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Posted: 2007-04-04T09:02:50Z
Hi friends,

I have a community on orkut where many of our members and friends write fictions....here is one of them.....a really good one...specially for all of you!

THE FIC HAS BEEN POSTED WITH A PERMISSION FROM THE AUTHOR - "KIRTI".

Heres the link to our community....
http://www.orkut.com/Community.aspx?cmm=25525722

Cheers,
JIV

HIiiii!!!!!! Friends...thanks for visiting this site...I am going to write another story...This time all by myself....Please don't interrupt in the story line...But u can give ur valuable comments and suggestions.....
So here goes the A Different story of LRL.......Hope u all like it yaar....

U must have see Huda collecting donations for the engagement party of Ritu n Rajveer...So After hearing this naina goes to Rajveer's room ,,,,use manane ke liye ki who yeh engagement naa kare...
So I will continue from that.......

Naina rajveer ke room main jaati hai...aur use batati hai ki galti se uske muh se ye baat nikal gayi ki who usse pyaar karti hai..(Ritu se baat karte waqt...) To Rajveer ko bahut bura lagta hai aur who udaas ho jata hai...Lekin who apne aason badi mushkil se chupa leta hai.....Kyunkii Rajveer ko ab shayad yakin hone laga tha ki naina use Sirf apne SIR ya apne bhaiya ke Best Friend ke nazariye se dekhti hai.....woh usse kabhi pyaar karti nahin thi...aur shayad karegi bhi nahin........

Naina--- Please sir....aap Ritu mam se engagement mat kijiye....aap Aisa jaan boojh ke kyun kar rahe hain?? Aapko to pata hai ki who mere bhaiya, jo ki kabhi aapke best friend hua karte the, unki Girl Friend thi....Par unhone mere bhaiya ko dhoka de diya....
(Then she speaks slowly this time.....)
Unki wajah se aj mere bhaiya is duniya main nahin hain.Unki wajah se unke upar ek Dhabba lag gaya hai...unhe aaj sara hindustaan Desh-drohi ke naam se janta hai...Unki wajah se hi.......

Rajveer cuts her...aur who beech main hi bol padta hai....

Rajveer----Aoisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki Ritu sach bol rahi hai aur use torchure karne ki wajah se usne ye sab kiya ho..

Naina—Haan aise Ho sakta tha...Par ye to bhagwaan ka shukr hai ki ahem waqt par mare maa baba ne unki aawaz jail main sun lit hi......
Aap ka bhi to ye manna tha ki mere bhaiya k maut ka zimmedar unki Girl Friend hai... To phir aaj kya hua Sir?? Boliye Sir Boliye?? Aaj aapko bolna hi padega... Kyun sir?? Kyun?? Kya aap bhi apne Best Friend Ko GADDAR samajhne lage hain??

Rajveer—nahin Naine..Ye galat hai...Aisa kuch nahin hai..Main janta hoon ke Naveen ek saccha Desh Bhakt tha...Woh Desh – drohi kabhi ho hi nhain sakta hai...Woh to apne desh ko jaan se bhi jyaada pyaar karne walon mein se tha... Par main sirf ye manne ke liye taiyar nahin hoon ki Ritu uske haalat ki zimmedar hai........

Naina---theek hai...Sir..main samajh gayi ke baat kya hai....shayad aapko bhi Ritu mam ne apne jaal main phasa liya hai...jis tarah unhone mere bhaiya ko phasaya tha... tabhi to aap unse engagement karne ke liye taiyar ho gaye hain....ye jante hue bhi..ki who aapke Best friend ko ek baar dhoka de chuki hai.....Ye jante hue bhi..ki...

Rajveer gets angry and annoyed...And so he snaps back...
Rajveer--- Dekho naina Main kisi se bhi Engagement karun..Ye mera personal mamla hai....tumhe isme interfere karne ki koi zaroorat nahin...
Aur haan..tum khamokha hi Dr Mishra pe galat ilzaam laga rahi ho......Ab tum ja sakti ho...

Naina looks at Rajveer in utter surprise...but says nothing....She was thinking of him as her friend but rajveer is saying Its his personal matter.....
Their eyes lock and they both stare at each other for a minute...then Naina turna about and leaves the room...She wipes her tears welling out from her eyes...while going.....rajveer too regrets his words and who apne haath ko zor se deewar pe peet ta hai and sobs....
While He was alone in his room he speaks....
Rajveer--- Mujhe maaf kar Dena Naina...Mujhe maaf kar dena.... maine tumhara dil bahut dukhaya hai...Par main tumhe kaise bataoon ke main jis si pyaar karta hoon who tum ho////Who tum ho naina ....Tum....TUM....
And he cries sitting on the floor.............

On the other hand there are a lot of decorations going on at the KMA hall the next day....This is due to the engagement of the two young teachers of KMA ie...captain Rajveer n Dr. Ritu Mishra... All the students are decorating the hall as they have no classes for two days...

The hall is decorated by lots of bouquets of different flowers of different colours of flowers...there are tulips and dahlias...petunias..n lilies...Red n pink n purple coloured roses.... On the walls and on the pillars...on the satin curtains....There are some hangings og heart shaped ballons of red n white colours...with ribbons....
Chairs are placed in groups in all the corners with table cloths of pink colour....the stage with its two huge chairs are kept for the couple...
huda is managing all the decorations without himself doing any work...Alekh n yudi are making alist of all the persons to be invited and on the nearby table Pooja along with Ali are preparing a list of all the food items..

YUDI---Mujhe agar pehle pata hota hi guests list banan itna difficult hai to main ye task kabhi nahin leta...
ALEKH---Chal Chal...ab zara kaam mein dhyaan laga...
YUDI---Ok BRO!!! waise hum sab ko is kaam mein fasan ke ye Huda kahan chala gaya???
ALEKH--- Woh...nautanki...saala...Khud to kaam nahin karta hai..humein orders deta phir raha hai...wahin peeche hai...ladkiyon pe line mar raha hai...

Huda meanwhile is instructing a girl cadet to place some flowers...by holding her hands...

HUDA---Are yaar aap kya kar rahi ho kudiye?? Phoolon ko aise pyaar se sajate hain..Dekh ke kar..aakhir hamare apne Captain rajveer ki sagai hai...kisi aire gaire ki nahin...
then he comes over to the table where pooja n Ali were sitting...
POOJA--yaar Huda zara bata naa...Is list main aur kya missing hai...Ye Ali bhi naa kisi kaam ka nahin hai..Pata nahin iska network mere network se match kyun nahin karta ...
ALI---humne aapse pehle hi kaha tha pooja...ki mujhe is khane waane ka baare main kuch nahin pata..lekin ohir bhi aap mujhe apne saath le aayin.

Huda glances over the list and exclaims...
HUDA---Oye teri...Isme main cheez to gayab hai...Meri mammiji kaha karti hain...Shaadi ho Ya sagaai...honi chahiye Mithai....
POOJA---Are haan Main mithai to likhna hi bhool gayi...Shayad mera network kharab tha...tabhi to SMS mila nahin...

DR.Shalini enters the rooms and looks at the decorations of the hall n exclaims in surprise.....All students come and gather around her..

SHALINI---Great job Cadets...keep it up...Aisa hi agar kaam chalta raha to kal subah engagement will be a grand succes...Continue ur work cadets...

All the cadets continue their work...Then Naina enters the room and looks at the hall and sighs.... Dr shalini approaches her...
Dr Shalini-- Kya baat hai naina??? Are u OK?? Any problems??
NAINA-- No Mam I am perfectly all right Koi baat nahin hai...

Dr Shalini takes her to acorner to talk to her in private..
SHALINI--Main janti hoon Naina ki tum is engagementse khush nahin ho...Par kya main jaan sakti hoon kyun??

Naina---no mam, Aap aisa kyun sochti hain?? Mujhe bhala is rishte se kya problem ho sakta hai??
Shalini---Mujhse chupane ki koshish mat koro Naina..Main sab janti hoon...Par mujhe ye nahin pata ki tum khush kyun nahin ho??
Naina---No mam Aisi koi baat nahin hai...Ritu mam aur Rajveer Sir ek doosre ko bahut pyaar karte hain aur isilye shaadi kar rahe hain...
Shalini---Ye sach hai naina ke Ritu rajveer se bahut pyaar karti hai...Aur woh is engagement se bahut khush hai...Lekin tum shyad ek baat nahin janti...
naina---Kaun si baat mam??
Shalini---Rajveer Ritu se pyaar nahin karte hain...Woh to bas Ritu ki khushi ke liye ye engagement kar rahe hain...
Naina---KYA????? rajveer sir Ritu mam se pyaar nahin karte????Par kyun?? Kya ye sach hai??Phir wo ye sab kyun kar rahe hain??
Shalini---Ye to mujhe bhi nahin pata cadet..Ye to sirf Captain Rajveer hi tumhe bata sakte hain....Kabhi kabhi insaan ko zindagi se samjhauta karna padta hai....Shayad Captain bhi abhi yahi kar rahe hon...
Pata hai naina...Jab ek insaan ko apna pehla pyaar nahin milta...tab woh ek aise insaan ko apna leta hai jise uski tarah dil tootne ka gham dekhna naa pada...Wo use apna leta hai...jo insaan usse pyaar karta hai...na ki jisse woh khud pyaar karta tha...
Shayad woh kisi aur ko apne gham se guzarte hue nahin dekh sakta hai...Waise hio cptain rajveer kisi aur ka dil todna nahin chahte hain...

NAINA----To kya Rajveer sir ko bhi kisi se pyaar tha?? Kya unhe bhi kisi ne thukra diya tha??
SHALINI---mujhe theek se to nahin pata hai...Lekin I am sure ki woh kisi aur se pyaar karte hain,,,,Lekin shayad us ladki ko wo ye bata nahin paye...unhe shayad himmat hi nahin hui ...woh ladki to ye bhi nahin janti ki captain usse kitna oyaar karte hain...Aur captain usse kuch kah nahin paye...
NAINA---Par woh kaun hai mam?? Jise sir itna pyaar karte hain...Kya aap janti hain?? Phir shayad hum us ladki ko ja kar bata sakte hain...To shayad woh ladki haan kar de..
SHALINI---Ab aise nahin ho sakta cadet...ab bahut der ho gayi hai...

