s advice. I will kill the Dr and you… Insatiable you are…. Pulling her close to him, pushing her strands looking into her eyes, aren’t you? he asked, she blushed loosing herself in that loving eyes…. pushing him running away like a kid.

He smiled going down…. Relishing the dessert and the shower…. Indeed the Best treatment!!!

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Kaaka and Mohit had come to see him and take his signature for few cheques as he is the second signatory, first being Kaaka.

How are you beta, am completely perfect he said. Good

Daddddyyyyyyy came sprawling the kids….. they ran to him and stopped a bit. He extended his biceps when they clung to him and he swirled…. Heeeeyyy our daddy strongest and roses were jumping up to be lifted by him… kissing all of them..

Arjun asked him innocently… are you alright daddy, did you complete all the doses, Rowdy was about to answer when Chakor said, your daddy is perfectly fine …glaring at him…

He smiled at her mischievously winking, will not leave the two doses birdie saying within himself.

It was only laughter as the kids were narrating to Kaaka and Mohit about daady’s tantrums in the hospital.

RagKor laughed together when Arjun looked at them and said , daddy and mummy you both look soooo beautiful while laughing, just admiring them. Hugging the kids together the happy family went to have lunch along with Kaaka and Mohit.

Girija was happy seeing the family together laughing and was praying to her Daak Baaba to keep them safe and happy always.

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Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#65

With the latest IWMbuzz news about the downing of shutters of Udaan, felt very numb though the show has ended for many of us but when the reality hits it was bringing back the memory of the show that I cherished, made me depressed missing my dude, though I made peace with my Ra4gKor… I did do a post which I am sure would have made you all feel bad… so here is a pep up….

Let me love you like you love me…… RSB (Rustic Sexy Birdies)

It was not a great day for Raaghav as due to one of the worker’s carelessness there was a setback in the process and they lost a day’s man hour. He lost his cool but as Kaaka was there he managed his anger but still he was bit frustrated. He could accept ignorance but not negligence.The mixup of the leaves was error which led to tonnes of wastage as it will not meet the quality standards and Rishab Plantations will forgo profits but will not go back on their ethics. Kaaka and Mohit knew he controlled his anger so they did not try to consel him but when he left with irritation they did not stop him. Kaaka felt it was better that he left early but knew the birdie will make him alright. He tried calling Chakor but could not reach her.

He drove to the Mansion with irritation , he saw the cubs and roses, he quickly embraced them. She was in a simple saree as she was back from a small session at the welfare centre. She noticed he was not in his usual self. Daddy, Aaayansh was holding something to show him but he did not look at it. He just kissed her forehead and went up to their room.

Mumma, called Ar, is daddy not alright, he had never been like this. He is very dull too. The roses were but upset as Dada did not play with them and rowdy was grumpy but both slept on Chakor. He must be tired Arjun, you all get to your rooms please. They kissed her good night helped her carry the sleeping roses to their mini beds and went to their rooms.

He was in the balcony looking straight to the sky while his face was too dull. She walked in with the dinner. She went behind hugged him, he held her hands and kissed and said you eat please I am not hungry. What happened Raaghav, you had never been like this what’s bothering she asked,caressing his back.

Bit worried as due to a carelessness of a worker the schedule is delayed, he slowly got irritated, more of the loss I am irritated that it is due to negligence. So irresponsible, banging his hand and because of his mistake everyone’s effort is wasted.

She hugged him from behind… soo My Rowdy is angry, trying to divert him by soothing his front. Chakkooor please he tried to smile but could not so he just softly told … go to bed I shall come, just need some time he said. This was new, he had never been like this. Its ok Raaghav she tried to soothe him down but not fully. He just hugged her and asked her to go inside the room.

She came to the balcony with a glass, an ice pail, and whisky and water. She kept it on the table near the diwan and called him. No he said. Chakor said no its ok, I failed to sober you down so I know this one can help you. Just that word struck his chord and he quickly said… No No please.. I don’t want a drink he said… I am sorry he said. She made him sit on the Diwan. She sat beside him, turned his face to her and said, sometimes certain things fault due to reasons which are beyond our control. Its not our mistake but that should not disrupt our life. Raaghav I have learnt a lot from you, you never failed to lift mine, boys or even the roses moods when we were down, but none of us could match you in making things brighter today. I feel I have failed, so please have this peg and get back to bed. She kissed his forehead when he realized how much his behavior had indeed impacted his family. For the first time he did not leave the boys in their rooms nor the roses.

She did not eat either and went inside the room and was standing near the window looking at the sky. He felt upset. He came to her and said I am sorry…tried to place a subtle kiss on her forehead when she lifted her chin to meet his lips and said show me how much you are frustratedplease just pass your frustration on me. No Chakor he said… please on my word … he just grabbed her head and kissed her strongly, his eyes were tearing holding her cheeks.. he was indeed very harsh, forceful, and she was just allowing him to calm… she was gasping for breath when he slowly calmed down and kissed her with soft… Saying sorry, sorry…. She caressed his back…slowly… when he started to nibble her lips.

Raagahav she slowly drew her lips which was swollen and caressed his cheeks and gave him water. He drank…. Thank you I am much better he said. Whats it Aa had in his hands he asked. Please go to the cubs room, am sure they would not have slept she said.

He turned to leave when he realized she was in a saree, he kissed her forehead and said you look beautiful, I am sorry I did not even acknowledge you. I feel ashamed he said. She kissed him and said please go. He ran to the cubs room only to see Ar was looking at the window looking at the moon and Aa was holding his trophy and certificate and was sleeping with tear stains. He hugged Ar and said sorry. Ar quickly hugged him and said No daddy I know something was bothering you hence you were upset. Yes my boy, I am sorry but I should not have …..when Ar kissed him and said its ok daddy.

He went to Aa and saw the trophy for standing first in the caricature competition. He kissed him when Aa woke up Dadddyyy are you ok see here I got the trophy. He said sorry my boy when both the boys hugged him and said with tears, Daddy please don’t say sorry, we were worried about you as you had never been like this. He hugged them and kissed them, with smiles they left for the bed. He ran to the roses were rowdy was sleeping with a frown face.. he kissed her, sorry my princess when the little hands hugged him and smiled daddyyyy muahhhh and started to giggle when Aa too hugged him and kissed.…

He slowly went to his room to see her in the balcony… he went near her when she said… would you like to go for your peg or… he grabbed her and kissed her no whisky but just my tequila… I am sorry… can we have dinner he asked. She took him and fed him sweet talking…

He was lost in her when he asked why did you say you failed…you are never a failure but with smirkness and wickedness he said well how would you have soothed me ….

