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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: damilola

waiting
waiting
waiting
4 d update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So sorry hun! Will try to update tomorrow!😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

To All My Readers,

I've a Index for all the parts on the first page of this

thread. So if you are looking for a certain part, refer to

the first page. There you will find all the parts listed.

Love,

Goddess

Edited by indian_godess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Small request for all FF writers........UPDATE!!!! Seriously, yaars, i'm dying with boredom here. I need some entertainment!😆 Accha well, lots of you were pestering me for an update, so here it is! 😆

CHAPTER 9

Pia hugs onto him tightly and cries into his chest.
Pia: Pata nahi kahaan gaye, Bani di! (trans: Who knows where Bani Di has gone!) Mama has become sick due to becoming to worried and not taking care of herself aur Papa, he is just becoming mad, obsessed about where to find Bani di! My family is breaking apart, slowly, Pushkar, and i am terrified!
Puskhar, Pia's boyfriend, strokes her short brown hair, soothing her.
Pushy: Pia, i know that you are going through a lot right now, but you have got to believe that things will get better. Don't lose hope, don't ever lose hope.
Pia looks into Puskhar's eyes with her teary ones.
Pia: Tum to Bani di ki best friend ho.(trans: You are Bani Di's best friend). Do you know where she has gone?
Pushy: (wiping away a rolling tear off of pia's face) Kaash aagar mujhe paata tha, phir main to kaab se Bani nu dhoond ker baapas laogae tha. (trans: God, i wish i knew, then i would had gone looking for her and brought her back by now.)
Pia: But you are her best friend, she told you everything!
Pushy: Apparently not everything. She didn't tell me anything about where she was off to, not even a slight clue.
Pia: Aur karan? He was also a good friend of yours, didn't he tell you.
Pushy: (shakes his head) He wouldn't have told me anyways, we're not as close as we were before.
Pia: pushkar, hum aab kya khaarah? (trans: Pushkar, what do we do now?)
Pushy: Wait,....that's what we have to do, wait and pray for Bani's safety, ....where ever she is.
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Later on:
Bani finished hanging all of our clothes in her new walk in closet with a smile. "This family is just too nice.....what wonderful people. They don't even know me and already are giving me so much love.....", she says to herself cheerfully. She runs her fingers through each set of her clothes, looking thoughtful. She remembers Jai and smiles. "I should go and thank him...".
Bani leaves her room and walks across the hall towards Jai's Study. She inhales her breath as she turns the knob and opens the door. She sees Jai sitting down in his black revolving chair surrounded with numerous files and working focusedly into his laptop.
Hearing his study door open, Jai looks up and sees Bani, standing at the doorway. He stops typing and smiles up at her.
Jai: Bani, tum?
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Roshini barges into the WM like a wild woman set on the loose to kill.
Anu: (standing infront of her, her hand on her hip) Excuse me Roshini ji, but we do have a door bell!
Jigyasa: (noticing Roshini's anger) Roshini, tumhe kya hua? (trans: Roshini, what happened to you?)Why are you so upset?
Roshini: (her voice loud) Jai kahan hai? (Trans: Where is Jai?)
Saahil: Aunty, Mamaji toh aapne Study mein hain. (trans: Aunty, Mamaji is in his Study.)
Adi: Roshini, i suggest you meet him some other time, he's very busy with work.
Roshini: No, i wish to see Jai right this very minute!
Mausi: Roshini, kya hua? Why are you so angry?
Roshini: I need to talk to Jai, so please excuse me.
Roshini walks past by everyone and walks towards the Study. She barges into it and sees Jai smiling while talking to Bani. She glares her eyes at them, not enjoying watching them together, smiling and so near.
Bani: Thank you so much.
Jai: Aare, again with the Thank Yous? Bani, how many times do i have to tell you? There's no need to thank me.
Bani: I know you've told me, but i just wanted to say it again.
Jai places a hand on her shoulder and smiles at her.
Jai: Okay then, You are very Welcome Bani.
Bani: (smiles)
Roshini clears her throat loudly, grabbing both Jai's and Bani's attention towards her.
Jai: Roshini?
Roshini: (anger clearly shown in her voice) Jai, kya hum baat kaarsakthe? (trans: Jai, can we talk?)
Jai: Yeah sure.
Roshini: (eyeing Bani) Alone?.....
Bani gets the message.
Bani: Oh, sorry, i'll just leave.
Bani leaves the study and roshini closes the door behind her.
Jai: So what do you want to talk about "Alone"?
Roshini: (her voice sharp) How dare you Jai Walia?! How dare you?!
Jai looks at Roshini with a cute puzzeled look. (hopefully you guys know what i'm talking about, that really cute puzzeled look that Jai wears when he's confused in KS)
Jai: What did i dare to do?
Roshini: Tumhari himaat kaise hua ki tum mujhe aakali chorkur chalagae?! (trans: How dare you you leave me alone and leave?)
Jai: (raising an eyebrow) you're acting as if i just left you there uninformed. Roshini, the girls had to leave, i decided on taking them home and finish the rest of the office work here at home, and you were holding us behind. Baas. I did leave you a driver. (looking through his files)
Roshini: Jai, do you know embarassed and hurt i felt when i came back out and found that you had left me?
Jai: (looking up at her, clearly angry)And do you know how embarassed i felt when you created such a thamasha (scene) in the cafe? (turning the tables around)
Roshini: thamasha? Is that why you left without me? Were you that embarassed of me?
Jai: The reason why i left you behind was because if i had stayed another minute with you, i would have gone beserk!
Roshini: (tears forming) Are you fed up of me, Jai? Do i drive you insane?
Jai: Most of the time, ...Yes. Roshini, you've become so possesive, paranoid, and so controlling. I can't stand it anymore.
Roshini: I am not!
Jai: Yes you are Roshini! (sighs) God, i don't even know what the hell i saw in you in the first place! You know, i've been only putting up with you, thinking that you will change, but i guess i'm wrong. You'll never stop being a selfish and self centered person, Roshini! And what the hell is your problem with Anu?! All the poor girl did was accidently spill her drink on your clothes and you blame her for doing it intentionally?! Anu's a sweet girl, she wouldn't do that!
Roshini: Are you kiddi----- (stops abruptly).....(thinking to herself) Roshini, don't even think about finishing your sentence. You know if you insult Anu you're a goner......(to Jai) You're right Jai..... and i'm sorry. I'm sorry for everything. (fake tears building up in her eyes) I don't know what happened to me in the Caf'e. I just exploded. I didn't mean to create such a big scene. I was just upset and thought that Anu had done it on purpose because she absolutely loathes me. But i will make sure to apologize to her. I was wrong....very wrong.
She walks over to him and hugs him.
Roshini: Jai, i love you. I promise to not over react so much anymore. Please forgive me?
Jai is silent and shrugs her off of him.
Roshini: Jai? I'm sorry, please forgive me.
Jai just stares at her, not saying a word, a very hard look on his face. Roshini takes her hand and cups the side of his face, making him look into her eyes, which were dwelling with tears.
Roshini: Please, forgive me......
Even though he was ticked off with her right this moment, he didn't like seeing her on the verge of tears, and because of him.
Jai: ......(sighs) It's alright, Roshini.
Roshini: (kisses him) I'm sorry that i yelled at you.
Jai: It's okay.
Roshini: I love you....
Jai: .......
Roshini: (getting the message that Jai needs some time alone).......I'm sorry that i just barged in here. You must be busy with work, .......i'll leave.
Before leaving, Roshini kisses Jai on his cheek and leaves his study. Jai sighs and proceeds back to his work.
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Okay, this part was definitely boring and you must hate it due to Roshin and Jai making up. But come on now, i know what i'm doing! Do you trust the writer or not?😳 As for the JB romance, shaant hojao babas, i'm getting there! Just give me time!😉 I definitely promise you a JB scene in chapter 11!😉 There, satisified???? 😆
Love You All,
Goddess😊
Edited by indian_godess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part.
liked it.
But just would have loved it....if Jai had called off his relationship with Roshni and kicked her out the house. 😆 😆 😆
looking forward to JB scenes.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
jb scene in chapter 11!!!!!!!!mmm...1 more part to go.....sighhh... 😆.. lol..nice part.....just hope dat jai realizes wat roshni truly is n decides to confess his feelings to bani..... 😳 ...update asap...
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Posted: 18 years ago
FAB part
when are jai and roshni gonna breakup?