Engagement ki saari taiyariyan ho chuki hain...Ab ye roki nahin ja sakti... Ritu ko ye bahut bura lagega... Shayad bhagwaan ko bhi yehi manzoor tha...

Saying this Dr Shalini starts to go away but naina interrupts her and asks...
NAINA----Par mam aapne yeh to nahin bataya ke woh ladki kaun hai?? Kya woh unke college ke batch se thi??
SHALINI---Tum khud socho naina...Ke woh ladki kaun ho sakti hai...jisse captain anjaane main hi itna pyaar kar baithe?? Jiske har mushkil se mushkil ghadi main unhone uska saath diya...Jis ke sukh aur dukh dono main maujood the?? Jiske saath woh sabse jyaada waqt bitate the....Tum use jaanti ho naina..Khud socho...Jawaab tumhe apne aap mil jayega...
NAINA...Par ma...m......
But Shalini leaves the room leaving behind naina...who is totally confused...

Naina thinks for a moment....
kaun ho sakti hai woh ladki..jisse rajveer sir itna pyaar karte hain... par kabhi bata nahin paye....aur jisse main jaanti hoon??? She thinks and thinks and thinks...
then some scenes flashes backs in her mind......

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.......when Rajveer asked her name on the first day at KMA...
......when Rajveer took his first class and impressed Naina...
......When Naina was unconscious after Major Nair's Punishment of hanging upside down, it was Him who carried her in his arma and took her to the infirmary....
.....When Rajveer was holding her very close to him on that night while teaching her dance steps for the Fresher's Ball.....
......When they both became friends rather than student and teacher......
......When Rajveer said...Tum Bahut Achhi Dhik rahi ho Cadet naina Singh.......at the ball.....
........when they both danced at the party.....
.......When,,,,,,, When rajveer asked her for her hald bowing down for dance......
.......When Rajveer fought with Huda in Boxing match for her sake.
.......When rajveer supported her and encouraged her in the cold chamber..
When rajveer n Naina both fought against terrorists.....
......When Rajveer helped her in every class and defended her before Major Nair......
When Naina n Rajveer Both were covered with mud at the camp.......
When Rajveer fought with veryone at the court and helped her to return back to KMA.....
When Rajveer encouraged him at all her distress.
When naina was shocked and so depressed after hearing about Rajveer's accident and death.....
When they embraced for the first time..crying in each others arms........

All this made a thought to strike in her mind and then she realized something with ran shivers through her spine.......and she concluded something.......

Kya jis Ladki se Captain rajveer itni beinteehan mohabbat karte hain.....Kya woh......Kahin woh.....
KAHIN WHO LADKI MAIN TO NAHIN?????????



Edited by jivora - 2007-04-04T09:04:17Z
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Posted: 2007-04-04T21:49:16Z
In Brigadier's office.........
Major nair---- Sir aap ye kya kar rahe hain?? Ek military academy ek shaadi ke mandap mein badal gayi hai....kya ye theek hai???? Academy ka mahaul hardam strict aur disciplined hona chahiye, lekin in do dino mein..charon tarf bheed aur shor aur uthal puthal ke siwa aur kuch nahin hai.........Isse system weak ho jayega sir.Aur sir aapne students ko Chutti kyun de di hai??? Ye koi National festival hai kya??

Subedaar Suri......( I know friends that he is no more now...but m story is different)......... Captain Rajveer aur Dr. Mishra ki engagement yahin KMA mein honi chahiye sir....After all aisa pehli baar ho raha hai....aur students bhi yehi chahte hain.....After all wo dono KMA ke khaas teachers hain...
BC----maine headquarters se permission le li hai major nair....Subedar suri ji theek kehte hain...Unhe koi aitraaz nahin hai....unki engagement yahin... honi chahiye..Aur jahan tak KMA ki discipline ka sawaal hai....To mere khayal se KMA se badh kar disciplined academy is pure hindustaan main kahin aur nahin hai.......Students ke do dino ki masti se koi nuksaan nahin hoga...Jaise KMA pehle that waisa hi rahega......

Major Nair looks disappointed and disgusted at subedaar suri...
BC---I think I have made myself very clear...Ab aap dono jaa sakte hain...
Major Nair and suri both say in unison----YES SIR.....
Then they both salute and after looking at each others face...for angrily a while ...they leave in opposite directions.....

In shalini's Room......
Ritu is taking tips from Dr Shalini to get dressed up for engagement the next day...The bed is full of different ranges of clothes...Their are sarees....Salwar suits...Gowns... Lehengas... skirts... Umbrella frocks....scarves...and what not...
On the dressing table, there are many make up items too like lip sticks... of different shades..., powder, cream, eye liners, mascara, make up boxes of diff shapes and sizes..Ornaments even like necklaces, earrings, matching bangles................
Ritu---Baap re baap...Mujhe ye bilkul nahin pata tha ki tumhare paas ittttttnnnnniiiiii saaaaaaarrrrrriiiiii chheezen bhi hain....Par tum to bilkul chupi rustam nikli...Maine to kabhi tumhe ye sab pehente nahin dekha...
Shalini----Arre thanks for the compliments ...Par main ye sab kiske liye pehnu...mera aapke jaisa smart aur handsome boyfriend thode hi hai....
Par tum ab inmein se ek dress select karo...ke tum kya pehnogi...Tension mat lo...Ye saari nayi ki nayi hain..Maine inko chuan tak nahin....
So Ritu takes a look at the collection and the after a minute selects a blue saree...and says....
Ye kaisa hai...??? Ye chalega???
Shalini---Are ye saariyan to tum har waqt pahanti rahti ho...Kuch naya select karo yaar...
Then ritu selects a skin through black velvet gown....
And says...Ye??? Ye to theek hai naa??
Shalini---- Arre nahin nahin...Agar ye pehnogi..to rajveer to behosh honge hi par baki sab ladke bhi wahin gir jayenge...
Then they both laugh....
Then she holds her by her arms and makes her sit down on a chair and says....
Dekho meri baat suno......Ye koi aisi waisi party nahin hai..Ye tumhari engagement party hai..so u have to look the best and the most beautiful one in the whole party...understand???
RITU---theek hai bhai...main samajh gayi Main aisa karti hoon ke main tumhare paas kal aa jati hoon...Tumhe jo achha lage Jaisa achha lage...mujhe pehna dena OK???Shalini—Ok Ye idea theek rahega...main tumhe aisa sajaungi,aisa sajungi ke dekhne waale dekhte rah jayenge.

Aur Rajveer..Unke to hosh ud jayenge...
And they both share a laughter...
It evening time.....rajveer is taking a walk outside, in the garden and thinking whether he is going to do the right thing or not.....

Rajveer (apne aap se)--- Kya main ye theek kar raha hoon??? Ye jante hue bhi ki, Ritu Naveen se pehle pyar karti thi, main us se ye engagement kyun kar raha hoon??? Main to apne dost ko, apne sabse pyaare dost ko dhoka dene chala hoon......
Then other part of his mind says to him......Lekin ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki Ritu sach bol rahi ho......Aakhir usine khud aakar mujhse,,,, apne aur naveen ke bare mein baat kit hi....

Lekin Kya main Naina ko bata doon ke, Main us se pyaar karne laga hoon??? Nahin...nahin...main aisa nahin karunga.... Who mujhse pyaar nahin karti hai.... Agar usne naa kar di to??????
Waise bhi pehle se hum dono ka naam KMA main badnaam hai.....Aue badi mushkil se humne apne naam se us daag se bachaya hai...Ab main phir se us daur se Naina ko gujarte nahin dekh sakta hoon....
Par kya main Ritu ke saath ye theek kar raha hoon?? Main shayad use apna poora pyaar na de paaoon...Kyunkii main usse pyaar karta hi nahin...aur na hi kar paoonga... To kya main ye sahi kar raha hoon?? Shayad haan.... Shayad...isi main mere aur naina ki bhalai hai...aur Naina....Woh Huda ke saath hi khush rahegi....Huda bhi badal gaya hai...Woh uska khayal rakh sakta hai.....Shayad....

On the other side of the garden...Naina is sitting on a bench....
Naina (thinks)---Ye kaise ho sakta hai??? Ye sach nahin ho sakta... rajveer sir....Mujhse....Nahin Nhain...Ye main kya soch rahi hoon.....ye galat hai...Aisa nahin ho sakta....

Then naina's Antaratma comes (identical Naina) and interacts with her...
Antaratma--- Kya hua Naina??? Kya soch rahi ho tum?? Yehi...Ke Rajveer tumse pyaar karte hain ya nahin??
Naina—haan Par tumhe kaise pata??? Kaun ho tum??

Antaratma—Main tumhari antaratma hoon...tum chahkar bhi mujhse kuch nahin chupa sakti...Main sab janti hoon.... Tumhe Ye kaise nahin pata chala Naina, ke Captain Rajveer tumse pyaar karte hain?? Tum unke itne kareeb rah kar bhi Ye jaan nahin payi??
Naina—Pata nahin...Mujhe ye sab kyun pata nahin chala???
Antaratma- Nahin pata chala??? Huh!!! Mujhse jhoot mat bolo...Ye kyun nahin kahti ki jante hue bhi andekha kar diya???
Naina---Aisi baat nahin hai...Rajveer Sir ne is bare main kabhi mujhse baat nahin kii...Unhone mujhse kabhi kuch nahin kaha....