She looked at him and said let me Love you as you love me …

She took him to the rocking chair and sat on his lap…initiating her sweet kisses on his neck, his forehead, eyes and cheeks..Raaghav why is my king suddenly so low just because of someones act. You never used to carry your work stress..kissed him softly… just that kiss and that word made him loosen… My Qu.. she kissed his lips looking into his eyes.. I need to soothe my King as he does to his Queen to his birdie… Let me see if I can….

She kissed him and slowly removed his T…. she lay on his chest and hugged him crushing her assets on his, it was making things ignite…My King is very strong to handle things on his own for long years but how is it he lost his cool and it has affected him so much that the one who loves my dessert the most but today he is no mood to have…. He smiled looking at her antics… she kissed him hard on his chest and raising above kissed his lips while he unbuttoned her blouse.. He started to feel her hardened peaks and urge was catching up when she slowly rubbed her peaks against him. He moaned… Sexy birdie…..

I don’t soothe you like you do.....she ran her hands over his torso saying when my king caresses my back I loose myself but my King is upset so…. He just kissed her hard and slowly crushed her into him. She got up and made him get up and hugged him … her half robed blouse and the saree and her words was making him crazy…

She pushed him to the wall, running her hands over his torso, kissing and biting his front when his hands just removed her blouse and held her waist caressing it. She slowly unbuttoned his pants and caressed his boxers when she said this is how my king make me go weak but I am not that goo….. he crushed her mouth as urge was taking over… Birdiee my Queen you are making me go weak…. I love you he said..….. she removed her in skirt when she pressed herself which made her navel to press his toned packs… and her thighs against his strong ones saying…. My King is too strong that he can tackle anything in this world and with ease carries me to the bed but I cann…. He lifted her,looking into her eyes which was full of desire… while she was just caressing his front. I love you she said….. but not as you love me...He placed her on the bed when she took his hands and placed it on her chest closing her eyes and said, this is where my King resides but today he is upset and my love is not as strong as his… when he just hugged her tight and said not a word about my Queen he said …going over her twinies, caressing, kneading, kissing fervently, while she removed his boxers…

She went into his ears and said… My Rowdy says my sweety is his personal whiskey and makes love to me in the best way, and his naughty is my hotdog spicyyy . She went over him and said, I am not that good in making love like him when he could not hold more and just crushed her into his not allowing even air to enter between. Hey Sexxyyyy and removing her inner he said You love me not like I love you but more than and now….. his voice was too hoarse when he said… My sweetheart you are not a easy birdie to fail in anything for you are a born winner and have won me over with your love long back kissing her very fervently kissing her assets when she turned him around and went over pressing her assets over his back. He moaned, she kissed him all over with loads of love… she turned him over and said with slight tears in her eyes My King is an expert in love making but me… He kissed her forehead, her eyes and cheeks and looking into her eyes said…. Not a word more about my Queen and her love, he said… Oh you are angry she asked, so are you going to punish me? he smiled dangerously with lust…. Can I punish you my queen my sexy birdie, my life… She slowly went over him smoothingly… she said please punish me she bit his ear lobes going into the rhythm…as I love your punishment on meand pushing herself with force… He was just going frenzy… I cannot punish you but only make love to you as you are my Queen, my Sexy birdie… she was very seductively looking at him and gave him the packet which he took and was going over her and was subliming into her with full force I can punish me, myself but never my Queen my lifeI love you Chakor. He kissed her mouth and took her invading her side walls. His naughty was throbbing madly, pulsating ramming her. She was going into the pleasure he was giving her and he was going into bliss he was deriving out of her.. They were kissing each other and she kissed him caressed and soothed his back.. I love you Raaghav she quivered. He was building the pleasure and his naughty was just throbbing and burst with pleasure which took her into ecstacy.

Raaaaghhhavvv …..Chakorrr my love, my life both reach their fullest level of bliss together… both heaved together...

I am sorry he said…. Me too she said… hmmm you why….Raaghav ….Sorry for I could not change your mood like you do as You love Me more and my lovehmmmmm he just took her lips, chewed and said I will really punish you if you say another word about my Queen….

They entwined through… she calmed him …. Love makes one forget all the troubles, love makes one to understand others pain and my RSBs love is not a common one for they are unique….He stayed away on her word for ten long years, loved her in his heart but never lusted her till she gave in herself to be lusted and made love. She was away not knowing that a pure soul was waiting for her and when she realized that life indeed had something good for her in store that she wanted to treasure it, and love him immensely…

He calmed, sublimed into her love and both were in each others arms……

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It was Sunday, she woke up refreshed to realise her lips were swollen and had a bit of clotted blood…. She smiled…

She saw her man eyes closed handsome with his boxers apparently he had refreshed.

He smiled eyes closed, hearing her, spreading his left arm calling her… birdie its Sunday come he asked..it was cold and dark too.

She went into him and he cuddled her… nuzzling the nape… thank you sweetheart, my queen for loving me.Crushing her into him. Buddaa, its paining she hit his hands. He turned her towards him, when he realised how harsh he has been on her lips, he teared its cut I am so bad he said… she said yes so how will you make it up asked the naughty birdie.

He slowly kissed her lips, kissing her softly licking the cut while she was giving in passionately…

He kissed her eyes, forehead, ears and her valley… I love you he said…. She smiled… kissing him can you love me without making love to me…. She asked… He smiled nodding yes though it will be difficult but its on her words....

He, brushed his hands smoothly right from her forehead till her navel. He placed soft butterfly kisses making her go into bliss. She hugged him.

He looked into her eyes and slowly caressed her assets through the tops… slowly removed it and very slowly taking kneading kissing, sucking her as they were precious for him. He turned her and kissed her back fully… she went into bliss… he was indeed making good for his harshness.

She moaned Raaghav brushing his lips, how can you be so gentle.. I am loving this… than… he closed her lips, soothed the bruise while slowly caressed her peaks, mouthing and sucking her assets beautifully… I love you so much he said… he took his time in loving her subliming her in love…

She was just closing her eyes in riviera going into a different world. It was difficult for him as the subtle love was indeed hardening him but he wanted to love her the way she wanted.

She caressed his cheeks kissing his lips… thank you my love…. He took a long time… when she looked into his eyes… pulled his ears and said, Rowdy do you want to make love to me…. He smiled I love you indeed but not necessary that all my love should end up in making love…. You are precious my dear, kissing her very softly, never leave me and be with me always for you are my strength, my power,my everything… Don’t leave me ever…. She held him tight…. Raaghav tell me, you left me on my words and waited for me but the insecurity was evident, the fear was evident… holding him tight, if at all a situation comes that you are asked to leave will you leave me, he closed her in his style, NEVER AGAIN even if you ask for, I will live with you and die with you Chakor just cannot live without you he said. She shivered in his kiss…..closing her eyes, tears flowing…. Rowdy please don’t leave me and went into him with a happy smile.

