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Tutata Tara ** [Prithvi Sanyo] FF

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Hey all.......😛

I'm Ishita 😉

First Time I'm Posting

My First Fan Fiction on Prithvi n Sanyogita😳

As Many of You Know that in Prithviraj Chauhan leap is happened Two Months ago....n all fans were disappointed so I thought to write a story very different from Prithviraj Sanyogita's actual History's Story

So imagining old Cast of Prithviraj Chauhan I'm Writing this FF

I Have Tried my Best Please Do Comment's and Feel Free to give any Suggetions

Charcter Intro :: - 😃

Rajat as Prithvi

Son Of Someshwar Chauhan who is Maharaj Of Ajmer
A Charming Personality, Luves his Praja n Friends
Alwayz ready to help and solve problems of his praja faces everyday

 

 

Mughda as Sanyogita

 

Daughter of Jaichand Maharaj of Kannauj
Very naughty girl and also very emotional

Luves her father ver much

 


Gaurav as Arjun

 

Prithvi's friend very naughty

always crack jokes with his friends to cheer up everyone's mood

and alwayz ready to be with Prithvi

 

 

 

Lavina as Chamki

 

Chamki sanyogita's best friend and dasi

Alwayz with sanyogita and knows her very well

 

 

Harshh as Pundir

 

Pundir another friend of prithvi very loyal

also alwayz ready to be with prithvi and reay to do anything for him and Ajmer

 

 

 

Mehul as Sanjam

 

Sanjam Best friend of prithvi

Very emotional and alwayz with prithvi

knows prithvi very well among all his friends

Always there with prithvi n Ajmer

 

 

 

Khushboo as Vaishali

 

Vaishali another dasi n friend of sanyogita

she's also with her alwayz like chamki

 

 

 

Javed as Chandar

 

Chander another friend of prithvi who had recentely came back to prithvi compliting his gurukul education in ajmer

 

Hope u all Like Introduction of Character's

 

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Part I 😉

"Pata hai tutate hue taare se Jo bhi maango vo mil jata hai"

"Accha!! Kya tum in sab baton par yakin karte ho"

 

Sanyogita was standing near window in her room and remembering the dayz of Mahashviratri Mahotsav Where She and Prithvi meet first time

 

That was dayz of Mahashivratri, Prithvi and friends were going there as per culture of Ajmer that every Rajkumar and Uttaradhikari of Ajmer goes to Udaypur for Mahashivratri Mahotsav

Here Sanyogita also preparing to go for this Mahotsav with her friends

 

Next day at Morning Prithvi and Friends leave from Ajmer for Udaypur and Sanyogita went from Kannauj with her friends

It's Evening Prithvi and Sanyogita both arrived at the place with there friends where they were going to stay which was situated near the Shiv Mandir

Prithvi was telling to is friends that they should call him Pushkar

 

"Dekho tum sab ye baat yaad rakhana ki main Prithvi nahi Pushkar hoon"said prithvi pointing his finger towards all his friends

"Par kyun prithvi? Agar hum yaha Mahotsav ke liye aaye hai to tum apni pehchaan kyun chupana chahte ho" ask pundir to prithvi

"Bas aise hi mujhe dekhna hai ki log ek aam ladke ke saath kaise pesh aate hai"

"Thik hai prithvi hum iss baat ka khayal rakhenge" said sanjam putting his hand on shoulder of prithvi

Prithvi smiles and all leaves towards their tent

 

Here in the tent Sanyogita was also telling Chamki and Vaishali to call her as Aarti

 

"Tum dono ko yaad hai naa humne kannauj se niklate wqat kya kaha tha" said Sanyo pointing towards both chamki and vaishali

"Haan, hume yaad hai ki tum Sanyogita nahi Aarti ho" said vaishali

"Haan ab thik hai" Sanyo smiles and all of them come out of the tent

 

Sanyogita remember that she was going to get flowers for evenings aarti as poojari jii tell her