Antaratma--- Pyaar main kuch kahne ki zaroorat nahin padti....Ye to dilon ki baatein hain...Apne aap samajh li jaati hai...Aankhen hi saara haal bayan kar deti hain...Phir tum unke dil aur aankhon ko kaise nahin padh payi??Tum ye kyun nahin kahti ke tum bhi unse pyaar karti ho??? Tumhe bhi anjaane main unse pyaar ho gaya hai??? Tabhi to tum is engagement se khush nahin ho....
Naina---- Main isliye khush nahin hoon kyunkii Dr Ritu mere bhaiya ke haalat ki zimmedaar thi...Ab main nahin chahti ki Rajveer sir ki haalat mere bhaiya jaisi ho...
Antaratma---- Yeh to sirf ek bahana hai,,,,Asliyat main tum Ritu se jealous feel kar rahi ho...Tum nahin chahti ki who Rajveer ki zindagi main aaye...Am I right???
Naina----Ye kya bakwaas hai....Yeh sach nahin hai Main captain rajveer se pyaar nahin karti.....
Antaratma--- Tum laakh chupao...Par main tumhare dil ki aawaaz sun sakti hun...u love captain rajveer...Isiliye to tum unke paas apni har mushkil leke jaati thi...

Apni har choti se choti baat tum unke saath share karma chahti ho...Wo tum hi thi naina Jo rajveer ke accident ke bare main sun ke baukhla gayi thi....Ye soch ke...ke kahin tumne cptain rajveer ko hamesha ke liye kho to nahin diya??? Ye pyaar nahi to aur kya hai Naina??? U love him very very much... Ab maan bhi jaao.... Jaakar unse kah do naina... Jao Naina....jao...Tell him that u love him....U love him.....u love him.........

Naina is now hysterics....she cries and sobs aur who apne kaan pe haath rakh deti hai....Woh zor zor se apne sar ko hilate hue chillati hai........
( antaratma gayab ho jaati hai)
nahin nahin...main captain Rajveer se pyaar nahi karti....I don't love captain rajveer.....nahin karti...Main unse pyaar nahin karti.....

And she cries bitterly....and at last admits to her self....Ya shayad karne lagi hoon...SHE WONDERS.....
Kaafi andhera ho chukka tha....After some time...Huda comes to the garden searching for naina....and at last figures her sitting on abench with her head down...and hands on her face.....

Huda--- Arre phoolan tu yahan baithi hai?? Aur maine sara KMA chaan mara...
Naine jaldi se apne aasoon poch leti hai...and replies...
Naina--- haan who maine socha thoda bahar ki hawa mein ghum aaoon...acha lagega...
Huda--- Are phoolan...itni jyaada hawa khayegi to phool jayegi... phir meri mammiji tujhe kaise pasand karengi??
Naina--- please huda...Mujhe pareshaan mat kar..maain abhi mazaak ke bilkul mood main nahin hoon...
Huda suddenly becomes very serious...and says...
Huda--- ek baat bata naina, teri problem kya hai??? Aisa ek pal nahin aaya jab tune mujhse theek se baat ki ho... tum to kabhi bhi mazaak ke mood main nahin rahti... To isme meri kya galti hai?? Haan?? Kya soch rahi hai tu?? Us captain ke bare main naa?? Yehi ke kaise uski engagement ko rokegi tu???

Naina looks at him in surprise...
HUDA---- Chaunkne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai... main abhi abhi Dr Shalini se mil ka aa raha hoon.... Wohi bata rahi thi....

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Posted: 2007-04-04T21:53:25Z
Naina--- Dekh Huda..tu ab phir se waapis usi kahaani ko mat dohraana....Tu jaiasa soch raha hai waisa kuch nahin hai...main ritu mam aur rajveer sir ke beech aana nahin chahti... Meri kuch alag reasons hain...jinki wajah se main ye sab...kuch kar rahi hoon....
Huda---Aisi kya baat hai Naina/?? Zara mujhe bto apna samajh ke bataa....itni kya zaroori baat hai jiske liye tu inta drama kar rahi hai???
Naina stands up and says--- Ye main tumhe nahin bata sakti....Meri kuch majbooriyaan hain....
Huda naina ko zor se pakad leta hai....(uske shoulders ko marodne lagta hai...)
HUDA--- aisi kya majbooriya hain Naina?? Aaj tumhe batana hi padega Aisa kya dekh liya tumne us captain main....Jo mujhmein nahin hai haan???

HUDA starts shaking her violently...now...
Naina pleads---Chodo mujhe huda...,,,,chodo.....
HUDA....Aisa kya hai usme jo mujhme nahi?? Main dikhne main smart hoon Handsome hoon... Hazaaron ladkiyaan mujhpe chutki bajate hi mar mitne ke liye taiyar ho jayengi...phir teri kya problem hai haan?? Bol...Naina...aaj main tumhe tab tak nahin chodunga jab tak tum mere sawaalon ka jawaab nahin de deti.....Tujhe aaj bolna hi padega....

Naina----Huda Mujhe dard ho raha hai....Chod mujhe....Huda..Huda...
But huda sab kuch ansuna kar deta hai...Woh use jor se dabane lagta hai..aur zabardasti karne lagta hai...
HUDA----Naina tu mere pyaar ko kyun undekha kar deti hai??? Ab tu us rajveer ka peecha kyun chod nahin deti??? Kal uski engagement hai yaar.....
Huda is now trying to bring her closer forcibly.....

Naina—Ye tum kya kar rahe ho Huda....Please mujhe chodo....mujhe jaane do Huda.....
Huda..... Aaj main tumhara jawaab sun kar hi tumhe jaane doonga....

Naina---Huda please.Pleaseeeeee... Chodo mujhe.....
She weeps and shouts.......
Meanwhile Rajveer started wlking back towards the main building...But suddenly he heard something moving behind the bushes and heard a noise and a muffled noise between tears....Of somebody shouting....He speeds up his steps...and goes closer to the place

from where the sound was coming....and looked at the view...

Naina is struggling to get herself free from Huda's grip from her shoulders....She is pleading and demandind him to let her go....But Huda is not listening to her and he is violently shaking her......
At that time rajveer realized , how wrong he was , to even think of the fact that huda has changed his personality and is now a suitable match for naina.....He is still the same...CRUEL....Selfish....unfeeling......
He runs and goes near Huda and naina....And he pulls huda back...away from Naina....and scolds him at the top of his voice...

Rajveer---cadet Huda...abhi abhi aap kya kar rahe the aapko pata hai??? Iska anzaam kya ho sakta hai kya aap jante hain???

Naina's tears didn't stop rolling and he comes nearer to rajveer and hides behind him...trembling with fear...of what was going to happen...if rajveer would have not come to rescue her...

Huda---Dekh captain...Tu mere aur naina ke beech main mat aa...ye hamare beech ka mamla hai... Waise bhi pehle bahut drama ho chukka hai...Tu jaa...aur apni engagement pe dhyaan de...

Rajveer---- Cadet HUDA Aap shayad ye bhool rahe hain...ki aap apne teacher se baat kar rahe hain... Ab shyad mujhe aapko ye bhi sikhana pdega ki teacher se kaise baat ki jaye.... Go back to ur room...NOW...Its an order....

They look at each other ....Huda stops himself from saying anything rubbish...and leaves the place angrily.......
Tujhe to main dekh loonga captain...he says this under his breath....
After Huda leaves the place..... Rajveer holds naina in his protective arma.... Naina also holds him tightly for protection.... Rajveer slowly caressed her hair and head.... Naina was still crying....
Rajveer--- Kyat um theek ho naina?????
Naina--- woh.... Huda.......woh.....
And started crying loudly...
Rajveer---who tumhara kuch nahin bigaad payega.... main hoon naa tumhare saath....main tumhara khayal rakhunga...woh tumhara baal bhi baanka nahin kar sakta.... Mujhpe bharosa rakho....

Saying so...rajveer brings her forward and she comes face to face with him.....
Rajveer--- Ab acchi bachhi ki tarah apne aasoon bahana band karo.... samjhi??? Itna aasoon bahaogi....to sasural jaate waqt kya karogi haan???

And smilingly...he wipes her tears with his hands.....
Naina too couldn't help herself from smiling.....and stops crying...

Naina--- Bharosa to hai Sir...Par aap mera khayal kaise rakh sakte hain??? Kal to aapki engagement hone waali hai....
Rajveer's face tenses but he says nothing....
Naina--- Good night sir.... and leaves the room....
Rajveer watches her leaving.....

Hey Friends... I think u all liked upto this much.....
For the next post...i will suggest u to go the link below...turn on ur volume level...minimise the video...and then read the next post slowly....................

At that night........
Both Rajveer and naina are awake.......
Un dodno ko neend nahin aa rahi thi....Dono ek doosre ke bare main soch rahe the.....
(now open the following link)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r9V2O6DIqcE
Naina goes to the window...and looks at the moon..... rajveer too was lookin at the moon at the same time.............
Both were crying silently......
Both were missing each other at that moment.........
And loving....more n more n more.................
Hey Friends...u can also see the video below....Its situational.....
http://www.youshare.com/view.php?file=FINAL1.mpg
(Hey JIV....its ur video.......)

Its a scene of a very dark room.
where somebody in a black robe is standing and talking over phone in a slow but serious voice
She has a long curly hair...its a female voice....with sharp features.....
"Jee haan...kaam theek thak chal raha hai..."then she pauses to listen to the reply from the other side... Then she replies..."aap chinta mat kijiye....sab kuch plan ke mutabik chal raha hai...Bas ek baar ye engagement ho jaane do....Uske baad Captain Rajveer hamari Muthhi main hoga......

And she laughs aloud feeling satisfied.....
"Aapke dost Naveen ko to maine pehle hi barbaad kar diya tha Cpt Rajveer....Ab aapki baari hai....""
She turns about.....to show her wicked smile...and a dangerous spark in her eyes.....
She is.....of course.........


