Udaan DEDT #4 - Page 105

Jabbar Khan, Gabbar Khan.. Hai Hai Unka Muskaan

Khan Khan kya muskaan!!!!

Drama Drama!!!! But firstly let me say I am feeling sad about hearing BP death indeed made my BP go low!!! Actually after a long time we got good villians but hmmm. (I am leaving aside the hands of Sukor in this)

Chalo chodo all I was looking at was hai hai my dude... My adories... My chirpy bird, who lost in his DIP eyes and that subtle smile. That shock and smile reminded me of the scene where he got lost at the beauty in front of him during the ML track knocking at the door (waise achi lagrahi ho) Sumi tho gayi though saw late but...

Jabbar khan what an entry he did like Gabbar, dare even think to touch my lady, I will come from nowhere, maardiya Bacha ko!!! No introduction whats the need when the objective was to thrash, thrash for the atrocities caused to his daughter. Dude wastes no time in intro, straight maro!! Hahah ... He then held him I had no qualms as he had little dialogues and allowed Chakor to take stride... he need to stay disguised...and its ok as they are in the Lanka and need to tread safe!

The way he gestured when questioned by Vik and the way he walked straight behind the Pradhan whataaa body language Khan Saab!!! His strategy worked for the inspector herself vouched who he was!!!😊

Loved the dutiful father he is the way he enquired about Anjor and gulped that everything will be alright and the doteful husband sharing about antidote. The happiness that their daughter will be fine and they can lead a normal happy life. He just wants that nothing more.

In all this loved how Chakor was bit pained and said what the villians have made them into, against her morales she is forced to enjoy somebody's pain (loved this, I am sure SuKor hands are not stained even indirectly in BPs death)..

My dude is practical, yes nothing wrong in enjoying for the pain that BP had imposed on their daughter, it is not a war of principles but war against heinous criminals. Jabbar was Jabarjast in revealing himself before BP, the way he took his head robe, BP must be feeling robbed of his life.

Loved my adories looking at each other from their windows, near yet too far!! And that Mahiyaaa...❤️

The dearth of confidence in saying nothing is impossible to Rajjo (arey Rajjo cant you please leave them for some minutes!!! Arey yaar, she is helping them but still, I am like please go)

Comes that ... my adories... That moment, aww Jabbar Khan, Gabbar Khan hiding but everything took over by his that Muskaan.. what a smile... what a turn of his eyes, full of love, DIP for his beauty enthralling in front of him. Mesmerised, he could not move his eyes and that smile...

He was lost in her, she was lost in his eyes and in that smile... Lost in her reminisced those beautiful moments of togetherness, (their eyes which were tearing for their daughter always, froze for few minutes just forgot about everything, everybody and just infused and imbibed in that gaze, wish that moments froze, wish the world stopped spinning).

What an irony, he thought about those not so normal scenes, (was it only me) The first divine wedding, where she allowed him to fill her maang, consciously... the moments of imagining how they will be when they are old, the moments when he was taking the blame on him to protect Imli just because Chakor would break and the way he held her so preciously, the lustful moment of her on him and the best in his life the confession of the bratty, naughty her of asking him if he would love her as the way she is... He lost in her, was drinking the beauty, Rajjooo was also lost in seeing my adories... they did not touch, not embrace just their gaze weaved the magic, and I was spell bound. Rajjoo brought them from their trance (I excused her here as it was in the middle of the village...) and he told those lines which I always pride of... for my dude never shy to appreciate her beauty, you look so beautiful, and he never says just once for his love is so much that he said bahut bahut bahut zyaada and imbibed her beauty within him by closing his eyes capturing her image within him and I too lost myself when he closed his eyes for those seconds...My dude proved, na wakt, na jaga never stops himself in admiring, applauding her beauty... Even the presence of Rajjo did not bother him, does he ever!!!!

Chakor my birdie was quick to understand her man, shy full of shy with those eyes lowering for she too wants that but still bringing him to the reality, enough of praising me, I dressed to distract not you but the villagers while you search the antidote...he came back to sense, quickly told her that he will light a diya in front of the lord to signal that his task his completed but even while saying so his eyes was full of love... and the way she said, please take care of yourself and the way he signaled yes and raised his thums loosing himself in her!!!

Yes you both will emerge winners in this war with those criminals.

I will wait with my heart and eyes to get lost myself again in that beautiful smile of yours, those lustful eyes of you both..

Whatever Khan does my dude adorn as disguise his Muskaan can never be masked!!!

Between the moonlight and sunlight ...my SuKor.. a..mini OS

(title courtesy: my dear Nikki)

We loved the sukorilicious😳 moment of rain in the night. And the morning dawned, with my adories walking, laughing, clinging together in the basti...