"Vaishali tum dono Mandir me jaao hum Phool leke aate hai" said Sanyo to vaishali

"Thik hai lekin jaldi aana" said vaishali

And both vaishali and chamki leaves towards Mandir and Sanyo leaves to get some flowers

Here Prithvi is also coming to Mandir with his friends

 

In Mandir Vaishali and Chamki are helping poojari jii to preparing Pooja Thaali for Evening's Aarti Prithvi and friends are coming up from stairs in Mandir, Suddenly Prithvi's shoes stuck between the Grass so he stops there and all other goes towards

Prithvi is trying to get out that shoes stuck in to grass,

Here Sanyogita is coming from behind with bucket of flowers

Prithvi however manages to stuck it out and he turns back to got to the Mandir and Dashed to Sanyogita,

Sanyogita is about to fall down Prithvi holds her in his Arms,

They are staring at each other

 

 

Pa Ma Ga Ma Ga Re Ni Ga Re Sa

 

Sa Ni Dha Ni Dha Pa Ma Ni Dha Pa

 

 

 

Music is going on,

Prithvi and Sanyo still staring at each other

 

Suddenly thaali of Pooja falls down on flour from chamki's hand

Prithvi and Sanyo stop staring and stand up properly prithvi lives her, Music stops

Prithvi and Sanyo both are embarrassed and looking at each other by glance

Prithvi look down and he realized that all flowers were fall down on flour, he seats down to collect flowers in a bucket, Sanyo is still staring at prithvi, prithvi get up and give her bucket of flowers,

While giving it coincidently there hand touched to each others hand, Sanyo suddenly take back her hand and stop staring at him,

Prithvi turns back to go to Mandir, he was about to go one step ahead,

"Shukriya"

He turns back, Sanyo was saying to him by looking down,

"Isame shukriya ki koi baat nahi, agar koi aur bhi hota tab bhi main yahi karta" said prithvi

Sanyo look at him and smiles slightly and runs from there and goes in Mandir

Prithvi smiles seeing her like this by shooking his head and move ahead in Mandir

 

 

"Aarti itni der kaha laga dii, hum kab se tumhara intezaar kar rahe the" said chamki

"a!!! Vo……hum…….phool lane……."

Shez still string at prithvi who was standing on other side and in front of her

"Aarti kaha kho gayi"

  Vaishali flowing her hand in front of Sanyo's eyes by saying this

  Sanyo stops staring at prithvi

"VO…..hum...yeh……."

She stop talking for two minutes, vaishali and chamki look at each other with question mark on there faces

"yeh phool pooja ke liye" trying to ignore her attention towards Prithvi said Sanyo

 

Prithvi was also putting a glance towards her in between, as he was helping sanjam in lightening of Mandir for the Mahotsav

Arjun points out that he was looking at prithvi and Sanyo from first

Suddenly one light fall down from prithvi's hand, Sanyo look there

 

Arjun: kyun Pushkar dhyan kaha hai tumhara

"Hmmmmmmmmmm" all said together

By shooking head and trying to hide expressions and blushing Prithvi said

Prithvi: nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai

 

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Part II 😉

 

Sanyo smile's at her own starring at moon

"Rajkumari Sanyogita"

Sanyo came in reality from her remembering Things, she turns back

Jaichand was standing behind her

"Pitaji aap………….aap kab aaye" she said looking down

"Tab jab aap Aasmaan ki taraf dekh rahi thi, kya soch rahi thi aap" said jaichand smiling

Sanyo thinks Prithvi for two minutes and remember flashbacks when Prithvi Hold her in his Arms when they saw each other for first time

"Sanyogita kaha kho gayi aap" ask jaichand looking at her

"Vo hum soch……." Jaichand interrupts

"Koi baat nahi" said jaichand smiling very freely

"Hum aapko ye bataane aaye the ke kal hum sab Daulatpoor ja rahe hai" said jaichand