DR RITU MISHRA


Its 5:00 am.... An alarm goes off.........
Trinnnnnnnnn Trinnnnnnnn Trinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Naina and Pooja are both in deep sleep....Naina looks annoyed at being disturbed so early....
She wakes up by the alarm...Pooja is still sleeping...unaffected by the sound....
Naina glances at her and calls her to wake her up....
Naina---Pooja...Pooja....Uth jaa...Tera alarm baj raha hai.....Pooja....
Pooja.... Ohhh Subah ho gayi kya?? Itni jaldi 5 baj bhi gaye???
Naina---Haan 5 baj gaye....Par tune ye alarm itne subah subah kyun lagaya hai?? Aur who bhi chutti ke din??? Classes bhi to 6 30 ke baad hi shuru hote the??? Aur aaj to ek bhi class nahin hai??
Pooja--- (waking up at last and rubbing her eyes....) ---who mujhe mandir jaana hai isiliye....
Naina---Kya kaha tune?? Mandir jana hai?? Pooja tu theek to hai naa?? Ya mere kaan kharab ho rahe hain???
Pooja----Tere kaan bilkul theek hain...Ab mujhe chidhana band kar...main saal main sirf ek baar mandir jaati hoon...Mere Birthday ke din.....Samjhi???
Naina---Janamdin??? To kya aaj tumhara Birthday hai??? Tune pehle kyun nahin bataya???
Pooja--- Tune kabhi poocha hi nahin...... Ab wish bhi karegi ya aise hi baithi rahegi???
Naina---Oh Sorry.....HAPPY BIRTHDAY
And they hug each other
Naina—Chal main bhi tere saath mandir chalti hoon....Bahut din ho gaye bhagwaan ke darshan kiye hue.....
Pooja--- Ok done...Tu jaldi se taiyar ho jaa...Shalini mam se permission bhi to lena hai....


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At that time there is a knock on their door...
Pooja---main dekhti hoon...Itni subah subah kaun ho sakta hai???!!!!
An orderly gives her a bouquet of red roses and a letter...
Naina looks over and says.....Arre waah....Abhi se badhaiyaan aani shuru bhi hogayi ???Koi hai jise tumhara b day yaad hai////

Naina smells the roses and admires them....
Pooja---(looks at her name on the top of the roses on a slip and looks confused....).... Par yahan pe to kisi ko maine nahin bataya apne Bday ke bare main....Phir ye phool kisne bheje honge??? Shayad mere ghar se hoga.....
Then pooja calls Naina---Naina Ye letter tera hai...
Naina--- Mera letter....Par maine to baba se kal hi baat kit hi...unhone to iske bare main kuch nahin kaha.....Saying so she tears the envelope and reads the letter.....
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Meri Pyaari Phoolan...Sorry Naina...

Kal jo kuch bhi hua Who accha nahin hua....main ye jaan chukka hoon...Maine bahut battamizi kit hi tumhare saath...Mujhe apne gusse par kaabu karma chahiye tha...I am sorry Mujhe maaf kar dena.... Main tumse party main maafi mangne aaoonga...Please mujhe maaf kar dena....
Kal jo kuch hua use ek bura sapna samajh kar bhula dena...Kya tum apne sabse pyaare dost ko maaf nahin karogi????

I AM SORRY NAINA.......
Tumhara best friend...
HUDA...

Naina tears the letter into as many bits as she can...and throws it angrily in the dustbin....

Pooja takes the flowers and searches for the name slip on it....So as to know who sent her the fowers....And at last finds it.....
She reads the name and was taken aback....
She stares at the name....And stays there open mouthed...as if petrified...
Naina asks enquiringly..... Kisne bheja hai???

Pooja speaks very slowly....with abit of disappointment in her voice...

""""ROHIT ne........"""

naina exclaims...... ROHIT ne???? To kya rohit ne sach much ye phool bhejen hain?? Wow that's great news for u yaar..... I am so happy for u.... At last tujhe tera apna rohit mil gay... Ab tu Rohit ke paaas ja sakti hai////

But pooja ke face far thodi sib hi khusi nahin thi....Woh to jaise pathaar ki murti ban gayi thi.... Then suddenly she said...

Pooja---zaroor ye ali ki shararat hogi.... Yaad hai?? Pichli baar kya hua tha?? Kaise usne rahit kah kar mujhse baat kit hi?? Shayad mujhe ye phool dene se woh ghabrata tha isiliye usne ispar Rahit ka naam likh diya hoga.....Main abhi usse ja kar poochti hoon....

And pooja rushes to Ali's room...taking along the roses
Naina calls back---jaldi aana...hamein mandir jaan hai.....

Pooja enters the door without knocking....only to find Ali n Alekh both in deep sleep....they both had their faces covered with blankets....
Pooja ja kar Ali kop Jagati hai...
Ali,,,Ali,,,,Uth na...
and she shakes Ali...But actually it was Alekh sleeping in Ali's bed,,,,,with his face covered....

Alekh was annoyed as he was disturbed...
Alekh---Kyun itni subah subah chilla rahi hai?? thodi der Ali ke baigair nahin rah sakti kya??? Main Ali nahin Alekh hoon...Dikhta nahin kya??Pooja----sorry
So pooja goes to the other bed and shakes Ali to wake him up....
Ali...Ali...Uthna....Mujhe tujhse baat karni hai...

Ali wakes up and sees Pooja---Pooja ji Aap itni subah subah?? Koi pareshaani hai kya??
Alekh ab us shor mein so nahin pata...and at last he wakes up...stands up...takes his blanket and pillow and goes to the next room to sleep with huda n yudi...
jaate jaate he says---
Alekh---Subah se hi inka romance chaalu ho gaya....

And he leaves the room...shutting the door behind them...
Ali continues---Kya baat hai pooja...Aap bahut pareshaan lag rahi hain....
Pooja---Agar tujhe mere liye birthday phool bhejne hi the...to tumne uspe Rohit ka naam kyun likha???
Ali---Birthday kiska bday?? Aur ye rohit beech main kahan se aa gaya???
Pooja--Mera birthday aur kiska??? dekh Ali Ab bahut ho gaya mazak aur ye drama band kar...
Ali---aapka janamdin hai aaj?? Aapne pehle kyun nahin bataya??
allah aapki umar lambi kare...
Agar aapne pehle bataya hota to hum aapke liye zaroor koi tohfa laate///
pooja now is very tensed and surprised----To kya yeh phool tumne mujhe nahin bheje hain...
and she shows him the flowers,,,,
Ali---nahin...Humne aapko koi phool nahin bheje..Mujhe to ab pata chala ki aaj aapka janam din hai...Aap zara khul ke batayengi ke ye maajra kya hai??

So pooja tells him all about how she got the bouquet that day....and that Rohit's name is written on it....as the sender's name...

Ali becomes sad after hearng this news that at lasr Rohit has returned,,,,,who is going to take pooja away from her....forever.....but he tries to cover his emotions with afalse smile....and forcibly tries to be excited and happy....

Ali---Ye to acchi baat hai...Aapko to khush hona chahiye ki aapko aapka pyaar...aapka khoya hua Rohit mil gaya hai....
Pooja---Kya tu khush hai????
Ali steal glances and tries not to look at pooja
Pooja---nazren kyun chura raha hai Ali??? ye kyun nahin kahta ki tu Rphit ke aane se khush nahin hai....
Ali---Bhala...Hu..mmmeein...Kyu..Kyun..Dukh hoga..
He stammers at his words....
Aaap..Khush hain to hum bhi khush hain...

Pooja runs away....
Ali tries to stop her---Pooja////Pooja///
Pooja is nearly in tears while going...Tum kuch nahin kahna Ali...Kuch mat kahna...Rohit mujhe aa kar le bhi jayega..Par tu mujhe aapni dil ki baat nahin bata payega...

In the room,,,Ali thinks--- kiase main kahun POOja...AAp to mujhse shayd pyaar hi nahin karti....Tabhi to aap Rohit ko dhoondti phirti hain....

Pooja and Naina gets dressed up...and Naina was wearing a lovely pink coloured salwar suit...Then they go to Dr shalini to seek her permission to go to the temple....
Shalini was meanwhile talkin with ritu...
naina n Pooja--- hum andar aa sakte hain mam///\
Shalini--Of course cadets...come in...
Ritu was siiting in a chair...naina looked at her coldly...Shalini--Sit down cadets..Kaho kya baat hai???
naina--Woh mam hum aapse baahar jaane ki permission mangne aaye the...Woh aaj Pooja ka bday hai..to woh mandir jaana chahti hai...isiliye...
Shalini--Oh happy birthday Pooja...
Ritu---God bless u..
Shalini---Of course tum dono jaa sakti ho..Par ek problem hai...
Pooja--KYA???
Shalini----Mandir yahan se 10 km ki doori par hai...Aur tum dodno chal ke to nahin jaa sakti...Aur problem ye hai ki saare drivers bahaar engagement ki taiyeri ke liye idhar udhar gaye hue hain.....
naina---To kya yahan se koi auto humein nahin milega??
Shalini--Mil to jaata...Par itni subah to ek bhi gaadi is raaste nahin jaati...
then all think about how to solve this problem....
Then suddenly an idea strucks into shalini's mind...
Shalini---(chutki bajate hue kahti hai) Ek idea hai mere paas...Par Ritu tumhe help karni hogi...
Ritu--Oh sure any time...
Shalini--To suno...Kya tum aur Rjveer bhi unke saath mandir ja sakte ho?? Waise bhi...Tumhare is naye rishte ki shuruaat se pehle tumhe Devi ke darshan to karne hi chahiye...Tumhe unka aashirwaad bhi mal jayega...Aur gaadi captain chala lenge....Kyun Kya khayal hai???

Ritu hesitates a bit....Well...Mujhe koi problem nahin hai..Ye to theek baat hi hai..Par cptn raazi honge ya nahin Ye mujhe nahin pata...
Shalini--Ok then DONE....Captain Rajveer ko main mana loogi...

So Naina and Pooja leave the room..Naina was veryy unsure whether this idea will work or not..as ritu n raj..n she were going to b together...

A scene inside the TATA SAFAARI...
rajveer is driving the car..Ritu is sitting next to him...Pooja n Naina are in the backside seats...
All are silent...Ek ajeeb si chuppi chayi hui thi...rajveer was concsious of the situation n tries to concentrate harder on Driving only...and avoids looking at ritu...in front of Naina atleast...

At last ritu breaks the silence...

