SU FF(ACHPM):Ek Mohalle Ki Dastaan..pg 34(30/3/09) - Page 26

Posted: 15 years ago
sigh..........missing chabi...........u know they have started it again........as always gr8 job....keep it up....wish can see something like this........ and good luck with ur exams :)))))))))))
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by Fazila~


sigh..........missing chabi...........u know they have started it again........as always gr8 job....keep it up....wish can see something like this........ and good luck with ur exams :)))))))))))
 
thanks fazi.....glad u liked it......and ya i know they have started it........i dont see it much as it'll again take me back to those golden days and memories.......*sighs*......anyway,my exams went good..better than my expectations.......posting the next part below........
 
-surbhi😊
Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter 20-Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jaayenge????

After talking to Sandeep....Urmi felt that everyting would be alright in her friend's life but it was the opposite thoughts going on in Zoya's mind.She had been crying hysterically for the past half-an-hour and after Urmi pacifying her was now calm and abit composed lying on Urmi's lap in Sandeep's house.Urmi was patting her head slightly to make her feel better.Both were lost in their respective thoughts whereas Sandeep had gone to meet Sukhaji for seeking information regarding the boy whom Bashir Chacha had chosen for Zoya.Urmi's thoughts were interrupted when Zoya said;

Z-Urmi...kahi abbu ne meri shaadi us ladke se kar di to???

U-Zoya...tu aisa kyun sooch rahi hai.....main hoon na...main aisa hargis nahi hone dungi...agar Sandeepji kuch na kar paaye..to main baat karungi Bashir Chacha se.....

Zoya looked shocked and immediately got up from Urmi's lap....looking at her with questioning eyes..

Z-kya???tu paagal to nahi ho gayi,Urmi!!!tu abbu se baat karegi mere aur Vaibhav ke baare mein!!!!!!

U-to main aur kya karoon Zoya.....main yunhi haath pe haath dhare baith to nahi sakti na......kuch na kuch to karna padega......

Z-ha Urmi..par......

U-par var kuch nahi.....waise bhi agar teri shaadi hogi to bas Vaibhav ke saath........Suddenly a voice broke their conversation:

V-kiski shaadi ki baat ho rahi hai,Urmi????

They both turned to see Vaibhav standing at the doorstep with a smile playing on his lips............Zoya and Urmi both looked at each other.....clearly surprised to find him there.....Zoya didnt know what to say so she looked down.....Urmi had a weak smile on her face......Vaibhav entered the scene and sat on the sofa while Urmi and Zoya were still sitting down on the mattress...

V-arre batao na kya Colonel Gunj mein koi shaadi ho rahi hai???

U-wo..Vaibhav....wo.......shaadi...umm.....

S-Zoya ki shaadi ho rahi hai............

The three of them looked at Sandeep who had entered the scene with a firm and serious expression on his face......Urmi and Zoya immediately got up and looked surprised whereas Vaibhav felt as though he didnt hear what Sandeep had just said......he looked at Zoya and then at Sandeep equally shocked.......

V-Sandeep bhaiya...aap ye kya keh rahe hai????

Sandeep came near him and talked to him face to face....

S-ha Vaibhav...Zoya ki shaadi tai ho gayi hai......Vaibhav and Zoya looked at each other.......Vaibhav clearly shocked and stunned and Zoya looking at him helplessly with slight brimming tears in her eyes.....while Urmi noticed this eye-to-eye interaction and placed a comforting hand on Zoya's shoulder......

V-leki...lekin Sandeep bhaiya.....Zoya to......He again looked at Zoya with questioning eyes.....

S(raised eyebrows)-Zoya kya,Vaibhav????waise bhi waqt aa gaya hai ki uski shaadi ho jaaye....to....theek hai na!!!

Urmi and Zoya were highly confused with what Sandeep was trying to mean and say after knowing the fact that Zoya loved Vaibhav dearly and will not marry anyone else......

U-Sandeepji..ye aap kya......Sandeep cut her in between by placing a hand in the air in order to stop her from speaking further.......

S-ek minute Urmi.....main Vaibhav se baat kar raha hoon.....(to Vaibhav)to tum kuch keh rahe the,Vaibhav......zoya ke baare mein????

