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Kya haadsa (HGT) The last part

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Posted: 17 years ago

Intro:

Tulsi Kapoor(Smriti Irani): A succcessful business woman who handled all th kapoor empire after her husband Om Kapoor's death.

Mayuri Kapoor(Gauri Pradhan Tejwani): Daughter of Om and Tulsi Kapoor. Very close to her mother since her childhood. A very reserved yet fun loving girl having only 3 close friends.

Sneha Sharma(Jennifer Vingent aka Sneha ffrom Kasauti): Mayuri 's one of three best friends. Very very cute.

Yash Shrivastav(Dheeraj Sarna aka Yash from Kutumb): Another best friend of Mayuri and fiancee of Sneha.

Pratham Mittal(Hiten Tejwani): A young business tycoon who handled his business very early due to untimely death of his parents in a plane crash. Hot and handsome hunk who is the dream of every girl. For Mayuri , he is one of her best friends but for Pratham , Mayuri is everything and Tulsi knows about it and she knows very well that Pratham is just more than perfect for her daughter.

Kuwar Saab(Cezzane Khan): A mysterious personality.

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Posted: 17 years ago
Mayuri found herself into a jungle. It was a daark night with no moon. She was furiously running to save her life. Suddenly someone jumped in front of her. She screamed with fear as she looks at the dangerous face of the creature. Screaming with fear, she got up from her bed and looks here and there. She was in her bedroom. Her forehead was covered with tiny drops of sweat. Her mother comes running down in her bedroom.

Tulsi: Mayuri , mayuri beta? Are u ok?
Mayuri looks at her with a frightened look and hugged her tightly and starts crying.
Tulsi:Lagta ahi tumne phir se wohi sapna dekha. Calm down baby. Sab kuch theek ho jayega.
Mayuri: Mom. Ye sab kya ho raha hai? mujhe ye sapna baar baar kyun aata hai.
Tulsi: kuch nahi beta. Have patience. Sab kuch theek ho jaayega.

saying this, she makes Mayuri comfortable but in reality she was also worried and wanted to know the reason behind this dream.

Next morning, Mayuri's cell rangs and she picks it up.
mayuri: hello.
Sneha(Sneha form kasautti aka Jennifer winget): Hi madam. Taiyaar ho gayin aap/
Mayuri: taiyaar. Ksiliye?
Sneha: Arre yaad nahi aaj Grandprix ki race hai.
Mayuri: Oh god. i forgot. Just give me two minutes.
Sneha: ok then i will see u there. Yash is also coming.
Mayuri: Ok bye.

Saying this, she puts her phone down.

after sometime, she was ready wearing a red top with blacck jeans and red cap. Tulsi watches her as she cames down running.
Tulsi: Arre mayuri? Kahan jaa rahi hai?
Mayuri: Woh mom aaj grandprix ki racing hai to main....
Tulsi: accha accha main samajh gayi. Lekin naashta to karti jaa.
Mayuri(rushing outside):nahi maa. Main waise hi late ho gayi hoon. Main wahin kuch kha loongi.
Befor Tulsi could say anything else, Mayuri disappears from there in her car.

Tulsi looks at her and smiles as she thoght that it would be a good change for her as she was really disturbed by her dream. But she was really worried for her daughter as her daughter was terrified by the dream she often watches since her child hood.
Tulsi Mehta,   a business woman who handled all the Mehta empire as his husband Om mehta died in a car accident when Mayuri was only two year old. Since then she handled all the business as well as took the responsibility of her daughter. Mayuri had a countable no. of friends and Tulsi knows all of them personally.Among them were Sneha, Yash and Pratham Mittal. Pratham Mittal, a young, dashing and smart young man and also an indepenedent business tycoon who handled his business at an early age due to untimely death of his parents. In short , he was having all those qualities which a mother want for her daughter's life partner. Andshe knows very well that he likes mayuri too, but for Mayuri, he was just one of her best friends.


