A Temporary Exile - Flash fiction

Piece removed due to class restrictions.

Edited by Morgoth - 16 years ago

Nice to see you back Tanaz! Very realistic story. I love your descriptions and how you wrote it from the perspective of the little girl. Kids can be so mean sometimes!

I just wish it were a little longer because it seemed to end too fast, but I do realize that it was actually the perfect length for what you were trying to say. Nicely written. 😃

Thanks for the feedback, Suhana! 😊

Any areas for improvement?