Ritu to Rajveer---pata hai..maine suna hai ki jo pati patni mandir se maa ka aashirwaad late hain..woh jodi hamesha khush rahti hai...Kya hamara bhi saath marte dum tak hoga??

saying so Ritu leans over Rajveer and rests her head on his chest...
rajveer looks at Naina's reaction in the rear view mirror...
naina ye sab dekh kar andekha kar dene ki koshish karti hai...Aur khidki se baahar dekhne lagti hai...

In the mandir...they ring bells...They saw the statue of Durga maa....

Pooja..Praying---- Kya sach much raohit waapis aa gaya hai?? Agar haan to kya mujhe usse shaadi kar leni chhiye?? Uske baad bhi...Jo usne mere saath kiya?? Kya main use apna paoongi?? Kya main ye bhool paoongi ki uski wajah se hi mere parivaar walon ko kitni zillat aur badnaami uthani padi thi??? Meri doli uthte uthte rah gayi thi.... Mere gharwalon ki naak kat gayi thi...Kya main ye sab bhoola doon??
Aur Ali....Main to usse pyaar karne lagi hoon??? Use kaise main bhoola doon?? Hey bhagwaan...main pehli baar tujhse kuch maang rahi hoon.... Please Rohit ko waapis bhej do....Please...Maine uske bina jeena seekh liya hai.....

And naina prays-----
Hey Devi maa...Mujhe raasta dikha...mujhe nahin pata ke main kya karun??? Apne dimaag ki baat man kar apne makshad main dhyaan lagaoon...Ya apne dil ki baat manun?? Jo har pal mujhe rajveer sir ki aur le jaata hai>>??? hey maa...Tu hi bata main kya karun??? Mujhe raasta dikha maa....
Ritu thinks----
Mujhe ab apne makshad se koi nahin rok sakta...tu bhi nahin...ye main acchi tarah se jaanti hon..Phir mujhe tere aashirwaad ki kya zaroorat??
rajveer prays---
bhagwaan..ye tune mujhe kis churahe pe laa kar khada kar diya hai???
Ek taraf Naina hai to ek taraf Ritu????
main nahin jaanta ke main jo kar raha hoon woh sahi hai ya nahin.....Agar main ye theek kar raha hoon..To please mujhe apna aashirwaad dena...Aur agar main ye galat kar raha hoon...to mujhe sahi raah par laana.....

Then panditji comes forward with aarti in his hands...Rajveer n Naina comes at the same time to take the aarti....
Panditji says----Maa tum dono ki jodi hameshaa banaye rakhe...Tum dono ek doosre kaa saath hamesha nibhate raho...

At hearing this...both Naina and raj look at each other....Terrified..
Ritu comes forward after listening to this...then stands between raj n naina...just like a barrier betwween them..and stops the panditji from going inside...

Ritu----Panditji...aapse ek galti ho gayi hai...
Then she holds rajveer's hands...and says--main inke saath hoon...
Panditji---khyama karna beti..Mujhe ye pehle pata nahin tha...
then she gives the aarti thaali to Ritu...
and says--Par diya hua aashirwaad lautaya nahin ja sakta...Pata nahin maa ki kya leela hai isme....

Ritu jhemp si gayi...

Yudi is talking to Neelu over phone....
Yudi---No means No...Tum aaj ki party mein nahin aaogi...
Neelu(from the other side of phone)—Par main to zaroor aaongi...Arre aisa mauka baar baar kahan milta hai....Zara main bhi to dekhoon ki military engagements hoti kaisi hain....
Yudi----No sis...Tum yahan aa kar kya karogi?? Aur waise bhi tumhare exams kareeb aa rahe hain...Tum ghar main baith kar padhai karo..Theeek hai??
Neelu---Main party main aaungi...And that's Final..
She outs down the receiver
Yudi---Neelu..Neelu...

Then Yudi also puts down the receiver saying---Shit man...

Ali, Huda and Alekh are all in Ali's room....selecting their dresses for that evening...As usual...Huda n Alekh were borrowing from Ali..But Ali was not restricting them...He had other thoughts in her mind to worry about....ie.Pooja n Rohit....

Yudi enters the room in an irritated expression.....
Huda---Abe Ab tujhe kya ho gaya?? Aise muh banaye kyun chala aa raha hai??
Yudi---Aur kya hoga??? Neelu...
After hearing the name Alekh evesdrop their conversation...
Huda----Oh Neelu...Teri Bahan naa....Manna padega...Bahut HOT Kudi hai...
YUDI---Hey Dude....Neelu ke bare main mere saamne kuch ulta seedha mat bolna...
Huda---Theek Theek hai...To aage bata...

Alekh gets up from bed and drinks water..
Yudi---Who Neelu...kahti hai ki who aaj ki party main aa kar hi dum legi....

Alekh vomits out all the water from his mouth...in shock...

Yudi raises his eyebrows and asks---Hey chief,,,,Tumhe kya hua???
Huda says wickedly---Kuch nahin yaar...Kaidi ko bhi pyaar ho gaya hai...
Yudi(confused)---Matlab??

Huda was going to say something but Alekh stops him
Alekh---Jyaada chabbar chabbar mat kar...Apne kaam se kaam rakh...Samjha??
Huda---Theek hai Jane diya...Tu bhi kya yaad rakhega,,,Ki kisse paala pada tha...
Huda—waise tum me se kisi ne phoolan ko dekha hai kya? Main use subah se dhoond raha hoon...Par who aur Pooja dono hi apne kamre mein nahin hai...
Everybody answered in Negative by shaking their heads...
Huda goes out to search Naina----
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Tata safari..comes to a halt suddenly...and at last they have reached KMA...
Ritu bahaar nikalti hai and Pooja too....
Ritu---So see u in the evening Captain..........
And she goes to the building...Pooja bhi jaane lagti hai...and Rajveer bhi jataa hai....Naina too slams the door shut...But as she started to go, something pulled her to the car, and she was unable to go forward.....
She turns around only to find that half of her churni's end is still struck inside the vehicle....
Rajveer was also not there...He had already started going back to the building...and the keys were with him....

Naina looks at rajveer who was now halfway and considers...for a moment whether she should call him or not...but she changes her mind and tries to pull the churni...from the vehicle...the churni starts to tear...
Rajveer was going back but something made him to stop and he turns...and finds Naina...trying desparately....to get her churni free.....which is stuck in the car's door.....
As he was making a move to go back to Naina with his car keys...he finds Naina, who has at last succeeded in getting herself freed from the car's door...
When Naina walks past Rajveer,
Rajveer---Tumne mujhe bulaya kyun nahin Naina??? Mere paas chaabi tha....
Naina---(in double meaning sense)---Bulana chaha tha sir...Par aap bahut door ja chuke the...

Then she walks aways briskly from her...

Huda watches the scene...and smiles to himself....as he can see an invisible wall developing between Rajveer n Naina...which is increasing...and so are his chances of getting closer to naina....      
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Feb 15
It's the scene of the hall....All the students, teachers and other invited guests have arrived....The hall was completely covered up by banners containing pictures of Captain Rajveer n Ritu together, other decorations....
A soft music is playing from the backround...................

Brigadear Chandok is talking with the members of the head of KMA and other delegates...with a glass of drink in his hand...He is wearing a white long Kurta and paijama with a brown scarf....

Pooja is wearing a silver coloured lehenga...with white dangling earrings, necklace and matching bangles in both her hands...

Yudi is wearing a Maroon coloured kurta paijaama and a off-white scarf...He is standing besides her sister Neelu....

Neelu is dressed in a coffee coloured velvet, long tight skirt, which has slits upto knee length in her sides....She is wearing long metallic earrings and bracelet......

Alekh is sitting besides them who is in black coloured kurta paijama with red coloured duppatta....

YUDI---Sis maine mana kiya than a tumhe yahan aane se Phir Kyun aayi tum??

Neelu---Relax Bro..Just chill...Ab to main aa gayi hoon...ab dantne se kya fayda...Bekar main hi tum apna time waste kar rahe ho...Enjoy the party man...
Then she looks at Alekh and says...
Neelu---Kyun yaar??? Maine theek kaha naa??
Alekh kuch nahin keheta and looks away boringly...

Subedaar suri is also wearing paijama kurta with a red coloured pagdii....
Lolitha is near him, who has her hair open that day...and she is waring a dark blue saree with sleeveless blouse....
Subedaar----Lolita ji...aaj to aap bahut kamala ki dikh rahi hain....
Lolitha---Suriji...aap to khamokhah hi meri taareef kiye jaa rahe hain...
Subedaar---Nahin....aap sach mein bahut acchi lag rahi hain...jaise aaj aapki engagement ho rahi ho.....

Simran was wearing a pepsi blue coloured umbrella frock with beads' necklace and stone earrings....

Rajveer is wearing a pale yellow coloured sherwaani...with dark brown coloured beads on it....just like the one that shahid kapoor was wearing in Vivah....and a red brown mix coloured dupatta.....A tilak was put on his fore head...He was standing and watching Naina from a distance....

Ali and Naina were standing together...Naina is wearing a very beautiful salwaar suit with pink coloured flpral patterns all over it....She has put on a dangling pink coloured earrings which is sweeping her shoulders....and matching pink bangles in both her hands...she has let her hair down loose...She was looking as beautiful as ever ...she was looking simple with a slight hint of pink lip gloss and a light make up..woh kehte hain naa....Beauty lies in simplicity......
Naina bhi Rajveer ko dekhti hai....

Ali was near her...he was wearing a plain simple white sherwaani....he was looking at Pooja with a sad expression in his eyes....

Huda n Major Nair are standing next to each other...Both are wearing suits...Huda is wearing a casual black one....Huda major nair ko makhhan lagane ki koshish karta hai...
Huda---aap sahi kah rahe hain sir jee...Ye koi shaadi ya sagaai ka mandap thode hi hai....jo yahan engagement ki party ho rahi hai....Military academy ka kya haal ho gaya hai!!!
Major Nair---Yahi baat to main brigadear se kah raha tha.... Par unhone meri baa hi nahin suni...unhone to jaise apne kaan band kar diye hon...Pata nahin....Suri ji ne unpe kya jaado chalaya hai....

