Admat nok jok after accident scene - creative dialogues.

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Posted: 1 months ago

I am thinking to write a short one nok jok  on Admat after the accident as soon as they reached home from the hospital.


In the bedroom.

She supported him to sit on his bed. Filling up a glass of water from the jug nearby offering him but he snatched it and threw it away angrily.


Shocked she enquired.

" Kya hua? Ab maine kya kiya??

The furious husband while still seated on the bed as he glared at her with his wide blue eyes as though he was gonna gobble her 

" Yeh bol kya nehin kiya?? Zor zor sey chila rehi thi. Ekam ekam usko chod do. Main phasa hua tha vo dikhai nehin diya. Meri jaan ki koi parwa nehin hain. Uski ziada parwa hain. Ab toh kush ho na ke vo bach geya. Aur durbhagya samjo ke main bhi kaise bach geya!".


Silence 

She sighed at his Idiocracy. 


He continued.

" Tumhara bas chele na toh abhi tum yamraj ko what's up karke bina ticket book kiye mujhey seeda parlok bhejde. Tumhari jaisi zalim petni kisi ko na mile" 


Silence.

She moved slowly towards the shower to change into her night suit , whispering

" Peta nehin kis jelad sey meri shadi hui hain. Short circuit blasting 24/7" 


" Kya bola!" 

He snapped.


She froze. Oh no 


Then turned towards him and smiled sweetly.

" Kuch nehin".


He smirked.

" Bahut kuch chupati ho. Misni kehin ki".


Enough was enough. She had to give him back.


She took slow steps towards him and stood right in front of the puzzled husband looking down straight into his angry blue eyes , smiling sweetly again.

" Apka life insurance kitna hain??".


The shocked husband.

" What?".


The happy wife continued.

" At least 100 crocres to hoga. Aek kam karte hain, agli baar accident agar hua na toh mein advait advait dur dur sey chelaungi. Oi tauba phir sey brek fail ho geya. Oho how sad. Advait Kapoor died in deadly accident and wife  became sole beneficiary to his life insurance policy. Jab peti marjata haina, toh automatically sab kuch wife ko easily mil jata hain. No questions asked by law. Everything clear cut. Yahan advait Kapoor pahuncha shamsanbhumi wahan Nehmat karegi dhamal uske paison se".


He stood up at once facing her .

" Tune paison ki wejah mujse shadi ki hain?".


She smirked and ran towards the washroom.

" Aur nehin toh kiya. Bheja toh tumhare pas hain hie nehin".


She quickly locked the door of the washroom from the inside as he banged on it repetitively, angrily.

" Bahar niklo. Main tuhje dikhata hun mere pas kitna dimaag hain".


Silence 

She on the tap and took a warm shower as he waited impatiently. 

" Shower lena hain , jo chipke huye ho". She shouted from the inside of the washroom.


There was no reply. Perhaps he fell asleep. The drowsiness from the medication.


She waited awhile to ensure he wasn't standing outside the door.

Slowly, she unlocked it and he barged in slipping straight into the water filled tub and hit his head against the tap. 


He laid motionless frowning with the pain on his head and neck. She supported him back to the room instructing him to undress and change into his night suit. He refused.

" Sorry, i am not keen for free display".


She warned that he could catch a cold sleeping with wet clothes. 

" Bimar ho jaoge".


He glared at her angrily finally taking the attire from her hands 

" Bimar toh usdin ho geya tha, jisdin tujsey shadi ki. Koyi bhi antibiotics kaam nehin kar rehi tere jaise infection ko dur bhegane ke liye ".


She turned as he changed into his nightsuit , smiling.

" Aek antibiotic hain".


The puzzled husband while putting on the dry pyjamas. 

" Kya?"


" Ekam Randhawa" she replied casually.


He walked towards her to look straight into her eye demanding.

" Kya matlab hain tumhara?".


The glad wife as she came closer and whispered in his left ear.

" Us key sath bhag jati hun".


He pulled her closer. Lips inches away 

" Bhag ke dikha. Advait Kapoor naam hain mera kehin sey bhi dund ke launga".


The annoyed wife struggling to release from his grip.

" U are a confused man. Apko khud nehin samaj ata ke apko kya chahiye" 


She walked towards the bed, took her pillows and walked out of the room to sleep on the living room couch leaving him stranded all alone in the bedroom indicating.

If i can leave the room, i can leave u forever. Don't test my patience.


He rested his spinning head on the white pillow deep in thoughts 

" Why did i freak out when she stated to run away with her lover?"

 Was he worried it would destroy his reputation?. Advait Kapoor's wife elope with her long time lover under his nose. 

Or was it coz he was afraid of losing her??

Losing her!

Naah, he consoled his distraught mind.

She's not that important. Just go to sleep.

Seconds later, he dozed off due to the drowsiness of the medication.


She smiled at her first victory. It did affect him when she threatened to ditch him for her ex. She knew his weak point. He wouldn't tolerate anything under the sun that would destroy his image 


Nehmat Sandhu realized the button she needed to press to calm and control the raging lion. She was determined to teach him a lesson but sweetly. She knew the tactics now. Play your cards well. To survive in that house of hell, she had to pretend to be just like the occupants. She had to be strong to face the sloppy rides ahead. Advait Kapoor was not an easy husband to handle.



The end 


Onscreen there is no nok jok. Just lame quarrels.

I decided to write one

Posted: 1 months ago

Did they took idea from your ss??

The only difference was Advait throwing soup instead of water不不

Nehmat's dialogue was almost same "Ab maine kya kiya?" 

And Advait taunting her for yelling Ekam's name.

Kaash pura copy kar letesmiley19


Posted: 1 months ago
Originally posted by Mariyam06


Did they took idea from your ss??

The only difference was Advait throwing soup instead of water不不

Nehmat's dialogue was almost same "Ab maine kya kiya?" 

And Advait taunting her for yelling Ekam's name.

Kaash pura copy kar letesmiley19



Yaar, i wrote this last night after they already shoot the sequence last week 不不

Maybe the writer thinks alike 

Posted: 1 months ago
Originally posted by Aniash



Yaar, i wrote this last night after they already shoot the sequence last week 不不

Maybe the writer thinks alike 

Haan wo bhi haismiley36

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Udaariyaan 


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