He slid down and cuddled for a happy sleep as its Sunday a late morning… she just went into him for a dreamless sleep as she was in his protective hands.

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The day did dawn beautifully with the cubs and roses sprawling on them…. The happy family went around for a drive and went to the plantation to meet the children there as they spent time with them. The worker came running to Raaghav holding his hands, bhaaai muje maaf kardo, it was my mistake and I was careless. I am sorry,I will ensure that I will be careful. Bhaai I will work extra and put things right he said. He just hugged him and said …. I was upset because it was everyones hard effort and due to this the profit will go down and hence all our share in profits will also go down. We all work for our welfare not for any one alone he said…

Kaaka smiled at Chakor and said…. Bitiyaaa I know you would calm him down and make him understand that few mistakes are just beyond our hands… He blessed her….

They had a special lunch surprise for Gauri who had got through with flying colours in the SSC exam… she was given form for her chosen subject for her higher studies when Chakor asked her to enroll for specializing in tea processing. Once she clears the preliminary exam she will be sent to London for the course that Raagahv went through and Mohit was very happy though he was due for the same but he treated Gauri as his own sister and told behen please follow your dream and fly high…. For you don’t have one but two brothers now…. Looking at Raaghav…..

It was happy moments and the Rover was returning to Mansion filled with laughter and smile. Ar was hugging daddy while Rowdy rosy was telling Daddy if you again come grhhhh I will give kattii. Haaan yes katti Chakor pouted with Aditi when Raaghav was smiling at them saying sorry my princess please maaf kardo holding both his ears when Aditi kissed daddy ha ha ha muaaaahhhhh…

Aa was telling that he will enroll for his next level of art when Chakor hugged him and the Romeo quickly hugged mumma and kissed in her eyes followed by Aa….They reached the Mansion when the Rowdy jumped chasing Heyyyyyy Lalla when both ran saying Raaghav babu kya karroon bey thera patni hamara mumma bahuthey sundar bey, hum kiss karungaaa bey!!!!! thu kuch nahi karogi bey!!!

He chased them only to be fallen down on the grass and pretended hurt aaaahhhhh he shouted when the cubs and roses came running to him daddy what happened…. When he caught all and said I love you all I promise not to spoil all your mood. Chakor was smiling looking at him, when he got up and pulled her saying maybe only with your mumma I will be moody…she glared when he said so that you love me like I love you….. He was about to kiss her forehead when the chota villain and his deputy called mummaaaa comeeee Chaaaiiiii…. Chodo budda, pushing him giving a quick peck on his cheeks she ran to them only to be followed by him with all smiles…..

She will love him while she is his love for ever and ever.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#66

The Web………. Can it be Dusted or turns into a Dungeon– a sneak peak

Mumma, I love Superman, Batman, Marvel, Super heroes who save the world. Are they born with superpowers? asked Aayansh…..

We cannot wait for a superman to come save, we have to turn our inner strength into super power, bring the boldness in us.. said Arjun….applauded the Eagle.

Nooooo…. Please don’t do anything to that young baby…please remove the hot iron….Noooo please…

They laughed at the young ……………..

Why didn’t you tell this early? They were disheartened… I could not as it happened before I joined you Bhaiii cried his heart out holding the photo frame….

Bhai.... I love you…. He left………..Why I feel I will not see him again…. He felt somewhat weird. I should not have ………………….

She flared, she could not see it she just could not….. she raged and ordered the Lion to break their bones into pieces….. Just her words….. he was uncontrollable……….

(Just something clicked me, got connected…. I am not very sure if I can do justice but atleast bring to light the web… I thought it’s a simple cobweb weaved by the spider from the accumulated dust in the room corner but seldom I realized that it cannot be dusted so easily as it’s there to turn into a dungeon)

Ready to journey!!!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#67

Part I

The Weave

(I was planning to write and post it on Sunday but the last episode of the show and that scene of VJ with Toral and not a glimpse of Meera in the show just cringed me, irritated me. I just wanted to get out of it. I did a mistake of seeing the last episode so posting it a short one just to start.)

At the Mansion

It was a calm Friday evening with the boys back from school and the roses too playing with them. Chakor was off to meet the social welfare officers and was picked up by Raaghav. They met with Renu and the baby which was completing 4 months and was returning home happy discussing about the program which Aayansh wanted to attend.

Chakor, the cubs want to see some movie Marvel so have organized at our home theatre. Raaghav had converted the underground into a home theatre as taking the roses to theatre was herculean task as they would not sit in one place and Adi was hyper when it comes to action sequence and Anan would start dancing for a song.

They were at the dinner table when the cubs were bringing food from the kitchen along with Raamu kaka and Girija was nowhere to be seen. Where is mausi Raagahv asked when Ar was serving the roti’s along with Aa. Daddy mausi is not well she is having knee pain, so we thought to help her as Manju didi was also feeling sick, we don’t know what but she told she was having stomach pain. Raamu kaka cannot manage all and as Mumma had also gone out we told Manju didi to take rest though she was not willing to and we helped kaaka while Mausi was guiding us. RagKor indeed felt proud of the boys as though they had made the rotis in the shape of various continents still the thought to help was appreciated. Raaghav immediately called for the doctor and he went to Girija, Mausi why didn’t you tell me about this. Raamu said mausi is finding it difficult to climb stairs too but she is not telling anything. What to do age is catching up all walked in Shyaam Kaaka…

He appreciated the boys, wah Ar and Aa you have made yummy dinner. Great. He said you have proved that you can compete with the girls in the kitchen competition when Ar said Kaaka men are good at cooking too like Sanjeev Kapoor who is an excellent chef. They all had a laugh. Haan Raaghav I too will try to avoid staying in the mansion as I too find it difficult to climb the stair up… and you don’t want me to stay in the rooms down as you feel they are small.

The Dr checked Girija and said she is developing arthritis and her knee are getting worn off due to age and also the work and advised her to avoid climbing stairs. She said no no Dr saab I will be alright once I take Dolo na he looked at Arjun who would give her when she wanted a pain killer. But I cannot be without climbing as the rooms are up and I have to take care of all the rooms. This kept Raagahv thinking. The Mansion by its name was indeed like a palace with most of the rooms and the cubs and few guests room in the first floor and the big living and the RagKor master bedrooms and the interconnected roses room on the second floor. The Ground floor had the massive drawing and living room, the dining, huge kitchen, store,the gym, play room and the Pooja with the kids play rooms along with the rooms for Girija and a dormitory for the other staff of the Mansion. The underground had store, home theatre.

