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Posted: 4 months ago
#51

Originally posted by: coderlady

Its hard for Pragati to trust Mahir, especially when he is a twin of someone who hurt her. But Mahit does seem like a decent guy.


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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Was soumya brainwashing pragati against aliya or aliya was really like that?why soumya was saying that nobody likes pragati?why did soumya call her ugly?I am confused.i am shocked that soumya's so called gf didn't know that she was considering her as a lover and the revelation led to break up.i am shocked that soumya tried to kiss pragati.i think her justifications are lies.i am really shocked that soumya danced in a seductive manner in front of that uncle and he got attracted towards her.i can't believe that soumya gave pragati's number to that uncle and they both tried to trap pragati. Glad that pragati kicked them and escaped.pragati met raghbir again.cool.i was imagining rubina as soumya as in rosy's ff it was shakti soumya.will there be harman?

Yes Harman is there.

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Very interesting update dear 🙂

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Very interesting update dear 🙂

Just loved it

Let's see what happens next

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Posted: 4 months ago
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I am surprised that mahir asked pragati to join him for a date if she understands that she still has feelings for raghbir because he is not worth her and he is better for her.i am happy that pragati realized that she still loves raghbir.i am surprised that soumya's marriage was fixed with harman.i am surprised that manik is raghbir mahir's brother.i am shocked that manik played soumya's vulgar videos in public to expose her.but good that harman saw her true colour.when he called the police I thought she will get arrested.but I think she got kidnapped by mahir. The unexpected twist is that harman agreed to marry soumya because she had his ex gf's name.i am surprised that his ex gf soumya united with him.so our haya united. I am happy.but how did they get separated in the past?would you please clear it in the next chapter?why soumya wanted to break pragati's confidence and push her to depression and suicide?i am surprised that pragati was bullied by north indians because she is a south indian.glad that pragati realized that there were also people who love her in the school.I am so happy that like I wished mahir is actually raghbir.

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It's a double update for you guys. Please give your views on the story as its ending with this two updates. I hope you guys enjoyed it till now. Waiting for your replies and reviews ❤


Part 5~ Second chance

"I am sorry. I want to prove that I am worthy of your love but don't know how." Ragbhir said while pragati signed and asked him who is mahir.

"I lied. The pics and videos where for my profession as I am a director and I am directing a movie about twins. My editor showed me how the result will be if I took a shot like I want and I asked him to use my face and pic itself. I used it in that situation and that day in college after your went to library I ran out and change my cloths and came back as Ragbhir. It was tough but I did it for you." Ragbhir said while pragati just looking at him

"Will you for forgive me?" Ragbhir asked

"I was quite when we have lunch because you did so much for me but I can't take you back. Sorry." pragati said and started getting up.

"You were opening up to me pragati. Few minutes back you were telling me everything about you and that day in college you agreed on the date with mahir because you realized you still have feelings for Ragbhir. Please give me a chance." Ragbhir said but pragati just left the place.

"He was lying." pragati said to Devi who is feeding food to Ben.

"Devi!" pragati called her as they saw nalini staring at Ben and Devi angrily. Ben immediately ran out while Devi was getting lectured and they went upstairs.

"Mahir was not a twin. Everything was set up." pragati said and revealed how she found out and confronted Ragbhir.

"i was standing outside and heard everything." and pragati revealed Ragbhir and sowmya's confrontation and how she left after he asked for another chance.

"Pragati's Ragbhir? He said he is pragati's Ragbhir." Devi asked in disbelief.

"Maybe you should attend the reunion. Ask Ragbhir to come with you. Revenge that aliya." Devi said and pragati thought it would be a better idea.

After a week, in the restaurant where they have planned the reunion.

Aliya comes in a stylish dress which made everyone surprised and impressed. She saw Ragbhir and gave him a seductive smile but he just smiled and turned his face.

In pragati's house,

"You didn't go?" Devi asked.

"I am getting ready." pragati said and showed her the dress making Devi proud because if will look perfect on pragati.

There at the reunion,

"Pragati is not coming?" pragati's friend asked while the bullies gang (Aliya's friends who used to pragati 's friend once and some people who are just jealous of her) smirked and started bad mouthing.

"She won't come because she was always stupid and doesn't have any friends in school." one of pragati's hater said.

"She does. I like her." another girl said but the hater got angry.

"I used to support you when you fight with you unnecessarily and you are defending her?" the hater asked

"I never asked you to fight. We were always friends and used to have friendly fights. I never knew you don't like her otherwise that time itself I would have warned you to not interfere between us. Please stay away. She is lovely. You are just jealous." the friend said but the hater tried to get others support. Except aliya nobody spoke anything supportive to the hater girl.