plz update sooooon

Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
HAHAHAH CHAPTER 11?!!! THAT'LL TAKE U AGES TO REACH!!1 I KNOW UR PACE!!!

Jaan i am angry with u, first of all for not informing me of the update (lolz, kidding!!!) and secondly, FOR PACIFYING JAI AND ROSHNI!!! grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

stupid chudail!! (roshni, not u! ehehehehehhe) lolzzzz
jaannuuuuu updateee karo na!! --AGAIN!!! hehehehehehehe

i would have updated to curb ur boredom, as i myself am bored, but....i am too stumped, full and lazy to write now! heheheheehehheeheheh
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg...cobra...why...why cant u just leave JANI alone...ufff....bani is so sweet...and jai haila...so much bettr when he is with bani...he is in a better mood...thanks for the udpate...i finished my update but cannot post until i get the OK from guli...kill her...run after her with a belan...not me...
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG OMG OMG did she kisses him 🤢 🤢
Hope he will go brush his mouth quickly 😆
Anyway, she's a good actress failing tears. So, if i'm right, jai and roshini are together i thought they were only friends but with this kiss and 'i love you". I guess i was wrong till the beginning.
Anywwway poor Pia, she seems to be nice in your ff or but even at the beginning of ks she was nice but i didn't love her from the beginning so selfish 🤢
Oh, love the way Jai and Bani were together and the thank you talk.
It was so sweet. 😉
Dil tum bimar ho????? yeh part was very funny and i completely like it. Hope you will find a little time to make an update 😛 😛
I think if roshini feels something in the air when she enters in the study i think she will be always around Jai now. And Anu will be there too 😆
Dil have a nice week-end and don't eat many chocolates i don't want see you unwell. (because you couldn't update 😆 😆 😆 )
Take care of you my dear friends.
🤗
Love ya my ⭐️
Diey
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Awesome part. Thanks hun!
liked it. glad you did!
But just would have loved it....if Jai had called off his relationship with Roshni and kicked her out the house. 😆 😆 😆 hahaha i know you would had!
looking forward to JB scenes. will be coming up soon!
plz cont. soon.

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