Then suddenly music starts playing.........
(Starting music of Crazy kiya Re from Dhoom 2 )
Link------ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kSSFCo3gEmQ
Just minimize the window after clicking on the above link...and go on...read it...U will feel as if u are watching the scene urself....

Sexy Lady on the floor....Keep me coming back to more....
Jaado se jaado kiya..Kya re......
Sexy lady on the floor..........

Everybody turns to see.......
Ritu, accompanied by Shalini, were descending down the stairs....

Ritu was loking absolutely fantastic....Shalini ne ritu ko sajaane me koi kasar nahin chodi thi....Khule baal...aur beech mein maang...maang me ek jwellery....Maathe pe bindee...Long heavy traditional earrings...a broad matching necklace with pink coloured bangles, about 2 dozens in each hand....Rings in her fingers....She was wearing a lehenga of light pink coloured and low back choli....with high heeled sandles....Make up...with pink shades on eyes and dark pink glowing lip stick....
She was looking heavenly...breathtaking....sizzling....Very beautiful....and simply HOOTTTT....
Fashionable...yet traditional...

When she stepped on the floor of the hall, a dozen whistle sounds come from different corners...Ritu smiles shyly at the response...
Shalini..in low voice to Ritu---Dekha...After all tumhe sajaya kisne hai...

Then Huda jaldi se ja kar uske samne khada ho jaata hai and asks...
Huda---Aaj to jaise chaand zammen pea a gaya hai...Will u marry me???
Ritu---I am sorry...I am already Booked....
Kehke who aage chali jaati hai...and stands besides Rajveer...
Rajveer stands there unresponsively....

Ritu---Aapne bataaya nahin...Ke main kaisi lag rahi hoon??

Rajveer...bina use dekhe...without any enthusiasm says....

Rajveer---Aap ...well...aachhi lag rahi hain....Dr Mishra...

Ritu---Ab aap mujhe ye Dr Mishra bulana kab chodenge???? Call me RITU only ok??
Rajveer---Ok Dr Mishra...Uhhh Ohhh..I mean Ritu....

Then comes an announcement...

Huda---Ladies n Gentlemen...Aap sab to jaante hi hain...ki aaj...hamare....do sabse chahete teachers ki engagement hone jaa rahi hai....Aur who dono hain...Captain Rajveer and Dr Ritu Mishra...
To aaj hum sab unhi ki zabaani ye sunenge ki aakhir un dono ko ek doosre se pyaar hua kaise???
Kya hai unki love story.....?? Kab unka Kanchangeunga Millitary Academy....Love academy mein badal gaya??? To pehle Ritu mam ...aap aayiye...aur batayiye....

And the spotlight comes on Ritu only...and Huda hand overs her the speaker....Everybody claps....

Ritu holds the speaker a bit of hesitation...But everybody encourages her in chorus...
"Come on Mam...speak up...."
So At last Ritu starts to speak, after glancing sideways at Rajveer....
Ritu---"Captain Rajveer se meri pehli mulaakat KMA main hi hui thi....Pehle to who mujhe bahut ...(She pauses a little...And says...) bahut khadush...apne aap ko bahut oversmart aur over confident samajhne waale lage the....

The audience laughs at this...
Par baad mein maine unka asli swabhaav jaana....Woh bahut hi caring determined aur soft spoken the....And of course bahut HANSOME bhi....Unka sense of humour great tha....
Phir unhone mujhe kayi saarelave letters likhe...aur propose bhi kiya...and I said...YES...."

The audience clapped loudly at this....and cheered her.....rajveer seemed shocked,,,,and looked at RITU..bcoz it was a totaaly cooked up story n Rajveer is aware of that...but he says nothing.....

Naina seemed uninterested at the proceedings but clapped without desire...along with everybody...

Huda—Thanks madam ji...Yeh to wakai romantic story tha...ab chaliye...sunte hain Captain rajveer se...ke unka is bare mein kya kehna hai...

Then the spotlight comes on rajveer...he seemed shocked....And who chaunk sa jaata hai....Darr ke mare unki aankhen badi badi ho jaati hain....aur unka muh khula ka khula hi rah jaata hai....
He holds the speaker...without knowing what to say next...where to start..what to start...

Everybody encores---Captain Rajveer...bataiye humein...ki aapko Ritu mam se pyaar kab hua??
Somebody shouts---Kya aap unhe dekh ke un ke roop pe fisal gaye the???

Everybody sneers at this...

Naina captain rajveer ki aur dekhti hai...wondering if these things are true..
Rajveer too stares at Naina...and speaks up......

Rajveer (hichkichate hue)....Uhhhh...ummm....welll....Dr Mishra...I mean...Ritu...ne to badi aasani se apni kahani bata di....Ab main kya kahun.....?? Mujhe to khud bhi nahin pata ke main unse engagement kyun kar rahaa hoon???

At this answer...all the audience seemed shocked and starled...whispering things....among themselves....Everybody looked at rajveer...raising their eyebrows...in questioning way.....

Is situation ko theek karne ke liye....Huda says--- Thank u captain rajveer...Dekha aap logon ne....Ritu mam ka jaadoo aisa chaya ke who kab unke deeawne ho gaye..aur unse pyaar kar baithe....
Come on guys...Taaliyaan....

So after this, the guests stopped whispering and clappd loudly...The tense situation was carefully softened by Huda....
And everybody claps...

Huda contiues---So ab der kis baat ki????? Intezaar khatam....Let the engagement begins...

So all the guests applauded and gathered near the stage,...
Ritu n Rajveer were standing in the middle of the stage...Shalini was holding the ring for Ritu and Huda was holding the ring of Rajveer...
Then Shalini gives...the ring to Ritu....and Ritu starts to slide the ring in rajveer's finger....

Everybody clapped...Now it was Rajveer's turn/////

Huda gives the ring to Rajveer....Rajveer looks at the ring for sometime....and as he was going to slip it in Ritu's hand.....the ring slipped from Rajveer's hand.....and it rolled n rolled n rolledn on the floor..................till it stopped after colliding at Naina's feet........
Everybody looked at Naina....
Naina...ring ko uthaati hai...and looks at it for a sec n then Comes forward near the stage to give it back.....She gives it back to Rajveer....
Rajveer looks at naina....They both look at each other.....Rajveer ke ankhen nam ho gayi thi.....naina ki aankh se bhi ek aasoon nikal aaya....

Background music------
Link------ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9o9fTtdngtI
Aye dil dil ki duniya mein...aisa haal bhi hota hai......
Bahar koi hansta hai andar koi rota hai......
Ae dillllll,,,,,,Koi pehchana nahin...kisi ne ye jaane nahin...kisi ko batana nahi...dard chupa hai kaha....
(this sad song is from Yaadein...Truly...awesome song...Do listen to it....)
Huda rajveer ke kandhe par haath rakhke use hilata hai...and he says----
Ab bas bhi kijiye captain...Aur kitna intezzar karwaenge Ritu mam ko....Zara anguthi zaldi pehnayiye...

Then rajveer nods.....and at last he slips the ring in Ritu's finger.....

Everybody cheered...applauds....and many whistle sounds come.....
Rajveer looks again at naina....Both were sad at this moment...
Rajveer thinks—Mujhe maaf kar dena Naina...
Naina thinks----Aap ki koi galti nahin hai sir..Maine hi aapko apni dil ki baat nahin batayi...

Then Huda announces-----Rajveer sir...Ritu mam...Please dance....MUSIC.....
LINK----- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OvgUA2jTGs8
Music----Jab koi baat bigad jaye...jab koi mushkil pad jaaye..Tum dena saath mera...O hamnawaan...na koi tha...Na koi hai..zindagi mein tumhare siva...Tum dena saath mera...O humnawaan.....

The guests wooooooed...
The light dims...The spotlight comes on Ritu n Rajveer....
They dance slowly.....After sometime everybody joins in.....

Huda---Enjoy the party people....

Yudi asks Simran's hand by bowing down.....-----May I???

Simran accepts and they dance too....
Neelu to alekh---Chal kaidi....Pichle baar ki tarah..dance karte hain....
Alekh mana karta hai...par neelu use jabardasti khinch ke le jaati hai......And they dance too...
Ali asks Pooja- after much effort and practice------Kya aap wahan hamare saath wahan chalengi???
Pooja---Kyun nahi?? Aaj tune poocha to sahi...

And they dance,,,,,
Shalini dances with a senior cadet....
Subedaar Suri and lolitha dance too....

Huda comes near Naina...But naina started to go away.....Huda uska haath pakad leta hai....
Huda----Please naina..Miane kaha naa..I am sorry...Mujhse galti ho gayi yaar....Ab kyun itni choti si baat ko badhawa de rahi hai???

Naina---YE tumhare liye choti si baat ho sakti hai Huda....Par mere liye nahin...Aur mera haath chod...Phir se wohi galti tu karne jaa raha hai....

Huda leaves her hand....
Huda---Par naian...sun to...

Naina leaves that area...and moves forward...

Brigadear Chandok asks Naina---May we dance today?? Last time to hum dance nahin kar paye the....
Naina---Sure sir......
And Both BC n Naina dance....
As they started dancing....they move closer to Ritu and rajveer..
Rajver and naina...ki nazrein mili....Naina ne apni nazrein hata li...par rajveer use dekhta gaya....
BC---Congrats captain....
Rajveer—Thank u sir...
BC---Pata hai maine aaj tak shaadi kyun nahin ki....Kyunki...Shaadi ke baad ye patniyaan apne patiyon ko palloo mein baandh kar rakhna chahti hain....No means to offend u Dr Mishra...
Ritu---Oh...no..no...Sir..Its oK...par main aisa kuch nahin karne waali....I am going to give freedom to captain Rajveer....(from his life---She thinks...)
And BC and Ritu laugh and continue dancing with their partners....
Naina aur rajveer beech beech main chup ke se ek doosre ko dekhta hain...