They were in their home theatre… the boys watched Marvel while the girls wanted to watch Barbie princess. The boys were excited also the girls were alongwith their bros. while Ragkor were on their mattress placed on their floor. Anan was with Chakor playing with toys while Chakor was resting on Raaghav shoulders.

Raaghav was not interested but the boys enjoyed with him though he would say, arey I don’t understand the way they speak in the English movie I like only my Amitabh, Akshay, SRK, Salman ka movies ekdam mast hai, kya fight hai…. Rowdy always wants fight she would elbow him… he would pull her and say in her ears not only fight, romance bi mast bey winking at her while birdie would blush and smile. Hmm you don’t like emotions Rowdy… arey kya rona dona bey, apun ko gaana, maarna aur pyaar karnaa bahuthey pasand hai bey..

But daddy and Mumma, I love Superman, Batman, Marvel, Superheroes who save the world. Are they born with super powers? asked Aayansh….. hugging mumma. They are good as they save people… But they should come always na? how can they go everywhere to save people? he asked.

Yes Aayansh, We cannot wait for a superman to come save, we have to turn our inner strength into super power, bring the boldness in us.. we should be able to save ourselves in any situation . it is not necessary to always use the might but we must be shrewd to use our mind to escape from a difficult situation said Arjun…. Very right Arjun yes one should be wise to handle a situation applauded Chakor.

But its scary na bhai said Aayansh… Mumma was a baby when she was bonded but she did not cry na, she was not born with super powers but she is indeed super mumma, Ar hugged her and take dad how brave he is. He will just thwart everything in seconds. My Hero, Ar hugged Raaghav, I love you dada he said… Na na bhai but I cannot do like you and dad dhushum, I feel scared. Hmmm but we don’t know how we will change when we are put through such a situation Arjun said. The film was over and they ran off to do their homework, while the roses were waiting to see their movie.

It was the movie of Barbie Princess which was more of a fairly tale with a prince coming to wake up the Barbie from her deep sleep which was cast by a witch… Chakor was mesmerized in the movie and was clapping and enjoying with the roses while Raaghav was just admiring her innocence. Her eyes glew bright looking at the stars,the swing etc. she turned to see Raaghav looking at her when she asked what? He nodded pulling her close pushing her strands , sometimes I find it difficult to see who is the child you or the roses… you get so excited with this fairy movie…. She rested on him with dreamy eyes was telling, yes how pretty Barbie is… her gown…the way she is happy with the Prince, swinging, carefree lying on the open ground looking up to the skies for the stars and moons, her eyes were dreamy. You like it he asked. Haaan yes a big open ground with smoke and snow around, with that outfit , lying on the grass with a Prince looking up at the stars and moon… that would be bliss she said … hmmm I can say you are indeed like the Barbie beautiful, cupping her face but you must get a Prince he said. She looked at him cupping his face saying what are you talking, You are my Prince Raaghav, and if I get a chance,she said dreamily, would like to lie on the ground with you, looking into those stars, moon and drench in your love…somewhere away far away in a fairy land. She blushed when he came close to give her a peck when the able deputy shouted daddy look how beautiful the dress is I want a barbie dress she said. He just came to sense and quickly hugged Ananya and said my princess wants a Barbie dress. Haaannn she kissed him. Ok daddy will get you tomorrow he said. She clapped with happiness.

There was a shout mummaaaa, haaaaa… Arjunnnnn…… Ragkor shouted running to see Arjun had skid and fallen down and had sprained theleg. Pappa its allright its just a sprain he said. No No he was lifting him not allowing him to keep his foot on the floor. Carrying him to his room. Aa was with him always holding him when Chakor sprayed medicine and said in two days he will be fine. Raaghav was in tears, is it paining, shall we go to the hospital. Daddy this is nothing please…. Go sleep. He kissed the cubs and went to his room.

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The day dawned and there were few specialists in structural engineering who were studying the Mansion’s structure for installing a residential lift and Raaghav was talking with the civil engineer for some modification.

Lift??? Girija was surprised. Hamaraliye!!! Yes Mausi, you are not going to climb stairs any more, and Shyaam Kaaka you cannot escape from staying here he smiled, for the kids and all enjoyed kaaka staying as he would share old stories and his experiences. But this is, mausi felt emotional…. Mausi will I not do it if it was for my mother he said.

The installation work for the lift started to go till the top floor and the backside of the Mansion space which was facing the living room was used not hampering the sturdy walls. The work would take 1 to 2 weeks.

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It was night when they were in their balcony. Raaghav you are indeed so great I am so proud of you and you take care of everyone even Mausi, but I am sorry I did not even ask or realise about your mom. What happened to your mom? He had a bit of tears… Chakor I have not been lucky as after being with the boys I went to my village thinking to bring my mom as kaaka had told me only to found that she was suffering from severe diabetes and when she had hurt herself the wound had developed into severe gangrene and the infection had spread through her body that she breathed last. I am sorry she said…

She hugged him saying indeed you have gone through too much …he smiled dry and went to check on the cubs and the roses.

They retired to bed cuddling each other with a hope of the next day dawning fine but destiny had started to weave its web the web which would bring the shocking side of the story…

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Bhaaaaiiiiii he called frantically…… the baby is missing……..she went with mom to the temple but …..he was crying unconsolable.

Bhai.... I love you…. He left………..Why I feel I will not see him again…. He felt somewhat weird. I should not have ………………….

He came to meet the boys at the Mansion but he has not returned home cried his father…..

He got down from the bus to pick his pad when the speeding car just grabbed him from the junction. Who are you, he cried leave meee……one hard hit he felt blackened.

Why didn’t you tell this early? They were disheartened… I could not as it happened before I joined you Bhaiii cried his heart out holding the photo frame….

Whats happening… she cried…..

Unravelling the shocking side which prevails in our society…

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Part 2

The Woe / Wretchedness

At the Mansion

It was the oncoming weekend, the sprain was better for Arjun but still he could not walk well so had bit of discomfort. Not listening to him Raaghav called the doctor and was advised not to walk much and to be on ice compression and on crinkle bandage and not to go school for two days initially. Aayansh and Aditi was helping him while Ananya was bit dull and always hugging him bhai bhai she was bit whining though Arjun was managing well.

