my first poem in ages ( i’m sorry)

hi guyzzzi wrote this poem for a frewnnn....dats really upset with me rite nowwwcan u plzz givee me feedback on it plzz

I'm sorry

 

Im sorry for all the trouble.
and bursting your bubble.
I'm sorry for not being me.
and not what you see.

 

Im sorry for faking it all.

And making it all fall.

Im sorry for lying to you.
and so called dying too.

 

Im sorry for giving you a brother
which was just another.
im sorry for the Guri
it wasn't even jaruri

 

I'm sorry  for that luvie
that you got from your so called hubbie.
I'm sorry for that friend
that couldn't stay til the end

I'm sorry that I betrayed you
and that I hurt you
I'm sorry for the memories.
that will come back every little breeze.

I'm sorry for everything
and anything
I did, am doing and will do
IM SORRY

Edited by ~*MaNnU*~ - 17 years ago

very nice 👏 oh n yes..don't b sorry 😉

Really very nice Manu!!!! 👏 I loved it! 😳 It's very touching and insightful! But please, don't be sorry!

Cheers,

Anjali

y shud i be sorry..i mean i lied to her BIG timeee

it didnt workkk guyzz...

she's still mad
and...didnt even say "aww" or nethinggg

awesome poem!! 😃 Dont be sorry!!

thats so sweet mannu!!!!
dont be sorry
maybe you should talk to her!!

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thats so sweet mannu!!!!
dont be sorry
maybe you should talk to her!!

i did..she said no

aww mannu am sure dey'd forgiv yu, gr8 poem ehhh 😛

i want 2 say just great ....... 😳