Posted: 3 months ago


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Posted: 3 months ago

wow..so romantic....Shinika wonderful writing....lots of love.

Posted: 3 months ago

Beautiful,

You very well brought up the comparison between shirt and dress.


❤️

Posted: 3 months ago

That was emtional & so romantic & hot... 🔥❤️❤️ 

You just beautifully describe the shirt , dress & their feelings.. 🫶🫶 

Just loved it.. 😍 

Posted: 3 months ago

Just loved it Shinkia smiley32smiley32 perfect balance of emotional and physical longing these two pure souls had for each other and how they both completed each other in the truest sense smiley27smiley27 really liked the contrast between the shirt and dress and how delicately you brought out Vidhi's state of mind and her dilemma yet her desire to reciprocate Dev's love smiley43smiley43

You have such great talent with words, please keep writing more smiley32smiley32

Posted: 3 months ago

Beautifully potrayed the emotions.. thanks for the tag🥰


Na Umra Ki Seema Ho 


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