Grghh!!! 😡the makers did not give a snapshot of what happened in between but my rusted antennas were rising.

warning: mature content ahead please read at your risk

Ji kaaki,... Suraj took the sindoor, that pinch of red powder which always adorned her maang, making him feel the pride marking him on her ever...adorned her maang with love, with that pride on her...

She was happy as he applied the sindoor...which emphasized of his being, belonging to her.. she did the unimaginable for that mark to be on her forever.

They both went into their trance hugging each other not thinking about anything, anyone, just them... not even about Anjor.

When Chakor goes into her second world its only her Suraj... they remained while the rains were drenching, pouring terribly...

Suraj babu...kaaki called blushing..(she must have got reminded of her old days maybe).. its raining too much, and you both are tired and drenched..you cannot go to Haveli at it is quite dark (thank you I love you kaaki).

Bhuka has gone to tirth yatra (thank you mai-baapu what to do they have to do a lot to wash their other beti's sins)and kasturi had given the house keys, please take this and stay tonight... she gave them some food too(kaaki mera pyaari kaaki loads of love)..

Par Suraj...An... Shhh...dude just kept his finger on her lips.. kuch math bol..anjor is with mummy and its raining, we cannot go and pleassseee Chakor with full of lust in his eyes and she was already melting in his gaze..

They both were shivering wanting the warmth which they have lost for how long ...as eversince after meeting after 7 years, with their lost and found daughter they never felt their warmth completely. Everything seems new, seems afresh..

She was trembling and that lehenga was making it difficult for her to walk as it was weighing her down...

He lifted her close to his heart and walked towards the house where they healed themselves earlier long back...(lucky house is maika inspite of being small it was full of warmth and love) with eyes on each other, eyes full of lust, love..

He made her stand holding her around her waist and she opened the door... the house was cozy...dark as it has been locked for some days now. He lighted the lantern...as the power was off due to the rains.

He turned to see her , her face so beautiful with those rain drops on her hair, lips trembling, face turned pink which was driving him crazy...she could feel the heat of his gaze inspite of the chillness, her blood rushing as he removed his Tee and stood like a Greek Geek with his toned torso with those drops of water sparkling in the latern light... running down from his hair.

She could not but bring her eyes down, she quickly went to the cupboards to get hold of some kasturi's saree but lo kasturi had locked the cupboards but for one trunk suitcase which had few spreads, a quilt and only a saree with a thin wrap around towel.

The other two lanterns were lit and suraj lit the charcoal fire place in the kitchen and brought her near it..he helped her remove the lehenga skirt and the blouse slowly which was stuck to her as it was wet. She was going frenzy as his fingers trailed her and his eyes dilating with lust while looking on every part of her.. 7 long years and feels like it just their new night...

She trembled as he wrapped the saree around her...she was loosing and he knew that as he was too...

He just changed into the thin wrap of towel and put the wet clothes on the chairs beside.. and changed the spreads on the single cot which was there!

She was trembling as it was only a thin saree she draped around and no blouse too.

He came in from behind closed in her, nuzzled her...the rain had stopped, Chanduji came out and was shining through the window and dude was going frenzy seeing her in the moonlight, her saree just stuck to her wet curves which was revealing her hidden peaks..

He just turned her and hugged her and trailed soft kisses all over her making her weak and crave for more...she kissed him with all vigour and fervor... his personal exotic wine waiting to be drunk.. he carried her to the bed placed her preciously on him lying down and slowly removed that thin piece of cloth between them.

All of a sudden he just cupped her face, looked into her eyes which was darkening and spoke those words...Chakor, I am sorry, sorry for everything that we missed over the seven years... I missed you sooo much... She was puzzled, why now... you have apologized... she cupped him... Sooraj ..I too missed you, I was indeed perplexed when I was told that you were in US with Na... he just placed his lips on hers, kissing her he spoke between those kisses...nooo I was not with anyone... I was not even living but only breathing... for you, your memories, memories of those lovely days...I cannot give you back those years but I promise I will make good for those years..

I know Suraj... for even I was breathing only for you as I know you can never live with anyone else...

He was just taking her in his stride, devouring her all over and she was ready, to be devoured and also to feel all of his hardness for he is her personal Sun, her need was growing as she wanted no incubation, no warmth but that fire to just douse her passion, her growing needs...they were on fire...

Chanduji was happy seeing his adories and breezed the curtains of the windows to close for they were entering a new world, a world of love, passion...

Suraj...hmmm he said dreamily...we don't have a spare dress she said, do we need one? he asked...

He took her into the other world by entwining with every part of hers by drawing the quilt over them...

I was out side the house, standing, praying with my hands folded looking at Chanduji as my adories were mingling into a beautiful poetry!!!! Let them stay entwined forever, ever and ever...

Tan tan taaan...

(welcome comments/likes / bashes but no tomatoes/chappals)

Hope it isn't too vulgar... Please let me know so that I can remove it.

