A man with a bag -- One shot... completed - Page 2

*yay!* I got compliments from some genius writers! *yay!*

Nope, preets... That was another one... very complicated, and totally french... I think I'll post that one too... I really like that story! Naina was my guruji, and lol, Gunia and she kept fighting 😆 😆 😆

It was awesome Sam and the way you began it, really made me read on to find out what is Ryan carrying in the bag adn whether he erached safely. Its very unique. keep writing. would love to read more

Hey Sam!
I just read through the entrie story, and it's amazing!!! 👏 👏 👏
I loved the ending,specially 😆 ...it really made you smile!! 😳 And the suspenses gripped you throughout as well!! 😃
Great work!! 👏 👏 👏
Loved it!! 😳

Thank you so much both you, you really made my day! Will definitely post more!