"Daulatpoor kyun" asks Sanyo making question mark on her face

"Vo aapko vahi jaakar pata chalega" by saying this jaichand leaves from there

  Sanyo get worried and start thinking that what is going to be there in daulatpoor

 

Some where away………in Ajmer

 

Aaaaaaaaah!!! Someone cried with very painful voice

Prithvi Runs towards the voice

"Kya hua" ask Prithvi with very tensed face

All chander,pundir,sanjam & arjun start laughing, Prithvi didn't realized for some time that why all are laughing

Looking Prithvi's tensed face sanjam said,

"Phikar mat karo Prithvi kisiko kuch nahi hua,Hum to majhak kar rahe the"

Prithvi got angry

"Maine tumse kitani baar kaha hai muje aisa majhak bilkul pasand nahi hai,Tum ek baar me samajh nahi sakati" suddenly Prithvi stops sating and Remember Sanyo for a while her smiling face was roaming aroung his eyes he was smiling in his own world

All looking at Prithvi

"Samajh nahi sakti" said pundir giggling slightly

Prithvi looked at pundir

"Lagata hai Prithvi ko kisiki yaad aa rahi" said Arjun in teasing way by giving slight push to Prithvi, Prithvi was thinking something other so as Arjun push him he falls down

Again all laugh together

Prithvi ignore all this conversation and leave from there and goes in his room

 

It's a night Prithvi seating on his Bed in his room looking at the Bangle which was in his Hand

 

 

"Are suno toh" chamki was going behind Sanyo to console her

"Hume kuch nahi sunana" said Sanyo going in straight

"Lekin battao to sahi hua kya hai" said chamki going behind her

"Vo Pushkar apne aap ko samjhata kya hai" said Sanyo

"Par usne aisa kiya kya" ask Vaishali

"Usne usne humaara humaara Kangan Churaaya aur jab humne pucha to saaf inkar kar diya" said Sanyo with very angry voice

 

It was happen like this,

 

 

Here all friends of Prithvi were point out that Prithvi is being attracted towards Sanyo so they made a trick for some fun

When all of them were in Mandir at that time Arjun and Chand decide something Prithvi finds that they were discussing something and he came there seeing that Prithvi is coming towards us Arjun and Chand stop discussing and Started laughing suddenly

Prithvi surprised that sometime before they were discussing something and suddenly start laughing?

"Jara dekho to vo kitani nakchadi hai" said Chand by giggling

"Haan uske baal dekhe hai bilkul Choodail ki tarah lagate hai" said Arjun

And both Chand and Arjun laugh with loud voice

Prithvi was listening all this he came in front

"Kiski bare me baat kar rahe ho tum log" ask Pithvi looking towards both of them

"Are hum vo aar……." Chand stops Arjun

"Kuch nahi Pushkar hum to aise hi baat kar rahe the kuch khas nahi" said Chand looking at Arjun and telling him not to ake Aarti's name

"Nahi koi to baat hai tum abhi kiske bare me baat kar rahe the battao" ask Prithvi with making inspecting face

"Humne kaha naa Pushkar aisi koi baat nahi hai" said Chand tryng to console Prithvi

"Nahi Chander mujhe lagataa hai hume Pushkar ko bataa dena chahiye" said Arjun blinking his eye looking at Chand

Prithvi get angry

"Ab tum dono mujhe battaoge bhi ke kya ho raha hai" said Prithvi with angry face

"Thik hai bataa te hai" while saying this Pundir and Sanjam come there

"Kya ho raha hai yaha" ask Sanjam

"Sanjam beech me mat bolo,Arjun tum bataoge ya nahi" said Prithvi

Sanjam look at Arjun asking him what happen by eyes

"Vo Pushkar chodo naa" said Chand

"Nahi"Prithvi shout loudly" Tum dono mujhe abhi battaoge ke tum kske bare me baat kar rahe the"said Prithvi

"Thik hai agar tumhe itna hi jaan na hai to sune hum Aarti ke bare me baat kar rahe the" said Arjun in one Breath