(PS. small spice up... the next day morning my adories walked clinging on to each other with their knok-jok of going to mela...and dude saying no... and she asking for Anar ka aloo chat pata chaat... And dude was like what chat pata chaat sooo soon, winking his eyes...and in turn got a punch from his jungli billi ... awww don't underestimate the horse power of my dude)

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Originally posted by: ndivyateja

Sumiii..Sweetheart ❤️

Firstly big bear hugs 🤗 for your amazing write ups..I've completely bailed out of Daily soap land & escaped to my k-drama land.. So lot of characters sound strangers to me..But Thanx to Mai for her daily synopsis, I managed to get a vague Idea about the story..😃

Even if Im not watching the show, I will always make it a point to read the magic you create..I've been on a sumi-posts-marathon 😆 Finished them now..All I can say 'Positivity, Sincerity in your writings, Unmatchable fondness towards Sukor' Girl you amaze me 😳

"NOT ONCE, TWICE.."

Finallyyy !!! Our popcorn moment !!! A visual unforgettable !!! Happy tears rolled down my eyes all the while watching that evil being whipped..No mercy, no regrets, only 'Dil Mange More' 😉 Only if Kasturi hadn't meddled..Never mind..We got to have the much awaited Punishment..Only person I could remember was you & Kavi (poor girl, must be missing her i*lu) 😆

Your titles are just..What to say.."Perfecto !!"

Chandriyan..Chandrikan..loved it..Just like Chandriyan is India's answer to NASA, Chandrika is an answer to the Headstrong people who abuse their power 👏

Wait..A rain moment Rain & Sukor are like synonyms to expression of love..While reading your lines, I realised 'what holding my breathe without realising it' means..Sizzling..Lit..Too Sukorilicious..I love how the Nature helped them in forgetting their pain 😳

15kgs lehenga 😲, that too wet, & Meera on top of it..Vj proved to be a Bahubali again 😆 Cvs are putting his muscles into good use 😛

Suraj in disguise..This man had me at Sardar in benaras track, now in this look he truly proves his seamless transitions..Wish Meera is given more than a veil..Still its her acting chops that grabs all the attention 😊

Looks like Melodrama is on high notes & still you managed to pause at Sukor moments, listened to what they aren't saying & wrote down their silence..Kudos to you heart 👍🏼

Loads of love..More power to your writing as I want you to keep writing more & more..Hugs again..🤗

If Yudhishthira and Ram are catalysts why not my Chakor?

Yudhishthira and Ram both from the famous two Hindu Mythology, The epitomes of righteousness, the principled, the ones who never missed the path of dharma can be a catalyst, murder in hidence to guard the dharma why not Chakor?

Open to healthy discussion.

Thanks Mai for the summary and your title kept me thinking a lot. I saw the episode and had numerous views, debating within myself, analyzing within myself.

I have never thought so much but yesterday's episode made me realise, analyse and also infact terrible MinArt debate.

This is not a war of principle (as I had mentioned earlier, this is a war with homicides, not even ordinary criminals).

Yudhishtra the eldest of Pandavas, who lived by principles, never lied, whose chariot had the golden sun in the flag, its horses feet never touched the ground and had dharma devatha following as a dog behind him, did lie only once in the war of Kurukshethra (Mahabharata, the war which was played by deceit) as he had to make his Acharya Drona to lay down his arms, he said those lines Ashwathama hatha (means dead) kunjaraha (Ashwathama was the name of Drona's son as well as the name of the Kings elephant (kunjaraha means elephant). Lord Krishna played a game of blowing his conch when Drona came to Yudhistra to confirm about his son's death which made him hear only Ashwathama hatha while the rest of the words he murmured and was not heard in the sound of the conch. Drona was not bad but he had to fight for the bad supporting the Kauravas. So in a way he was a catalyst in disarming Drona.

Likewise Rama the pious truthful, principled warrior had to kill Vali the Monkey King from hiding as to get the help of Sugriva, Vali's twin brother. If he fight in front, as per the boon of Vali half the strength of the opponent goes to him. Hence Rama had to go against in principle to fight and aimed his arrow from hiding. Vali too was supporting Ravana, the one who abducted Sita and was torturing the Rishis. So in a way he was a catalyst in murdering Vali.

I weighed so much so much, I am not talking SuKor as I know my dude is too practical who always said a thorn has to be removed with a thorn and eye for eye. But my birdie, my Chakor is not, she always preached, followed, ahimsa, non violence who even laid her torch down (thanks to Kasturi) when she was about to torch Imli the most gruesome evil. Kasturi said Bhurai is winning as Chakor will turn evil if she kills Imli... well then by killing Bacha Pandey has Chakor turned evil? Has evil won? Should I concur that. (I still cannot accept that Imli though I had peace with her being whipped but I would have had more peace if she was left atleast half torched for the unpardonable crimes she has inflicted the worst is Kumud's burial and Separation of Saanvi and affixing the stamp on that little hands.)