Vaibhav didnt know what to say.....he was thinking that Zoya liked him but was that all false???He felt short of words....what would he say to Urmi,Sandeep and all the CGians..and ofcourse how would he face Zoya????if she never had any feelings for him....what was all that????the moments they spent together........the nervousness and awkwardness what he noticed on her face whenever he came close to her......the pain which was clearly depicted on her face when he got hurt......what was all that......all was a misunderstanding......all was fake.....everything!!!!!!!!!?????even the heartbeat what he could feel racing in both hearts when they were in close proximity with each other..........A gush of confusion and questions were running through Vaibhav's mind....and his heart contradicting what his mind said.......He just stood there like a statue....not responding to anything........or anyone..........just looking at Zoya with a gulity expression whereas Zoya's eyes were now completely covered with unexplainable tears.....

S-Vaibhav??????main tumse kuch pooch raha hoon????

V-ji!!!!???huh......Zoya looked at him with hopeful eyes...as maybe he would tell Sandeep abt his feelings..........All this while Urmi stood amidst all this silently....her heart clearly saddened that she cant do anything for her friend...that she is helpless.....the friend who helped her in every problem or issue.....she knew when Urmi was happy...what bothered her....what gave her pain..what provided her with unended happiness.......a friend who was beside her in every thick and thin......and here she was standing like an inanimate object......looking at her helpless friend fighting with her emotions....fighting with her heart......and most importantly fighting with her love........

U-Vaibhav!!!!!He looked up at Urmi and she came forward hearing and listening to enough things now.......she had to do something...even if not getting her friend her love...she could the least of making her friend's love realise her friend's value in his life........atleast for her friend she could do this much........

U-kya hua Vaibhav???Zoya ki shaadi sunkar tum itna chaauk kyun gaye????tum to Zoya ke ache dost ho.....to tumhe to khush hona chahiye ki uski shaadi ho rahi hai.....hmmm....lekin tumne to aisi shakal baana rakhi hai jaise tumse koi tumhari sabse keemti cheez cheen raha ho!!!???

Sandeep and Zoya looked stunned as how Urmi was handling the situation......Sandeep looked at her and a small smile came on his lips.......he knew now his urmi would do anything to get Zoya her love back....so he decided to keep quiet........

U-batao na Vaibhav???tum theek to ho.......??

V(still in a state of shock)-ha..ha..Urmi...main theek hoon....mujhe kya hona hai.......He looked down while saying this and anyone could clearly sense that he was lying......

U(with folded hands around her chest)-acha?????to tumhare maathe pe pasina kyun hai.......??itni garmi to nahi hai...kyun Sandeepji!!!!She looked at Sandeep to find him smiling at her witty questions and answers........and he gave her a you-will-not-change look which Urmi returned with a proud smile.......She again looked at Vaibhav determined to get the answer......for her friend......for her love........

V-nahi..Urmi.....aisi koi.....

U(smiles)-hhuh......She went back and stood at her original position....beside Zoya.........and placed her hand on Zoya's shoulder and then her eyes were again fixed on Vaibhav's expressions.......

U-pata hai Vaibhav....jab dil mein koi baat ho na to usse keh dena chahiye.......warna dil ko bahut dukh hota hai.....dil toot jaata hai......aap khud ko aur (then looking at Zoya)us insaan ko bhi takleef pohchate hai jo aapke dil ke sabse zyaada kareeb hota hai........Zoya's eyes immediately turned towards Urmi with tears spilling out of her eyes.......Sandeep looked at Vaibhav to notice his expressions and analyze his answer.......but his answer shocked the three completely

V(looking straight in Zoya's eyes)-lekin kabhi kabhi Urmi...hum jo chahte hai wo hota nahi hai......kabhi kabhi baat na keh dene se dil ko to bahut dard hota hai par dusron ko khushi milti hai......aur shayad main uska aur mera dil tode sakta hoon lekin dusron ka nahi..........isliye baat ko yahi khatam karna behtar hoga......And with that he left the room breaking Zoya's heart into pieces.........Zoya broke down on the floor into unstoppable tears.......Urmi didnt know what just happened.......she didnt know how to react.....what to do..how to do...she knew that by saying all this to Zoya,Vaibhav had given her an inevitable pain which would never wash away from her life....from her memories...from her.....heart.......but she gathered herself and with a little strength went down to stop Zoya from crying more.....she engulfed Zoya into a tight hug and Zoya cried hysterically......Sandeep himself was shocked at Vaibhav's outburst and looking at Zoya's condition he felt like killing Vaibhav........