"Haan ab hume mat bolna kuch" said Chand

Sanjam and Pundir look at each other

"Kya"Prithvi shouts "Tum us Aarti ke bare me baat kar rahe the, dekho Arjun aise kisi achhi kadki ke bare me aisi baat karana thik nahi" said Prithvi

"Acchi" said all together by laughing

"Tumhe kya pata ki vo achhi hai" ask Sanjam taking round around Pirthvi

"Mujhe kaise pata matlab,Mere matlab ladkiyaan to achhi hi hoti hai naa" said Prithvi by looking down and here and there

"Saari ladkiyaan achi nahi hoti Pushkar" said Pundir giggling slightly

"bas ab mujhe kuch nahi sunna,aur aaj ke baad koi Aarti ke bare me aisi koi baat nahi karega" said Prithvi pointing his finger towards all

"Sirf Aarti ke bare me" ask Arjun and all giggle

"Mera matlab kisi aur ke bare me" said Prithvi making face like embarrassed

"Ohhhhhhhhhhh" said all together

Prithvi smiles and leave from there all laugh together

Sanjam look around and he saw Sanyo standing near them

"Are us Aarti ne to sab sun liya" said Sanjam in lower voice

Pundir look back

"Haan vo to us Zaad ke paas khadi hai"

"Achaa hua ab aaye ga majha" said Chand giving clap on Arjun's hand and both giggle

 

And they all leave

 

Here Sanyo was thinking in her mind

"Pushkar sab ke bare me kitana sochata hai,aur humaare bare me bhi" she smiles cutely

"Aarti tum ya soch kar muskura rahi ho" ask chamki coming from behind of Sanyo in tent

"Haa!! Vo hum aisehi kuch nahi tum kab aayi" said Sanyo in little frighten voice

"Are tum dar kyun rahi ho" said chamki

"Nahi hum kaha dar rahe hai hum to aise hi" said sanyo

 

Arjun and Sanjam were listening all this conversation of Chamki and Sanyo

So Planned to do some Misunderstandings between Prithvi and Sanyo

 

After some time Sanyo comes out from her tent she was going on lake side

All friends of Prithvi comes from behind her and start following her, In between she felt like someone is following her so she turns back but no one was there all friends hide behind tree, so she move on

She reach on lake and seats there for some time

Sanjam and Pundir come there and seats on tree and throw a stone towards her as it touches her hand and get down into the lake

She cried loudly they showed like Arjun and Chand were passing trough from there and they came near her to listening her voice

"Kya hua tum chillayi kyun?" ask Arjun

"Vo kisine hume piche se kuch maara aur vo pani me jaakar gira" said Sanyo in frighten voice

"Accha main dekhata hu" said Chand he move towards lake

"Sam….Sambhaal ke" said Sanyo in lower voice

Chand goes inside the water

Here Sanjam and Pundir were laughing and watching the fun

 

"Kuch nahi ek pathhar hai" said chand

"huh!!" Sanyo felt relax

"Aap thik hai naa" ask Arjun to Sanyo

"Pundir……Arjun…..Chander" Prithvi came there searching all of them, He saw Arjun and Chander with Sanyo

"Tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho" ask Prithvi looking towards Sanyo

"Kuch nahi"said Chand looking at Arjun and Prithvi

"Kuch nahi?" said Prithvi making question mark on his face

"Vo hum inki madat karne aaye the" said Arjun pointing his finger towards Sanyo

"Inki madat,inki kya madat karni" said Prithvi looking at Sanyo

"Vo inko kisi ne peeche se patthar mara to vo dar gayi aur inhe laga ki ki in par….."