It was Sunday evening and the next day Aayansh was participating in a caricature competition at the district level and it was being held at the Main town hall in Shimla. The school had organized for a van to take the children, though Raaghav said he would bring but Aayansh wanted to go with his group but he was somewhat not feeling fine to leave Arjun and go. They had never left each other for any competition whether participating or not the other used to be in giving moral support. Aayansh did not want to go but Arjun was insisting that he should go as he was sure to win the district level too and it was just a matter of few hours and he would come home by evening.

Aayansh was indeed feeling somewhat but he brushed it aside. He ensured Arjun kept his feet in an elevated position.

He kept his canvas and his caricature pens and charcoals as he was doing charcoal caricatures not realizing his face indeed is going to get tarnished with charcoal..

He hugged Arjun and went to bed.

The day dawned…. The roses and Aayansh kissed Arjun and left along with Raaghav to the school and Chakor was staying behind with Arjun.

Arjun wished him all the best. Aayansh waved him bye and went up to theRover. He felt very weird and he ran towards and hugged Arjun… bhai …. Ar kissed him and said you are a superman soyou will win the competition with flying colours.

Bhai.... I love you…. He left……….He turned back wavingand got into the Rover. He hugged theroses and kissed them and left to join the group ready to board the van.

But will he be tarnished????

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The web weaving the woe

It was dark room in Manali…..

Please please leave us cried those who were pushing,holding each other to the corner of the dark room… don’t beat us we will do whatever you say they cried…. its paining kaaka please don’t twist my arms cried one who was just around 8 years…

Don’t do anything to him… I will go and do what you say… they were 5 boys and 3 girls in the age group of 4 to 11 all shambled with dark faces, dirty hair… soiled clothes… few had broken limbs and one was one eyed….one girl was in around 14 years… coiled to the corner of the room….

The man Krodh….in his middle aged who was rugged was shouting at them… do what I say else …. No No they cried….he had two other thugs with him.

He called hey Sukir, kya hua I wanted two more boys around 10 and a small baby… we shall go through Shimla tomorrow and then to Chandigarh from there …finally to Mumbai… he laughed… and then I will set off to Singapore to have a kushal life… its becoming a bit difficult to prey too… this is the first time I am getting prey from Shimla he laughed wicked….

Sukir said our Rakesh will finish our target tomorrow he laughed… he went to the young girl who shrunk herself… with tears please leave me…. Its paining holding her stomach…. don’t take me to the Bungalow please….. walked in a middle aged women in jarring dress, with mouth full of pawn, chewing looking at the girl… she is no good for this Krodh. she kicked her… enuf with you over five years shall dump you for good money in Mumbai she said…

There was one guy completely shambled looking terrible laughing to himself …. You want prey in Shimla… ha ha ha …… his legs were terrible with gangrene … hey you mad man shut up.. can’t you keep quiet…. Since you came on your own six months back I am leaving you shouted Krodh… He laughed madly shouting…. Don’t go to Shimla…… he was hit with rods…. He laughed…. Shimlaaaaa…..

The web was weaved to catch those little insects, but will the insects fall prey or turn into huge spiders to sting back….

The children were pushed into a van and taken to Shimla….. the Van started….. the girl was pushed inside… Sukir have you called that guy Rakesh… we cant waste time staying…. Yes Krodhbhai all set…

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A mix of scenarios…..

Aayansh and the group went to the Town Hall… he did the competition well did a charcoal caricature of ………………………………. The judges looked at all the drawings and literally their eyes dropped tears looking at Aayansh's….. This is full of life….. yes but we have to see the other centres too. The children walked to the van… he was seated near the window looking at his drawing pads, putting the charcoal inside his packet…. The van started…moving towards the junction….

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Renu… I shall take the baby to the temple and come..Maa I shall come… no dear I shall take care kissing the 4 months old baby…. The temple is close by.. you finish cooking… Renu was happy that her mom in law has changed and has been loving her baby…. Haan Maai… please take care.. She walked with the baby to the temple. Left her footwear and went inside to seek the blessings. Mera Pyaari gudiyaaa deko Maa durga ko…. The priest blessed the baby… she went around and walked out…. she could not wear the buckles in her footwear… kaaki give the baby to me asked the lady nearyby, you wear the buckle I will hold. Shukriya she gave the baby and bent down to wear her buckles…. She wore and looked up… laao behan extended her hands when she saw no one near her. She was shocked, mera pothi… mera pothi…. She cried calling everyone…. The black car sped with the baby inside….. towards the junction…. She fainted mera pothi hey bagwaan, maaa durga yeh kya ho gaya….Mohit….. she fainted….the shop vendors knew her and quickly ran to her kaaki what happened , she was fretting mera pothi she cried… called Mohit ……

Mohit got the call, his face turned shocking, pale….. Bhaaaaiiiiii he called frantically…… the baby is missing…….. she went with mom to the temple but …..he was crying unconsollable. Raaghav came running to him. whaaaatttt? Govind he called but Govind had not come to the plantation that day… he just took the Rover alongwith Mohit, quickly called the Commissioner and Chakor who just jittered whaaat? Chakor go to the school and bring the kids I am going with Mohit he said.

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The van with the children stopped at the signal at the Junction…. Aayansh was going through the papers when his pad fell down since it was signal, he got down from the bus to pick his pad when the speeding black car just grabbed him from the junction and sped jumping the signal. Who are you, he cried leave meee……one hard hit he felt blackened. The boys in the bus were busy talking that none noticed AA had got down as he was near the exit and the guide was sitting in midst of other children. The bus drove to school…

Ar was having his food when his fork suddenly hit his gums while eating… Aaayansh he shouted unknowingly… he coughed when Girija gave him water and patted his back. Beta kya hua.. mausi has Aayansh come… call mumma….… I am feeling weird. His heart was palpitating… he said I should not have made him go… something wrong is happening…. Girija called Chakor.

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Lalit was walking towards the Mansion to meet Arjun and Aayansh as he did not go to the competition and wanted to see Arjun too…..he walked and was waiting to cross the road…. It was quite lonely with sparing traffic…. He was crossing when the speeding black car grabbed him inside …. Heeyyyyyy one hit on his head…. He blacked out….. the car was speeding with those insects to another web….. the evil guy laughed the baby was crying… arey give the drop….A drop in its mouth the baby calmed down. the evil was waiting at a corner with the van….Sukir…here your two boys and the baby…. Kaha hai mera maaal , Arey lagtha hai bada ameer ka beta… ha ha they laughed… lo Rakesh bhai he gave the money… hum chaltey … but be careful as the commissioner of Shimla is not an easy guy so saavdhaan he said. Ha ha who sab Krodh sammaalengaa… the boys and the baby was put inside the van which drove towards a dark house on the road to Chandigarh….