Mayuri reaches at the stadium right on time and takes her seat along with yash and Sneha . The race starts and everyone starts trying to defeat the others .
Wroooommmmmmmmmmmmm..............wroooooooooooooom.......... . and bang. one car got crashed , bang ..............another one and than another one. The race was getting exciting per second.
All of the spectators were watching it without blinking their eyes and their heartbeat was getting faster minute by minute. Booom..............one more crash. But among all these incidents one car coloured red, white and green was continuously moving ahead of other cars. Mayuri, Yash and Sneha all were cheering as the car came on third place...... then second..............than it equals the frist one and lacks behind. Everone was getting ecxcited. Mayuri , Sneha and yash all were cheering continuously Pratham..... Pratham.... Pratham..... Once again the car equals the first one and this time it leaves the first one behind too. The car touches the finishing line and the spectators became overjoyed. All of them starts running towards the car as a smart , hot and dashing man aging between 25 to 28 years wearing red and green jacket came out of the car with his million dollar smile.

Mayuri makes her way among the crowd and hugged Pratham tightly in her grip.
Mayuri: Congrats Pratham. You have done it again. i know no one can defeat u.
Pratham: Thanks Mayuri. thank u very much.
Yash: agar aapki mubarakbad khatam ho gayi to hum bhi mubarakbad de dein.
Mayuri(a little bit irritated): Very funny.
Yash also congratulated him.
Sneha: I know after mayuri's greetings , our congratulations doesn't matter for u. but still congrats.
Hearing this, Pratham aagain begans to smile but Mayuri gets a little bit angry.

Mayuri: Sneha. Stop all that nonsense.

Sneha: Ok ok i am sorry.

Yash: But this calls for a treat. What say?

Pratham: Ok let's go to retreat then.

All of them leaves from there.
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome fanfic.. please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
very cute!! hey is it as it is from kya hadsa kya hakeekat?had seen it in bits n peices n i think this is what had happened there 2 isnt it?

do continue though
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Posted: 17 years ago
It is awesome. We'd like to hear more from you. Waiting for your other fanfic on Hiten and Gauri.
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks a lot. Yes there's some resemblance with the kya haadsa kya haqeeqata as there are three chaharcters Pratham Mayuri and Kunwar but it's totaaly my imagination. Hope u all will enjoy it πŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
Tulsi was sitting with a psychiatrist Mrs. Gayatri who was also her family freind discussing problem about Mayuri.

Tulsi: So Gayatri. That's the problem of Mayuri. Woh sapna bachpan se uska peecha kar raha hai. Aur woh sapna itna bhayanak hota hai ki woh raat mein dar kar baith jaati hai aur phir so nahi paati.Mujhe to samajh nahi aata ki main kya karoon?

Gayatri: It's ok Tulsi. Jaise ki tumne mujhe bataya . Om ki death ke waqt Mayuri bahut choti thi aur use ek pita ka pyaar kabhi naseeb nahi hua. Ofcourse u took great care of her and performed all your duties towards her with perfection but still a father is a father. His presence gives children a feeling of protection but with Mayuri it never happened. Mere khayal se she has experienced lack of security from her childhood and may be a scene from a horror film has made a place in her mind. It's just a phsychatric problem. Is waqt Mayuri ko kisi doctor ki nahi balki kisi aise insaan ki jaroorat hai jo use uski life mein security provide kar sakein. Jiske saath woh safe mehsoos kar sake. Tum samajh rahi ho na main kya kehna chahti hoon.

Tulsi: Of course i understand. Aur aisa ek ladka hai meri nazar mein. Jo Mayuri se bahut pyar bhi karta hai aur main jaanti hon ki woh Mayuri kop bahut khush bhi rakhega.

Gayatri: Great. Phir problem kahan hai?

Tulsi: problem sirf ek hi hai. Mayuri.Use to pyaar naam ki cheez mein vishwaas hi nahi hai. Woh to usse door bhagti hai.Lekin maine bhi decide kar liya hai. Is baar main usse baat karke rahungi.Aur aaj to woh ladka bhi aa raha hai kyunki aaj Mayuri ke best friend Yash aur Sneha ki sagai hai.

Gayatri: Great. Wish u all the best.



In the night, everyone was present at Sneha's house. Pratham was also there and was searching for someone here and there. Sneha who was watching him goes near him.