"Don't get into trouble." aliya's friend, mukta said and continued, "We also don't like pragati but don't involve yourself and badmouth like this with that hater girl. She is am irritation."

The hater, Nisha heard them.

"You used to like me?" nisha asked after hearing mukta bad mouthing her.

"I realized you were not a victim but a bully to pragati after growing up." mukta points out but aliya tried to support nisha.

"Nisha is a sweet girl. Pragati used to bully her." aliya said

"She is right." a voice came and all are shocked to see pragati standing in a super cool dress and a killer attitude.

"Hi Nisha I did wrong and I apologize but people do tease me for trying to bully you but what fight we had? And in which class?" pragati asked making nisha to shut as she can't say that.

"Say nisha. She is talking na. Let's end this today." aliya said with a smirk thinking she can humiliate pragati again.

"We were in 5th grade and she was taking some nonsense which I told the teacher. I know I shouldn't have but we were 5th grade and you told everyone I lied about you to teacher and everyone hated me. I don't even remember what nonsense were you talking but then why you are still stuck on that? We were kids. 10 years old kids." pragati said making nisha ashamed and aliya closed her mouth.

"I am really really sorry if it hurts you that much that still you hate me. I apologize from my heart. I learnt from my mistake too. We all learn from mistakes. And now if you still bent in hurting me I will just consider you immature and only wants me to suffer to boost your ego and walk away from here. Do you still want to hold grudges after all 5hese years?" pragati asked and nisha hugged her.

"My family used to think me as bad too." nisha said

"Maybe I will talk to them and Take the blame on myself. I don't care what they think about me." pragati said but Nisha said they forget everything and we should also forget and act like adults.

Aliya is extremely angry seeing all this and smirked seeing pragati looking at Ragbhir.

"Now I will show you what I can do." aliya thought and called Ragbhir.

"Ragbhir we didn't talked for so many days. Can you drop me home?" pragati saw them and realized aliya is trying to irritate her.

"I have to drop my girlfriend home." Ragbhir said as their orders came. Aliyah started eating in relief that at least Ragbhir has a girlfriend and pragati is hurt while pragati is thinking how to revenge aliya.

Everyone there knows how aliya befriends Ragbhir knowing pragati likes him and cheated her by filling bad things about pragati to Ragbhir and they all were quite and some felt bad for pragati.

"Your girlfriend must be beautiful" Aliya asked which Ragbhir accepted.

"You have a boyfriend pragati?" Aliya asked with a smirk but pragati didn't answer.

"What are you doing?" Mukta asked irritated with her nonsense.

"What? I am just trying to build a conversation." aliya acted normal and that time they completed their food and were about to leave.

Ragbhir had enough and was about to reply when pragati shook her head at him which all notices, she started speaking, "Actually what's more funnier that letting a person assume things and revealing the truth making them a joker to themselves?"

Nobody understands her words but aliya continued praising Ragbhir's girlfriend till they finish dessert and pay the bill.

"I am really eager to see her. She must be lucky. And Ragbhir remember how the girl from our class used to like you but we fooled her." Aliya said indirectly at pragati thinking everyone will ignore it.

"Stop. We all knows what you are talking about. You know like a fool I spoiled pragati's mental health in our last few days at school instead of forgiving and creating good memories and now I wont tolerate anyone doing this to her." Nisha said but again aliya pretend like she doesn't know what they are talking about.

"Enough. You are right but that idiot now realized his mistake and came back to me." pragati said making them confused when she and Ragbhir stood up.

"So now if you excuse I need to get home wit my boyfriend." saying she turned to Ragbhir and continue, "Shall we go baby?"

And Ragbhir held pragati's hand and looked at aliyah who is looking like how lighting strikes her head.

"You two are together?" Aliya asked in disbelief

"I don't know why you are angry with me but I am sorry if I hurt you. Just forget and move on." pragati said and left with Ragbhir and everyone except the bullies and aliya clapped for pragbhir and laughed at aliya for her foolishness.

The bullies realized they should act like grown up and shouldnt be silly while aliya decided to plan revenge.

Ragbhir is driving the car and pragati is lost in thoughts.

"Are you happy?"Ragbhir asked

"Why were you so stupid those days Ragbhir?" pragati asked.

"I am sorry pragati. I was a stupid teenager and believed that aliya as I was new to school and she became my friends fast. But I didn't act like I was loving you. I used to like you but aliya said you are fakiing the love and I acted like I was acting like to like you." pragati smiled slightly but she can't forget anything.

Ragbhir made a fool out of her in front of whole school. She just got out of sowmya's mess and everyone in the school was hurting her and she never felt that alone in her entire life.

