FF||Deceptive Obsessions - Chapter 23 page 22 Updated 22nd Sept - Page 9

chapter 10

If Maan wants to make any headway, he should start with apologizing to Arjun. Clearing his name and reputation would be another.

Thank you for another update so soon. As always it was great. Maan didn’t have to destroy Arjun completely to get Geet. That was so evil and mean of him. I’m now sympathising with Arjun and think it only fair that Maan feels the same loss, especially as Arjun’s only crime was that he was the chosen love of his obsession. I think your story is going to make me sympathise and side with Maan at times and then Arjun.

Thank you so much! I didn’t realise you had updated another 2 more chapters when I commented on the first. Your writing as always is very expressive. Geet is in such a lost, confused and angry state. The pain Maan has caused if preventing her from moving forward with him. Her heart wants to but her brain tells her otherwise. Maan is reaping what he has sown. He can’t expect to play such games in life to get what he wants. There are always consequences for every action taken. I think it only fair that he is brought down to earth. Thanks again!

chapter 11

Maan is seeing first hand the destruction that he casually aimed at Arjun. He did not think twice what Arjun was going through. Now it comes back to bite him.

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maan very smartly exicute his plan in past to make distance between geet n arjun

jealousy over power his love

arjun put a plan to destroy maan n pull geet on his side who is maan's weakness

vikram n his wife sense some problem between maan n geet but both brush it off saying they will find solution

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geet refuse to acknowledge last night intimacy between her n maan hurting him

arjun put his plan in action to destroy maan but maan is more sharp then him who is going to come out from the problem arjun start

Chapter 11

Awesome Chapter

Geet now getting back at Maan , telling the intimate moments

they spend together was absolutely nothing making Maan frustrated

yet deeply hurt

oh hell I just hope Arjun is not behind the rumors of Khurana Enterprise

otherwise Maan will destroy him further