Sneha(disturbing him):Hi.
Pratham: Hi.
Sneha: Looking for someone.
Pratham: No. Not really.
Sneha: Are u sure. Tumhari aankhen to kuch aur hi keh rahin hain.
Pratham: Accha kya?
Sneha: yahi ki tumhe kisi ka besabri se intezaar hai.
Pratham starts smiling on being caught.
Pratham: Yes . U r right. I am waiting for someone.
Sneha: Awwww. How romantic. Sach mein Pratham. Mayuri is so lucky. Woh insaan jo har ladki ka khwaab hai, jisse baat karne ko aur jiske saath tak khade rehne ko har ladki tarasti hai, woh us ke liye pagal hai. Sach mein koi aur hoti to kab tak tumahri shaadi ho chuki hoti.
Pratham: Koi aur kaise ho sakti thi. Mayuri to poori duniya mein ek hi hai. Aur koi aur uski tarah ho bhi nahi ho sakti.

Sneha was about to say something when Yash interrupts them.
Yash: Kya baatein ho rahin hai tum dono ke beech.
Pratham: Kuch nahi. Sneha ko teri buri aadaton ke baare mein bata raha tha taki woh abhi se taiyaar ho jaaye.
Yash: Really?
Sneha: Nahi. Main to ye dekh rahi thi ki Pratham Mayuri ko kitna chahta hai.
Yash: Bechare ki ab tak sagai jo nahi hui hai.Ek baar sagai h gayi to....
Sneha: To to kya...
Yash: Nahi . Kuch nahi.
Sneha: Tum kehna chahte ho ki sagai ke baad pyaar kam ho jata hai.
Yash: Nahi Sneha. Main to bas.
Sneha(grabbing him by his collar): Listen . Ab tak jo hua woh hua. Lekin aaj ke baad tumne kisi aur ko dekha bhi na to.....
Yash: Ok ok i understand.
Sneha smiles and leaves from there.
Pratham: Bura phansaa tu to.
Yash: Sach mein yaar.

At the same time, Mayuri enters into the party with Tulsi. She was wearing a black strapless gown and was looking breathing takingly beautiful. Pratham looks at her and his eyes eyes got stuck.

Sneha(greeting Mayuri and Tulsi): Hi Mayuri. Namaste aunty.
Tulsi: Namaste beta. Bahut bahut mubarak ho.
Sneha: Thanks aunty.
Mayuri hugged her and congratulates her whereas Tulsi moves away to meet Yash n Sneha parents.
Mayuri: Where is Yash?
Sneha(pointing towards Yash): Woh kya khada hai Pratham ke saath?
Mayuri excuses herself and makes her way for Yash.

Mayuri: Congrats yash.
Yash: Thanks Mayuri.
Pratham: Mayuri. U r looking really beautiful.
Mayuri: Thanks Pratham. Waise u looking smart too .
Pratham: Thanks.

After sometime, Yash and sneha got engaged and everyone became a part of their happiness.
Sneha: Thank u so much for coming here and becoming a part in our happiness. And now let's have some fun. Well as all of u know very well that the hearthrob of million of girls Pratham Mittal is also present here . A famous business tycoon and a champion racer Pratham has fallen in love with someone and that girl is present in this party.

Everyone was like what? and who's that lucky girl?

Sneha: Ladies and gentlemen. Please have patience. I am not going to reveal her name . But she is a writer by profession.

Now Mayuri understands that Sneha was talikng about her but she didn't reacted much. As she already knew that Pratham likes her, but she never felt for Pratham like that in her life. For her he is her best friend and she don'twant to lose a friend like him.

Sneha: Aur ab main Mr. Pratham se, jo ki pyaar mein shayar ban chuke hai se request karungi ki woh apne pyaar ke liye do teen shayarian kahein.

Pratham was stuuned and looked at Sneha where as Sneha smiled and comes near to him.
Sneha: I have given u a golden chance. Say all that what u wanted to say.

Pratham smiled and stands in the centre. Tulsi was looking at him happily and Mayuri with a confused look.

Pratham:

Mere dil ki har saans tumhare liye hai,Meri har muskurahat tumhari nadaani ke liye hai,Tumhari har ada mere dil ko churane ke liye hai,Abb to meri zindagi tumhare khusshiyo ke liye hai.

Everyone was stunned after knowing his feeling. Even Mayuri.

Pratham:

Tumko jab kabhi milain fursstain meray dil se bojh uttar do,
main kai dinon se udaas hoon mujhay 1 shaam udhaar do,
mujhay apnay roop ki dhoop do, ki chamak sakain meray khayal khuaab,
mujhay apnay rang main rang do meray saaray rang uttar do,
kissi aur ko meray haal se na koi gharz hai na koi waasta ,
main bikhar gaya hoon smait lo main biggad gay hoon sanwar do,
wahan kaun muantazir hai jisae ghum ho der swer ka,
ye jo ruki se raat hai issay chaandni main guzzar do.