"You said that day that your grandma used to say your parents left you for your sister. Does that still hurt you?" Ragbhir asked

"I just told that to manipulate sowmya to tell the truth. My grandma is a lovely woman. Actually papa Mumma went for a business trip for 5 months and mom got pregnant one month before their return. Doctor said she can't travel and they settled there and asked me to come with them but I don't want to go. I love my grandma and was angry w8rh my parents for leaving me here. When I get older only I realized they didn't leave me but they didn't want my studies to spoil and that's why left me with grandma. After grandma's death I went there for college. I was mentally in a mess and mom tried to help but I showed my anger on her and Devi but Devi is such a vibe. She never give up till I open up and made me stronger which her own set of rules. In few days I apologize to mom and we reconciled. I went to college and started my own business which is going good. We just came here on business trip for mom and this devi forces me for revenge." pragati said

"But I am glad that you are here and we are together." Ragbhir said

"I am only here for 2 more months" pragati said slowly.

"I will win your trust before that." Ragbhir said

"Remember how he scolded me for trusting you? You were like 'did I ask you to trust me?' after I confront you for hugging aliya and acting like in love with me." pragati said making him even more guilt.

"We will get through this. After all we were kids and now adults. We should forgive and forget." pragati continued making him smile.

The next day, Devi, nalini, Ben and Paxton returned to America while zoya promised to take care of pragati like how Devi used to take care.

"Why your brother hates you?" pragati asked and Ragbhir said manik thinks he stole his favorite spot for him from his parents heart.

"Still he helped us." pragati said and Ragbhir agreed.


"But he likes me just he is stupid enough to not realize it. But Nandhini loves me." Ragbhir said


"I know we talked that day after sowmya was arrested. She was sweet. Glad that her brother Harman's ex returned to him." pragati said

"Don't act. I know it's you who called her and informed about the engagement." Ragbhir said while pragati smiled.


"What to do? I can't hurt Harman as he is good human and I want him happy and not sad that his girlfriend left him and his fiance was a cheap girl." pragati said


"But how did you convinced her?" Ragbhir asked


"Well their break up was stupid. She wants to study abroad but fear that long distance won't work. I just said Harman is getting married and she ran away from there immediately throwing away her studies to be with Harman but now Harman assured her that long distance will work for them and she returns to continue her studies but they are still in relationships." pragati said and Ragbhir smiled hearing her and felt more guilt for doing wrong to such a sweet person.

Few days later,

They are walking on the beach alone without any security. Usually securities follow them as Ragbhir is film director and also a biker who has rivals. But then they saw aliya and sowmya walking towards them with a gun and got shocked.



Last Part ~ Let's Get Married


Aliya and sowmya tried to shoot them pragati started laughing confusing them.

"Why are you laughing? Have you gone mad?" aliya asked.

"Did you forget this is a private beach? It's not actually empty but I booked the whole beach because I know you two will be coming for us." pragati said shocking everyone.

"But how?" sowmya asked.

"If you don't know I am rich too just like Ragbhir. And I have my men around us in disguise for our safety. I got the information that sowmya was bailed by aliya yesterday itself. I only asked the beach authority to allow you two so that you will be defeated again by us." and as pragati stopped speaking people from nowhere surrounded aliya and sowmya and took them from there.

"They were jailed for attempt murder. They keep saying pragati can't get everything and they will destroy you. But don't worry everything is under my control." Ragbhir said while pragati hugged him happily.

"I promised myself to never fell in love but I realized I never stopped loving you. Am I a fool to love a guy who made fun of my love? I don't know but if it's true then I am really happy to be the fool." pragati said when Ragbhir kissed her forehead.

"We were kids then. It's okay and now everything is over. Sowmya and aliya are behind bars, your bullies are guilty if their doing for too proud to admit it but we are together finally. And my brother manik. He is talking to me again." Ragbhir said happily.

"Ragbhir I always wanted to do this. But everything spoiled but now I will do it." pragati said and knelt down before him and took out a ring box.

"Will you marry me?" she asked and Ragbhir knelt before her and cried holding her hands nodding his head repeatedly. Both felt like they are in some kind of bliss which they don't want to come out of. Ragbhir hugged her while pragati took the ring and made him wear him. They are about to kiss when their family comes there clapping hands.

Both stood up shyly. Pragati is surprised to see Devi and her mother.

"How is our surprise visit?" Devi asked while pragati smiled happily but Ragbhir was irritated as he didn't kiss pragati yet.

"Very good time." he said sarcastically.

"You can kiss her after marriage. After all you made her wait all these years. Now you wait for few months." Devi said while nnalini shook her head in disbelief pragati blushed and manik teased Ragbhir.