Chakor asking Suraj to change the antidote with another harmone injection is ...right or wrong... ???

These evils are not ordinary criminals they are homicides, who are killing so many lives for their own benefit. Young girl's natural growth is being hampered, made to do the unnatural, girls are being subjected to abuse physically and videographed, what right do they have, they are misusing their power, so with the sidhanth of nonviolence should Chakor be quiet and allow law to punish? Will Law ever punish?

Where is law, except for a handful the law is bent by evils.

Her daughter was kidnapped, now laid like a corpse with trauma, suffering with unimaginable pain, she was also brainwashed to go against her mother!

Her Suraj was kidnapped, not only that he was tied to a time bomb ticking her life to end...

With the above should Chakor still preach nonviolence... Follow the rule book?

There is a famous idiom saying if a cow (the most sacred animal) comes to you killing, you can kill the same in self-defense...

They are not cows they are maneaters, slaughterers, predators and she is not just safeguarding her daughter or seeking revenge for her daughter's plight, she has made herself hard, harder than the rock to seek revenge for those innumerable daughters, those innocent girls whose life has been slaughtered, massacred by the evil.

To win a game and to reach the rutheless King, we need to kill the pawns and place the checkmate. Life is also like a chess.

Yes, and I am calming myself as still Chakor did not kill BP without his knowledge, she is a warrior, she made Suraj tell him of his fate.

If Ram and Yudishtra were catalyst to murder the evil for the bigger benefit of the society, the righteousness to be guarded, so is my Chakor too!!!

As the norm of dharma, it is to be noted eversince the lie, Yudhistra's rath hit the ground and Ram in his next birth as Krishna was killed by a hunter (who was Vali) by an arrow from far away while Krishna was sitting in the tree, thinking that Krishna's toe was a bird...

But ... she is not indeed wrong,,,, but I debate to say she is right hence I say she is the catalyst...thus her flight has indeed lowered its wings this time... I rest!!!

If Yudhishthira and Ram are catalysts then even my Chakor is..

So much of Drama but loving my Dude's subtleness. VJ hats off

Eversince the change of time, the new track, the episodes so much of drama, thrill, suspense, though most of the times the dialogues are shallow no depth but in all these I am loving my Dude's complete subtleness on the other hand. When I go through I have a smile on my face...

Is it Suraj or VJ, I am just unable to separate it as there is a continuity of the gentleness, the shift of being a responsible father, loving husband, dutiful citizen. Am just awed

He was excellent in balancing everything, his expressions were bang on (VJ is an expression King but still I have to say it again).

SR when puts his heart he is perfect in everything, ...

The loving father...

Managing the kid's emotions and the way he made her feel strong while he was tied among wolves sitting as a tiger.

The few moments of happiness evident in his eyes as his daughter clinged and asked apolgoies to her mother while he was tied to a tickling bomb.

The agony listening to the phone call of his daughter in the hospital and the paranoia of hoping and running hope it is not her.

And the best one when truth hits him and the way he slid himself down not able to hold him and the way he pleaded the Dr to appease her pain with folded hands.

The way he resolved when Anjor had to be shifted to the hospital and its was so heart wrenching that even he was in the mission but ensured that his daughter had the best comfort at the hospital and getting into the minute details of asking Teju to tell the nurse to change her bedsheets twice a day. I was flat... the mother is waging the war and she has to do lot of strategizing so the father is adorning the role of the mother too. SR you stood by your promise of saying that you will not be like your father and will shower loads of love on your little princess and I see that and happy tears in my eyes. VJ brought out these emotions so so well. This man's eyes just emote everything.

The doting husband

Well do I need to elaborate on this, he has turned himself to Chakor but he took care of his Queen like a baby too, the way he calmed her while she was getting stressed by pressing her forehead and making her lay in his lap.

The way he encouraged her to fight the evil, right through though captivated never let her down and always prided her. That smirk at the devils saying its not easy to win his wife and that Garv... What a body language...

The moment he knew that Chakor has left alone inside the adharma village the dutiful husband quickly went to her side to guard her and kept on encouraging her to fight the evil though not through principled means but by deceit and all through kept her spirits high not to make her feel guilty... VJ was class in this.

The dutiful citizen

The badlahua Suraj eversince changed into Suraj Rajvanshi, wow he does not leave a straw to deal with evil, atrocities and his rage and body language and those fight scenes are a treat to watch and I get myself just lost in it.

As Sardar or as Sheik he just gets into the skin so comfortably and I fail to realise it is Suraj and get engrossed in it. The calm way the modulation of his voice and his body language in these disguise is par excellence and SR/VJ just just proves he is a prowess in this.

VJ take a bow man...