U(with tears)-Zoya...Zoya...meri taraf dekh.....Zoya!!!!!

Z(speaking in between her sobs)-Ur....Ur.....Urmi...wo...wo.....Vaibhav...mujh...mujhse..pyaar.....wo mujhse pyaar nahi karta.......She cried her heart out now in Urmi's arms......Urmi too had tears in her eyes looking at her friend's condition...........Zoya couldnt take it more......She realised herself from Urmi's arms and rushed out of the room.......

U-Zoya......Zoya????Zoya....ruk jaa.......

S-Zoya....ruko.....Zoya......meri baat to suno.....Zoya.......Both Sandeep-Urmi ran behind Zoya but she had already left.........Urmi entered the house once again....clearly stunned at what just happened......she sat on the sofa with her hands covering her mouth in shock......Sandeep too was lost in his thoughts looking down at the floor standing near the door......

U(tears)-ye sab kya ho gaya.......???Zoya...meri dost.....uski ye haalat.......main kya karoon...main kya karoon......hey Bhagwaan!!!ye kya ho gaya.....

Sandeep's thoughts were jolted by Urmi's cries.......while she was mumbling to herself.....

S-Urmi!!!??

Urmi looked at Sandeep......and without further waiting....rushed into his arms.....crying........

U(sobs)-Sandeepji!!!humhe kuch karna padega....kuch karna padega.....main Zoya ko aise nahi dekh sakti.....usne humesha humara saath diya hai......aur ab meri baari hai.....main usse uska pyaar lautake hi rahungi....chahe phir kuch bhi ho jaaye......

S-ha Urmi....Zoya aur Vaibhav ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte hai.....aur agar Zoya ki shaadi hogi to sirf aur sirf Vaibhav se.....tum chinta mat karo..sab kuch theek ho jaayega....main Vaibhav se baat karunga.......tum bas rona band karo.......Urmi's sobs became softer and she now began to sob silently while Sandeep slightly carressed her hair and back......and softly kissed the top of her head...........................................................................

 
 
hope u guyz liked it!!!!!!!!Plzz post ur comments and suggestions!!!!!!

-surbhi😊

Edited by arvanu - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
hey surbhi...that was fantastic..perfect! its just like sandy to strictly confront the person in front of him. reminded me of sagar...
and urmi toh is always our sherni isnt she?
Posted: 14 years ago
Sagar. Yes, that's exactly it! Wow Surbhi, it was like reading a written update..I could see it all happening just like that.

Bechara Vaibhav, wanting to do the right thing but not knowing what the right thing is....hurting the one he loves...

But never fear. When Sandeep and Urmi are on your side, it will all work out well....
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by kshreya2002


hey surbhi...that was fantastic..perfect! its just like sandy to strictly confront the person in front of him. reminded me of sagar...
and urmi toh is always our sherni isnt she?
 
thanks ksh for the comments,dear........really appreciate it and glad u liked it!!!!urmi toh humesha se hi sherni thi....hehehe....and will always be!!!!thanks once again for reading!!🤗
 
-surbhi😊
 
Originally posted by Nisha_07


Sagar. Yes, that's exactly it! Wow Surbhi, it was like reading a written update..I could see it all happening just like that.

Bechara Vaibhav, wanting to do the right thing but not knowing what the right thing is....hurting the one he loves...

But never fear. When Sandeep and Urmi are on your side, it will all work out well....
 
thanks nisha for the comments.......really appreciate it and glad u liked it!!!!!!i guess it would take some time to make everything work out well.......Sandeep-Urmi hai bhi toh.......thanks once again for reading!!🤗
 
-surbhi😊
Posted: 14 years ago
Great FF 👍🏼I miss ACHPM so much 😔

Star Plus said they are giving it a break, its been a year now the break is still not over...  Bunch of liers

btw i am darpan12, i don't think anyone remembers me but just in case

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