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Chakor picked the girls and waited for the van to come…she called Aayansh but he was nowhere to be seen. She asked the boys who saw his bag in the seat but not him. All looked at each other's face. Where is my boy she asked the driver and the guide who were dumb and could not tell … he was inside the bus… but… but what?…. where is my son?…. She started to panic….. she called the Lion…. Who raged whaaattt? The commissioner was shocked to know that the baby and Aayansh both are missing…..

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Chakor’s phone rang…. Lalit’s father was on the call….Lalit left for the mansion and said he will return within 30 minutes but its now an hour can you ask him to come home… she called the mansion to find out that Lalit never came to the Mansion…. She called Lalit’s father holding her pain…. her agony… No Lalit has not come…. He came to meet the boys at the Mansion but he has not returned home cried his father…..

The Rover was at the school… the roses were crying…bhai bhai mummaaa… dadddyyyy. The Lion roared at the driver…. Where is my son…. How can you be careless….

Raaaghav the birdie was crying inconsolable...oh daak baaba whats happening the boys and the baby where are they… each have gone missing in different place. How will we search all …. Whom will we search first… she cried. Raaghav my son… my Aayansh .. she got a call from Arjun… mummaaa what happened where is Aayansh why have you all not yet come home. She cried. Arrrrjuun , Aaaayaaansh isss missing. Kya mummaaa Bhaai he cried….

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Renu was shocked ….. she was angry over her mom in law…I know you never liked the baby as it was girl. What did you do to my child. She cried Mohit…. holding his collars, I want my baby, I want my baby. She was hyseterical… she just fainted my child…. My child….. the mom in law was crying… no Mohit please don’t suspect me…I did not like initially but after being with the little angel I love her, I am not a monster to hurt my own grandchild.. she cried praying all gods. Maa Durga I came to your temple… what have you done?……Please save my pothi

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They left the roses at the mansion…. Arjun was nconsolable… mumaaa… daddy its my mistake I should not have fallen down…I should not have left him alone to go.... he did not want to go either… I pushed him to go…. Aaayansh sorry bhai… where are you….He limped going to the Pooja… Hey Bajrangbali, Shree Ramji please please bring my bhai back… where are you. He was further shocked to hear that Lalit and the baby was also missing. Maa whats happening.. Chakor cried her heart out… She called the Commissioner…

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Raaghav was calling Govind…. He went to his house…. Govind what happened are you not well. There is chaos. Bhaai just a minute I am coming….. His eyes were red… what happened Bhaai. Raaghav told him while driving to the Commissioner office… whaat? He was shocked… No No not again not with any one he cried… They reached the commissioner office. Chakor was there.Yes madam what you say is right. I will do that….He called the control room!!!!

What Govind? what not again… what are you telling RagKor asked. He narrated the pathos in his life. Bhaai I was in Kulu and its now over 5 years my daughter Laila was 9 years old when we were returning from the fare. It was crowded and I just left her hands for a minute but she vanished. I searched everywhere but could not find her. I don’t know where she is, if she is alive or dead he cried his heart out…. Laila….I was so disheartened … the police couldnot find her… I moved to Shimla ….

Why didn’t you tell this early? They were disheartened… I could not as it happened before I joined you Bhaiii …and you were also handling the boys all alone.. I just could not tell anything and I too got attached to the boys… but ….. Govind cried his heart out holding the small photo frame which he was having within his wallet. Chakor took the pic

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The web woven to woe……

Leave the baby…… don’t do anything…. You know the baby?…Nooo I don’t know but it’s a small baby…

How dare you write and throw…… he was squeezing the boys hand…. Don’t do anything to him awwwwwwhhhhh bhaaaiiiii, Dadddy, mummaaa he shouted as the iron rod………………

He laughed again the madman….. ha ha I told you don’t go to Shimla….. ha ha shut up what is in Shimla…. Why did you bring him here….

The Eagle…… The Lion…………………is in Shimla…. What??? we are not going via the Reserved Forest ……. Ha ha they are not in the forest ……ha ha you Morons……………… he laughed…

She walked very slowly and took the baby who was sleeping….. she held her to her close…. She cried…..

Its not easy…. Everywhere there is police…whaaat??? But how???? I don’t know…. We have to stay inside this……we cannot leave Shimla now….Rakesh told about the commissioner!!!

Bhaaai…. He cried holding the 4 year old boy….. where is your………… they cried hugging him….. we cannot wait for the superman…. He wiped his tears….Yess…. Turn your strength into superpower….. Yes….. he prayed…. Be brave bhaaai…. He aimed and threw the stone at the ………….and few apples with it…..it was dark..

Where can they be… the birdie turned into eagle… are they at the same place? How can we find out? She looked at the commissioner… are they kidnapped but for what???? Chakor the photos are put up….. the commissioner got a phone call…. The CCTV at the junction……

Call Rakesh!!!! Shouted Krodh….He picked the phone…. Key bey bolo……. He spoke…. Walked the rowdy…

She cried to him…. they made me first…………….. and then they took me to the bungalow… she cried no no…... No no don’t touch me…… she held the baby tight… to her….they will make her like me… she cried….

Yes she follows bapuji but will she turn away Bose?

Yes she follows ahimsa but will she tolerate himsa?

She is Maa Durga but she will not hesitate to turn Maa Kaali with her ferocious Lion…

No No No she just could not take it ….just could not…..she ordered her Lion…. Let them breathe but break their bones….. she turned Maa Kaali….Raged the Lion just that word from her.....he was uncontrollable....

(this part is a bit disturbing but the facts will be more in the next chapter but thats the reality, the harsh dark side)

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This is so beautiful. Just read one para, will be bookmarking this link and coming back to read.

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Part 3 (A)

(its bit long so writing it in two parts. I will post the other later in the day as I know this is too disturbing... so will not keep you all in agony... Except the concept, the social issue everthing the story around is spun by me and nothing relates to anybody>

The War … the Wreck…

They were in the Commisioner’s office…. Where are they? Arjun called daddy check the bracelet, while the bracelet was not showing up… where are you my boy the Lion was breaking his hand. The commissioner called the school and asked if the van had the CCTV in it luckily it was and they quickly checked to notice that Aa was there in the van till the junction and afterwards not in his seat. They rushed to the junction.

The photos are up madam said the Commissioner, the baby, Aayansh, Lalit’s photo was up in all channels, circulated through whatsapp and facebook and all social media. The control room was alert to check all the checkposts, airport and all ways out leading out of Shimla.