Then the music stops suddenly....The dancers stop dancing....

Dr Shalini was on the stage...she announced...
Shalini---Ok friends....Ab hum yahaan pe ek game khelenge....Yahan pe ek box aap log dekh rahe hain.....Aur ismein bahut saare chits rakhe gaye hain...jinmein kaafi saare naam likhe gaye hain....Either pairs or single....Main eke k karke ye chits uthaungi...and jiska naam likha hoga use yahan par aake either dance karna hoga ya phir gaana gana hoga.....
So are u ready?????????

Chorus voice---YES!!!!!!!!!

Shalini—So lets begin....

Saying so... she picked up a chit from the bottle and reads out the name....

Shalini---Kaafi unusual pairing hai...anyways......Huda...n Yudi....aap dono yahan aayiye aur dance kijiye...

Simran yudi ko jaane ke liye kehti hai..woh kaafi nervous tha.....

Music starts------
Kya cool hain hum..kya cool hain hum...Kya kya kya kya Kya cool hain hum...Hum mein badaa hai dumm......

The twosome rocked the stage......and they really showed a brilliant performance....they danced with same steps...
Everybody encores.....

Shalini---ok..that was great.....Next...(she picked up another chit....) Dr.Ritu.....Solo dance....

Ritu---Shalini...Main kya dance karun yaar???Mujhe nahin aata...
Shalini---Dance to tumhe bahut accha aata hai..Chalo ab bahane baazi mat karo....
Ritu then atlast starts dancing seductively....around Rajveer...

LINK---http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=klqDiW67zbQ
Ye Mera dil...Pyaar ka deewana...Deewana Deewana..pyaar ka parwaana...Aata hai mujhko pyaar mein jal jaana.....Mushkil hai pyaare tera bach ke jaana.......
(At this line....she smiles wickedly around Rajveer.....)
Ye mera dil pyaar ka deewana........

Everybody claps....
Ritu---Thank you....

Shalini picks up another chit----(saying)----Neelu n Alekh...dance a duet....

So Neelu a Alekh come...
song is from ishq vishq
Neelu starts----
Dooba re dooba aankhon mein teri dil mera dooba re...dooba re dooba aankhon mein teri dil mera dooba re....
Then alekh says----Tujhko haseena....hai..hai...Maine banaye..ho ho..Tujhko haseena maine banaya..meri mehbooba re.....Dooba re dooba....aankhon mein teri dil mera dooba re......

Neelu danced with all latak jhatak...and alekh uski kamar pe haath rakh kar naachta hai...
Everybody is impressed....specially from Alekh who is rarely seen dancing like this....

Shalini---Next....NAINA.....Solo song...
Naina---par mam mujhe gaana nahin aata....
Shalini---tumhe jaisa bhi aata hai ..tum gaao....

So Naina starts------
LINK-----http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECEHjdP0twk
Tum bin jiya jaye kaise...Kaisejiya jaaye tum bin...
(She glances at Rajveer while singing....)
Sadiyon se lambi hain raatein...Sadiyon se lambe hue din...
Aaja laut kar ab...Ye dil kah raha hai.....Rajveer sobs after going to a corner.... And naina too sobs while singing....
All praised her when she finished....

Shalni---Ab baari hai.....HUDA ki....

Huda comes forward readily.....She started dancing with all the girl cadets....
LINK----http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8y_13cYq2xs
Mujhpe har haseena...Marti hai kyun??? Kyun Kyun..
Kehti mujhse kyun....I love u...
The girls shout---WE Luv u.....
Huda says—Kya mera chehera romantic hai???
Girls—Haan hai...
Huda---Kya meri aankhen aashiquana hain???
Girls---haan hai....
Huda---Ek dil hai mere paas...aur ladkiyaan hazar..Jo chahe dil ke tukde kar doon sab mein baant doon.......
Every girl present there kissed him on his cheeks....and after his song ended...he gives a flying kiss to the audience....

Shalini----Manna padega huda....that was sizzling.....
Next performance....Captain Rajveer....

Captain rajveer says before starting---This song is dedicated to someone special present here.....
Then he continue looking at naina...
LINK----http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Q5SHV4i4oI
Dil kya kare jab kisi ko..kisi se pyaar ho jaaye......Jaane kahan kab kisi ko kisi se pyaar ho jaaye.....
As he was singing...woh Naina ke chaaron taraf mike pakde ghoom ghoom ke gaata hai.....
But the audience thinks the song was for Ritu...coz...she was standing next to naina...
Unchi neechi deewaron si is duniya ki rasmein...Na kuch tere bas mein Julie...naa kuch mere bas mein.....
Dil kya kare.....

Shalini---Wow..Aap to gaana bhi achaa gaate hain...Ok Next....Suriji aur Lolitha. Ji.......
Suriji n Lolitha ji came.....
LINK----http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h4BXiXmnWQE
Suriji started----Mere pyaar ka ras zara chakhna...Oye makhana...Oye makhana.... Aise to chura na akhana...Oye makhana...Oyae makhana....

And they both danced in Punjaabi style.....
BC and all the other officers praised their performance.....and some cadets also blew whistles.......
Then Shalini picked up another chit......,opened it up...and announced......Ok ab baari hai....
BRIGADEAR CHANDOK...........ki....

BC stood there shocked and denied ...
BC---Plz shalini ji...Mujhe ye dance wance karna nahin aata....
Shalini ji----Plz sir..Dontspoil the fun.....Main aapko join karungi.....
Everybody shouts------Come on sir.....U can do it......Sir....Please....

At last BC accepts.....
BC---Ok Ok lets go....
LINK----
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H1ke0-ZBu8M
BC starts to dance with Shalini----with expressions...and actings...
Hey come a little closer..Baby..Baby..Baby..wanna..steal ur heart away......
Gore Gore Mukhde..Be my Love..Caand ke tukde...Be my love....Kaali kali zulfen ...Be my love...(at this line...BC touches the hairof Shalini)
Neeli Neeli aankhen Be my love...Bc shows Shalini's eyes....

Everybody was surprised and they were very excited..and were watching the seen very eagerly.....Many clapped n whistles....

Rajveer n Naina...n Ritu too laugh at this...
"Rock n Roll Soniye.....Dhol hain hum tere liye...Rock n Roll Soniye...Kabhi tub hi to mere sang dol....Rock n Roll....."

BC and shalini were dancing well by showing all the steps that were on the film...actually...Shalini---Wah Sir...Aap bhi bade hi chupe rustam nikle....Next...Alli and Pooja...
Ali---Humein ye nachna nahi aata..Pooja ji...aap akele hi naachiye....
Pooja---Come on Ali..chal naa...
Ali—Nahin nahin...humse ye sab nahin hota....

LINK----http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZLW7TYU7nqY
So pooja starts.....Is deewane ladke ko koi samjhaye.....
Pyaar mohabbat se naa jane kyun ye ghabraye...Dar de dillll jaane na....
Then Pooja holds ali's hand..but Ali let it go...
Paas mein jtne aaoon who utni door hi jaaye..Jaaye ...haan jaaye....Is deewane ladke ko koi samjhaaye....

Shalini—thank u both of u...Next......HUDA aur Naina....
Huda was very happy at this.....But naina refuses flatly.....
Naina—I am sorry mam...Main huda ke saath dance karna nahin chahti.....
Then huda comes to her and starts singing.....by holding both of his ears....
LINK----http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ph3tXOJubSc

Aankhon ki....Gustaakhiyaan.....Maaf ho.......
Ankhon ki...gustaakhiyaan Maaf ho.....

And he begs her to forgive him.....by bending down on his knees.....and holding her legs....He didn't let it go.....
Naina----Chodo Huda....Chodo...Ye kya tamashaa hai......
Huda------Plz phoolan.....Mujhe maaf kar dena....Pehle maaf kar..uske baad chodunga.....
Naina—Nahin huda...Chod mera pair.....saare log dekh rahe hain Huda..chod....
Huda----To dekhne de..mujhe koi pharak nahin padta....
Pehle tu mujhe maaf kar..main tujhe kabhi Captain ke naam se nahin chidhaunga yaar....
Naina---Theek hai theek hai..maaf kiya...ab to chod...Par yaad rakh agar tumne phir aisi waisi koi harkat ki...to mujhse bura aur koi nahin hoga.....
Huda..happily hugs her tightly.......Oh thank you Thank you phoolan..Tusi Great ho.....
Naina pushes him back.....
Then Shalini announces....
Ab baari hai----Yudi aur Simran ki....
Yudi whiospers in Simran's ears-----Ma'am....Maine sach main kabhi kisi ladki ke saath dance nahin kiya..Mujhe to bahut darr lag raha hai....

then yudi starts...
LINK-----http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aP2NSJ-mSUE

Yudi--Dil dooba..Dil dooba..Neeli aankhon mein ye dil dooba...Mehbooba...mehbooba...bas ye jaan le mehbooba....aashiq hoon deewana hoon...tere liye kuch bhi kar jaoonga...tere liye hi jeeta hoon tere liye hi mar jaoonga......
huda----whistles....Oye yudiye....
Simran--main tere jhaanse mein naa aoongi..arre deewane jaa...kyun aisi waisi bana ke baatein..mujhe naa yun uljha.....

dil dooba....di dooba....and both starts dancing....

shalini----Ok that was fabulous.....Now its the last performance.....

CAPTAIN RAJVEER AUR NAINA.....
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Posted: 2007-04-04T23:11:53Z
hey taht wuz awsome Clap good job keep it up hope raj n naina confess to each other very soon Tongueplzz continue soon Clap
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Posted: 2007-04-05T04:37:02Z
At last i am here...I will continue the story...but not often...Sorry guys...So here is the rest of the story..