"What months? We are getting married in a week." Ragbhir said while Devi was confused.

"What made you suddenly change your mind?" Devi asked pragati who is still blushing hearing marriage in one week.

"2 days back after sowmya and aliya was arrested." pragati started a mini flashbacks

"Ragbhir where are you taking me?" a blindfolded pragati asked when Ragbhir removed the blindfold. They are standing in their school and all their former classmates and friends are in uniforms.

"I did wrong and let me correct it. Today we are all the same 17 years old kids and it's our final day in school. Let's rewrite that memory." Ragbhir said and gave a new uniform to pragati and they all went to classroom.

"Ragbhir made so much efforts. He called all of us and took permission from school after much struggle as they can't give leave to entire school. The principle asked him to do this on weekend but he wants to do this on a same day when you left school in pain. He wants you to leave the school in happiness only. He got us all a new uniform to wear and all these rooms were repainted as the old color as it was when we used to study." Nisha said making pragati emotional. She saw Ragbhir sitting in his seat and she sat on her seat.

But suddenly old flashbacks came to her when sowmya made her question her self worth and how she used to feel after Ragbhir made her cry. She was sacred but those time Ragbhir used to look away angrily and make fun of her but today he looked at her and smiled and that made her feel a little better. She went and sat beside him and they listened to the class holding hands.

Ragbhir even requested their old class teacher who retired already to come again and teach them the same portion for that day only. In lunch they studies like how they used to at break for exams. It all looked childish but pragati left like she is reliving those moments but in a happy version in some other world.

The past will live forever in her heart and nothing can erase it but these new funny memories made her forget it. Now even if she feels bad for the past also she will smile thinking about the efforts Ragbhir made to recreate the day.

"That's how he win my heart again." pragati said hugging him while all smiled seeing the sweet couple in front of them.

"You guys look too sweet." Ragbhir parents said and pragbhir took blessings from elders when Ragbhir grandma comes there and blessed them.

"Hope you have 16 kids and live happily." the couple blushed

"You dont want 16 kids?" Ragbhir asked when they were alone as elders was discussing the wedding dates.

"16 for you, 16 for me." pragati said making Ragbhir blush.

"32? Then how will we get time for each other? I want spend time with you." Ragbhir said

"Only because of spending time only we will be have 32 kids then how can you complain of not spending time?" pragati asked in disbelief.

"But I want you always with me." Ragbhir said kissing her cheeks.

"I will." pragati promised and also thanked him for returning to her again.

"I used to think universe and God are fake after you left but now I understood why everything happened. It all only made our love stronger." pragati said emotionally.

"Okay instead of getting emotional let's start." Ragbhir said.

"What?" pragati asked confused.

"If we are going to have 32 kids we should start trying now itself already we are going to reach 30 years in age. So my room or.. "

"shut up shut up" pragati said blushing and in shyness and they hugged each other sweetly.

The End .


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Edited by Kavithawrites - 4 months ago
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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I am surprised that mahir asked pragati to join him for a date if she understands that she still has feelings for raghbir because he is not worth her and he is better for her.i am happy that pragati realized that she still loves raghbir.i am surprised that soumya's marriage was fixed with harman.i am surprised that manik is raghbir mahir's brother.i am shocked that manik played soumya's vulgar videos in public to expose her.but good that harman saw her true colour.when he called the police I thought she will get arrested.but I think she got kidnapped by mahir. The unexpected twist is that harman agreed to marry soumya because she had his ex gf's name.i am surprised that his ex gf soumya united with him.so our haya united. I am happy.but how did they get separated in the past?would you please clear it in the next chapter?why soumya wanted to break pragati's confidence and push her to depression and suicide?i am surprised that pragati was bullied by north indians because she is a south indian.glad that pragati realized that there were also people who love her in the school.I am so happy that like I wished mahir is actually raghbir.


Sowmya don't have both confidence and strength like pragati but don't have from same like family background. Like sowmya doesn't have a happy family while pragati's parents live abroad while she lives with her grandma yearning for her parents. But still she is strong and that triggered sowmya and she wants pragati to suffer like her.

Their past is explained in the upcoming parts ❤

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: Gold.Abrol

Very interesting update dear 🙂

Just loved it

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the Tag 😀

Keep writing ✍️


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Posted: 4 months ago
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part 4

That was a very strange proposition. If Pragati still loves Raghbir, then Mahir wants her to date him. Is he confidant that he can bring about a change in her?

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Harman had a narrow escape. If he had married Sowmya, she would have made his life hell. Not only his, his whole family's life. She feels she can do anything and get away with it.

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