The CCTV at the junction was checked, they saw a speeding black car they froze and checked the number plate it had sped and they saw a boy bending and afterwards missing. They zoomed and froze to see that it was Aa. As it was junction they could catch the CCTV but the temple and the other road did not have so they could not check upon Lalit and the baby, but Chakor asked to zoom the camera and she could make out the man driving the car. He was one eyed, beard and was having a patch tied around his left eye though not very clear. They checked the number plate only to realise the original owner of the car had given complaint of theft two days ago and they found the car deserted near a remote place. Raaghav found the bracelet within the car with a charcoal piece and also one slipper. My boy has fought she cried her heart out…AAyansh… hey daak baaba whats this??? holding the charcoal but whose slipper is this?

But who are they, why have they taken him…. its not planned as they would not know he will get down so are they randomly kidnapping boys?? if so what’s the motto… the eagle was pounding her head…. Chakor…. The Lion was restless. Bajrangbali ka kasam kehethey… whoever is doing this he will see hell bey!!! Commissioner Saab we don’t have time please lets get into some action he said. They quickly set a team to trace the one eyed man which is Rakesh.

Mohit was running everywhere asking near the temple if they saw anyone with his baby…he was disheartened… they saw a lady walking scared, in hiding and caught her… she said she indeed took the baby to help but a man took it from her and ran off.. She was taken to the police station but was of no use as she was terribly traumatized herself. Why the baby??? Chakor could not understand…

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It was dark everywhere… it was filthy smelling room…looked like a godown…

Aaayansh woke up slowly, his head was hammering with pain…. his hands were tied. Eyes were blurring……Where am I … Leave me…. Daddy, mumma he started crying terribly…. Chup the man held his hand. Keep quiet he said else I will break your hands he said. Aa was hell scared, shocked.. he looked around to see all the boys and girls… where am I?

He saw in the corner another boy coiled…. The boy slowly lifted his head opened his eyes… Lalitttt Aa called …… oh you know this boy Sukir asked… yes he is my friend. oh good then. Lalit started crying… Aa… leave us what do you want??? Daddyyyy….They both cried… we shall take them in the other van to Chandigarh hesaid. Chandigarh???? Why…. Bhaaai…. He cried… he looked at his hand to see his band missing… he remembered that while he was fighting in the car, the band had fallen … oh god Daddy you can’t trace me too...He cried… Mummaa…. He hugged Lalit who was equally traumatized…

The man left them…..

The boys and the girls came around the two and started crying….. Aa got scared looking at them all were shabby, many of their parts of the body had been twisted or broken…. One young girl hugged AA must be around three and cried…. he held her…. There was another boy aged four who was crying. He hugged… whats your name he asked… he couldnot speak… he opened his mouth when Aa just screaaached, the tip of the tongue has been severed… he felt dizzy. He just left the boy and hugged Lalit.. where are we? he cried.

They were taken out in the van it was dark…. He found a paper… he quickly wrote with the charcoal… daddyyyy help….…. By the time he could finish the evil walked in he quickly threw the paper while getting into the van….. the van left to a certain distance, when the baby was brought in the front seat near the driver…

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RagKor were at the junction…. Looking out for clues….Mohit called and told Raaghav that the baby was taken away by a man..Chakor was shocked .What about Lalit…. His father was going mad…. My son, I lost my wife and now will I loose my son he cried… he said he has only one slipper of his now which he found while he was going searching the route he took.

The police were searching for Rakesh, and managed to get info that he was with his friend in a bar. Don’t nab him, lets follow him she said….. but mam, please….The eagle was planning herself while the Lion was restless ….Chakor… Aa is not like Arjun he will get scared, don’t know what the poor child is going through…but he knew when his Eagle is in her thinking mode all he has to wait for her word to get into action.

What connection…. the boys and the baby…. They found from records that Rakesh was a petty thief and lift cars but just this morning he was lavishing at a high end bar… My Boy be bold…. I will not allow anything to happen to you.. … but where is Lalit???? She looked at the slipper which they found in the car. Is this??? She quickly took a pic of the slipper and sent it to Lalit’s father and got it confirmed. So AA and lalit are together. But what about the baby?

One team was following Rakesh… who was happy drinking….

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The children were being driven in the van…. The van stopped… walked in the man… hey he called Sukir where are you taking the children… Aa face lit up… somebody is coming to help… is he superman???…. Hey god…. Sukir was surprised…. He got a call.. The man got in and said take the van back….,,

The children were pushed to the godown in the darkroom… walked the man with the paper in his hand…. The paper which Aa had written…. So who wrote this he asked…. Tell me he shouted… he slapped Sukir…..it was Krodh… how careless are you. He showed the paper… written …Daddy help…… if this was found we would have been in trouble… he said. He took his iron rod and asked who wrote this….

AA kept quiet…. He was scared…. The evil hit the small children … he said no no don’t beat…. So did you write…..tell me he said…. Tell me or I will pull this hot iron rod on your friend … he pulled Lalit’s hand. No no no please, don’t hurt my friend… Yes I wrote he cried…. please leave us… the wicked laughed and said still I will hurt your friend when he was about to the draw the rod…. Aa quickly held it with his left hand he shrieeeekkkkeddd aaawwww bhaaai… Daddy… Mumma….his fingers bore the brunt. He shivered with pain. Lalit cried…. he was not allowed to go near Aa.

Don’t ever try to do this… I will hurt your friend….

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Bhaaai,……. AAyaansh Arjun screeeammmed out …. Raaghav felt his heart with shooting pain….Chakorrrr lets do something . Something is wrong happening to our boy…. He wa sraging. She was crying…. Lets go in the route of the black car..said the Commissioner.. They got into the Rover… all roads are blocked… mostly if they try to take boys they would take the forest route not realizing that’s the route to Chandigarh they started on that route when the police split into many teams and were checking around at various checkposts. Mohit and Govind were in separate police teams. He was praying God god not the boys. Bhaai and Madam has gone through so much pain please please save theboy..

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They brought the baby…. It was crying…. Arey what why is it crying…. Shouted the evil.

The girl in the 14 slowly came to the crying baby… she took her slowly and held her… she cried… the evil gave her a bottle of milk and she gave the milk but the baby was still crying for its mom’s warmth.. Arey issey chup karo…. He raised the hands. When AA realized it was Mohits baby… Lalit looked at AA when he said no no don’t harm the baby….Krodh looked at him you know the baby… Lalit tried to say when AA quickly said with pain in his fingers no no I don’t know the baby but it’s a small baby…. Oh!! he laughed … he got irritated as the baby was still crying. Give the drops he said when Sukir gave a drop in its small mouth when it calmed down and kept still. She cried….holding the baby…

Sukir said Krodh bhai just now Rakesh called saying there is police everywhere I don’t know he showed his phone see the boys photo and the baby’s photo has been put up by the police. Its better we stay for a while and change the van and go in the morning….