Rajveer and Naina were declining to dance...They were trying to pursue others that they are now too tired to dance....But the audience didnt listen to any of their excuses...They pulled and pushed and brought the two of them in the middle of the hall and nudged them on the stage...
Meanwhile to save Rajveer and Naina from this ackward position..Bunti choube cutts off the power of the whole building.....
And now its completely dark inside the hall....
Everybody shouts and noise starts increasing all around....
There is complete chaos and confusion everywhere...
Subedaar Suri---- Shouts----Chupp RAHO!!!!! Darne aur chiillane ki koi zaroorat nahin...Main abhi 5 min mein dekh kar aata hoon ke ye lights ko achanak kya ho gaya....
And he walks in the dark by switching a pen light from his pocket...

Now both rajveer and Naina are nearby each other....
They are speaking slowly ....

Naina--- Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai Sir
Rajveer--Kis se Naina?? Mujhse ya is andhere se??
Naina---Aapse kyun darr lagega?? Main aapki baat nahin kar rahi hoon
Rajveer---Phir kya tum andhere se darr gayi?? Mujhe nahin pata tha ki apne aapko Sabse nidar kahne waali cadet is chotti si baat par bhi darr jaati hai...
Naina--- Andhere se bhi nahin sir...Main to is baat se darr rahi hoon ki roshni aane ke baad kya hoga??
Rajveer--Kyun?? Mere saath dance karne se darr lagta hai?? Hum ne to pehle bhi dance kiya hai...Phir aaj kyun darr lag raha hai??
Naina--- Pehle baat kuch aur thi...tab....Tab aapki engagement nahin hui thi Sir...Abhi aapko sirf Ritu ma'm ke saath hi waqt bitaana chahiye...Agar main aapke saath dance karungi...to unko bahut buraa lagega...

rajveer kuch nahin kahta...for some moments...
Then slowly he brings his hands near naina's hands...
Naina cant see it coz its dark..
But then rajveer holds Naina's hands and kisses on it...
Naina feels it and gets startled and pulls away her hands from his grip...
Naina--- Ye kya kar rahen hain sir???
Rajveer doesn't give any explanations....
Rajveer--main kayi dino se tumse ek baat karna chahta tha...
Naina...not interested after what happend says---Kaun si baat??
Rajveer--Mere dil ki baat...
Naina is quite puzzled now and asks----Hmmmm??? Main kuch samjhi nahin....
rajveer--Kuch nahin...Baad mein bataaoonga..Pehle mere ek sawaal ka jawaab do... Tumhe kabhi kisis se anjaane mein mohabbat hui hai....>>>>>?????
Naina---after pausing for some time---No sir...Rajveer---Tum mujhse jhoot nahin bol sakti Naina...Tum kehne se pehle ruk kyun gayi??? Tumhe zaroor kisis se pyaar hua hai...Right??
Naina---Now promptly---No Sir I am not in Love...
Rajveer...kuch sochte hue.....
I see!!! Theek hai..Phir ek test kar lete hain...Khud ba khud pata chal jayega...ke tumhe kisis se pyaar hai ya nahin...

Naina...non plussed---Test Kaisa test????
Rajveer---woh tum dekhti jaao...Ab chalo mere saath...Yahan baatein nahin ho sakti....
and saying so...he holds naina's hands and woh use apne saath kahin le jaata hai...Dheere dheere chupte chupate woh dono hall se baahar aa jate hain...
Everybody is unaware that they are now not present in the room...
Coz its dark....
Naina--- Sir par aap mujhe kahan le kar jaa rahe hain????
Rajveer---Tum abhi mat poocho Naina....Bas dekhti jaao...

And they go upstairs.....
and reach a place that naina had never seen...
It was a garden on the terrace....and had lots and lots of flowers in flower pots....
there was a jhoola too in the middle....
and a little tank of water too....that was looking like a small pond...
there were many parrots in cages hanging from the roof
One can see the full moon too in the sky..
there was silence everywhere...
and amidst it were naina and rajveer all alone.......

COMING UP NEXT---A very romantic scene and TEST of naina...
keep waiting......

Naina---Sir aap mujhe yeh kahan le kar jaa rahe hain???
Rajveer---Tum kuch mat pooch....Bas chalo mere saath...Main tumhe ek bahut achhi aur nayee jagah pe le kar jaa raha hoon

They went upstairs through stairs Naina ko kuch nahin dikh raha tha...par phir bhi who Rajveer ka haath pakad ke uske peeche peeche chali ja rahi thi...
At last after much twists and turns..they came to a stop and reached the top of the stairs....
Naina saw that they are in front of a balcony type terrace...there are a lot of flowers of different colours and fragrance all around in flower pots....Many love birds and parrots were chirping in the nearby cages that were hanging from the roof.....There was a small man made pool of water that had a small but beautiful fountain...A swing for two was also there amidst the greenery...A small green house was made that was required to keep the potted plants....A full moon was clearly visible from the sky...
Naina was dumbfounded at the sight of such a beautiful scene around her.....It was so beautiful sight that she stood there for some moments capturing everything around her...She was gaping at Rajveer for an explanation..but Rajveer was smiling quite pleased at himself bcoz he showed Naaina such a wonderful place to make her happy...
Naina stood there...cool breeze was blowing her hair..she was smiling...and Rajveer noticed again that she was looking very beautiful in the moonlit night....

Naina---WoW!!!!!!! My Goodness...what a beautiful place...Sir...??? Ye...Ye jagah to humne pehle kabhi nahin Dekhi....Mujhe pata nahin tha ki KMA main itni khubsoorat jagah bhi hai...
Rajveer Naina ko dekh kar kehta hai.....Haan Hai naa...
Naina---Ji??
Rajveer---Oh..Kuch nahin......Actually main ye kah raha tha ki mujhe bhi is jagah ke beere mein nahin pata tha jag main bhi ek student tha....Ye KMA ka kitchen garden hai....Yahan sirf faculty members apne leisure time main aa sakte hain.....Par kisis ko waqt hi kahan milta hai yahn aane ke liye???

Naina was very excited about her latest finding...she was smiling ti herself and going to every nook and corner and surveying things....

Naina----WOW manana padega sir.its so beautiful....i loved it..I just loved it....Its...Its absolutely Fantastic....Aise sundar jagah ko cadets se chuppa kar rakhna nahin chahiye tha...

Saying so...she goes over to the birds in the beautiful cages and smelled all the flowers...

Rajveer just sat on the swing and looked at Naina smiling...
Then Naina , after sometime remembered the actual purpose of coming there...and she turned towards Rajveer at questioningly look and said...
Naina---Sir..aap mujhe kuch bataane wale the..ki aap mujhe yahan kyun le kar aaye hain?? Aur aap kisi test ke bare main baat kar rahe the....???
Then Rajveer gets up from the swing and says----
Rajver---Yes Naina..Main tumhara ek chotta sa test lena chahta hoon...Taaki tumhe ye pata chal sake kit um kisi se anjaane main pyaar kar baithi ho ya nahin???
Naina nods her head.....
Rajveer---So??? Tum taiyar ho?? Here we go...Humein ek pen aur ek paper chahiye...
rajveer searches his pockets and takes out a rough paper...and asks naina—
Naina—tumhare paas pen hai??
Naina answers YES and takes out from her mini purse.....
Rajveer—OK thanks...ab hamein saari cheezen mil gayi..
Then they went over to the swing and they both sit on it together...
Rajveer---Ok tumhe main test ke rules samjha deta hoon....Tumhe apni saans rok kar ek hi saans main

kisi ek insaan ke bare maion soch ke number 1 ko continuosly 3 rows main likhna hai...
Tumhe sirf ek mauka diya jayega eke k rows main 1 likhne ke liye...u cant come back tpo the previous row after once u go to the next row....Ok??? Uske baad main tumhara result sunaoonga...

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Posted: 2007-04-05T04:39:06Z
LOVE-OLOGY
Hi Friends....
This is a game which I used to play with my friends during my schooldays to know about my crushes....
It is now a part of my LRL story in the community "Rajveer And Naina Jodi" n "LRL Threads" too....
(To read my story click on this site---- http://www.orkut.com/CommMsgs.aspx?cmm=25377007&tid=25142881 91712047887&start=1

OR
http://www.orkut.com/CommMsgs.aspx?cmm=25525722&tid=25146733 64379153167&start=1)
So do u want to know about ur crushes too???? Do u want to know what they think about u?? Then u can try out this game...Its a good 1...Though I can't guarantee anything...But it's a great Fun!!!

So let me tell u the rules to play the game.....
RULES-----
1- U have to take a long deep beathe and sirf ek hi saans lena hai..
2- While doing that...u have to think about ur crush...
3- And then u have to write the number "1" as many times as u can but only in 3 rows.....
4- U cannot add more 1s to the previous row once u go to the next row
5- After writing in the 3 rows... count the number of 1s that u have written in each rows separately
For Eg I am writing
11111111111111111111111
11111111111111111
111111111
In the first row I have drawn 22 1s
In the 2nd row I have drawn 17 1s
And in the 3rd row I have written 9 1s

6- After counting, divide each with 3 and note down the remainder...
For eg after dividing with 3 I got the following remainder---
In the 1st row---- remainder---- 1
In the 2nd row----remainder---- 2
In the 3rd row----remainder-----0

7- then u will get a 3 digit number once u find out the remainders...
E.g. I got the number--- 120
8- Now u can look up at the following chart and look out for ur result....

RESULT CHART
000—Loves you for who you are
001—Believes in "you"
010—Keeps you close at heart
100—Says nice things about you
110—Understands you
101—Has a secret crush on u too...
011— Don't even knows that u EXIST....
111—Likes u as a friend ONLY
002—Is a great friend of urs...
020—wants to be something MORE than friend
200—U two make a great pair....
022—Not ur Type.....
202—Has other crushes too...SORRY
220—Is a Die hard crush of urs...
222—Going to propose u soon
012—REALLY REALLY LOVES U
102—Thinks u as a dear SISTER/BROTHER
120— Sorry...u have a FAT CHANCE for this crush...
210—OPPOSITE POLES...they don't attract this time
201— Goes GA GA over ur Looks
021—Thinks u as a good person
121—Wants to be more close to u
112—Knows about ur feelings for him/her
211— Will ditch u
221—Has loved u forever
212— Love at first sight
122—don't want to have any contact with u
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