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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313
Superb amazing...❤️it was a quite interesting story...i was continuously smiling while reading...sukor's 3 cuties...loved sukor romance too much as always...😉

Thank you so much dear

So happy that my writing could make you smile

Thanks a ton 😳

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: meshmesh
That was lovely Maithu
A sneak peek into Sukor's married life.

Ayan was a typical teenager, full of attitude.
Looks like Charmi is daddy's girl, but she reminds me of Chakor, I imagine she has Chakor's cute pout.
Loved Charmi's reaction to her parents' kiss, baby , how cute.
Loved the twins bond.

Sukor aren't Sukor without fighting, but Suraj knows how to calm her down.
Loved naughty Chakor, especially her behavior the next morning.
Looks like this Suraj is on his way to achieving his dream of having a dozen children.

Thank you so so much Mai

Well! I always wanted to see them with kids and all when they grow old, and I think it will not happen in the show, so did it here LOL

Hahaha Glad you liked the 3 Musketeers ;-)

Yup! I just added the traits of Chakor in Charmi!

The Kiss thing is that there is one quizz show I used to watch in between my lunch during high school times. And every Wednesday, Parents came with their kids. And once in a show, a boy said that he got his sister as his parents kissed each other(well not the same kiss but kiss toh hai). And that came to my mind and felt it to be apt to use it here.

Agree yaar

Sukor without NJ is not Sukor at all

Well I think here it's the dream of the woman and not the man LOL

Thank you so much Mai

See you soon with an interesting update of something interesting

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu 😉🤗
Just loved and a big 😃 on my face throughout

Well so you kept your promise... took me to the world when they make siblings for Ayan

lovin the chittooos Charmi and Rishi... aaawwwh sweetie pies...

Sukor and Adha dozen bacchhaa how sweet!!!

Loved the twins bonding and the bonding with mummy..

cutie pie charmi and her version of new kids... imagine if just kisses bring babies... sukor will have their own territory of kids...😆😆

Loved my lady wow now I understood what you were talking about Mission Ten

Madam is on a Jackpot.

Hey Sukor without their knok-joks ha ha at any age...

Loved my darli Ayan... grown up yeaaahhh hmmm typical with laptop, phone... hmm the way he handled the kidosss.

Mummy I love you from Ayan,, spill a tear drop indeed for me...

I felt sooo happy, relaxed, light and nothing can stop the dude when he gets his jungli billi and that too in that 😉 mode

Looks like there will be more additions

Just loved loved it a lot Maithu

i felt it as an ode to Zarir and Orenda!!!!

keep going girl...

thanks a lot deary

I was reading your comment when I was in train along with my sis and my sister was looking at me as if I went crazy! LOL

And reading all your comments always make me smile wide!

You know! I have a wish!

Want to know the negativity of the things! That will make me better! Ouf! But I know no one is going to tell me :-|

Yup!

I always try to keep my promises! That's why I don't give words that soon :-|

Gladly you liked the cuties and the teenage boy and their dramas!

Hahaha I think I came on the right time with this OS! LOL Adha dozen bacha Heee

I think if kisses can bring kids, Sukor would have well I forgot the count N number of kids running around their feet

Happy you got the meaning of mission Big Ten ;-)

Feeling so happy that this OS was working well!

Thank you

Thank you dear

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Hello!

I think I need to tell you all how this OS made it's way!

Frankly speaking, I have this idea of Sukor wedding anniversary and kids and Suraj late even before I ended Orenda!

Well I wanted a full on powerful Chakor.

With time the idea stayed and just last week I started to write it and then thought why not include Zarir!

A lot of things are common between these two: Suraj taught Chakor(school or business), Chakor is bubbly and jungli billi(always or hidden), Sukor love kids(Ayan and the twins) and Suraj is someone reserved but changed(thanks to Chakor in all these years)

And with these ideas, I penned down things and re-read 3 times to check everything (I think this is the first time I reading 3 times one story of mine before posting, well even after posting it I don't read :-|)

This is the short story of this 3000 words' OS!

Thank you buddies for the love and support you all giving me!

What do you say about an update of TTW?

See you all soon!

Love you!

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Maithu, Loved the insight into your thought process. I can Orenda's Sukor in this Sukor. Chakor may be a mother of 3 but she won't neglect her biology lessons 😳😆.

Linking the story to Zarir was a bonus, thanks for that.

Eagerly waiting for TTW updates, you left us on a cliffhanger with that sneak peek.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Maithu, Loved the insight into your thought process. I can Orenda's Sukor in this Sukor. Chakor may be a mother of 3 but she won't neglect her biology lessons 😳😆.

Linking the story to Zarir was a bonus, thanks for that.

Eagerly waiting for TTW updates, you left us on a cliffhanger with that sneak peek.

😆😆 Agree Mai!

Chakor will be always over her biology lessons even if she is a chemistry teacher!

Pleasure is all mine dear as I have one thing in less to write by joining Zarir and Orenda LOL

Well I'm trying my best to take it back and when I think for that, new ideas are coming! What to do?

I'm already thinking if I should or not post a new SP of new Sukor story! 😕

Before end of next week! One update of TTW! Sure! Certain!

See you!

Thank you!

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: maithu_

Well I'm trying my best to take it back and when I think for that, new ideas are coming! What to do?
I'm already thinking if I should or not post a new SP of new Sukor story! 😕

Before end of next week! One update of TTW! Sure! Certain!

See you!
Thank you!

@bold Post it, the more the merrier 😃, but I hope you post one of the pending stories along with TTW updates.