They all were pushed to the corner. Call that Rakesh find out what’s happening and he looked at Aa…. Sukir darken his and the other boys face…. Sukir took the charcoal,mud and dirt and rubbed it on their face so that they are not identified.

Krodh was irritated as his plan is being hampered….The shambled man with thegangrene foot was coming in the van in the front who laughed again….. ha ha the lion and the eagle……. Krodh lost his cool….and kicked him hard hard.

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The children surrounded lalit and Aa… he cried in pain. They were given dried rotis and water and pushed to the corner. Eat, wewill come back left Krodh and Sukir. Lalit asked AA why he did not tell about the baby. AA said no just because I told you are my friend he was trying to hurt you so he will try to hurt the baby and make us do things. You are right, Lalit said.

The children told their plight….

They were kidnapped from various places and were gruesomely dismembered by breaking their legs and twisted their hands… one of the 8 year old boy was made blind as he sang well. There was a baby which was taken by the girl but the baby died recently due to continuous dose of drops. The drops made the baby drowsy. The children were sent in pair and made to beg at the junction, signals and tourist places. Aa was getting the ugly picture before him… so they are kidnapped to beg on the streets, in the junction and the shambled gangrene foot man was managing them at the signals while Sukir would be far away watching them. The money earned would be given to Krodh… Krodh had an ugly network in many small towns of HP as being a tourist place. All these children were abducted four to five years back and none had escaped… No one had reached out and if anyone tried to talk to them at the signal the children were severely punished by pouring hot oil, and with hot iron rod and sometimes twisted and bones broken… This is gruesome…

The girl cried she told him they brought me to beg on the streets of Manali for four years and last one year they had been taking her in the evenings to the rich bungalows….. she cried she cried…. could not talk further. There is no escape… we will die…I tried to kill myself, she showed her severed veins but these animals made me live to torture me… she cried.

AA felt dazed…… who will save us…. He cried… if Arjun was there he would have thought of something…. But how will he come…

Arjun was praying at the Mansion… AAyansh wherever you are stay brave, be bold… we fought karan, we fought the human sacrifice, we fought Hira Laal. My brother be bold. Daddy and Mummy have set out they will get to you but please be bold, be brave…

Aayansh heard the footsteps of the evil…

Arjun Bhaaai…. He cried holding the 4 year old boy……they cried hugging him….. we cannot wait for the superman…(He heard Arjun) . He wiped his tears….Yess….Turn your strength into superpower…our Mumma is super and our dad is a hero (he heard Arjun) .. Yes…..Be brave bhaaai (Arjun prayed at the Mansion…)But I cannot fight them… Its not necessary to use your might, use your mind, rise to handle the situation… Yesss bhai…. I have to turn myself …. Turn my strength… I will save you all he hugged the children crying. I am RagKor’s son and I am Arjun’s brother… he wiped his tears…I will not accept defeat. I will fight… I am the fighter’s son… held out his hands when all joined him.. you all listen to me and do as I say he said.

Aayansh saw in the side few big stones… he quickly took them gave to Lalit and others. He grabbed his charcoal and put in his pocket. there were torn clothes he gave it to the other children to hide…

They made them get into a different van… it was smelling apple… looks like they carry apples in this.

They were driving through the forest way towards Chandigarh… they did not realise that they were driving to meet the Eagle and the Lion for they are not carrying a kitten but their cub….with them. They have wronged so to be thronged.

They were driving through it was quite calm when he heard the sound of another vehicle… he saw through the van door… it was the Rover which was following them…. He knew the eagle and Lion were there daddyyy…mummaaaa he whispered.. but how to get to them…

Aayansh signaled the children, he quickly drew something with the charcoal and wrapped the stones with the torn clothes.

There was a crowbar beside the huge apple carton boxes in which when they were taken. He and Lalit without making noise slowly tried to open the little opening in the van door which was latched with chain. It opened just enough to throw the stone…

He aimed and threw a stone at the Rover and it missed…. He threw a bigger stone again when it hit the mirror and passed. Heyyyy shouted Raaghav who was driving….but didnt know what was hitting..

He aimed and threw the stone covered with the torn cloth and also few apples at it non stop. The Rover stopped not knowing whats happening but the van sped and went fast. God …. Did we miss…. Aa was upset. Please daddy please mumma look at the stones he was praying. Bajrangabli hamari madath karo.. please…

Krodh got a call saying the forest area is also blocked and its not advisable to go through that route. He got irritated and was raging with anger. In the meantime the police cornered Raakesh but he just refused to give any information and said he was not aware of anything.….The van sped to another place for a temporary halt. The children were again pushed to a corner…in a old godown

The shambled gangrene foot man got down….. he was made to stay with the children. He laughed I told you don’t go to Shimlaaa, the Lion and the Eagle are there…. He saw AA and Lalit but as their face was with charcoal he could not identify…

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The Rover stopped… raged the Lion… Chakor got down ..she saw the stones… and apples… she picked them… The commissioner was with them while he got the call that Raakesh does not have any information.. he asked them to leave him but keep a vigil and follow him like a shadow.

Raaghav look here she said.. where did these apples come?? look at the stones… the clothes were flying away when she picked them… Look… She saw a pic of the Lion and Eagle. They teared… Aaayansh…. So you are here somewhere, you have given us hope… the next pic had the small baby sleeping in the hands with bangles.. the last one had a pic of boy with one eye…with tear drops… she could not understand. They looked at it… her eyes grow in shock… Raaghav the baby sleeping…and boy with one eye gruesomely drawn. God God she jittered… …. But apples???What does that mean???? She looked at Raaghav with heart palpitating… she said the baby is also with the boys…. the commissioner understood the ugly network which was coming up. He said this is dangerous. Raaghav said what danger… Chakor explained him when he was just raging…. If anything happens to my son, even a small scratch on him I will kill all he raged.. she cried, praying but was putting a brave face… we will get you!!!

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let them breathe but Raaghav break their bones…promise me don’t kill them in your anger but make sure they just live as vegetable.for the first time…she flared with anger….sorry bapuji…she teared….. for this time I will follow Bose…the Maa Durga indeed turned Maa Kaali and asked her lion to turn ferocious. Hunt the devild….. she shouted ... at her words Raged the Lion....

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