Fan Fic: Two Friends

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Posted: 2005-08-04T13:56:21Z

Hi all,

as every one is writing in their own style , even i want to do some experiment, let me know if u guys like it.

Angad aur Kripa ke families ache friends hey

misthi angad ki behan hey

karthik kripa ka bayi hey

prithvi en charo ka best friend hey

prithvi kripa se bahuth pyar kartha hey

Prithvi(call kripa): hi Kripa

kripa : Hi prithvi, whats up yaar

prithvi: kripa kya tum ajj sham ko free ho kya

kripa: bholgaya kya , ajj sham ko ham football khel ne vale hey na

prithvi : oh ya , tik hey to mein tum se sham mein miltha hu

sham ko football ho ne ka badh karthik, misthi, angad, kripa, prithvi coffe shop jate hey (vunki adath hey)

kripa : ha prithvi mein tho puchna bholgayi tum dupher ko phoen kiye te kya bath hey

prithvi : kuch nahin yu hi phone kiya tha

angad : hey guys kal karthik ke ghar main ek party hey and u guys need to come

karthik: kya bath hey angad kis bath ki party hey, aur wo bhi mere ghar main aur mujhe patha nahin 

angad : karthik tume yaad nahin ki kal  kya hey

karthik: kya kal kuch kas din hey kya

kripa : karthik tume tho kuch bath yaad hi nahin rahthi har waqt padayi nahin tho papa ka business main help karna bus yahi tumari zindaghi

karthik: kripa just shut up yaar, tume patha hey na mere bhare main phir se lecture math de yaar. sidha bathana kya bath hey

prithvi : arey karthik kal kripa ka birthday hey, kya yaar tujhe kudh ki birthday yaad nahin rahthi, dusro ko chod atleast tere behan ka tho birthday yaad rakna

karthik: oh ya kal kripa ka birthday hey na, I am sorry kripa mein tho bul hi gaya

kripa : its ok baya, kal mera gift dhena tho math bul na

karthik: ok baba, abb chele kya

to bo conti.........

plz let me know whether u like it   

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 2005-08-04T14:04:08Z
continue it's good!Clap
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Posted: 2005-08-04T15:47:36Z
i liked it!! plzzz continue!!
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Posted: 2005-08-04T15:50:21Z
good going do continue
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Posted: 2005-08-04T15:54:17Z
wonderful fan-fic and keep it up!!!LOLLOL
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Posted: 2005-08-04T22:38:08Z

Part 2

last part ended with

karthik : ok baba , abb chele kya

now......

mid night 12 karthik wakes up kripa

karthik: Wish U Many Many Happy Returns of the day meri pyari behana

and he gives her a gift.

Kripa: Thanks baya, iska matlab apko mera janam dhin yaad hey app bule nahin

Karthik : main apni behan ka janam dhin kaise bul sakth hu aur mujhe dekthi rahoghi ya gift be koleghi

kripa opens the gift , and gets surprised seeing it , the gift is the keys of the brand new and newly released sports car about which she asked karthik a week ago .

kripa hugs karthik aur vuske ghal pe ek kiss dethi hey

vuska cell bajtha hey aur she picks it up it is from prithvi

prithvi : Many Happy returns of the day birthday baby

kripa : thanks prithvi

prithvi : can u open the door

kripa : kya !

prithvi : open the door, dharvaza kolo abhi samaje main aya nahin tho koi aur basha main bholu kya

kripa : ek minute kol thi hu

she opens the door and gets double surprised by seeing prithvi, angad, misthi, aliya and josh.

aliya is the cousin of angad and josh is the brother of prithvi

kripa ( surprised): app sub log yaha kaise

angad ( with a nauty face ): kya hey na, hamne suna ki edher ek bhoothni ane valli hey tho hamne soch ki kyu na ham sub vuse welcome kare, lekin shayad vo bhootni ham se pehle hi agayi hey.

kripa (all confused): kya bhootni, kya keh rahey ho

angad( again with a naugty look) : abhi samje main nahin aya kya bhoothni ji aliyas kripa ji, ha kaise samaj main ayega abhi to app payidha huve aur upper se app ko dimakh bhi chahiye soch ne keliye jo app ke pass nahin hey.( and he runs)

kripa ( wants to catch angad ) : angad ruko varna acha nahin raheyga angad ruko, badmash , stupid, idiot, i will kill u wait, wait i will kill u .

atlast kripa catches angad and beats him saying i will kill u stupid idiot 

after a while every one wishes her and kripa cuts the cake got by them and they enjoy

kripa : aliya tum kabh ayi ho US se, mujhe to angad ne bathaya bhi nahin

aliya : main kal hi ayi thi aur maine hi kaha angad se , tume nahin bol ne ke liye, main tume surprise dhena chathi thi

kripa : thanks aliya

josh : kripa tum mujse bath nahin karoghi kya, zara hame se bhi bath kijiye

kripa : Josh vaisa koyi bath nahin, by the way tumhari business kaise chal rahi hey

Josh : sub kuch tik chal raha hey

they enjoy for a while and every body goes back, but prithvi comes back after every one went away and calls kripa

prithvi : kripa..

kripa : kya hey prithvi kya bath hey, kuch bul gaye kya

prithvi( he wants to tell that he loves her but hesitates ): oh .......... actually main tum sorry kehana chahtha tha

kripa(with a confused expression) : sorry kis bath ke liye prithvi

prithvi : oh maine tume birthday gift nahi laya na isliye

kripa : uff... prithvi tum har waqt mere dosth bane rahana voi bada gift hey now gud night mujhe nindh a rahi hey

prithvi ( gives a smile) : gud night, bye

kripa : bye

to be conti......

   

 

Edited by sweety223 - 2005-08-04T22:42:48Z
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Posted: 2005-08-04T22:51:52Z
hey its too gd plz continue soon
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Posted: 2005-08-04T22:58:39Z
kewl awesome work. please continue soon. 
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