"Bas Arjun mujhe samajh me aa gayaa" said Prithvi

"Ab…aap thik hai naa" ask Prithvi to Sanyo

During all this conversation Chand slightly bend down and took up the bangle of Sanyo which was lying on flour when Sanjam and Pundir through the stone and that angle fall down

"haan hum thik hai,Shukriya,Ab hum chalet hai" said Sanyo smiling and leaves from there

Arjun and Chand smiles too,

"Chand Sanjam aur Pundir kaha hai" ask Prithvi

While Sanjam and Pundir came from back side of Arjun

"Are tum sab yaha ho hum tumhe Mandir ke pass dhund rahe the" said Pundir

"Haan vo hum aise hi jaraa ghumne chale aaye"

Chand smiles looking at Sanjam

All leves towards Mandir for evenings aarti

 

 

Here in Mandir Chamki and Vaishali were waiting for Sanyo

"Are ye Aarti kaha reh gayi" said Vaishali

"Haan ab tak to use aa jaana chahiye tha" said Chamki looking at staires of Mandir and Sanyo enters

"Lo aa gayi" said Chamki pointing her hand towards Sanyo both Vaishali and Chamki smiles looking at her

"Itani der kaha laga dii" ask vaishali to Sanyo

"Vo hum" Sanyo was about to say it

"Bhakto" said Poojari jii "Aaj is Mahotsav ka pehela din hai,Ab hum Shivjii ki aarti ka Prarambh karne jaa rahe hai,Bolo Bhagvan Shiv ki"

"Jai" all said together

Aarti finished all gone to there tents Sanyo also went towards her tent in between she realize that her bangle is not their in her hand so she stops in between

"Kya hua tum ruk kyun gayi" ask Vaishali

"Vo humaara Kangan shayad aarti ke wqat Mandir me hi gir gaya, hum dekh ke aate hai" said Sanyo

"Thik hai lekin jaldi aana" said Vaishali and she smiles

Sanyo smiles too

 

Sanjam listen all this conversation and give this information to Arjun and Chand that she is coming towards Mandir

Chand came there

"Are Aarti tum yaha kya kar rahi ho" ask Chand to Sanyo

"Vo humaara kangan kahi gir gaya,hme lagata hai ke aarti ke wqat Mandir me gir gaya hoga to hum vahi dhundne jaa rahe hai" said Sanyo by smiling

"Achaa" said Chand and he leaves from there by smiling

Sanyo come in Mandir

In Mandir she saw arjun was seating on his knees in front of Prithvi she get surprised

"Dekho Pushkar main tumse haath jodke vinati karta hoon ki tum us kya naam hai uska (thinking for a bit) aarti haan Aarti uska kangan lauta do" said Arjun giggling slightly

 

Prithvi didn't get anything wat he's talking about,

And Sanyo was listening everything by standing over stairs of Mandir

 

"Kya!! (Sanyo shouts) tumne humaara kangan churaaya" ask Sanyo coming near Prithvi with question mark and angry face

 

"Nahi" said Prithvi with confused mind thinking at him own that what's going on

Arjun stands up

 

"Dekho tum Kya naam hai tumhaara" said Sanyo

"Pushkar" said Arjun quickly

"Haan Pushkar yaa job hi agar tumne humaara Kangan liya hai to hume lauta do" said Sanyo looking at Prithvi

"Maine koi kangan nahi liya hai" Prithvi is still confused

"Are aise kaise nahi liya maine khud tumhe vo Knagn lete hue dekha hai" said Arjun with very seriousness

"Agar tumhaare paas humaara kangan hai to hume lauta do" said Sanyo with attitude

"Dekho Aarti mere paas tumhaara koi kangan nahi hai" said Prithvi

"Phir ye kyun keh raha hai ki humaara kangan tumhaare paas hai" said Sanyo pointing          towards Arjun

Arjun look down

Sanjam,pundir and Chand were enjoying all this fun from behind the tree

"Dekho mujhe nahi pata ki ye aisa kyun keh raha, Lekin agar mujhe vo tumhaara kangan milega to main jaroor lauta doonga" said Prithvi

