LRL by reet(rn fic) updt by GAZAL on pg2

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Posted: 2008-01-06T00:14:28Z
Derr is nowhere a ray of hope'naina is getting depressive '.more n more'in d detention center'bindhyachal'
now dey r coming frm dining hall..after dinner..towards derr respective rooms..
Naina is walking slowly'aalekh comes close to her'n says'naina tu kitne din aise jee payegi..???na khati hai na peeti hai..apunse teri yeh halat dekha nehi jata'tereko apun kuch kahena chahta hai'.
Kya'.naina wonders'looks at aalekh'..a void look'pain has lost its intensity'
Huda comes close to dem..ha Qaidi..phulan ki halat bigadti ja rahi hai'.tu kuch kar..
Tu vag ja naina'..aalekh whispers'
Huda looks at him in shock'wad!!!
Yes dude'!!he is right'.!!tum vag jao naina'
Naina'.asks aalekh'don't u know wad is d fate of a absconder'!!!
I know naina'but if u stay here'u wnt be able to live'.i know u 'u cant'aalekh says confidently'he turns towards'every body'back to naina'.bol kaun kaun apunke sath hai'???
Naina.....mera sim card hamesha tere lie free hai'meri network tere sath hai Qaidi'yeh jatt vi tere sath hai qaidi'mai pahlibaar is baore ke sath hu'ki kaheta'hai'yudie'anything 4 phulan'
But aalekh'.do u know wad r u saying'.wad will happen to my parents'....naina'asks aalekh'knowing dat definitely he has made already a plan..!!
Naina'agar aap vagi nehi to aap mar jayengi..aapko pahele aapne bareme sochni chahiye..hum hudabhai aur aalekh bhai ke sath hai'aur waisevi..aapki ammi ko humne jitna jana hai'agar who navin ke haadse ke baad samhaal sakti hai khudko to isbarvi payenge'aur fir hum hai na aapke sath'hum sab hai'ali confidently puts hiz han on nainas shoulder to make her confident'aalekh comes close to her..and he patts her shoulder'himmat mat har naina'sabkuch thik ho jayega'
Well dude den I m also wid u guyz..see I can help u guyz'about dese hidden cameras'I can disable dem by d mobile dat avimannyu sir has sent..us'..
Edited by fanatic 21 - 2008-10-16T11:40:56Z
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Posted: 2008-01-06T00:18:39Z
guys dis fic is not mine.......i m posting it on behalf of reet......



hope u will njoy........

plzzzz let me know hw u like it.........

dis fic starts wer rajveers jeep blasts n all d cadets r at vdc center.......
i hope it makes it all clear.......next prat after ur response...
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Posted: 2008-01-06T00:48:06Z
i have read that in lrl forum and i really loved it, it's very interesting story and it's really amazing how reet wrote it, the way she shows naina's emotion and someone elses is really truly amazing but i am not gonna tell you who's, keep reading to find out while i'll read it again Smile Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 2008-01-06T00:48:51Z
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Posted: 2008-01-06T00:51:47Z
fabulous con soon. Clap Clap
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Posted: 2008-01-06T01:49:34Z
guys not much comments Cry Cry
u dint like it Ouch
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Posted: 2008-01-06T02:31:15Z
ok   here it goes......

Oye chakdey phatte….tab to adhi kaam ho hi gaya…puja yells…
Plz puja come down…dey are active still now…ali controls her …yudibhai needs time…
Listen guyz…we now need to make a fullproff plan right now….huda announces…
Yeda hai kya apun teri tarah aalekh curts him midway….ab who…kya bolte hai…dicch…"discuss dude" yudi adds….ha wohich…karenge to pura ka pura plan chaupat ho jayega…kaal suve breakfast ke baad library me jaane ke bahane uske paas bale room me milo…sab…apun chalta hai..ee huda chal…
Aur naina ghabra mat…tere dost hamesha tere sath hai…dis time naina …dznt be able to control her…heads towards aalekh n hugs him tightly..a drop of tear rolls down by her chick..thankz guyz she turns to every body..leaving aalekh…
Oye tu chal…aj raat ki recharge tereko changa banayegi..kaal vag daud hai..bohot..puja pulls naina by holding her hand..towards derr room…
Everybody reachs derr respective rooms…..but wid d thought how…???
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Posted: 2008-01-06T02:31:47Z
Lrl music stars in d back ground….
Puchona hamse hai kya jindegi…
Humse hamaari hai yeh jindegi…
na pure dhoop hai..na pure chao hai…
Jaise yeh raah hain waise yeh pao hai..
Jaha hai acche hai jaise hai acche hain
samjhao na…batlaoona....

Humein kaise jeena hai
let it be…
ohh left right left......
na pure left hai
na pure right hai.......

left right left....
left right left......

True frends …r true companions…in every odds….in evry thing…dey r together….dey r d pride of India…
dey r pride of capt. rajveer .....nothing can defeat dem…nothing can beat dem..dey r born winners…
Dey r back….in derr actual attitude..deyy r born soulder...…so …time for action…!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 2008-01-06T02:33:12Z
               EPISOD 2



Naina is lying in her bed…her eyes were wide open….her face…describes she has gained some confidence…puja ..orders her…oye..naina…ab so ja…puri discharge ho jayegi..nehito…naina turns her face towards her…n smiles silently….after a while she mutters under her breath "thank u…"
But somehow puja listens dat n says..oye…chup chap soti hai kya nehi…
Ha ha…soti hu..tu soja..naina assures her…n close her eyes…
A flash…so cadet naina ahh sing…back in mood…naina opens her eyes wid a shock…sir…two drops of tear rolls down….she has lost her mentor…her love…everything…in her life…she has lost d most precious person…raajveer sir…i…love u ….she closes her eyes…

D next morning….every body is silent…taking derr breakfast..but derr minds r working fast…dey finishes it…widout saying a word…dey hav to be carefull…otherwise…everything will go in vain…so dey r collecting power to fight ….from d silence…
Dey got to go now…
Dey individually..comes to d prefixed room one by one..aalekh first off all..den ali..n huda…den yudi…and naina puja together…dey r late…caz…dey had to dodge…d infirmatory guards…
So wads d plane chief…yudi asks …breaking d silence..
Here it is….aalekh briefly describes d whole plan….ohh…alekh dis is next to impossible…naina almost yells…
D other five replies together we will make d impossible to possible…!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Naina….bites her lower lips for a second…to ponder over…and after a while…answers in a cold confident voice…okk…I m ready….
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