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part 2: page 1
part 3: page 2
part 4: page 5
part 5: page 6
part 6: page 7
part 7: page 10
part 8: page 11
part 9: page 14
part 10: page 15
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As she stood alone by the shore, Veronica's mind raced back to the first
time she saw Mark. She felt a tear roll down her cheek and she lifted her
hand to wipe it away. But a split second later, another tear rushed down
her face. Then came another and another until there was a steady flow
running down her cheeks.
It had almost been a year since Mark left but his image was still
clearly imprinted on Veronica's mind. His voice still echoed in her ears.
His laughter still rang in her thoughts. She could still recall the day they
met for the very first time. The events so clear that it seemed like it was
only yesterday when they bumped into each other...
"Oh no! I'm late for class... AGAIN!" uttered a panicky Veronica as
she gathered all her books. She knew that this day would not go as she
had hoped it would. She woke up late, made a mess out of her breakfast
and got stuck in traffic for about an hour. And now, she was late for class.
She hurried down the corridors, which were almost empty by now, and
made her way to class. She knew she had to run faster to avoid getting
into more trouble. Bad idea! Just as she started running, bang!, she
bumped into someone. Her things went flying in all directions. She
scrambled to gather her things while muttering apologies to the person
she had run into.
"Oh my god! I'm really sorry...I should learn to watch where I'm
going... I'm so so sorry..."
"It's alright. It my fault too. I should have seen you coming. Here, let
me help you with those."
He bent down to help her with her books. "I'm Mark by the way.
What's your name?"
"Veronica."
"Are you new here?"
"Yea, and I'm really late for class so I need to run."
"Oh, alright. Just be careful."
"Thanks."
And without looking back at Mark, she rushed to her class.
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