Everyone started clapping after hearing that. Tulsi and Sneha became too happy. Pratham looked at Mayuri and smiled.

Sneha(To Mayuri): So madam kya kehna hai aapka.
Mayuri: shut up Sneha.

Everyone got busy after that. Mayuri comes near Pratham who was busy with Yash.

Mayuri: Pratham.
Pratham turns and looks at Mayuri and smiles.
Mayuri: Mujhe tumse kuch jaroori baat karni hai.
Pratham:Haan kaho.
Mayuri: Yahan nahi. Kahin bahar chelein?
Pratham: Ok as u say.

Saying this, they both comes out of the party.

Pratham: Haan Mayuri. Bolo kya kehna tha?
Mayuri: Aisa kyun kiya Pratham? Tum jaante ho ki main tumse pyaar nahi karti.
Pratham: Par main to tumse pyaar karta hoon. Aur ye hum dono ke liye kaafi hai.
Mayuri: Tum samajhte kyun nahi Pratham. Tum mere acche dost ho. Lekin maine tumhe kabhi us nazar se nahi dekha. Aur ye tum bhi jaante ho. Phir kyun?
Pratham: It's ok Mayuri. I know ki tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti. But ye jaroori to nahi ki agar main tumse pyaar karoon to tum bhi mujhse pyaar karo. Main bas tumse kehna chahta tha ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon aur woh maine kar diya. Ab ye tum par depend karta hai ki tum mera offer ccept karo ya nahi.Lekin ek baat yaad rakhna. Chahein tum mera prosposal accept karo ya reject, usse hamari dosti par koi fark nahi padega and i promsie u that.

Mayuri: Thanks Pratham. Bhale hi main tumse pyaar na kar paoon par main tumhare jaise dost ko khona nahi chahti. Ye baat kehkar tumne mere dil se bahut bada bhoj utar diya hai.

Pratham(smiling): Waise ek baat aur hai. Kal main business ke kaam se ek hafte ke liye bahar jaa raha hoon. Aur ek hafte ke baad main sabse pehle tumse milna chahunga. Agar tumhare man mein is dauran mere liye jara si bhi feelings paida huin to mujhe vishawaas hai ki tum mujhse milne jaroor aaogi.

Mayuri again becomes a little bit confsued after that.

Pratham: Don't get confuse Mayuri. Let's go inside.

Pratham and Mayuri goes inside the house.


Later that night, mayuri was busy in preparing the plot of her latest novel when Tulsi enters into her room.
Mayuri: Arre mom. Itni raat ho gayi. Aap abhi tak soyi nahi?
Tulsi: Nahi. Actually mujhe tujhse kuch jaroori baat karni thi.
Mayuri(turning her laptop off): Ok maa kahiye.
Tulsi: Tujhe Pratham kaisa lagta hai Mayuri.
Mayuri: Oh mom please not again.
Tulsi: Please Mayuri. I am your mom. Aur kabhi na kabhi to humein is baarein mein baat karni padegi.
Mayuri: Ok mom sit.
Tulsi smiles and sits down there.
Mayuri: U know mom. Pratham is my best friend. Woh mera bahut accha dost hai. par maine kabhi use is nazar se nahi dekha.
Tulsi: I know beta. Par woh tujhse bahut pyaar karta hai.Aur mujhe bhi woh bahut pasand hai.
Mayuri: I know mom. Aur isliye aine usse is baare mein baat bhi ki.
Saying this, he tells tulsi everything about the converstain she had with Pratham outside the party.
Tulsi: Dekha , woh tujhse kitna pyaar karta hai.
Mayuri: Ok mom ok. I promsie ki main is baare mein seriously sochungi. Ok. lekin abhi kaafi raat ho gayi hai. Aur mujhe lagta hai ki ab humein so jaana chahiye.

Tulsi: Ok ok goodnight.
Sauying this, she goes into her room.
Posted: 17 years ago
great fanfic...do continue πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Posted: 17 years ago
great fanfic...do continue πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow!! this is good......do post the nxt part asap!