Sanyo looked at Prithvi in very attitude face and urn to leave from there

As far as she turns Prithvi get back to Arjun and he moves two steps towards Arjun and that Kangan falls down which was hanging on Prithvi Kamar Patta (don't know the proper word) which was Placed by all his Friends during evening aarti

That Kangan fall down as it fall down Sanyo turns back again

She looked at Prithvi with very angry face and leaves from there

 

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Part III 😉

Ok as i'm busy with my Collage Project ðŸ˜¡
So Cannot write part three much😭
srry all

 

Prithvi going behind sanyo

"Aarti meri baat to suno, Maine tumhara koi kangan nahi liya hai" said Prithvi very eagerly

Sanyo stops n look back to Prithvi

"Achha to vo mandir me gira tha vo to koi pathar tha naa" Said Sanyo angrily n start walking

"Haan vo kangan hi tha, lekin vo mere paas kaha se aaya mujhe nahi pata" Said Prithvi trying to console Sanyo

Here Pritvi's frndz were following them by hiding behind trees

They stop at one place

"Tumhe kya lagata hai kya Prithvi kabhi jaan paayega ki ye sab humne kiya hai" Said chand with frightening voice

"Shhhh…!!" Said Arjun putting his hand on chand's mouth "Aise to vo kabhi nahi jaan payega lekin agar tum iss tarah jor jor se bolte rahe to vo sach mein sab jaan jaayega" Said Arjun

"Haan aur nahi to kya pata nahi iski ye aadat kab jaayegi" Said Pundir

"Iski ye aadat nikaalne ka ek hi tarika hai" Said Arjun looking at chand

"Kya" ask Sanjam by questioning through his hand towards Arjun

"Iski Shaadi Kar de" Said Arjun

All giggle together except Chand

"Dekho agar tum aisi baate karoge to main prithvi ko jaake sab bataa doonga ki ye Kangan tum logo ne churaya tha" Said chand angrily

"Chup raho" Said Pundir invery slow voice

"Kyun chup rahoon main use ye bataa kar rahoonga" said Chand in very loud voice

"Use to vaisehi pata chal chukaa hai" Said Pundir again in slow voice

"Kaisi baat kar rahe ho pundir use kaise pata chalega" Said Arjun ignoring pundir's statement

"Kunki vo humaare peche khada hai" Said Pundir making sad face

All turns Back Prithvi n Sanyo standing there

All Shocked n look downwards

"Achha to ye tum sab ka kam tha" Said Sanyo looking towards all

"Vo hum.." Said chand

"Chup raho tum sab sharam nahi ati tumhe aisa karte hue, Kya jaroorat thi ye sab karne ki, bechari Aarti ka wqat barbaad kiya tumne" Said Prithvi very angrily

"Bechaari" Said all together by giggling

Sanyo looked at Prithvi quickly

"Mera matlab hain ki" Said Prithvi he's confused n didn't getting what to say

"Dekho agar tumne ohir se aisa majhaak kiya to dekhana" Siad Sanyo pointing towards all

 

"Prithvi Prithvi"

Some one is Calling Prithvi

Prithvi looked towards his rooms door, Itz Prithvi's mom

"Bete tum ab tak taiyaar nahi hue" said Kamalvati

"Taiyar" ask Prithvi with question mark face "Kyun hum kahi jaa rahe hai kya maa"

"Haan Bete, Humne tumhe bataaya tha naa ki hume Daulatpoor Jaana hai" said kamalavati smiling

"Daulatpoor kyun?" ask Prithvi

"Bete tum itani jaldi bhool gaye, Iss baar Mahashivratri Mahotsav Daulatpoor main hai" Said kamlavati " Ab jaao jaake taiyar ho jao hume kuch der me hi nikalana hai" By saying this kamalavati leaves

Prithvi remember all dayz of Last Mahashivratri Mahotsav were he n sanyo meet first time

 

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Plz Do Comment 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
well dear it us really nice but y didn't u complete it?
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Posted: 15 years ago
n u too did not respond from long time r u there?
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