Fan fic: Afsana pyaar ka

Posted: 2005-07-30T21:50:22Z

Afsana Pyaar Ka


Part: 1


We see a girl wearing a pink lahenga sourrounded by 3 more girls, who are helping her put on her jewelry. She is putting on chudiya's, and the we see one girl put her tika on her maang. Then another girl helps her put on her necklace, after that they all move while the girl herself puts on the earings.

Girl1: dekha kitni khubbsoorat lag rahe hai

We see the girl put on mascara

Girl 2: ha

We see th girl put on some blush

Girl 3 (mishti): mere saheli ko nazaar mat lagaoo

Mishti: daughter of damani bose, sister of prithvi bose is in love with kartick khanna, she is kripa's best friend

Then we see the girl put on some lipstick and rubs her lips together when the phone rings

M: kripa

The girl turns around smiling

Kripa: a rockstar, daughter of gyatri and Surbhanyan Sharma she is really calm totally belives in love, her best friend is mishti, and has one big brother, her only idol is angad khanna, she is getting engaged today to…………..  ( let me keep the suspense)

M: yeh le baat kar

K: hello

Someone: kaisa lag raha hai

K: bhai agar app kab are hai

S: bas hum nikaal hi rahe hai

K; kya app abhi tak waha se nahin nikle

S: hum waha poch jaynge, tum chinta mat karo

K: bye

S: bye

The guy puts the phone down and then we see his face it is josh

Josh: kripa's big brother, and the best friend of angad, he is lawyer.

Behind josh someone comes up

Someone: kya keh rahe thi kripa

J: kuch nahin bas pouch rahe hi thi kki hum log kab aarahe hain, waise mannan wo kaha hai

M; mujhe lag ta hai ki wo monica ke saath bhar gaya hai

J: monica ko to usne do hafte phele hi chord diya tha

M: to tina ke saath ho ga

J; tina ke tarf to who dekhta bhi nahin hai

M: to pooja, priya, selina kise na kise ladki ke saath to hoga, shayad lunch date dinner date main badal gaye ho

J; uska to kuch keh nahin sakte

So guys who is the guy kripa is getting engaged to and who is the guy who is always surrounded by girls.
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Posted: 2005-07-30T21:55:56Z
please continue. it is a good story. i think the guy who Kripa is getting engaged to is Prithvi.
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Posted: 2005-07-30T21:58:08Z
wow lovely story.. it's angad yar.....
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Posted: 2005-07-30T21:59:16Z

its nice!!! do continue...

Take Care



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Posted: 2005-07-30T22:02:55Z ur starting a new fan-fic...AWESOME!!!! anyways nice starting!Thumbs Up...anyway i think she getting engadged might be Angad...i really hope!...anyway plz continue soon!Clap
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Posted: 2005-07-30T22:08:46Z

wow to good please continue


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Posted: 2005-07-30T22:13:28Z
Con. soon..that was nice! Tongue
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Posted: 2005-07-30T22:31:15Z

it sounds intresting, can't wait for the next par

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