Sher O Shayri

~*~Sher-o-Shayari Contest Winners~*~

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Posted: 17 years ago



Sher-o-shayari contest was held a few weeks ago and we received an overwhelming response for it.  We received a total of 60 entries! That's amazing! 👏👏👏



Upon member voting, the winners were decided and I am here to announce those very winners!

Before I do that, though, it's necessary to say that ALL the entries were fabulous!  Everyone had hard time deciding the winners.  It was really hard.  The votes received for all the poems were quite close to the winning entries.



With that said, here's announcing the poems that won the top five places!

5th Place Entry # 21 by amrit23

the unforgotten dream

one night i was feeling very sad

my eyes dropped a silent tear

the thing i wanted wasn't big

just someone who could hear

 sitting there down and out

 i heard a deep kind voice      

 he asked me to come closer

i went as i had no choice

HE wiped my tears and blessed me       

i felt as if my sorrows were gone

he looked at me and made his way

leaving me with my questions solved

neither do i found out who he was

nor  do i wish to

just remember his touch his calmness

because he seemed to be very true  

even now when all are cheering

a little heart is broken

it still continues to hurt

some words are still "unspoken"


5th Place Entry # 25 by datspreets

Snakes and ladders

It's a mean world,
If you think logically.
People pretend they're your friends
But stab you consciously.
They cut you off to carve their way up
And then blame you of jeopardizing their work
When they fall down equally fast.
The world's full of snakes
No one's success they can tolerate.
They crawl alertly through the lanes
Ready to strike with their fangs.

But there are the ladders too
The good one's of the lot,
They help you reach your destination
And motivate you from start.
They advise you,
But let you make your choice
They're the pillars of strength
Always there at every bend.

So you see, the road is but a game
Of snakes and ladders.
The dice is in your hand
You are the player in the arena and
You dictate if you have a game plan!

Take the ladders. Fight the snakes.
If you play it right.
If you work real hard and if you play it smart,
Success will loom bright!

Then, the snakes will bow before you
And the ladders will grow longer!
Now -
Cross your fingers
And throw the dice!

 


4th Place Entry # 31 by strawberry007

Boys and Girls

The thought in old, this poem is new

the differences are many, the similarities are few

boys are naughty girls are nice

girls are sugar boys are spice

boys are big, loud and smelly

girls are happy friendly and have clothes in as many colors as jelly!!

This poem is just for one, not be takeen as offence in any way!



3rd Place Entry # 60 by naaz123

Jiss se karte the hum, jaan, guzaara.

Jaan se pyaara tha voh saath tumhaara.

Fanaa hue tumhaare pyaar mein iss kadar.

Abh tum bin jeena mushkil he hamaara.


3rd Place Entry # 36 by Inaayat4

Visions

I heard your voice calling me at night.
     Your presence was in the air.
I let you come near and hold my hands
     and take me anywhere.
You held me tight as I started to cry
     and told me not to fear.
You said you'd never leave me again.
     Forever you'd stay near.
With new hope emerging in mind
     I looked into your eyes.
The pain in my heart had melted away.
     I'd forgotten all the lies.
I hugged you, and I closed my eyes
     thinking about love and care.
I opened my eyes to awake from the dream,

I saw you were not there



2nd Place Entry # 42 by RAINA_8

TIME

Sometimes I imagine ;

why does time change?

why do all those beautiful memories..

Go just out of range?

People say that nothing is impossible;

Than can they prove that everything is possible?

Time is like the clouds in the sky;

Which never stops how much ever we try;

There are clouds which bring us rain;

There are times which bring us pain;

So dont take time just for fun;

Time and tide waits for none.




The Winning Entry # 30 By Strawberry007

Friends

Friends are special friends are rare

friends are those who

always have a minute to spare

No matter what you do friends always care

they laugh with you they cry with you

they always have time to share.

without my friends I will be in despair....

(dedicated to everyone on IF, this ones just for you)



Congratulations to all the winners! Awesome job! 👏👏👏

Here are your prizes!!!

This one's for our winning poet: Strawberry007!!




And this one is for all the runner ups, RAINA_8, Inaayat4, naaz123, amrit23, and datspreets!!!



Once again congratulations to all the winners!!!! 👏👏👏



And all those who didn't one, don't worry, the poems were excellent! And looking the overwhelming response, we might conduct the SOS contest again and so all the best!!!



Thanks a bunch to Kimi (Kimi_dost) for making the wonderful siggies!






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Posted: 17 years ago
w0wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..congo to everybodyy 👏 ..loved all the entries..keep it upp 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Congrats guys👏good job!

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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG OMG OMG ME WOOOOOON???????!!??!?!?!??! Ohhhhhh Im sooo excited, congratz to everyone, I LOOOVED yourss, everyones poems were just mindblowing!!!!! And Congratz to everyone. Naina you are the best! 😃 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Congratzzz Everyone!! the entries were AWESOME! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yay! I got third. 😃 (oh, btw, Inaayat4 was my old username) 

Thanks for having this contest! Hope to see more of them soon. Edited by .:.Suhana.:. - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
congrats to all the winners and runner ups.....gr8 entries 👏 👏 👏


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Posted: 17 years ago
Congratz evry1! 😃
gr88 work ppl 👏 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg congrats NUSHIN!!!!!!!!!! 😃 👏 ur poems r awesome!! me is soo happy for u...n congrats all the winners who won 👏

cheers
isha
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Posted: 17 years ago
congo eevrone!! ur entries were just awesome!!!! 👏