A new Fan Fic - Page 34

Posted: 17 years ago

wow, FAB PART

LOVED THAT PART! πŸ‘ πŸ‘

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
nice part finally back again wow i was waiting for this part πŸ˜›
Posted: 17 years ago
Kripa & Angad was dancing.Song was playing

Tu hi meri shab hai
Subah hai,tu hi din hai mera
Tu hi mera rab hai,jahan hai
Tu hi meri duniya
Tu waqt mere liye,mein hoon tera lamha
Kaise rahega bhala,hoke tu mujhse khafa

Kripa & Angad were both sharing some very intimate moments.

Kripa-Pata hai Angad jab tum mere paas nahi the na to mein khud ko bahut akela feel karti thi.Mujhe har waqt aisa lagta tha jaise mein iss duniya mein bilkul akeli hoon aur mere paas kuch bhi nahi hai 😭.

Angad-He Kripa dont cry plz.Men jaanta hoon ki meine tumhe bahut dukh diye hain aur uske liye mujhe khud par bahut gussa bhi aata hai.Plz mujhe maaf kar do Kripa 😭 😊.Par tum kabhi mujse naraaz mat hona.Tumahri duri mein sehan nahi kar sakta.

Kripa-Agar tumne mujhse fir sorry kaha to mein sach mein tumse naraaz ho jaongi.Jo kuch bhi hua usse humme bhul jaana chahiya.Wo ek bita hua kal hai jo ab kabhi wapas nahi aayega.

Kripa & Angad smile at each other & then hug each other.Angad Kripa ko ghar chodne ke liye aata hai.

Angad-Kripa ghar mein uncle aunty hain?

Kripa-Haan hai kyon?

Angad-Dekho Kripa ek baat batao.Hum saanson ke bina zinda nahi reh sakte na.

Kripa-Haan bina saanson ke hum marr jayenge.

Angad-To issi tarah mein apni saason ke bina zinda nahi reh sakta aur woh ho tum.Tum meri zindagi ho kripa,tumahre bina jeene ki soch bhi nahi sakta.

Kripa-Mein bhi tumahre bina nahi reh sakti Angad 😊.

Angad-To mein ander uncle aunty se tumahra haath mangne jaa raha hoon.

Kripa-Sach πŸ˜ƒ .

Angad-Much πŸ˜ƒ.

Kripa hugged Angad very happily.Jaise hi Angad aur Kripa ander pahuchte hain dono bilkul shocked reh jaate hai.

Suryabhaan,Gayatri,Dilip & Naina together-Aa gaye tum dono 😊 .

Angad-Aap.Mom Dad aap dono yahan kya kar rahe ho πŸ˜• ?

Kripa-Namaste uncle aunty.

Gayatri-Arre beta sirf namaste hi karogi ya jaakar apni hone wali saans ke per bhi chuogi.

Kripa- πŸ˜• .

Suryabhaan-Haan beta hum sab ne milke tumahri aur Angad ki shaadi pakki kar di hai.

Kripa Naina ke per chuti hai.

Naina-Akele per chune se kaam nahi chalega.Mujhe gale nahi milogi beta.

Kripa Naina se gale milti hai.

Naina-Aur haan gayatri Karipa meri bahu nahi beti hai aur mein trumahri tarah uski maa.Mere liye Aali aur Kripa barabar hai 😊 .

Angad-Par dad mom aapko mere aur kripa ke baare mein kis ne bataya?

Aaliyah-Behen kis din kaam aayegi bhai.

Prithvi-Haan aur Gayatri aunty ko to sab pata chal hi gaya tha to mein aur aunty ne milkar suryabhaan uncle se baat karli 😊.

Dilip-Hamara to jaise sapna hi sach ho gaya.Hum to hamesha se yahi chahte the ki Angad ki shaadi Kripa se hi ho.

Naina-Aur pata hai beta humne pandit ji se baat karli hai.Sagaai ki tariq ek hafte baad ki nikli hai aur shaadi ek mahine baad hai 😊 .


Posted: 17 years ago
😳 awwwwww!!! sweet part!
Posted: 17 years ago
Itne mein wahan Prithvi ki mom bhi aa jati hai.Sorry Guyz mujhe Prithvi ki mom ka naam yaad nahi aa raha hai so mein unhein Mrs Bose kahongi.

Mrs.Bose-Hello Prithvi beta 😊.

Prithvi-Mom aap 😲.

Mrs.Bose-Haan beta mein.

Prithvi-Aap yahan kya kar rahi hain?

Naina-Beta meine hi tumahri mummy ko yahaan bulaya hai.

Prithvi- πŸ˜•.

Naina-Arre itne confused se kyon sound kar rahe ho.Meine inhe yahan isliye bulaya hai kyonki jaise humne Angad aur Kripa ki shaadi pakki kari hai ussi tarah hum tumahri aur Aali ki shaadi bhi pakki kar rahe hain 😊.

Aaliyah-Really mom 😊 ?

Dilip-Haan beta sach.Tumahri mom ne tumahri diary pad li thi aur ussne hamein bataya ki tum aur Prithvi ek dosre ke liye kya feel karte ho.

Mrs.Bose-Haan sab pata chalne ke baad humne tumahri aur Prithvi ki shaadi pakki kar di.

Naina-Ab ek surprise tum dono ke liye.Tum dono ki sagaai aur shaadi hum sab ne Angad aur Kripa ke saath hi karne ka plan banaya hai.

Aaliyah-Sach mom πŸ˜ƒ.

Dilip-Haan beta sach 😊 .

Aaliyah-Thanx Mom Dad 😳 .

Aur phir hamare pyare Angad aur Kripa aur Prithvi aur Aaliyah ki shaadi ho jaati hai & they all lived happily forever 😊. Guyz so today mi first fan-fic ends.I hope u all liked it.
Very soon I am starting a new fan fic & its a real story.Its a story of a girl who is very near to me.
Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwww awesome ff!!! totally loved it!
Posted: 17 years ago
its a great fanfic.. do send me the link to ur new fanfic

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